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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
@shanti..fantastic part...enjoy reading each scene.😊
anmol still the doting father be it for tammy or jr anmol..
he cant say no to his princess and let her sleep in room much to the annoyance of ragini..
aww anmol dont want to disappoint tammy and the asurance of ragini and love wat follows anmol all romantic...
wow nice romantic moment of angini so well described that i can visualise it..😊
ragini in awe of her husband in the morning on rollerblades practising for competition..
love the very cute moments of angini and family..so well written...
hmmmm you leave a suspense for us..
will wait for next part...
this makes us dream of wat would have been angini's life after their love marriage..
thank you for the FF and once again brilliant job...👍🏼👏....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
aww good happy times shanti..am so happy to see anmol so happy and content and ragini so doting and Jr is one cute baby....
Tammy his Little princess aww my sweetie pie anmol
very well written good job thanks...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
waw santi.... what will hapen next?????? wating to read the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Thank You soo much for your feedback..Will be right back 🤗

Hope Anmol is alright coz sport injury seem quite common !!!😲

Aur 10 saal kay baad race mai anna tho kafi challenge ki baat hai !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: shanti05

I am a gooner 😆 and I am missing Angini a lot and loads... Ok Now its more than 15 + days and if Dkut cannot rack their brains to think of some potential season two tracks I thought of helping them out and start my own short fanfiction or One shots or my own daam story to have their life moving on 😳after the grand lavish wedding of Anmol and Ragini and Alekh and Saakshi's

[MANY HAVE READ THIS PART JUST ADDED SOME GRAPHICS]

Alright lets browse back a bit and recollect the talk at the breakfast table where Tammy insists on something which at that point of time had this very reaction form Anmol and ragini 😆😆😳



Then we saw the the big grand wedding for Anmol and Ragini and they lives happily ever after!!!

Happy they were and ever after had loads of things to look forward.. So finally Tammy got her gift which they were discussing at the dinning table,😉 It took a while but not very long maybe say with in 4 to 5 months of their official in love wedded life.


Anmol jr is born (Courtesy Rekha for the picture)
😍

and its late night and Anmol like a good pati and a good dad helps Ragini with putting Tammy to sleep.

He goes to her room and reads a book to Tammy The princess and the frog (a walt Disney Production Book)(hehehehe di..u r giving cooy right info😆) and then falls asleep there, as he is so tired after a long day and Tammy's bed seems too cozy for him to go back after putting her to sleep..

In their bedroom (Anmol and Ragini) Ragini is busy making Anmol jr, sleep and after a while he dozes off and Ragini also sleeps of

Its about 2 in the early morning Anmol gets up to be surprised he is sleeping with Tammy , he kisses her forehead and says "Mera Bachha love you princess" and leaves the room closing the door,

Walks towards their room and slowly opens the door trying to minimize the noise and walks in , the moon light from the window and the bed light is enough for him to move around the room, he suddenly sees Anmol jr wide awake and playing with himself ( babies get up during the middle of the night assuming he is about 4 months old), Anmol goes around the bed to see the little chap enjoying holding his legs and swinging it around , He also observes his beautiful wife Ragini sleeping peacefully , Not to disturb her he slowly picks up Anmol Jr, and holds him against his chest and pats him, the baby is enjoying his cuddly feeling and he giggles a little , Anmol moves away from the bed so that he dose'nt disturb Ragini and sits on the rocking chair and carefully holds the baby's head and facing the infant he starts talking to him in a low voice"
Beta tumhari mama Soo rahi hai Aur mai bhi abhi tumari di di ko solake gehari need say utkay ayya hoo!"
" yaar abhi tum bhi raat kay duo baje khelney mat shuru kar dena soo jaoo!"

The baby looks at Anmol and gives a smile as if he understood everything with a drop of his saliva pouring out from the corner of his mouth ..
Anmol reaches for a wash cloth kept next to the chair and wipes the corner of his mouth and kisses his forehead and lifts him and starts patting him to put him to sleep...

And the night goes by Anmol sleeps of with the baby tucked in well on himself..

The early morning(5 am) chirping birds wake up Ragini and she opens her eyes and moves her hand around to be shocked to feel the baby missing beside her. She sits up with a start and notices Anmol on the rocking chair bundled up cozily with the babies head popping out .

A sign of relief ,a smile and tear of joy runs thro her face. She gets of the bed and walks up to him and slowly pulls of the blanket covering Anmol and junior and picks up the baby who is in such deep sleep and places him gently on the bed.

