ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF chap 10 ON PAGE 37 - Page 29

Originally posted by: saravathi

ofcourse you r my good friend n thanks for the dedication sweetheart

Originally posted by: saravathi

writing about Vihaan I totally forgot Rachna she bhaves so brilliant she knows what she needs n her concern for Kabir was wellshown.

I wil say you something but you should not angry on that

more than ur previous chaps I am liking the recent ones more

n u know why bcoz u totally forgot to write on Rajiv(sry) n its 😆full of my Vihaan n Kabir..yipeee😆 hope Rajiv fans wont read this comment

Originally posted by: sb1410

Enjoyed it V is a good friend, K and R are deeply attracted to each other what a love triangle waiting to see what comes next.

Originally posted by: minarva.panda

awesome

ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF

CHAP -10

IN THE HOSPITAL

Vihaan was so concerned about kabir health that he even didn't closed his eyes even for a second. In early morning kabir gained his consciousness and took rachana name and opened his eyes slowly and saw Vihaan sitting near him with a smiling and a relieved look .

Vihaan: she is alright kabir.

Kabir listened to Vihaan words and was feeling better after that .

Vihaan : well, how are you now? Is the injury on the head paining?

Kabir recalled all the events that happened yesterday and he was now more worried regarding rachana attitude towards him.

Kabir: this pain is nothing in front of the pain that I got yesterday from rachana reaction ,Vihaan.

Vihaan : that's what makes rachana different ,kabir. She judged your nature kabir and not your charm and money . may be she also like you but she don't want to be with you because of your flirt nature .so better watch your actions.

Kabir: but she rejected me, whats the point in doing this?

Vihaan: its already a no but keep trying , maybe it will become a yes .

Vihaan winked at kabir ask him to take rest and kabir too dozes off to sleep.

IN THE MORNING

Vihaan was completing the formalities at the reception when she saw rachana coming with dozen of white orchids and stood near him.

Vihaan (with a naughty smile): hey rachana, that's for me ,that's so nice of you.

And just act to take the flowers from her and even rachana thinking what to do as she brought this for kabir .vihaan too naughtily took the flowers .

Vihaan :( not able to control his laughter ) hey rachana, I was just joking ,take it to kabir .

Rachana too started laughing with Vihaan while taking the flowers.

Rachna :how is kabir now ?did he woke up ?

Vihaan :yeah, I am going there only ,lets meet him .

Rachna :and Vihaan were about to enter the hospital room .

Vihaan : oh I am so sorry , hey rachna I have to go for some work ,will you take care of kabir now ?

Rachna too responded with a yes

Rachna : of course Vihaan ,and you please take rest also, it seems you were awake the whole night and even your are swollen and red.

Vihaan nodded slightly and was about to go and suddenly turned towards rachna .

Vihaan ; rachna ,well I too love white orchids.

Rachna smiled and entered the hospital room while Vihaan looks on.

Vihaan in his thoughts

Although you noticed my swollen eyes but couldn't notice the reason behind it. sometimes I wish that I could tell you by myself the reason but cant cheat my friend too as I have promised him .and I took the first step towards the promise today itself . Will love u as ever .

Finally Vihaan did his work and left from the hospital.

IN THE HOSPITAL ROOM

Rachana entered the room enthusiastically but was disappointed seeing that many bouqets were there for kabir already and kabir is too asleep. she just put the white orchids with the other flowers and went outside to have some water .when she entered inside the room , she saw that her orchids were missing and she was astonished when one voice came over her ears.

Kabir: are you finding something?

Kabir showed the orchids to rachna which he took after rachna left .

Rachna(innocently) : kabir u awake ? why did you took those orchids there?

Kabir( giving a naughty smile ) gud morning rachna ,first come sit here .

Rachna came and again asked the same question .

Kabir: because that's the first gift from your side for me rachna and I love it and want it to be close to my heart .

Rachna was happy and overwhelmed after listening his answer and even asked sorry for her negligience.

Kabir( holding her hand ): please don't be ever sorry to me rachna .this will hurt me a lot as I will think that I couldn't even fulfil the duty of a friend.

Rachna blushed and and tried to extricate her hand but kabir didn't let her go and continued his gaze on her and both were locked in embrace until some nurse came to give food to kabir .

Kabir got a little naughty and started acting in front of rachna .

Kabir: aww, I am having too much pain in my hand .

Rachna : (got panicked) should I call the doctor kabir?

Kabir: no its paining maybe because I have slept on the side of my hand .now I cant eat food too.

Rachana : why? So should I call the nurse to feed you?

Kabir: ( seeing that his plan is failing ) no way, its better I don't eat at all. cant you feed me ? u were asking sorry from me na.

