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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all Dii , congratulations , your thread crossed 50 pages ! =D Yay!


And this OS is so real and so according to the on-going track, just loved it a lot ! You are a star Dii , truly a star ! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Rish..

First of all Dii , congratulations , your thread crossed 50 pages ! =D Yay!



And this OS is so real and so according to the on-going track, just loved it a lot ! You are a star Dii , truly a star !👏


Awww thanks Rish baby 🤗
Didn't even notice, but its a great going!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing OS 😃 loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..!!! brilliant OSamazing!! how u managed to pen down der emotions so welll??waiting fr next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow di...brillian OS 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written Azuu! Loved it soo much <3 😳

P.S. Really missing you all sooo much! 😭 Busy with a project so not able to come ol much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry for the late reply

But superb story n update
Loved it a lot
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks friends for your lovely comments

They mean a lot to me, as they always inspire me

Could not write individual replies this time, I am too lazy and on holidaying😆

Once I get back, will get back to your comments😉

Love you all🤗
Edited by hunnybunch - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I know this is a bit short, and it might not be as good as I wrote before. I'm trying to bring back my interest on this again

The Perfect Bride

'One minute' Kumud repeated with a smile, holding the pallu of her sari, to avoid it messing up with anything that wanted to stop her from reaching him. She felt nervous as she stepped on the very first step, thinking how Saras would react upon seeing her. She felt her heart pounding faster as her feet closed the long distance between them.


He felt the quickening of his heart beats when he heard the sound of her anklets. As it become louder, he rubbed both his hands together, trying to calm down his senses. Her fragrance reached his nose filled his lungs with the sweet scent of her perfume as he breathed in. He thanked the gentle breeze that brought her fragrance to him, announcing her arrival.


The moment his eyes caught her, he was so damn sure that his heart was on his sleeve. She was looking like a bride that walked out of his dreams and in front of him. Dressed in the simple blue sari he gifted, with jewelery too has got its radiance from her beauty. They seemed to sparkle like her eyes. They seemed to wink at him with every breath she took, calling him to them.


He felt that his heartbeat had skyrocketed. He was captivated by her look and enthralled by the vision she created of a bride, his bride. He wanted to take her in his arms but he felt his feet were cemented. He wanted to touch her to confirm that she was not a mirage, a trick his eyes played on him. He felt his emotions taking control over him; he turned his back to her and closed his eyes tight.


'Agar nahi dhekna hai toh bulaya kisliye?' Kumud murmured as he turned his back to her when she stopped right in front of him.


'Kumud, I'm sorry…..I'm afraid that I might not be able to control my emotions seeing you like this' he said softly, but making sure that she heard it.


Kumud turned to leave without answering, without acknowledging the need in his voice. She knew that had she waited there for more than a second she too would not be able to control her desire. But he caught her pallu.


'Chor dijiye, koi aajaenge toh…' Kumud tried to reason with him to let her go.


Ignoring her plea, he came towards her in slow, deliberate steps. He wrapped the pallu around her shoulders, so that he would not lose control. He had seen her back and fantasies had taken over. He could not stop himself from imagining her in his arms, with nothing on her, and he had taken control over himself and walked up to her and wrapped it around her. He wrapped his hand around her waist as he could not stop himself from holding her and whispered into her ears 'my perfect bride.'


Hit the like button and comment if you like it😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

first reply on jaan post..yupieee..i made it

jaan loved it re..i could actually visualize the scene..kumud was looking gorgeous in that saree..

So romantic..Love u so much jaan.😳😳.im sorry too😭

Edited by Saru... - 12 years ago

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