Ragini pats the baby a little so that he could continue his sleep welll and while doing that she realizes that she forgot to cover Anmol with the blanket .

Ragini wraps baby with the blanket and makes him nicely and cozy and then goes towards Anmol , cover him up to keep him warm and is about to walk of when a strong hand grips her and she turns around to see Anmol smiling at her and telling her, " Sweetheart kaha Ja rahi hai aap , Itna tho kaam karthey Rahithi hai Zarra merey paas aab akey duo chaar meethey bol tho boliye "(hmm I m getting this feeling that another anmol jr & ragini jr in making..if ragini start do char meethi bataein with anmol☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️)

Ragini smiles back asking " Anmol aap bhi na bacchey ban jathey ho !, mainay socha aap soo rahey ho aur baby ko sulakar apko bhi suladethi hoon "
Anmol " aa suladethi hoon ???!!" ragini nodding her head " nahi mera matlab tha blanket chadadethi hoon "

" Ragini aoo na mera paas"
and he makes her sit on his lap

"Mujehy pata hai tum bhi taak jathi ho pura din kaam karkey , aur aab duo bachony ko sambhalna hai "
and as she places her head on his chest and says " Aap hona muhey sambhal nay kay liye !!"he kisses her forehead and both close their eyes and fall asleep...(what bas kisses in forehead & fall asleep????..I m disappointed 😉🤣🤣)


Tammy sleeping in her room still, Anmol jr sleeping on the bed all bundled up and here Angini sleeping cuddled with each other !!

Perfect family !!!

Well finally we got out Tammy's wish come true and the child's wish came along a lot of happiness for Anmol and Ragini. More in store and we notice how parenthood has brought changes in their lives but their love for each other blossoms even more and they now feel the presence of each other in a better emotional and sensitive level.

moving on..........................



di I already read this part..but that time didnt comment properly....
di loved it⭐️👏 ..so simple but in the same time so moving. & U wrote it right ANMOL the best PAPA & PATI😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: shanti05

Next Morning...


And she stands with folded hands, While Ragini is busy changing jr's diaper
and realizes its his feeding time and she starts to nurse him while Anmol
walks towards an annoyed Tammy who is facing the rocking chair and turns her around bends down to her level and lifts her chin to meet his eyes and asks her " Kya hoaa beta aap mujsay naraaz hai " "Ha hoon aap muhey akeley chod ayye apney promise kiya tha na aap meray saat soo yengay jab tak jr thoda bada nahi ho jatha" said Tammy looking away from his sight.

Anmol holds his ears and says " O sorry beta kal mai bhool gaya aur mama ko bhi kabhi meri zaroot hoti hai na " "To teek hai mai bhi yaha soo ongi aap saab kay saat " was Tammy's blunt answer

Ragini who finished nursing jr and making him burb was watching all this and
smiling as Anmol who was halfway talking to Tammy caught ragini's glance.

Ragini indicated to him to convice Tammy , while Anmol nodded his head and looked at Tammy " achha hum ek deal karthey hai , aap mama aur jr bed pay so jaeeye aur mai us couch pay sotha hoon " and he puts his hand out to get her assurance.

Ragini looks at Anmol a little upset feeling sorry for him 😆
"Magar Anmol aap couch pay phir say ?"


Anmol walks Tammy with him close to the bed and sits next to Ragini and looks at her and smiles " Ragini 7 saal say mera pyaar ussay hai pointing to the couch tho uska saat nibhina bhi padega na !!"
and Ragini smiles back " Anmol aap bhi na kabhi nahi sudrogey !!" while Tammy looks at both of them and asks " Papa yeah saat saal couch pay kya hai " "Beta yeah lambhi kahani hai bataoonga araam say " was Anmol's quick reply winks at Ragini who is covering her mouth with her fingers trying not to laugh ,while Anmol picks junior Anmol in his arms
and starts playing with him while Tammy holds his hand and kisses his cheeks.

Ragini watches the three of them enjoying time together and feels very happy.

Preview: " papa please Apko karna padega " Tammy insist , " magar beta sallon say practice nahi kiya hai !" Anmol was reluctant.

anmol said it right ..anmol jr will think "my papa loves my mama sooooooooooo much
😳..but loving style is only different 😉

di awesome .......loved the new member in angini's life....but why should anmol sleep in the chair..again???😕..why they dont have a bigger bed instead😉....
chalo its feels so nice that ragini love anmol so much😳..
di again very good writing👏⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: shanti05

Hi friends I thought I will update and write two parts but i was able to finish only one, Please check it out

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Ragini goes to the wash room and comes out with her hair all wet and bundled in a towel, looks to see Tammy is still in the room,playing with jr..