Rachana understood kabir intentions but remained silent and feed him and kabir watched her lovingly .after kabir was full ,rachana asked him .

Rachana :kabir, nowadays you are becoming really naughty ?

Kabir:( innocently) no rachana, I am not .

Rachana : oh really?

Rachana was moving from kabir bed when kabir pulled her closer and put a finger on her lips ..

Kabir took his face more closer that seemed that he is trying to kiss rachana which made rachana close her eyes but then kabir moved towards her ears and whispered.

Kabir :should I show you how naughty I can be rachna ?

Rachana was a little relieved although she was mesmerized with his touch but then came in his firm tone.

Rachana : kabir, you are irritating me, so back off .

Kabir made a pout and told rachana .

Kabir : ohk , show as much attitude as you want . there is no respect in your eyes for me.

Rachana : bye kabir ,take rest now.

Rachana smiled and waved her hand to kabir. Kabir too watched her till she left.

AFTER FEW DAYS IN KABIR MANSION

Kabir was discharged from the hospital and was in house with Vihaan .both were talking when Vihaan got a call from rachna .

Rachna : hi Vihaan ,howz kabir now? actually because of college work load I couldn't meet him .if he is alright ,can I come there to meet him .

Vihaan : yeah of course , he must be waiting for you only.

Vihaan told kabir that rachna is coming there and now he is leaving as have some work.

Although kabir was happy that rachna is coming but decided to show some tantrums to her.

AFTER HALF AN HOUR

Rachna reached kabir residence and was finding out for kabir in the big mansion but no one was there and then she called Vihaan as was nervous to call kabir.

Vihaan : hey rachna ,u reached his house

Rachna : ya but where are you ?

Vihaan : just go upstairs ,kabir will be waiting for you as I have left because of some work

Rachan wanted to ask Vihaan more but then he cut the call.

She slowly went upstairs and opened kabir room and was shocked to see that kabir was reading a magazine while sitting on a bed and was not paying heed to her voice.

Rachna : (in an angry tone ) Hey kabir, I was shouting so much and you are reading magazine here . i came here to meet you and you are ignoring me.

Kabir : (making a fake angry face) hey u don't say that to me .you ignored me ,didn't come to meet me even in hospital and on that also went without talking properly. I hate you for that .

Rachana : I am sorry kabir but I was busy because of work load na .

Kabir ( thinking to tease rachana more ) so now I am busy and I don't want to talk to you.

Rachana ( annoyed): ohk I am going then .

Kabir ; yeah go go, I don't have any expectations from you .i will live alone.

Rachan too was enjoying that nok -jhok and then moved towards kabir.

Rachana : ( in an angry tone) Kabir,I am giving you last warning that if u didn't leave that magazine and have a word with me , I am surely gonna kill you.

Kabir : I am not afraid of youok.

Rachana pulled the magazine from kabir hand but even kabir was too stubborn to leave and then kabir pulled the magazine with so much force that rachana fall on kabir on the bed and both were locked in the heavenly eyelock .the world stopped for them for a while when suddenly rachana broke the embrace trying to get up . but in the quest of getting up rachana fell down again and her lips meet with kabir lips shocking them both . rachana tried to get up from kabir hold who was holding her .

Rachana ; I am sorry

Kabir : not to worry rachana .

Kabir eyes met with rachana eyes and the two souls who were trying to control their growing emotions break free all the barriers and fulfil their sexual teenage desires , rachana leaned too and closed her eyes indicating kabir to take the step first .kabir too responded and kissed rachna on her lips .it was all a wonder to both of them and was sweeter than any other desert .

For both the souls, it was a belly shaking laughter and heartbreaking sobs and breathless giggle fits all wrapped up in one long heartbeat that went on and on . though rachna never said to kabir but she showed his feeling more clearly as ever .the world stopped for them .

PRECAP- RACHANA WENT WITH KABIR ON A DATE PLANNED BY VIHAAN

I M SO SORRY FOR UPDATING SO LATE BUT WHAT TO DO AS I AM COPING WITH MY NEW STUDIES AND EXPERIENCE OF LIVING ALONE IN ANOTHER CITY . CRITICISM AND SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOMED . HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT

PLEASE DO LEAVE A COMMENT AS THIS KEEPS ME MOTIVATED TO WRITE AND CONTINUE THE STORY 😳

Originally posted by: sb1410

Awesome love the new found romance of Rabir and the maturity of V with his dealing of his emotions and friendship.

First thanks so much for your PM!

Originally posted by: crtkelly

First thanks so much for your PM!

I have taken the time to catch up with my reading, and have to commend you on your FF! Loving the story, but especially Vihaan; what a friend he is to both Rachna and Kabir. You just feel so much for him and his sacrifice.

Looking forward to your next update.