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Posted: 12 years ago
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A little scene I thought of while rewatching April 2nd's episode. Please comment and let me know what you thought of it.

Saras barely had time to register what was going on. Their lips collided with her taking the lead. She clung with her arms around his neck, his around her waist. A soft breeze blew by and made her kamarbandh chime with that sweet sound.

His heart soared. Something hit him like a bolt and for a moment he was the happiest man in the world. He couldn't remember the last time he was that happy. Kumud, Kumud was so close him. They were connected.

He couldn't have enough of the feel of her. His heart was singing like a hummingbird. She felt so soft, so sweet, so utterly dear to him. He tugged her closer to deepen the kiss.

"Uttho!"

Saras jolted awake. Blushing furiously as he saw Kumud looking down at him angrily.

Kumud: You are late for arti!

Saras: Wha..what!? No. That can't be.

Kumud: Yes, panditji, you are late! Go freshen up quickly, Bapu is calling you. He's all happy now that you are done with your prayashchit.

Saras shook the image from his head: C'coming.

Kumud was quiet.

Saras looked up: What?

Kumud: Now that you are rested and everything, you can tell everyone the truth and go back.

Saras felt like she doused him in that ice-cold stream water again. He nodded, disappointed.

Kumud watched as he pursued his lips in that way of his and glared at her, making her heart shrink in sorrow.

Saras: Don't worry, I will be gone by this evening. Then, you can have you bedroom back.

Kumud snapped: That's not why I...chodo, tumse baat karna hi bekar hai!

She sashayed out of the room with her back arched against him, chiming adamantly.

Saras was left alone, picking up the pieces of his dream.

Saras: Wishful thinking Saras. She will never like you again.



Please comment.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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all in dreams !!!.saras ke dreams to sars chhe ...humm when will this ever happen in reality...i mean we can have them coming together and then the scene dissolves rest we can assume
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AH-mazing post...i really liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I missed this. No one seems to be writing any SS/OS/FF much. I have read the previous OS as well. Me likes how you put straightforward dialogues.

The start was full 'dhak-dhak'. But all wishful thinking.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Not only in saras' dreams...this will happen only in our dreams too...
good one...miss these kind of OS nowadays...looking forward for more...
Please rewatch epis...😉
Pls..can u do the favor or sending me a PM...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG,it was a dream.at start while reading i was ☺️ then came the 'Jor se jhatka' i hope we would see some of this in real!!!
BTW,i am 13+ 😛 So no prob reading it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

all in dreams !!!.saras ke dreams to sars chhe ...humm when will this ever happen in reality...i mean we can have them coming together and then the scene dissolves rest we can assume



ya, that would be nice 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one Mary 😃 👏
Edited by passionalive - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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short and sweet..liked it! i wish it happens in the show otherwise will have to keep dreaming like saras!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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why was the kiss so hit and miss types. i expected some passion from it. but it was nice to read. havent read any ffs on this forum but i wanted to read it coz it was yours.i mostly read your posts on this forum.

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