Angini FF season2-Chalti Chali Jaye Zindagi .upt28 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Fantastic Shanti👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏,loved reading it especially Anmol's shirt scene 😉 😉 😉 .Please continue soon.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Shantiiiiiiiiiiiii App ne ithna acha likka hai ki mai to ek dum flattttttt. RAgini's mangalsutra on anmol's shirt button. Anmol is in a really naughty mood.😳 I just adored the part where ragini is scolding him. Wow plz continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
@shanti..awesome part..👍🏼
just like the caring and scolding of ragini..well described scenes from home to hospital..
awwww tammy still anmol's princess and so caring too about her papa..love the hug she gave anmol when he reached home...such a sweet scene..😊
now the best the romantic part..ragini's mangalsutra and anmol in a very very naughty mood...😳
ragini cant resist his charm ...she wants help to escape from anmol's intense look ... can visualise that scene...😊
this is wat we have been missing in angini's story after their wedding..
so thank you for giving us this treat through this fantastic FF..
you must send this to the creatives of DKP for them to see how much scope is there in the story of angini and the show bidaai..
do continue and keep it up.👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Very nice interesting part.

So i am glad that Anmol didn't get badly injured.

Ankle injury can be painful but seems like Anmol was saved 😆

I liked the sweet romance they share. Anmol seems to love Ragini a lot and now Ragini also reciprocates well in your story. ☺️
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So the kids are making anmol run around with his injured foot 😆

I hope the creatives seriously think of season two and Anmol and Ragini's story which we viewers need a share!

Please continue soon !


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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
di I always knew that my hero anmol gonna win the race
I m so proud of him & u too


u know di
its feel so nice to see that ragini care for anmol so much.ragini love anmol so much
bas I just want to see all this scenes turning into reality with bidaai2


please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
it's sooo sweet dear. continue soon.... i like to read what is tammy doing next..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Thanks a lot of your responses !🤗

I will update in a couple of days lets see what tammy has in store for Anmol something to surprise him and Ragini should be unaware of it hmmm essa kuch tho hoga !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW!👏👏👏👏...Gr8 updates Shanti!😳...Thank You for sharing both of them..😊....Both of them made for Gr8 reading!😃...Anmol winning the competition despite the painful injury was Rocking!!👏👏👏...he'd do anything to see the one's he Loves, Smile!😳😳...Loved the way Ragini was handling Anmol, not quite liking his take it easy attitude when it came to his health..😳😉😆...t was really so caring n cute!😳...n Anmol couldn't say a word after that..😉😆...that L'il Romance b/w Angini was sweet..😳😳...Anmol still madly Loves his Ragini!!😳😳😳...do continue soon yaar..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesoem update shanti,beemari ki vajeh se coulnt coem re so sorry but loved the update very interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey friends I was out on vacation relaxing and rejuvenating in Mexico , but I did get sometime to write some parts of my OS watching the beautiful sunrise and sunset along the pacific ocean.😊

Hope I made best use of my time enjoying with family and penning down the story continuation.

Enjoy !!

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As the evening approached the cool breeze entered the room. Anmol had taken a good long rest and the breeze gave him an indication to wake up. Waking up and Stretching his arms he looked at his watch it was passed 6 "Arrey mai itne deer tak soo ya lagtha hai medication ka asar haii.."

Still laying down he remembered how Ragini panic d and they went to show his injury to doctor Gupta , and after that the mangalsutra incident left him grinning. He pushed back and sat up on the bed taking the support of the headrest. He looked around for his phone then he remembered that Ragini has taken it from him and was annoyed with Mr.basin. "Yeah ragini bhi baat baat pay bahut chinta karthi hai.. Mera office ka kaam saab teher gaya hai , kaash mai Mr. Basin say update ley saktha tha," wondered if someone could help him and took a book from the side table and started writing some notes.

Meanwhile Ragini was also in the room making jr sleep as he had played a while with Tammy and Khushi. "Aaj itna busy din tha aur uspar jr soney na kaam nahi le raha tha , Ab jakey soo ya , Mai bhi inney dekthi hoon ki kaisay hai, Kafi deer ho gayee!! " She first gets to keeping the room clean and there was loads of linen which had come to be arranged and laundry was done and the room was a little disrupted. This kept Ragini busy for a while

On the other side descending to the kitchen slowly Tammy and Khushi with Gunni and wanted to make something special for Anmol. The trio without a word to Ragini started working on something and finished a beautiful surprise of Anmol all covered up. They shook hands with each other on the success of their mission and Ragini didn't get a clue of what was happening as she was busy in her room.

Tip toed they took the surprise all to Anmol's room. "Khushi Gunni di aap yahi pay rukiye mai dekthi hoon papa utt gaye ya nahi,"she indicated as she sneaked in to see..

