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& I dearly apologize, as I just began watching the show, and have no idea what the names of some characters are. :]
June 19th, 2008 {Thursday} - Sapna Babul Ka… Bidaai
Written Update - By Zinu
Short Update
- Sadhna goes to Ranvir's room to tell him what Sonia's real colors are. Ranvir refuses to hear a word against her.
Descriptive Update
Sadhna peeks in and listens to Sonia's conversation with Karan.
Sonia: Karan, if I tell you to go from here, don't you think there'll be a reason for that? And, even I can't live without you. I'll reach there as soon as I can, myself. Okay? *smiles* I promise.
*Sadhna is shown looking restless hearing this.. She continues listening*
Karan: Fine, we'll see. [whoa, dude.. Attitude much K ] We'll think about this matter.
Sonia: Karan, there's no time to think and see. My relatives are old-fashioned. I don't want them to threaten you against mom and dad, okay?
Karan: Okay, baba. Alright! If you're insisting so much, I'll listen! [Uhh.. Okay there weird-o? 🤔] I'll go.
Sonia: Thank-You, darling! I'll come to Bhatinda as soon as possible. Then we'll get married, okay?
They hug. She makes a look like "Urrghh! God, just leave already!" ..all pissed off!
Sadhna on the other hand, seems more restless and is worried.
They pull our, and Sonia adds on a smile.
Sonia: I'll leave now, okay? Bye.
Sadhna's expression is like "Oh, no! 😲" She moves back and a vase crashes to the floor. Both; Karan and Sonia are shocked.
Sadhna keeps her hand on her mouth, wide-eyed. She shivers, and rolls her eyes around and seems like she's trying to find a way to escape.
Sonia walks out the door and finds a broken vase. *Sadhna, vanished 😆* She is confused on how the vase fell. [Yes, typical, indeed. Just stand there and look at the floor, while the detective tune plays. Haha. 🤣]
Sadhna is hiding a wall away from her. Sadhna feels like coughing, but covers her mouth. Sonia begins to walk around. [after like 5 minutes dude..🤔] She steps on a broken piece of the vase.
Sadhna's expression; "Holy cow! 😲" *shivering*
Karan comes out of the room. [yes, you also come after an hour has gone by? 😕]
Karan: What happened, Sonia? [Oh, my god! Is this dude blind and deaf? 🤔]
Sonia: I think, someone was here. [NOOOO! Reeaallllyyy? 😲 Shocker!]
Karan *now* notices the broken vase on the floor.
He looks in front of him and spots a servant walking by and grins.
Karan: Don't worry, Sonia. It's the room-service, people. They keep roaming around here, one of them must've accidentally broken the vase.
*Sadhna still seems to be shivering, yet calmed now that she heard this*
Karan: Let's go. *smiles like a goof*
Sonia: No, Karan. I'll leave now, okay? Bye.
She starts to walk away but Karan holds her arm saying, "Sonia." He pulls her back.
Karan: I'm leaving! And you're worried about leaving home, except for me? Common, Sonia, I've came to meet you, from far away. Please? You'll spend some time with me, no?
Sonia: Karan, you've no idea, what excuses I made to get here. And, then, just after a couple of weeks. Then, we'll always live together. Right?!
*she holds his face*
Karan: Right! *he says it like, he's gonna ruin her or something.. 🤔 with a eveil grin on his face*
Sonia: Bye!
She smiles, and leaves with a pissed off look on her face.
Sadhna begins to peek and see if Karan is still there or not? Karan goes back in the room. Sadhna hears the door shut.
She takes the chance; runs through the hallway and out the door.
Her eyes search for someone.
Sadhna *thinking*: Sonia isn't being seen anywhere. I guess she left. What do I do now? God knows what kind of a game she's playing. [I KNOW, I KNOW! 😛 "Deception" 😆] But whatever it is, I'll have to get to the root of it. Shall I go talk to Karan? Or, maybe Ranvir? Even he doesn't know about Sonia. What should I do? [How about to home? 😃]
She looks across the road and looks worried.
Sadhna *thinking*: Oh my god! Where'd the car go? I left it here only, with Alekh ji. [😲 DUN DUN DUN!]
