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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
@dakshna fan , aish

thanks u dear buddies...😉,🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok...guys...tappad tappad khel mein aap ka swagat hein😆...tho shuru kare..😉

Part 14..Tappad part.(my personal fav).contd...

Everybody comes to ayi running

.daksh..; ayi tu teek tho hein
Ayi; naina,naina...mujhse itni badi bhool kaise hogaya insaan ko pehchan ne mein aur maine apni naina ko..kitna dhukh diya..ye main kya kardiya?( regret, shame combined),

Shyamal; haan vaini...pechle kuch dino se hum naina ko itna taklif pahuchaya anjaane mein hi sahi..lekin bechari chup chaap sehti rahi...sach mein hum bahut badi galati hogayi

Sonakshi gets irriated😡 by this naina naam jap and woh gusse se paagal ho jaati hain😡

Sonakshi; bas..naina naina ..naina..issi ki wajah se ye sab kuch ho raha hain...aisa kya hein uss mein ki sab log hamesha uska naam japte hain...nafrat karta hoon mein usse aur usko mein aap sab ki zindagi se door karna chahthi thi.khaas kar daksh ki zindagi se.woh ek bhuri saya hein...( abhi tumhari galat femi door kardenge)😆

Ayi( she is one who believed psycho most) tho first chance ayi ko de diya

Ayi gets up aur kaskar ek tappad deti hein sonkashi ko ek dum resound👏👏 wala..everybody is shocked by ayi's reaction aur ek aur deti hain doosre gaal par(zor ka zatka hai zoro se laga).😆.( imagine yaar..continuosly 3 deti hein dono gaalo mein)

Sonakshi; ayi...😭

Ayi;😡 chup ho javo sonakshi,😆 aur apne ghandi jubaan se mujhe ayi mat bhulavo.😊..aur naina ka naam tho bilkul mat lo tum😃.. chi...maine tho tumhe apna beti maana ,tujse itna pyar kiya..itna apnapan diya...tu uski layak ki nahi hein..chi..lekin tuhme dosh dekar kya fayida jab galti meri bhi hain...arey tumhare baare mein soch kar mein apne chintu ko tujhse shaadi ke liye majboor kiya ye jaante huyi bhi ki woh naina se kitna pyar katha hain... aur tumne ye sila diya...😕

She turns to daksh; chintu mujhe maaf karde😕. and daksh comforts her.

.later she turns towards sonakshi and says

Arey tum kisi ki ghar ki bahu kya ..beti bhi hoti thi mujhe taras aata hein uss maa baap par

Joshi and supriya hung their head in shame😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Khel khatam nahi hua...😉

Part 14(sub part 2) contd...


Ab kaki ki bhari..😉

Kaki comes to sonakshi ; arey jab tumne akruthi par itna pyar jataya , uska khayal kiya..mujhe laga woh sab sach tha.😲.lekin tumne apne fayide ke liye..meri beti ki zinadagi ke saath khilwar kiya,😡..aur usse bhi apne khel ka mohra banaya...😡..iss ke liye mein tumhe kabhi naaf nahi karungi aut tum maafi ke layak bhi nahi aur bechari naina ko kitna sataya hoga tumne😕

Sonakshi; nahi kaki...😭

Kaki ek aur slap lagathi hein psycho ko...; chup..main kuch nahi sunna chahthi..kuch bhi nahi😡😡

Ab aku ki baari..

she comes to sonakshi and says

yaad hein sonakshi tum har waqt mujhse poochthi thi ki mein tumhe vaini kyu nahi bhulati.😲.kyunki vaini mere liye ek pavitra shabd hein aur woh mere dil se sirf naina ke liye nikaltha hai😃 tumhare liye nahi😡

.aur mujhe tum par ussi waqt shak hogaya jab tum ne mujhe girte waqt aone fracture wala haath se pakada...phir jab meine dada se baath kiya aur uske baad ayush ne mujhe tum hari sachayi bataya tab mujhe ehsaas ki tum kya ho?..😡.

Tum mere dada ki layak hi nahi aur tum naina ki jagah kabhi nahi le sakti.
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Sonakashi gusse se paagal hojaati😡 hein aur aku paR hath utati hein..tab ayush usse rokh tha👏

Ayush; Meri patni par haath utane ki himmat mat karo sonakshi.👏ab tumhara pol khul chukha hein..acha hua mujhe tumhara asli chehra pata chalgaya ki tum kis tarah mujhe apne fayide ke liye isstemal kar rahithi...mujhe laga mein hi galat insaan hoon lekin tumhare saamne tho mein kuch bhi nahi...( true)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 14( sub part 3)...tappad abhi baaki hein mere yaaron😉..contd...