To her surprise Anmol looked at her "Ayye Ayye kya chal raha hai " came an invite from Anmol. Folded hands back Tammy walked in behind came Khushi also , but they had asked Gunni to stay back with the surprise since they had something else in mind. "Papa aap itnee jaldi utt gaye ?" Tammy came and hugged him calling Khushi also..."Haa partner aab apki chot kaisai hai "

"Mai teek ho bachha party, toda araam kiya na so feeling better" keep aside the book in which he was busy writing.

"To teek hai ,chalo Khushi shuro ho jaoo"

"Arrey yeah kya ho raha hai ", he was surprised as a satin band covered his eyes "Partner aap chup chap baitiye ","Koi mujhey batayega kya chal raha hai ,Apki mummy ayyegi na thab bahut naraaz hoyengi !"

"Kuch nahi hoga papa , mama ko pata hi nahi ," Tammy indicating Khushi to summon Gunni di

Gunni walks in with the surprise and places it on a table and pulls it towards the bedside, "Tammy, Khushi kya chaal raha hai bolo !!" "papa yeah pakadiye ",and she hands him a knife

Gunni removed the cover from the table and at the same time Khushi unfold Anmol's eyes.

"Wow this is so sweet beta !!, Thank You soo much" twinkle and joy in his eyes he captured a very beautiful fruit tart cake infront of him with "get well soon papa" engraved on it..

"Aww princess, partner Gunni yeah tho itna sweet hai aap nay itna beautiful cake banaya "

"Chachu yes yeah Tammy ka idea tha , Khushi aur minay help kiya"

"papa please cut karo na jaldi " "Gunni di aap photo lo"

"Haan partner please cut soon !!" "Yeaa yeaa !!!" came a noise from the corridor as Ragini was walking to check on Anmol.

"yeah shoor kaisa hai, Anmol utt gaye kya?" wondering she slowly opened the door and to her surprise.

"Yeah kya ho raha hai !!, Anmol aap....... " she stops and see him enjoying himself cutting the cake and the kids clapping and a piece fed to him by Tammy, khushi and gunni."Yummie " he relished it.

"Achha tho yeah saab kab aur kisnay kiya , Kaun badmaashi kar raha tha ??"

"Arrey ragini dekho na itna achha cake banaya hai baccha party aur gunni saab milkay, " Anmol offered Tammy and Khushi and Gunni and was about to offer Ragini who was a little angry at the trio for not informing and she was pulled by Anmol to sit beside her and he fed her the cake.

"Tho aap logon nay mujhey inform nahi kiya", Chachi aap itney busy they aur Tammy Chachu kay liye surprise dena chahathi thi so mainay uski madad kar dee. "
holding her ears she apologized,"nana Gunni Ragini tho naraaz nahi hai baas she missed all the fun haina sweetheart" and he pulled her closer and they gazed into each others eyes which didn't last long, as Tammy distracted him

"papa thanks a lot of winning the prize lekin uski wajah say apko chot ayye na isliye humay milkay yeah banaya !!" "Aww come here baby " and he hugs her and kisses her forehead, He calls Kushi and Gunni and they both give him a warm hug. " Achha chalo aab ap saab log meri help karogey kitchen cleaning" and she pushes them and informs she will follow soon.

The trio leave and Ragini turns to Anmol and asks him how he is feeling. "Pair kaysa hai , Bahut deer take soo rahey they" holding her hand "aab teek mehsoos ho raha , kafi deer tak soo raha tha na ! Dr. Gupta ka medication say dard tho kam ho gayee hia kal tak aram say chal paoonga"

"Ji nahi 4 din tak aap ko araam karney kay liye kaha hai !!", without allowing him utter another word she puts her finger to stop him, "Achha tum hi muhsay taag akey mujhey office bhejogi " winked Anmol.

"Lo cake kaho Ragini itney pyaar say bachon nay banaya aur tum kham ma kha unpay chilaney lagi !!' and he offers her a piece which he share the remaining.

The cream was still on Ragini's cheek and Anmol noticed it , "Ragini pass aoo, Aur paas" , Anmol kya kar rehey ho ", she didn't know what was going on and she suddenly he bit close to her lip to scoop it off.

"Didi yeah chai Anmol bhiyaa kay liye " Guddi interrupted as she saw them close to each other.

Ragini ,pushing off and a little embarrassed looks at her and clearing her throat "Guddi rakdo aur jako dekho jr utt gaya hai ky mai monitor vahi pay chodayye" "ji didi" she smiles /giggles and walks off

"App bade beysharam ho kab kya karna hai bhol jathey ho " she gave an angry look at Anmol

"Arrey cream laga hoaa tha tho mainay saaf kar diya" smiled Anmol which made Ragini grin a little and nod her head .