"Tammy Aaj Kaunsa Din hai ??" asked Ragini as she was keeping some clothes back in the chest of draws, "Friday " came a quick reply and putting her hand on her head " O no aaj tho school ka kal chutti hai " was her recall as she was busy playing with jr instead of getting ready for school..

She kisses jr again on the cheek, while Anmol is still holding jr who is playing with a trinket toy
Tammy runs towards the door "Tammy brush karloo aur mai akey upki dress rakthi hoon for your shower " Ragini called out to her.

Tammy acknowledge as she left the room "Ok mama !!" and Ragini goes towards the bed, Amnol by then has put jr on bed and lying beside him watches ,playing
with jr and tells him " Apko office nahi jana kya??" Anmol looks at her as she looks really fresh as a morning flower and tells her in his signature soft tone " Sochtha hoon aaj Ghar pay relax karloo, duo char meeting hai lekin ghar say hi conference kar loonga "(ahem..ahem...I hope only only thinking about work from home😉☺️..but all work no play .....🤣)

Ragini looks at him getting the sign that he wants to spend time with jr tells him "kal tho chutti hai aur kal ghar pay saab hai aur aap ko bhi time milega"(damn u ragini...😡 anmol ghar pe rahena chata tha..& u despartely trying to send him to office😆)and she cuts his ideas from developing more..

[mobile rings] its Anmol's
"Hello yes Mr. Basin O Ok 10 ;00 ko meeting hai and I need to be there Ok Mai abhi nikaaltha hoon, Aap papers saab tiyaar rakiye aur whoPower point presenation mai jo changes hai apney kar diya !!," he keeps walking around the room and Ragini goes by jr and puts him to sleep as he was tired playing and he seem quite done with his morning session.

Taking the phone Anmol walks into the wash room and closes the door.

Meanwhile Ragini switches on the baby monitor and leaves the room to dress up Tammy who finished her shower and was getting ready for school.

She gets her hair done and her bagpack ready " Tammy apney homework saab katha kiya na ?" "Yes mama aur papa say math check bhi arvaliye " was her prompt reply and Ragini kisses her forhead " Achha aap neechey jaiye aur dinning table pay baiteey mainay guddi lo bol diya apku brekfast redy karney kay liye mai papa suit tiyaar kar key atti hoon" As both Tammy and Ragini
walk out in their respective direction,
Ragini walks into their room and opens the cupboard to remove Anmol's burgandy shirt and silver/grey armaani suit and keeps it on the bed..with a handkerchief next to it.

Anmol walks out of the washroom and see Ragini sitting at the dressing table removing the towel from her head and speading her hair to dry them completely, he notices her through the mirror putting sindoor and smiles at her, but also notices hair still daamp and the water trickling over her bear back through the cut of her blouse

Anmol came by her and grabbed all the hair altogether and wrapped it round a towel which ragini had placed on the side table and whispered in her ear " Baal abhi bhi geeley hai kahi Saardi na lag jaye!" "Lekin geelay baal ka mazza hi kuch aur hai " and he takes the strand of her daamp covering her right eye and moves it behind her ears and she smiles looking at him through the mirror ,just then her expression changes to the buzz of the mobile.

Anmol looks around and realizes that his phone is in the bathroom, " Ragini zara mera phone lana Uff office kay log na makki ki tarah peecha pad jathey hai(particularly this line ..I think di u got it from real life inspiration..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣) " grumbling Anmol goes to pick his shirt and wears it and starts getting ready while Ragini rushes back with his phone. The call gets missed and Anmol
wearing his suit,"mr.basin ka tha missed call" Ragini answered looking at the ID..
" Thats fine pata hai ready for meeting karkay phone mara hoga" , and looking
at the clock ,"meeting tho 10:00 ko hai I still have time" and took the handkerchief and wore his watch. Ragini gave him his mobile looking at him with a smile.

Anmol starts to walk and Ragini spotted his color was folded inwards and called out " Anmol ek minute " and he came to her standing nice and tall Ragini put her hand around Anmol's neck and pulled out the color and could sense the smell of his cologne .It felt really good, Anmol kept tracing Ragini's face as she was busy adjusting his collor.