Sonakshi;haan.. ye sab kuch maine hi kiya..kyunki mein daksh se pyar karti thi..bahut pyar aur usse kisi bhi keemat par apna banana chahthi thi...yahi meri galati hein kya? tho daksh ne mujhse shaadi ke liye haan kyu kiya? kyu mujhe jhoote ummed diya? kyu? kya woh galat nahi?😕

Daksh; Haan mein maanta hoon ki tumse shaadi ke liye haan kehna phir mana kardena galat hein..maine sirf naina ki kehne par haan kaha..lekin maine tumhe pehle hi apna aur naina kap pyar ka sach batadiya...aaj jo kuch bhi ho raha hein woh tumhara kiya khara hain

Sonakshi; tumne bhi tho mujhe dhoka diya..ye kehke ki naina tumhari zinadgi mein closed chapter hain😆.🤣.ab tum dono ke beech kuch bhi nahi

Daksh; maine iss liye kaha ki taaki tum koi nayi khel na shru kardo aur rahi baat jhoot ki..dhoke ka jawaab sirf dhoka hota hain sonakshi.👏.

Sonakshi;🥺( mental sick ness)nahi daksh..tum meri saath aisa nahi karsakte..tum sirf mere ho..mein tumhe kisi bhi kheemat par paa kar rahungi...she holds daksh...uss naina ke liye tum ye sab kar rahe hona...uss naina..ko tho mein...

Ek aur zor ka taapad lagti hein sonakshi ki mooh par..iss baar supriya..
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Supriya ka naya roop😛

Supriya; 😡bas kar sona😡..besharmi ki bhi hadh hoti hein..tumne pehle ki tumhare harkato se hamare saar jhukha diya..ab tho sharm karo.😆..

Just then joshi makes an entry.;.supriya..tumhari himaat kaise huyi sona par haath utnae ki..

Supriya; bas kijeeyi aap..aap ki ladh pyar ki wajah se aaj ye iss halat mein hain..bachon ka khayal rakhne ka matlab ye nahi ki uski har sahi ya galat jidd poori kee jaye.👏.aaj iss ko agar sahi aur galat ka farak nahi pata chal raha hein..ye aap ki galati..hamari galati hein..😛.

Joshi is speech less😲 😆as he never saw this roop of supriya(waat lagadiya supriya ne joshi ka)

She looks at sonakshi and says; tu khud sochle ki tu kitna galat hein..iss liye aaj tere saath koi bhi nahi khada lekin naina ke saath sab hein..kyu? kyunki woh sahi hein..sachi hein..

Maafi section

She goes to P-zoo members and says, dekhiye mere beti ne jo kuch bhi iya woh maafi ki layak bilkul nahi..lekin uski taraf mein aap se haath jodh kar maafi mangta hoon..uski maa jo hu..agar bache galat hein tho uss me maa baap ki galati bhi hein..parvarish ki...

She goes to daksh; daksh beta...jab tum naina se miloge tho meri taraf se maafi maanglena aur tum dono hamesha khush raho...

Saying this she holds sonakshi' hand ; ab chalo yaha se.takes her dragging..sona is completely lost..looking like mad and she walks with her mom.
.just then daksh says

Ek min...😲

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Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 14( sub part 4)...contd

Daksh gives a finishing touch to psycho.......

He comes to sonakshi and says.

Tumne poocha tha ki aisa kya hein naina mein ki sab log usse pyar karte hein😲..main batata hoon.

.kyunki woh tuhari tarah bilkul nahi hein.meri naina apne khusi se jyada doosere ke baare mein sochthi hain😍
Meri naina❤️ kisi bhi hadh tak jaa sakthi apno ke saath khada hone ke liye..aur woh hamesha sirf sachayi ka saath deti hein😊
Laakhon mein ek hain meri naina(Hai hai)😍..ek waqt tha jab mein naina se sabse jyada nafrat karta tha , aaj mein usse apne jaan se bhi jyada pyar kar raha hoon,❤️ tho baaki sab le liye.tho ye mumkin hi nahi ki woh naina se pyar naa kare

Jaante ho sonakshi , naina aur tum main sabse bada farak kya hain? meri naina dil se sochti hein.❤️.tumhari tarah dimmag se nahi😡.agar woh pana dimaag lagati tho tum uske saamne khadi bhi nahi ho pavoge👏

Aur aakhiri baat meri zinadagi ki closed chapter naina nahi tum ho🤣..aur naina woh hain jisse se meri zindagi shuru hoti hain aur khatam bhi...👏👏

