3rd July- Written Update - Must read note

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*NOTE: Hey guys, sorry for being late today! I am feeling very down, starting to get fever, so I woke up very late! I woke up around 11:00 P.M. at my place [10: A.M. at India-Forums] took a shower and straight-away got to writing the update! Hope y'all are fine with it. Thanks!

July 2nd, 2008 {Thursday} - Sapna Babul Ka… Bidaai
Written Update - By Zinu

Short Update

Everyone tries to console Ranvir, in his room. Pointless!

Ranvir is out in the living room, and spots a knife. He tries to kill himself, but is saves by Indergit! Indergit calms him down and he wants to be alone.

Indergit thanks Sadhna.

Sadhna says it was her duty.

Alekh praises Sadhna.

Alekh asks why Ranvir is taking so long to come. Indergit says he'll be back shortly. Choti Ma says he's suffering through a big shock, he'll be alone for a while, he'll be fine and we should also give him time, so he can take care of himself. She tells Sadhna to take Alekh into their room. Salekh leave.

Avni and hubby leave as well. Indergit leaves, followed by Choti Ma's hubby (?)

Choti Ma consoles Vasu a bit and leaves. Vasu is left alone! She cries.

Mamaji, Mamiji, Ragini, Malti and hubby talk about what took place during the engagement. Topic switches to praising Sadhna. Malti makes an excuse and leaves.

Mamaji, Mamiji and Ragini think about what Ranvir would've been going through.

Transition takes place, and the scene in switched to Ranvir, depressed in the rain.

The place he's at looks like a down-hill. 🤔

He walks in slow-motion recalling Sonia's and his memories, and how Sadhna kept warning him and about Karan showing the proof, engagement scene repeats, etc.

He walks and trips over. He falls to the ground and begins bawling, recalling all of his and Sonia's spent moments [only!] he sits on his knees and screams out loud!

Alekh is scared of the lightning that is being struck. [very cute! [:">]]

He gets scares when Sadhna calls him behind his back. She gets him his medicine and asks him to go to sleep. Alekh says "Half is fine, half isn't!" [:">] 😆 Sadhna is confused. He says he'll eat the medicine, but not sleep. She asks why? They worry about Ranvir not home yet, it was getting really late at night!

Alekh wants to go look for Ranvir; Sadhna worries at first, but then agrees! [haha, that rhymes.😆]

Alekh has his medicine before leaving. Sadhna worries it's so late at night, where might he be? Alekh says he knows a place where he goes when he's upset, or such. They begin to leave.

The scene switches to Ranvir, still sitting on his knees, bawling! He finally gets up and looks at the hill; beginning to walk towards it. He looks down the hill, the episode ends at his face.

Descriptive Update

"Everything will be alright, huuh?" Alekh says to Ranvir. "Bhaiyaa, Bhaiyaa, I've lost everything that belonged to me, today! What am I to do now? What should I do, Bhaiyaa?" Ranvir replied, weeping. Everyone looks at the two, as Vasu begins to walk over. Alekh & Ranvir are holding hands. [aww, how cute!] Alekh begins to get scared, seeing Vasu walk towards them. Alekh is scared and leaves Ranvir's hands. [aww, it's like so sad, when that happens] Ranvir stays in the same devdas position. Alekh turns his back towards Vasu, and looks scared! Vasu looks at him. He looks up at Sadhna, who nods sideways, crying. Ranvir is weeping as Vasu keeps her hand on his shoulder. [dear god, Ranvir, dear god! Suck it up, dude. Why the heck are you crying over the dimwit?] Ranvir turns and looks at Vasu; his eyes half closed and red. "No Ranvir." Vasu says 'somewhat' crying. She takes his face in her hand. "Don't think that. No. The thing that isn't worthy of being taken, don't even think of it as being yours." Ranvir cry-sighs. [ooh! Cry-sighs, haha 😆 well, I guess I'll describe ti as like, you know when one cries, they let out a sigh sorta thing? It comes out all shaky, with shivering voice? Like that!] "Look at the positive side, beta." Vasu says. [you tell him! I cannot believe for the first time, I'm on her side, asl;kfjslakjfljdfk 🤣] "Before you joined your relationship with her, the truth was out!" she adds. Sadhna cries in the background. Ranvir weeps. Alekh is scared. [wow, way to ease in on their faces, lol! 😆] "You just watch, Ranvir. You'll get a better looking, and desirable soul mate then her." Vasu consoles him. "Mom! Mom, I don't want any soul mate! I—I don't want to marry, mom!" He says, finally getting up, in mid-sentence. [okay, now he's just plain suffocating me, the way he talks! ] "I don't was any life partner. I don't want anything! I... want nothing.. At all!" he says and walks out the door. Everyone is highly upset, including Alekh. "Ranvir, Ranvir, son!" Indergit tries to get him to come back, but he leaves. Close up a crying Sadhna, and an upset Vasu and everyone else, about the room.

