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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan


Neetu... what u wrote as FF actually happened in SSBN... so the loophole u specified is the laptop camera was recording all the things happening in Daksh's room... yes and Daksh can't face Naina to tell the her the truth so Sonakshi tells her everything... even i cant bear this 3rd grade crap... so i avoid all Ekta serials... now i am only on WU... cant take this crap and spoil my entire day having a bad temper...

oh..is it... so thats good.. lets hope everything will be OK soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me on written updates too... And hoping that I can return one day to a good part. So I understand. And I keep telling myself I will quit and then curiosity gets the better of me and I come back to Wu looking for crumbs :( Only to be disappointed...
It would be fun tho if Daksh realises that Sonakshi is playing games and decides to start his own games and goes and either marries Naina or pretends he married her(fake marriage certificate) and forces it down everyone's throats - Sohini's and Aayis.
Let them holler and cry for a while, Aayi will be mad with Dakshna, Daksh can take the blame and say Naina refused but I forced and then she will come round and It will be fun watching Dakshna give back to Rohini. Sonakshi will go out screaming and mayb file a few cases... But atleast it will be Dakshna fighting against the rest of the family than Dakshna separating. More tolerable and opportunity for good moments on the serial... Later they can tell Ayi they dint get married, as they wanted her wishes and she will accept and bless them. Its always better to give a shock to Ayi and then say nothing happened later so that she cant emotionally blackmail them into accepting Rakshasi.
Best punishment for Rohini would be that she gets no importance at home. Naina should teach Ayi how to treat her and she wont even be able to call Naina outsider. Kaka should fan some fire. I hope doctor advises housework to her and tells her she is not getting enuff exercise. No more bells. Mayb Ayi can have a bell instead!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok... Dakshna fan told the serial is going similarly as my thoughts (laptop reconded the vdo and sonakshi said it instead of Daksh)... so i am continuing my FF on current track.

So Sonakshi told the matter to Naina rite? there can be two options:
1. Naina gets shocked and heart broken hearing the news and think Daksh did it
2. Naina will be angry @ Sonakshi and she will be more doubtful. She may burst out telling she knows her Daksh very well etc..

Here, the first option is not suitable for a heroine like naina. so I choose the second option as it will enhance our Naina's trust in her Daksh and that enstablishes her character and their bonding stronger. So i wish Naina tells Sonakshi that she is lying and she knows Daksh well. and wil be more angry at her. Sonakshi's smirk smile will be faded as her expectation was something else. Naina may try to talk with Daksh abt this to get a confirmation.
Here also we have two options:
1. Daksh can give vague answer
2. Daksh can tell everything what he remembers
I think, if he tells everything what he remembers will easily solve the problem. SO I go for with the vague answer option. He may tell somethign like "lagtha hai rab ne humse root gaya hai.."
[rem the line of naina tere sad version
khab mera kyu toot gaya,
jane kyu rab mera root gaya... ] ;)

Naina will be more confused... Sonakshi said they were in same room,... Daksh is despirate and tells like this?!!! feels something wrong somewhere. she cannot accept Daksh did something wrong with Sonakshi [based on her own experience he is extra-decent].

Then I think Sonakshi definitely will go to Rohini and share her sadness in Naina's reaction. So in Rohini's room
Sonakshi: vahini, humne socha tha na, daksh mere saath soya.. yeh sunkar voh Naina disappear ho jayega? lekin aisa kuch nahi huva vahini. voh daksh ko itna viswas karthi hai aur mujpar aur shakk ho gayi hai.. 😲
Rohini with revenge look: Voh itni assani se harnewali nahi hai... (then shows happy face) par koyi bat nahi.. tumne jo bhi kaha daksh ne believe kiya hai na... to khabrane ka koyi zaroorat nahi..
Sanakshi becomes relaxed.
r with naughty face: accha sonakshi... ye batavo... sachmuj Daksh ne kuch kiya?
S sadly: nahi vahini... Nashe mei bhi uske mooh se naina ka naam nikalta tha.. (we all know whevenr he is in alchoholic, he talks abt Naina Naina only😆) phir soye gaye. muje chuva tak bhi nahi.. 😭 😉

for a turning, let Naina or Daksh can be heard this. If Daksh hears it all will be ok soon.. he will become KP and blow as a storm😊. I don't think we are that much lucky to get things ok soon😛. So now let naina hear it.

Naina was passing thourgh the corredor and happens to hear this conversation (just like as in the day rohini&boss issue happened). Hearing the conversatio Naina gets the think on track. she comes to know the following:
* Daksh is innocent
* Daksh is cheatd and trapped by sohini
* Daksh is in a big dilemma due to the unnecessary regret and guilty feel
* most imp for all, rohini also was behind

naina will be double strong and rush to say the matter to Daksh. here the options are
1. Daksh can hear her (this will solve the issue speedly)
2. Daksh closes door at her

I think, Daksh is in a complex feelings of deep regret, guilty on the incident, he lost his love Naina and he could not keep the promises to her. he will be under deep stress to face Naina. as per his character he will try to hide himself from naina and try to run away from her [similarly as what happened in Naina at that time her mrg is broken]. So he will close the door with deep pain and deeply cry in the room.