"Chai " she offered him "Thank you , Achha ragini mera laptop le anna , muhey kuch emails bhej nay hai !"

"Magar apko armaan karney kay liye kaha hai an doctor nay" Ragini a little annoyed.

Putting his hands on her shoulder "Ragini saab ek duo email bhej doo phir armaan hi armaan promise no kaam till Monday " he swore

"Teek hai aap jaldi say chai peejiye mai Guddi kay haton laptop bhej dethi hoon ,"

She starts to leave "Aur mera mobile bhi " Anmol pleads.

[after while]

Anmol in the room busy working on his laptop and sending emails

[mobile rings-"Peter calling"]

"Hey dude whats up " came a voice from the other end.

"hey peter what a pleasant surprise?, All is fine" and Anmol narrated regarding his injury

"O am so sorry Aab kasiay ho"


"yaar mai teek hoon, 3 days and then I should be fine,"

"Tho teek hai 24th ko meray ghar pay chirstrmas party hai , Pheley bachon kay liye party phir adults only party," "Mai tumhey evite bhejtha hoon , tummay apni family kay saat zaroor anna hai "

"Peter magar hum jyada deer nahi reh payengay," "Arrey yaar no worries you can send the kids back home or they can stay with our nanny and enjoy the evening. "

"Teek hai dekhtha hoon Ragini say pooch key I will RSVP."

"Sure Anmol as u wish but it would be nice if you could join for the adults party also".

He hangs up and gets back to his work.

Its half past 7 and Anmol closes his laptop and gets his shoes which is placed next to the bed, slowly wears it and stands up and takes small steps and walks out of the room down the corridor into the living room.

Sitting on the couch he calls out "Tammy Khushi kaha ho baccha party !"

Guddi comes there with them and jr. Jr looks at Anmol and starts kicking his legs "Guddi jr ko muhey do Bahut deer say apney buddy say nahimila" "Aww Sweetypie whats up" and he makes him sit on his lap and Tammy and Kushi keep chasing each other in the living room..Jr is enjoying all the noise and cooing in excitement.

"Tammy Khushi apko Chriatrmas party pay jana hai " "Haan papa yes partner" came a chorus answer.

"Magar papa apka pair mama nay kaha 3 days tak kuch nahi karna papa ko sirft rest"

"Beta 3 days kay baad I will be fine infact Aaj hi I feel better, who boot bahut confortable hai aur phir 3 days kay baad mera pair will be completely fine." he assured.

"Tho teek hai hum chalegay !"

Ragini comes and calls them for dinner. She takes jr from Anmol as it was time for his feed and he seemed hungry eating his hand ,goes to the room informing Guddi to set the table and she will be right back, "Chaliye papa mai apki help karthi hoon " Helping Anmol she guided him to the dinning table, Khushi, Gunni and Alkeh also joined.

"Anmol bahut deer tak soo rahey they " asked Alkeh.

"Haa Bhiyya medication ka asar tha aur kab need aa gaye pata nahi chala." "Achha hoyaa jitna araam karogey jaldi teek ho jaoogay "

Ragini came and put jr on a play pen as he was done with his feed and wasn't ready to sleep and let him enjoy for a while till he got tired.

Ragini served everyone and sits down to eat. "Mama pata hai papa key friend nay Christmas party rakha hai " "Wo Ragini mera friend Peter yaad hai hum miley they , usnay Christmas party , Apney ghar pay , kids kay liye entertainment bhi hoga " worrying if Ragini might say no he didn't mention about the adult party,


"magar hum saab " Ragini asked ,

"Haa Ragini mainay usay bola ki mera pura parivaar aa raha hai " "Teek hai magar jaldi wapas anna hoga baccahey thak jayegay " "Ha Ha Ragini mai hoon na I will make sure " assured Anmol.

"Wow mummy vaha santa clause bhi hoga pata hai , hai na papa"

"yes Tammy " he put his hand on hers.

Dinner was done and Tammy and Khushi were in the living room playing with jr, as he was still cooing and enjoying with a few toys and given to him.

Anmol and Alkeh were busy discussing some new technology they wanted to implement in the office and getting Anmol's input on the funds needed and they agree on the decision.

Gunni meanwhile is busy helping Ragini and then goes to attend a call from a friend.

"Chalo Tammy Khushi time ho gaya apko brush karkay so jaoo Kal Birthday party pay jana hai "

"Wow birthday party kiskai hai Tammy ?" Anmol asked ,"papa meri school ki friend ka hai "

Tammy kissed Anmol while Khushi kissed Alekh "Good night papa" and they both ran up the flight of stairs.

Alekh also excused himself as he needed to make an urgent call regarding the discussion he had.