***
"Choti Ma!" Alekh walks up the stairs, uttering. ☺️
"Choti Ma!" he repeats, saying it several times more.
"What happened?" she asks, meeting with him.
"Choti Ma, have you seen my friend?" he asks worried, nearly about to cry. [Aww.. My aalluuu.. ☺️]
*Avni is walking around and comes to Choti Ma and Alekh*
Choti Ma: Sadhna? But you two went together, right?
Alekh *almost crying*: Yes, we did go together. But, she left me mid-way, Choti Ma. See, Choti Ma? You said wrong. Didn't you say, she's my good friend? Just look, how she left me mid-way. She doesn't take care of me at all!
Choti Ma: Okay, alright. You come here.
Alekh says his good old funny & cuttiee line ☺️: Stupid!
Choti Ma: Tell me the whole story.
She takes him and walks to the couch.
Choti Ma: Sit down, here.
Alekh says while walking ☺️: I don't like it! I hate it! I hate it, Choti Ma.
He sits on the couch. Avni and Choti Ma, stand in front of him.
Choti Ma: Tell me, what happened.
Alekh: She.. She had told me, 'I'll be back in 5 minutes.' and, and she didn't come.
Choti Ma: Okay, alright. As soon as she comes, we'll scold her a lot. Alright?
Alekh nods like a cutie pie. ☺️
Alekh: You know, Choti Ma? I counted 5 minutes, 5 times. [hehe 😆] But, still she didn't come. I--I waited for her so long. And she didn't even come, Choti ma. She--she, doesn't care about me at all! When we went to the temple, so everything was so 'very good' and now, it's terrible; nothings good, Choti ma.
Avni: See! Sadhna is so careless! She shouldn't have left Alekh alone like this. She's extremely careless!
Alekh gets angry.
Choti Ma: Avni--
Avni *interrupts Choti ma*: No, mom. Alekh should be aware of everything. Neither does Sadhna give him his medicines on time, nor does she give him food [on time].
Alekh gets even more angry. [Furious, I tell ya, FURIOUS! Hehe.. 😛]
Avni: She's so shameless.
Alekh gets up and yells at her. [YAY! ]
Alekh: SHUT UP! Do you know? She--she's my friend! She's my wife! Do you know how much she takes care of me? He uncle and auntie are very nice. We went to their house. Auntie ji had made 'kheer' specially for me.
*Choti ma smiles all through*
Avni *thinking*: Ohh! 🤔 So, even this all has started?
*Sadhna runs inside the house, out-of-breath. [Did you just run all the way here, woman? 😕]
"Alekh Jee?" Sadhna yells from the door.
All three turn like something so bad has occurred. [hehe..😆]
Sadhna runs towards them, yelling, "Alekh Jee!"
Alekh turns his face, angrily.
"Alekh Jee!" [for the love of god woman, find a better line.. hehe, 😛 JK! 😆😳] she says, and holds his arm. Alekh pulls his arm back angrily.
Sadhna: Didn't I tell you, to wait for me? Not to go anywhere? Do you know how worried I was when I couldn't find you?
Alekh turns and yells, "You said, you'll be back in 5 minutes. Huuh? Did you come? DID YOU COME?! Don't you know, when you're late, I don't like it! HUUH?!"
Sadhna smiles cutely and says, "Yes!" nodding. "I do know." she adds. "Alekh Jee?.. I'm sorry. I got late while coming back. Please forgive me?" she says, holding on to her ears. Alekh looks at her. Choti ma smiles. Alekh looks at her again. Avni is pissed off, she leaves. Alekh notices closely at her holding her ears, cutely. He rolls his eyes. "Please?" Sadhna whispers. "N-No! Not right now." he says stubbornly. [How cute! 😆] "I-I'll think and tell, whether to forgive you or not? And--and, remove your hands from your ears. It'll hurt!" he adds. They have a 5-second starring session. [asdfjklasdfkasdjflkasdf sooo cute! ☺️]
***
It's night time; Sadhna's aunt (name?) walks with a glass to the bedroom to her husband (name?) who sits on the bed. She keeps the glass on the bed side table. Sadhna's uncle is looking at Sadhna's picture when she was a kid; all mesmerized by it. His wife notices that and smiles keeping her hand on his shoulder. He snaps out of his 'zoned-out' position. He looks at her. She asks, "what's wrong? What're you thinking of?"
