rabir and rajeev OS:PART 3@ PG 4

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: maheek
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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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rabir and rajna OS

part 2

rachna drops some deigns, kabeer and rajeev both start to help her . rachna and kabir both are going to pick a same deign, their hands touch, and their eyes meet, they totally lost into each other eyes..

rajeev is looking the scene , feeling some pain, suddenly he screams. rachna and kabir both look at him tensely ,,,rachna asks what happens??

rajeev says i am feeling pain in my leg, he is shocked with his own words..."why i am

telling lie??why?? rajeev thinks ,he's feeling guilty also for telling lie without any reason, he can't understand what happen to him..

at this moment rachna comes near to him and says sir u need to rest, come with me

rachna hold rajeevv shoulder and takes him to his room,

when rachna hold him the guilt feeling somehow went away...he feels so special..

when rachna laid rajeev in the bed, her eyes stuck into kabeer's photo which stands in the bedside table...she is looking the picture with lots of love, but rajeev misunderstand thatt she's looking at him..

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in baba's place...

baba's wife : enough is enough now, with this baba's fake face you are solving people problems but your own son becomes suitable for marriage, do you have any idea..

baba: i have that's why i fond a girl. she's pretty , sanskari and also goonsheel... absolutely suitable for our family, tomorrow we will go their with our son's proposal

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first i thought i would write an OS..butt now my OS is becomin my FF...😆

sorry for the short update..

weaken start no rabir for 2 days...this is weaken treat for u , next part will update tomorrow..

Edited by awesome-raji - 11 years ago

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MEHAK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Oh wow what update it's better u are changing it in ff this will be a treat for us only 😳Rite now this forum and forums writers is the only Sslk for me or I should say that I have some hope because of this if👏

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Saranya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

It looked short but The way you wrote t made me read so many times that I felt Its really long

Loving this Rachna..n Rajiv's sounded naughty too 😳 Is baba talking about Rachna ???

n pls make it an ff

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mkakkar93
Oh wow what update it's better u are changing it in ff this will be a treat for us only 😳Rite now this forum and forums writers is the only Sslk for me or I should say that I have some hope because of this if👏

thank u so much..

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: saravathi
It looked short but The way you wrote t made me read so many times that I felt Its really long
Loving this Rachna..n Rajiv's sounded naughty too 😳 Is baba talking about Rachna ???
n pls make it an ff

you have to wait for it,,😉

thank u so much saravathi😛