Daksh turns towards ayi and says;

ayi , ab main aise kaam karne jaa raha hoon jo galat hein...pls mujhe maaf karde ..lekin ye karna jaroori hain...😲

Saying this...hope u guessed by now...yes yes..tappad, zor ka..from dakshu to pyscho👏😍

and he says; ye tappad tumhare wajah se meri naina ke naino mein se nikle hui har ek asu ke liye...

ab pls doobara hamre zinadgi mein aane ki koshsis mat karna ..aur pls jaavo yaha se...get lost...👏

Supriya & co leave from there

PS; Tho exposure part khatam hogaya dosto😉..I hope I reached ur expectations..jitna psbl hein utne tappad lagaye maine😆...😆 ab...few cute moments b/w dakshna and happy ending.❤️.in next parts)

Note; Each dialogue I have written in this exposure part seedha dilse❤️ nikle hue dialogues hain..hope u will like them😛

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Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lucky.. i love you!! can i have a hug?? i wish i with this to happen in the real SSBN soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ntsindia

wow lucky.. i love you!! can i have a hug?? i wish i with this to happen in the real SSBN soon...



Of course neetu.ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hain.😉.here we go...🤗🤗...

I am happy after long time I can sense the excitement in ur comment😃.so I think I suceeded in bringing smiles😊 😊on face of dakshna fans amd my dear buddies...Luv u all😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tumne poocha tha ki aisa kya hein naina mein ki sab log usse pyar karte hein😲..main batata hoon.

.kyunki woh tuhari tarah bilkul nahi hein.meri naina apne khusi se jyada doosere ke baare mein sochthi hain😍
Meri naina❤️ kisi bhi hadh tak jaa sakthi apno ke saath khada hone ke liye..aur woh hamesha sirf sachayi ka saath deti hein😊
Laakhon mein ek hain meri naina(Hai hai)😍..ek waqt tha jab mein naina se sabse jyada nafrat karta tha , aaj mein usse apne jaan se bhi jyada pyar kar raha hoon,❤️ tho baaki sab le liye.tho ye mumkin hi nahi ki woh naina se pyar naa kare

Jaante ho sonakshi , naina aur tum main sabse bada farak kya hain? meri naina dil se sochti hein.❤️.tumhari tarah dimmag se nahi😡.agar woh pana dimaag lagati tho tum uske saamne khadi bhi nahi ho pavoge👏
oh lucky! i absolutely loved this part !!!! so sweet and emotional!!Clap well done well done!!!!!!!! u made my day! and thanks for writing such a wonderful FF...
hey can u cover up the wedding also??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMystique

Tumne poocha tha ki aisa kya hein naina mein ki sab log usse pyar karte hein😲..main batata hoon.

.kyunki woh tuhari tarah bilkul nahi hein.meri naina apne khusi se jyada doosere ke baare mein sochthi hain😍
Meri naina❤️ kisi bhi hadh tak jaa sakthi apno ke saath khada hone ke liye..aur woh hamesha sirf sachayi ka saath deti hein😊
Laakhon mein ek hain meri naina(Hai hai)😍..ek waqt tha jab mein naina se sabse jyada nafrat karta tha , aaj mein usse apne jaan se bhi jyada pyar kar raha hoon,❤️ tho baaki sab le liye.tho ye mumkin hi nahi ki woh naina se pyar naa kare

Jaante ho sonakshi , naina aur tum main sabse bada farak kya hain? meri naina dil se sochti hein.❤️.tumhari tarah dimmag se nahi😡.agar woh pana dimaag lagati tho tum uske saamne khadi bhi nahi ho pavoge👏
oh lucky! i absolutely loved this part !!!! so sweet and emotional!!👏 well done well done!!!!!!!! u made my day! and thanks for writing such a wonderful FF...
hey can u cover up the wedding also??


Thanks yaar ...happy that u liked it😛..@ bold..ya I am planning to but may take time...I Need a brk...but not a long one..so lets see...but once again thanks for comments


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Posted: 13 years ago
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muah muah 😉 Lucky u made my day dear 😛
Har Ek Ek Tappad ke kiye jaddu ki chappi 🤗 ❤️ Daksh ke Tappad ke liye double 🤗
Loved all the dialogues 👏 especially Dakshu ke 😉 har ek dialogue main dil ki sab nafrat nikal rahi thi...aur naina ke liye unlimited pyaaar❤️ 😊
Thank u bud for writing this FF... 😃 aage ka romantic wala scene kya hai 😍 bahut jaada expect karte hai na 😳
U definately rocked the whole scene yaar 👏 kash ye sab bhi SSBN mein bhi dekhne mile😉
Once again 🤗

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