"Take a seat," he replies, smiling. He moves over as she sits across him on the bed. "I was thinking about, Alekh jee. It felt very pleasing, meeting him today. He was talking everything about Sadhna all the time and praising her. I felt relaxed after hearing him." he adds. His wife replies, "Yes, even I noticed. They take full care of our Sadhna. He says what's in his heart, right there. Our Alekh babu, is very innocent!" smiling. "This very innocence carries the power of trust, Kaushaliya Jee. [so that's her name.. 😆] Lies and deception didn't even touch his heart. People say, he's mentally challenged, but, Kaushaliya Jee, today, he said a very grown-up thing to me. Alekh jee asked me today; 'That if you're a writer, then, why not write a story on Sadhna?'" he replied. "Is it?" Kaushaliya asked, smiling. "Did you see? Alekh babu is improving so much." she adds. "Kaushaliya Jee, our Sadhna is no less than a 'paras'. Which ever thing she touches, becomes gold! Kaushaliya Jee, this story, I'll write. I'll definitely write it! And this story will be amazing! I just wish to god, that our Sadhna's story/life is filled with happiness." he says. Kaushaliya holds his hands and says "Just that will happen, Jee. The one who forgets themselves and shares happiness amongst everyone else; lord gives them double the happiness."
*close up on them holding hands together*
***
Sadhna walks to the other side of the bed and looks at Alekh. Alekh turns his back towards her, still seeming to be holding a grudge.
Sadhna sits on the bed and takes his name. "Are you still angry with me?" she asks. "Of-course I'm still angry. And; now I'm thinking what punishment to give you." he says. [hahahahahaha.. Awwww.. ☺️ 😆]
"Punishment?" she asks. He turns and fusses, saying, "YES, SO? You made me wait so long, didn't you? You'll definitely get a punishment for that. You should get it, you should get it!" cutely. "Uhh.. But, what'll I have to do?" she plays along. Alekh rolls his eyes. He gasps, "yeah! 'oothak-baithak'. oothak-baithak karo. (hold you ears and reach to the floor, several times)" he replies. "Oothak-baithak?" she asked. Alekh nodded cutely. "But how?" she asked. He wondered for an answer. "M--I'll tell you how. I'll tell you." he said eagerly. He got up and stood across the bed. Their song played in the background. Sadhna follows. "Look at me. Hold you ears with both your hands, okay? Okay? Phir.. Baithak *he sits down, holding his ears* phir, ooto. *he gets up, holding his ears* phir neeche jao.. Phir oopar aao *he acts out everything* Okay? Chalo.. Karo!" he says cutely. "karo, karo!" he adds. Sadhna smiles and begins to do as he said. He guides her through it. She does one and gets up. They have 5-second eye-contact. "How many times more do I have to do it?" she asks. He rolls his eyes and begins to count on his fingers.☺️ "I counted 5 minutes, 5 times. 5 minutes, 5 times are how much.. Huuh?" he mutters. "5 minutes, 5 times… 25?" she replies. "Correct! Do it 25 times." he says with a thrilling expression on his face. He sits on the bed and watches her do as said. He again, guides her through it. After 2-3 times she does it, she trips and falls to the floor [woah, how'd that happen dude? 😕 😆] "Ouch!" she shrieks. Alekh is worried, seeing her shriek like that. "DOST!" he yells. He walks over and helps her get up saying, "dost! U-uthho!" Sadhna says she's fine. Alekh insists and helps her get up. He sits on the bed with her. "I--I'm sorry, haan? You got hurt because of me, naa?" he says, now feeling guilty, looking back at her foot. "Alekh jee, I told you I'm fine, you don't worry. I'm absolutely fine." she says. Alekh is crying. "I'll never punish you now onwards. Never will I punish you. And, now you too promise me, that--that you'll never leave me. Promise me!" he cries. Sadhna smiles in satisfaction and nods.