Anmol who decided to stay back for a while was busy playing with jr and giving him a toy but that didn't keep him happy and he started crying so Anmol picked him up and started holding him up in air which he defiantly enjoyed.

"Mera bachha champ tum apni didi say bhi badmaash ho , Who bhi essay karthey kush hothi thi !" jr kept giggling and was laughing loudly.

Ragini who joined them was smiling looking at the father son bonding. She went up to Anmol and placed her head on his shoulder and kept looking at jr who was playing with Anmol collar and blabbering something to himself. "Itney cute hai na iskey haat " Anmol showed Ragini,

"Bachey kay essay hi hothey hai,"

"Ha Tammy kay bhi essay hi they aur aab iskay " Anmol held his hand and felt the baby soft skin.

"Chalo room mai chathey hai humjehy bhi change karna hai aur kal office bhi jana hai Alekh nay kuch nayee technology kay barey hai discussions meetings board kay saat karney hai !!"

"Jee nahi Pheley tu aap room mai nahi jayegay , oorsari baat kal Sunday hai Chutti ka din no office"

"Mai apkey kapdey lathi hoon aur hum vaha us room mai sooyegay dou din."

"Magar Ragini "

"No agar marag Doctor nay mana kiya hai na dou din tak seedi nahi chandey kay liye "

Anmol couldn't argue much and he went with jr to the room and put him on the bed and sat next to him, A small yarn captured jr's face which left Anmol with a smile and he picked him up and started to put him to sleep. In no time jr had slept of on Anmol's shoulder.

Ragini walked in and "Shhh!! " Anmol whispered. Ragini went up to the bed and placed Anmol's clothes and slowly came to pick jr and put him in the crib.

Meanwhile Anmol removed his shoe, goes and changes and comes and sits on chair and rests his foot on the ottoman.

"Doctor nay apko thoda exercise karney kay liye kaha haina ,"

Ragini came and lifted his foot and placed it on her lap "Arrey Ragini mai kar loonga , tum kuch mat karo muhey pata hai " he didn't want her to do too much since she has been doing since his injury.

"Anmol, Dr. Gupta nay kya exercise hai muhey bataya hai jab aap nahi they isliye mai kar rahi hoon aur aap chup chap baityee " and she starts to massage his foot.

He felt really nice and relaxed.

Her hair keeps distracting her and Anmol knew that she wouldn't bother leaving his foot, He came a little closer and moved her hair behind her ears and to see her beautiful face ,"Aap kaisay mahsoos ho raha hai?" "Bahut bahut khoobsoorat " Anmol keep gazing at her as she was busy with his foot," jee ??"

"Mera matlab hai Ragini jab tum massage karthi ho tho saab dard gayab ho jatha hai Dr. Gupta nay teek bola !" She looked at him and smiled and put his foot down.

"Thanks Ragini " ,"Chaliye aab aap bed pay araam kijiye mai patti change kar dethi hoon "

She brings the new bandage and does the dressing for Anmol ."Tight hai Anmol ?" "Na its perfect" he nodded.

"Chaliye dood peelijiye " she offered and left to make sure jr was asleep cozy in the crib.

"Anmol aap kuch keh Rahey they ki Christmas party hai ?" "Ha Ragini ya ha aoo"

Ragini walks to Anmol and sits next to him

"Ragini actually 24th ko meray friend Peter kay yaha Christmas party hai aur phir adults only party hai "

"Kya !!" Ragini looked at Anmol a little disappointed.


"Anmol Christmas party tho teek hai magar adults party , phir bachhay kaha raheygay ?, jr meray bager ?"

"Arrey Ragini sirf 2 gantey ki baat hai aur phir bachhey vaha unkey ghar pay so jayengay unkey nani kay paas party katam hothey we'll leave." "Lekin jr tho...." "Jr bhi so jayega dou ganthey ki baat hai "

Ragini is not too convinced but nods her head. "Yeah hoyee na baat ", he holds her hand.

"Magar ek aur baat hai ,Choti is problem"

"Aab kya ?"

"Dress code :formal " "Men will wear suit and Women will wear gowns."

"Na baba na mai yeah saab nahi pahenay wali, Anmol mainay kabhi nahi pehena hai aap janthey hai "

"I know sweetheart magar there is always a first time for everything and hum ek gown karidengay is occasion kay liye, "magar Anmol "

He stops by placing his finger on her lip, "Trust me you will look stunning !" and he pulls her closer "I promise " and lifts her chin and she gives her usual smile.

"Teek hai dekthey hai chaliye aap soo gayeye , Mujhey bhi need aa rahi hai ", She makes him lie down and she also sleeps on her side and slides closer to Anmol, nice and cozy.


Edited by shanti05 - 14 years ago

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