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⭐️⭐️okkk"into the night" will take a bit of time to write coz u have put maaany things in2 it.i loved "the power of love"but i wud say in this u have acquired a comparatively lighter theme.in the sense that though it has the complexities,it doesnt get in2 the darker edges esp. because u have given lesser space to saras.
in this u deal with the intricacies of kumud's heart.what i found extremely beautiful both in the serial as well in ur works is the fact that u founded a love relationship on aspects of charm attraction and bindings of the soul but u let it grow on logics of faith trust and understanding.kumud may have been attracted to him but she loves him because of the man he is inside.u have tried to depict the complexities without really propagandizing anything.neither undermining the magic nor the realism.😳😳😳😳😳
the pain and attachment she feels 4 saras comes instinctively to her.but when she stops saras its not a leap of faith which she takes but something which saras earns from her.u have depicted this dictomy and transition very well.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
the last part as usual stole the crown.the fact that u deeply understand the characters u write about is well manifested in the last line.u just gave 1 line to duk baa.but it was so relevant and well used.in my opinion 2 ,she will do the same.duk baa like many in the forum feel, is a depiction of kumud in a wider scale,they r mirror images who are as much similar as they are different .⭐️⭐️⭐️
now my grievance😳😳😳😳😳 unlike other time this time u have actually ended it on a cliffhanger.i aaam telling mmy heart 2 be patient but i wish to read more.sooo i DONT WANT U 2 BURDEN URSELF BUT wud love if ur next writing be a continuation of this one.u know a little romance😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 but its absolutly ok if u choose not to do so.nooo problem😳😳😳😳
in this u deal with the intricacies of kumud's heart.what i found extremely beautiful both in the serial as well in ur works is the fact that u founded a love relationship on aspects of charm attraction and bindings of the soul but u let it grow on logics of faith trust and understanding.kumud may have been attracted to him but she loves him because of the man he is inside.u have tried to depict the complexities without really propagandizing anything.neither undermining the magic nor the realism.😳😳😳😳😳
the pain and attachment she feels 4 saras comes instinctively to her.but when she stops saras its not a leap of faith which she takes but something which saras earns from her.u have depicted this dictomy and transition very well.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
the last part as usual stole the crown.the fact that u deeply understand the characters u write about is well manifested in the last line.u just gave 1 line to duk baa.but it was so relevant and well used.in my opinion 2 ,she will do the same.duk baa like many in the forum feel, is a depiction of kumud in a wider scale,they r mirror images who are as much similar as they are different .⭐️⭐️⭐️
now my grievance😳😳😳😳😳 unlike other time this time u have actually ended it on a cliffhanger.i aaam telling mmy heart 2 be patient but i wish to read more.sooo i DONT WANT U 2 BURDEN URSELF BUT wud love if ur next writing be a continuation of this one.u know a little romance😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 but its absolutly ok if u choose not to do so.nooo problem😳😳😳😳
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