Naina will read Daksh's feelings and she will vow at any cost she will prove Daksh is innocent and bring him back to his&her life.

naina thinks for an idea to solve the issue. In her room, she will be psensive and she takes her laptop. log into her account and finds some offline messages. among them she finds a video from Daksh's id (ha ha ha.. assume, at that day Daksh took his laptop and tunred on the camera for leaving some messages to his Naina as he missed her lot . in the TC article it was said all will be out except Saonakshi and Daksh) . naina opens it and wonders... oh.. she clearly sees what had happened and gets the proof for Sonakshi's trap and cheating. she will take a copy of the video in a CD. She tries to approach Daksh, he runs far. She tries to approach Daksh, he runs far. at last Naina messages him that she has to say something urget and he does not need to worry... he is innocent.

Ok, if you do not wish naina to know Rohin's involvement, you can skip that part that naina overhears it.

Another thing, if u wish Daksh finds the movie than Naina finds it, here is the story.. it is a bit filmy... 😉

After vowing... next day mrnig she is infront of ganapathi pappa. Naina is with deep pain asks the lord "aaj pehli baar mein aap se kuch maang rahi hoo.. mera Daksh koyi galathi nahi ki... aaj voh bohot dard mehsoos kar raha hai.. aap sare sachayi jante hai na... mera Daksh ko iss haal sa bacha deejiye..." (someting more intense words u can add) tears rolls her cheek.. bells starts to ring automatically (imagine old hindi cinema ;)) everybody wil wonder... meanwhile Daksh who cannot face others esp Naina spends more time in his room. he takes his laptop and opens it.. Oh.. he wonders all that happened in the room was reconded in it... he finds he is innocent and Sonakshi was lying and cheating him. he feel how cheap is thins girl! becomes the real KP and... then!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh... i think i can extend this story some more..

in the above FF, let Ayi ask Naina that she wants Naina to leave the house after Daksh's mrg. Naina with pain but bold face does not answer.. Daksh also hears but does not respond... with pain he also leaves.. [this happens b4 Naina knows Daksh is trapped and just after that she comes to know it]

Then after Daksh/Naina brings sonakshi's real color and Daksh is happy to know he is innocent... Naina wil bold succeeded face ready to leave the house. Now Ayi feels too much regret. Daksh becomes speachless... but Naina is stubborn with her dicision. She leaves to Darjeeling to keep her mom's promise and her her ayi's promise. After Naina left the house Daksh is in deep pain.. he cannot suffer... Daksh with angry pain goes out and takes his car and leaves... he drives thinking of all the past... each incident one by one. he meets an accident.. he is taken to hospital... In the unconciousness he tells: Naina.. naina... doctor asks everybody who is naina... etc etc.. at last Ayi baba understands they were in love... and then decide to go to Darjeeling with the proposal and mrg happens... ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i will be out of station in coming a few days... i hope something willl happen good by my return!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ntsindia

i will be out of station in coming a few days... i hope something willl happen good by my return!


Happy jrny yaar,Have fun.Hopefully something good should happen by the time u return😛..will miss u tk cr
BTW ur story lines are super asusual , one or other should happen as per ur story lines..for sure😉

Yaar, If u remember intially I told u once, I would want u to be the creative head or story writer of SSBN ..Kash ye sach hota😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ntsindia

Oh... i think i can extend this story some more..

in the above FF, let Ayi ask Naina that she wants Naina to leave the house after Daksh's mrg. Naina with pain but bold face does not answer.. Daksh also hears but does not respond... with pain he also leaves.. [this happens b4 Naina knows Daksh is trapped and just after that she comes to know it]

Then after Daksh/Naina brings sonakshi's real color and Daksh is happy to know he is innocent... Naina wil bold succeeded face ready to leave the house. Now Ayi feels too much regret. Daksh becomes speachless... but Naina is stubborn with her dicision. She leaves to Darjeeling to keep her mom's promise and her her ayi's promise. After Naina left the house Daksh is in deep pain.. he cannot suffer... Daksh with angry pain goes out and takes his car and leaves... he drives thinking of all the past... each incident one by one. he meets an accident.. he is taken to hospital... In the unconciousness he tells: Naina.. naina... doctor asks everybody who is naina... etc etc.. at last Ayi baba understands they were in love... and then decide to go to Darjeeling with the proposal and mrg happens... ;)



Yaar,I really want this to happen ..really khas aisa hota..mazaa aata..Luv u for this storyline
🤗
Redaing it self is making me happy..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg! ntsindia!😲😃 when i read ur story of how ayi will understand the love between dakshana i felt as if u r reading my mind!!!! how cool is that...i was thinking on the same lines...but u know , the story in my head was a little bit different...in the end i was thinking that daksh is gonna feel rly sad and angry and then without telling anyone in the middle of the night when everyone else is asleep he takes the car and goes to darjeeling to meet naina...but man!!! i love ur story better😛 my ending of the story gets a bit dramatic and filmy !! urs is simple and sweet...let this storyline happen in real SSBN!😍 But i dont want daksh to get seriously injured in the accident...just minor injuries
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh ! another thing! in my story both daksh and akruthi slaps physco rly hard across the face when the confrontation takes place😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMystique

Oh ! another thing! in my story both daksh and akruthi slaps physco rly hard across the face when the confrontation takes place😳

babe...luv u 4 dat🤗

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