***

Ranvir weeps, walking down the stairs. He stops, and recalls her and Sonia's "memories" and remembers her saying, 'Don't make many plans, I'll throw such a cold water at you, all of your plans will be fizzled-out!' He regrets it, and walks across the hall. He stops mid-way, and looks at the knife, 2 feet away. [jksdfhkasjfksdf No comment! Grr..] He walks towards the knife, and takes it out of the fruit. [*slow-motion, slow motion* 🤔] He thinks if he should do it or not, after a while, he gives it a shot! [hey! That rhymes. 🤣] He looks at the knife, as it is a mirror. Haha. 😆 He remembers seeing the proof of Sonia's act! He lowers the knife at his waist-level. He's about to plunge it in as Indergit yells "Ranvir!" who is walking down the stairs. [you go, right now, and stop the idiot, dude! Got dammit, this is such a piss off, grr..] Ranvir makes a move to plunge it in himself, but is stopped by Inder. "NO! NO! What're you doing?" Inder says, and holds his hands. Back & Forth talk. [Now, if you see affirmative its Inder, if you see Negative, it's Rabi]
Everyone comes downstairs, while they constantly yell at each other.
"STOP! LET GO! HAVE YOU GONE MAD?"
"NO! LEAVE ME DAD!"
"NO I WILL NOT!"
"NO! RANBIR!"
"DAD, JUST LEAVE ME!"
"No, Ranvir, no beta!" Inder calms down and holds his face.
[okay, dude, the way he "attempted" to plunge himself, was just sad! Job not-well done!]
"Dad! LEAVE ME!"
"No, Ranvir.. PELASE!"
"What're you doing son?" Inder says.
"Leave.. me.. dad!" Ranvir says in a breaking voice.
Everyone crowds around them.
"Leave me, dad, please. I want to die, dad!" Ranvir says. [omg! Someone please slap this dude. Asl;djjflsdf GRR!] Inder cunningly takes the knife out of his hands and drops it on the table. [you go!] He places his hand on Ranvir's face as Ranvir says "I want to die, dad." About to faint! "No, son!" Inder nods sideways. "DAD!" he yells and hugs him, tightly. [bad acting, dude.. bad acting! Looked lame-o 🤔] Ranvir weeps in his shoulder as Inder cries holding him. Vasu cries looking at them. Everyone is highly upset! "Dad! How'd I make such a big mistake? How? How could I have not recognizes Sonia's true colors?" he says, now angrily, yet still crying and hugging Inder. [woah, woah, woah! Hang on there, kid! I thought you said "Never will I speak your name from now onwards." Taunting her? OOOO! You lose, haha, you said it! 😛] "Why, dad? Why?" he adds and finally pulls out. "How could I let this happen, dad? I'm the biggest fool in the earth, I'm the biggest fool in the earth!" he continues. [Firstly, it's "I'm the biggest fool
on the earth, and not in the earth, hehe. Sorry, that bugs me! 😆 & secondly ohh! Look who admitted something so true! 😆 Just kidding! 😊] "No, Ranvir, don't think such, my son. Common, bygones are bygones. Try to forget!" Inder says. "No dad, I cannot forget her. [but you promised yesterday you would, fool! Asklfjklasjf 😕] I don't want to live, dad. I want to die! I want to die." [Okay, so you'll do the silliest thing by not forgetting hr, but killing yourself, moron? 😳] "No, son. No! Don't say such!" Inder keeps repeating the same lines. 🤔 "We, don't we look your own to you? Don't we mean anything to you? Look at me, I'm your dad. Does my love not affect you in any way?" he adds. "Dad! Dad, I'm a failure. I failed dad. My love lost! Dad, how can someone give someone's love such a big wound? How dad?" He replies. [can I please SLAP the hell outta him? Pissing me off, aah!] Inder and everyone looks away, having no answer. [oo! I know, I know. When they're after something which is not love btw.. example? SONIA!] "I can understand you pain, beta. And today, please try to understand what I'm saying. Sometimes in life, we need to get wounded for everyone. The blindfold gets off your eyes. You get to understand the ups and downs of life, beta." Inder takes his face in both of his hands. [You tell him, and you tell him good! 😛] "Be brave! And be positive! Okay? I'm happy that, we got a daughter-in-law like Sadhna! Who; beforehand, save us, you, and this house. Is this fact, less, dear?" he adds, shaking him by the shoulders at first, but calming him down. Ranvir nods and hugs him. [aw, there you go! Now that didn't look lame-o! 😊] He weeps, and cry-sighs. "Common, Ranvir! [Here comes the typical line in the world of show-biz! 😛] Common! You're my son! Indergit Ranjvansh's son. [so that is his name, thank you someone on page 2 of my yesterday's update for telling me. 🤗 Sorry! Forgot the username, hehe. 😳] How can you become weak? Please stop. Okay? Please stop!" Inder says. [yeaaaahhhhh. Pull yourself together, dude.] Everyone else comes up to him and consoles him some say, "Have patience, everything will be alright!" while others say "Don't worry, Ranvir! We're all with you, here." [and of-course, but this you can tell, I don't know Avni's hubby's name, and the other dude's name.. is the Choti Ma's hubby?? 🤔] Ranvir looks at Inder and says. "Dad! I want to stay alone for some time. I want to go outside." And akljaslfkjsdlfj omg! His tears are all soaked up! Finally, thank the lord! 😛
"No, Ranvir. I can't let you go anywhere, alone." Inder says. [I agree!] "Don't worry, dad. Nothing will happen to me." Ranvir replies, Inder sighs. "Are you sure?" he asks. Ranvir nods. "Alright! But make a promise, that you'll not harm yourself in any way!" Inder says. Ranvir nods. "Promise?" Inder asks. "I promise, dad!" Ranvir replies. Inder then nods, still seeming a bit worried. "Ranvir!" Choti Ma says, and walks over to him and takes him by the hand. "But so late at night, where'll you go?" she asks worried. "Choti Ma, I want to stay alone for some time. You guys don't worry! I'll be back in a little while." Ranvir says and adds a nod. He looks at Vasu who slightly nods in acceptance and ditto with Indergit. He leaves the house.

