ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF chap 10 ON PAGE 37 - Page 32

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Makkar 9,it is awkward for me to call you by this name.Give me some option please.

I am going to start to read this ff.

Will give review one by one.

Thanks for adding my name in your buddy list

Originally posted by: parmarA

Ek dua jo aankhose ozal hone ko hai

Ek ada jo chhuke khamosh hone ko hai

Ek shama jo roshni se buzane ko hai

Do aankhe jo chupake se chhalakne ko hai

Dear.I had started to read your updates.

I just love this diary effects which make us each and every moments memorable.

I am feeling bad for Rachana that she is too soft hearted.[Even real serial too]

Rajeev sir too love rachana but somehow he afraid to confess.

Let's see what happens in next chap?bec Rajeev sir decided to leave Banaras.

Do you understand Hindi?

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Mahek,

Review of part 2

Hum unke apna dil hare hai

Samaz na sake ki kya hare hai?

Jab ki aankhe mundane ki koshish

Tab pata chala ki chain bhi hare hai.

Waise i am not in favour of Rachana and Rajeev relation but your last lines gave me some patience.

I am feeling that Rachana got that letter so early.But my shaitaani not shaitaani but Kabir love wanted that Rajeev must leave [don't take it serious]

Rachana found that Diary and sari pol khul gai.

And the rain in beneficial for both of them.Rajeev couldn't deny his emotions and confessed it.

Their first hug and kiss was enjyable.

But i think Rachana is still in fantacy.Or may i can say she is just sapne ladakpan ke

Want kabir to entre soon.Meri Rachana ko Rajeev sir se bachao[just joke part]

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 3 review

Hum dhundne ko naya jahaa chale

Basane ko naya aashiyaa chale

Milenge woh jo humare hai

Yahi sochke dhundne woh nigahe chale

At last Kabir entre in your ff.

What an entry Mehak?you described his personality so grand that i am actually feeling his entry in front of my eyes.

HIs body his Royal style and his Royal attitude make me Crazy [I am not in age to go crazy like this] but still i love Kabir Personality in Real serial too.

I am very happy for Rachana that her talent and her hard work gave her opportunity to go to London and Rajeev sir too encourage her to go there.

Rajeev sir,you are too Gentleman

I am very happy that you know Hindi.Bec i think my Hindi can express your ff more than my English

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 4 review

Sitare tab tak hasee hai

Jab tak chand nahi dikhta

Raat tab tak haseen hai

Jab tak suraj nahi nikalta

Khubsurati agar saadgi se

Aaye toh sara jahaa

Haseen lagta hai

Haye Mehak Janu,aapne mera sapna tod diya.

Kabir Flurty?Really?i can't believe this yaar.

Vihaan too smart here.Rachana an innocent girl and Kabir flirt.

Want to see the transmation of their personalities.But i like Kabir and Rachana's nok zok.

Kabir ne aaj tak shayad aisee ladki nahi dekhi joitne khubsurat dil ki malik ho.Usne artificial hasni wali ya fir ada dikhanewali ladki dekhi hogi.

Tabhi toh shayad use sone aur pital ka farq nahi pata.

Haye Rachana teri saadgi aur teri boli kabir ko ghayal kar degi.

I think Kabir becoming jealous that Vihaan and Rachana talking with each other.

Is is pyaar ki shuruat?ya fir muzse dosti karoge?