*close up on them holding hands*
"And.. You know? When you leave me alone.. I don't like it at all! You won't leave me right? Huuh?? Tell me.." he adds. Sadhna nods sideways, smiling. "No. I'll never leave you." she says. "Promise! Paaka-wala-promise." she adds. "Haan? You're my pakki friend. My best friend." he kisses her forehead. [;askasdfed flasdjkfl;sdajfljsdl;kfjsldjgsdjlsdjgskdfjgkljsd;gkljsdagjsk ljsdkjgklsdfjgklsdjgkljsdklgjklsdfjgklsklsfjkgljsfklgjsfklgj ksfjgklsjgks awwwwwwwwwww… *tear* that is so sweet.. ☺️ yaaayy! ]
Alekh smiles cutely, and Sadhna looks at him with eye-contact .. Their song resumes. "Dost! I've made a painting for you. Haah? I--I'll just get it! Okay? Wait, wait." he says. [aww, how cute. 😳] She watches him walk and touches her forehead.
***
Alekh is seen sleeping on the bed. [Heey! I wanted to see the painting. 😆]
Sadhna is walking happily around the bed; back and forth. She smiles and watches him sleep.
Sadhna *thinking*: Alekh Jee takes so much care of me. He can't tolerate my small worries. Truly! I am a very lucky person, that I've got a husband like Alekh jee. But, right now, besides being happy about myself, I should think about how to save Ranvir Jee from Sonia. But nobody believes me here. [ahhem.. Ahhemm.. ALEKH! ] what should I do? After all this is the question of my dewar's life. No! Now I can't remain quiet. I must talk to Ranvir jee; right away!
She glances at Alekh, who's sleeping and walks out of the room.
***
Sadhna barges in Ranvir's room. She knocks (while she has already entered 🤔) Ranvir who's working on his laptop invites her in, greetingly. "Bhabhi, you here, at this hour? Any problem?" he asks, smiling. She tells him, she needs to speak with him very urgently. "Yes, so tell me, please." he says. "This is about Sonia." she says. "Common, Bhabhi. Not again. Bhabhi, look, you were susceptive of Sonia, we went to her aunt's house and cleared the matter up, right? And, Bhabhi, another thing too, that I've also told you earlier; that.. Sonia is my life, and if I don't trust my own life, then, Bhabhi, whom will I trust? Why do keep making these mistakes??--- I meant the misunderstandings." he says. "Ranvir, I only want to tell you that; in Sonia's life, except for you, there's another man." she says. "Enough, Bhabhi, enough!" he yells. "Bhabhi, now I can't tolerate such things. I know Bhabhi, that relations matter. But, there's no bigger relation than love. Bhabhi, your trust is one-sided and my love is the other side. I can't listen to anything against Sonia. [dude, you just like threatened her. 🤔] I trust Sonia, more than myself and I love her more than my life. Bhabhi, now, not any kind of power can stop this marriage from happening." he adds. "Ranvir jee, please. I saw everything with my own two eyes." she says. "Bhabhi, you might've seen it with your eyes. But, I--I see with my hearts eyes. Which always says, that Sonia is only.. And only mine! She Can't deceive me." he says and leaves. [dude, you just like.. Left your OWN room. 😆]
Sadhna *thinking*: oh god! How do I make him believe me? What should I do, that he understands what Sonia's true colors are? What should I do? He's blinded in her fake love and is unable to see the truth.
***
Monday's preview: Ranvir and Sonia are at a candle-light dinner at a restaurant. Ranvir is singing "Zara sa aankhon mein basa tu.." to Sonia.
Rating: 8/10. It fully goes to Alekh & Sadhna scenes. A MUST-WATCH! :)
Comments: Interesting episode, yet, it bugs me so much when Ranvir keeps making Sadhna feel guilty. L I know, this particularly happens in every show, but heck man. SNAP OUTTA IT, GAAH! 😆
Scene of the day: When Alekh sweetly kisses Sadhna's forehead. ☺️ I nearly fainted, I was like "haaaaa! 😛"
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Love,
Zinu. 😳
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