*NOTE: Okay, guys! I honestly cannot continue writing in descriptive format today. I hope that's fine. I'm really very sorry! 😔

Precap: Alekh and Sadhna arrive right where Ranvir's car was parked! They try to find him in the car and around the car. Spotless! Sadhna then notices something ahead, and is shocked along with Alekh.

Rating&Comments: 5/10! First part is very depressing & suffocating. It gets better when Ranvir is out of the house. Indergit's consolation towards Ranvir, was hats off! Alekh getting scared by the lightning was super cute. 5 marks go to Alekh and Sadhna. I was really annoyed writing about the depressed Ranvir again. The way he attempted to plunge himself with the knife, was really bad acting, and the way he hugged his father at a point, was really lame.

Star of the day: Indergit; for his great consolation and calming Ranvir down, which sadly nobody else could do.

Dialogue of the day: when Alekh says "Aadha theek hai, aadha nahi" ("Half is fine, half isn't") It was really cute, yet funny.

Scene of the day: the first part was really depressing as I mentioned earlier. I loved Inder's consolation, but the scene suffocated me at a point! I would like to say Alekh and Sadhna's scene.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the update Zinu, hope u feel better soon. Take rest over the weekend.

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hey thanks for the update and i hope u feel better..
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Thanks for the lovely updates. Hope you feel better. take rest
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Thanks for the nice update. Get well soon.
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Thanks for the amazing update as usual Zinu, do take rest, and dont worry abt the descriptive format at all... any format thats comfortable with you is fine! :D

Get well soon!
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Hey! Thanks. 😊 😊 Take some rest. 😊 U'll b alright. 😊
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i hope u feel better!!!!!!!!! 😕
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thanx so much for the udpate.
I think Ragini will be the one to console Ranbir and they will probably fall in love.
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amazing update dear and get well soon

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