ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF chap 10 ON PAGE 37 - Page 34

Originally posted by: parmarA

Barasaat ke pahele badal ka

Garajana jaroori hai

Pyaar ko mehsoos hone se pahele

Jaise dil ka dhadakna jaroori hai

I am very much in love with this FF.Rachana and Vihaan are two good soul.

But for me Kabir is my sweetheart toh"yeh dil tum bin kahi lagta nahi"

I am helpless dear.I know Vihaan is good but i am sure Kabir will be best for Rachana.

Rachana's short but sweet intro stole my heart.

I know Kabir and vihaan had done mistakes.Mostly Kabir.But i am glad that he went to say sorry to Rachana.

And for your precap."Mar jawa good khake.Dono Dance pe chance marenge'

Aur kabir Raja gayega,"Tumne mari entriya dil me baji ghantiya.Tan tan tan"

Yeh kuchh jyada nahi ho gaya?😆

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

clap clap i dun knw mehak ki kitne chapter ek go mein padhe pr sab achre the u made me fall in luv with vihaan but ...u lost rajiv in track i hope he is coming back
dun mind that i din give a long comment wil do its soon

Originally posted by: parmarA

Review for chap 6

Chhune do aasmano ko

Bahene toh lahero ko

Humare dil ko yuhi

Rahene do un baho ke liye

I am impressed by Rachana's bravery plus her forgiving nature.

I like this trio dosti ke rang and somewhere Maria too.She is a classy friend of Rachana but still ful of manners.

Kabir truly western boy firstly hugged her when she forgive her and secondly wanted to hug her when she agreed to be friend of them.

Pary time:Oh Ghosh! i am not a party person so don't know about night party.But happy that Rachana and Kabir were on dance floor.

So ab Kabir Ko rachana ke liye Kuchh kuchh hota hai kya?

Rachana and vihaan ka closeness use shayad ehsaaas karayega.

You are truely fab writer dear Mehak.

Waise my name is Alka.

You can call me Alka

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 7

Nigaho wohi jo unke didar ko tarse

Pyaar wohi jo manzil ko tarse

Hume gum nahi hum kyon jiye

Unke bin?zindagi mushkil hai unke bin.

@Mehak,Beautiful update i tell you.

Kabir itni shiddat se mohobbat karnewala hai rachana se ki sari Qayanat unhe milane ke rast bana rahi hai.

Pahele Nightclub me Rachana ka hangover.Fir ghar pe Ek ke baad ek cricket match me batsman ke out hone jaisa,"Tu chal main aaya"Pahele Maria aur fir Vihaan.

Vihaan and Kabir both noticed her beauty.But Kabir ko anjaam pata tha ki yeh rachana jab tak soyee hai tab tak theek hai uthegi toh bawal machayegi.

And he was right.But thank god woh tape lekar bhi aaya aur uska istemaal bhi kiya.

I love when rachana gain that title sherni.And i can imagine her expression while she was crying and hugging Kabir.She must be looking so cute and angelic.

Precap is so vadhiya yaar.Want to see that chapter

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 8

Jugnu ki aankhome kashish abhi barkaraar hai

Khamoshi ki is raat me chandni jaan daar hai

Jis dil me hai dilbar ka basera

Woh ghar to khud se hi yaadgaar hai

Feel bad for Vihaan and for Kabir he is like racer horse or car.

First everytime.He can express enything after decided to do so.

And got chance at the name of project.I called it Destiny.

Kabir proposed her and she hesitatedly denny it.But she was melting inside.

She had a bright career.In my opinion her love affair will be her strength not weakness.

But she is a brave girl.Heart imbalance caused an accident.

But i am in dilemma who met with accident?

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 9

Gardisho ke daur me yeh aasoo hai

Fikramand hote hai aasoo hai

Aitbaar aasani se hota nahi kisi par

Jiski wajah yeh aankhe hai

@Mehak,beautiful update dear.

I am totally shocked and fallen in love with Kabir the brave man.

I think Rachana is right at her pov and so Vihaan.

Vihaan gave her strict and high dose of advices.And tell her to think and trust.

Vihaan is clear on his concept that if Kabir is serious for Rachana that's ok and will not come in between them.

So the last update[means your 10th chap] is left

I think maine aapko link dene ko bola aur aap bura maan gaye.Sorry 😭😭

Originally posted by: parmarA

Girhain jajabato ki aasani se khulti nahi

Pyaar ki kashish yuhi meet ti nahi

Hum samazna chahte the unhe khuda

Magar dimaar ki ulzan sulazti nahi

What an update dear?

I like Kabir here and somehow Rachana is confortable too with Kabir.

But Kabir's action lead me to think,"Is he really serious towards Rachana in his feeling?or he is playing game with her that she insulted him ?

If he is serious then all set for their love and she can give respect in answer.

But i am little scared now that they are going for date and that's too alone

Originally posted by: parmarA

It is so easy dear

Open the written update page just like this page you will get link uperside

http://www.india-forums.com/new_reply_form.asp?M=Q&PID=110789668&PN=&TR=339 just copy the link and open post reply and paste it there

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Hey!!!

Finally red the parts that I missed...

Beautifully written...

Very cute...

Vihaan n kabir's friendship is too gud

Thnx for all the pms

Continue soon