Finishing up the edges of the color in said " Aab yeah teek say Baitha hai " "Thanks" came a smile from him and he hurries to brush up his hair and wears
his shoes.

He goes to the bed and places a kiss on jr's forehead and caresses his baby soft skin which jerks him a bit , but goes back to sleep again.

Ragini hands Anmol his office bad and they leave the room quietly, while jr is still fast asleep, nice and cozy.

Tammy had finished her breakfast and Khushi is also done and both were playing in the living room , while Anmol and Ragini quickly finishes their breakfast and Anmol picks his bag and starts walking to the living room, Ragini follows him with Tammy and Kushi's lunch boxes and Anmol's car keys.
"Meray keys"
and Anmol is searching for it, "Yeah lijiye !" she hands it over to him with a smile. " Chalo bachha party" and he calls them as they come
with their bag packs and Anmol hugs Ragini and whispers bye in her ears and the trio walk out and sit in the car and Ragini follows to wish them bye.

Ragini sees them off comes inside to hear the baby monitor beeping. " Lagatha hai jr utt gaya Muhey jakey usay dekhna padega " and she rushes up the
flight of stairs and goes to her room to see jr wide awake and his soft babbling sounds will almost have a singsong quality to it, Ragini has seen it with Tammy , but again the experience was somthing new and different for her to enjoy again,

She finally sat next to him on the bed and started observing his play.
Looking on the other side she noticed an AR picture and she shows it to jr and holding his hand she talks to him and the picture and says," Jr Apkey papa aaj say couch pay so yee gay, pata hai Mujhey bahut bura lag raha hai , Becharey 7 saal say who pata nahi kaisay adjust karthey they"
Jr looks at Ragini who was switching focus between him and the photo frame starts babbling and escalated to a high pitch which makes Ragini laugh and
she lifts him up and collides with his head and enjoys his different baby activites.

Its about late afternoon and Tammy and kushi return from school and they freshen up and have some snacks and play around while jr takes his second nap
of the day and Tammy is asked to stay away from him till he takes rest .
Ragini offers to play with her and they play a game of scrabble.(word building game). Ragini makes sure the baby motinor is on in her room.

Anmol gets back from work and goes to the room and freshens up, and notices jr awake and quite and picks him up "Beta aap utt gaye" with a smile he looks at
jr who kicks his legs in excitement . Anmol takes jr and walks out of the room, goes down to the family room.

"Arrey yeah kab utta ?? " questioned Ragini "Aur aap aaj jaldi aagaye " as she walked up to Anmol,

"Haan ragini Aaj meray saab meetings jaldi katam ho gaye and aap say kaha tha na hi mai aaj conference ghar say karoonga lekin ab I am back " and he smiled at Ragini still holding jr who was busy playing with his color edge and trying to put it in his mouth..

"papa papa "
came a voice of Tammy from behind him and hands him a forum and says " papa apko participate karna padega !"

"Areey Arrey tammy Kya hai yeah" and hands jr to Ragini to sit on the couch to read it while guddi offers him some hot tea. "Thanks gunni " he
acknowledges to her as she walks , and he unfolds the forum and starts to read..

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St MARK's School Fundraiser.

" Interschool Roller blade compition fundraiser for Cancer foundation "
Audlts only paricipation

Name : Anmol Rajvansh
Parent of: Tammana Rajvansh

Date : Saturday 6th december 2010

500 meters relay path

The winner will be awarded with a big surprise.


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"Tammy beta yeah kya hai aur mera naam kyun dala "
he questioned her.

"papa meray school mai fund raiser hai aur ismay bahut sarey papa participate kar rahey hai aur mainay ap ka naam dal diya !!"

"Kyaa !! Lekin beta Roller blade aur mai bahut saal pheley chod diya !!"


Anmol was trying to make Tammy understand , but Tammy cups Anmol's face and says " papa please Apko karna padega "Anmol holds Tammy's shoulder and tries to convice her " magar beta sallon say practice nahi kiya hai !" and looks at Ragini also a little reluctant.

Ragini goes to Tammy and tells her "Tammy Apkey papa nay saalon say roller balde ko chooa bhi nahi aur ikskay liye practice karna padtha hai islye papa keh rahey hai "

Tammy feels a little upset and sems really sad and leaves when Anmol calls " Agar tum mera rollers doond kay laoogi tho mau soochinga, aur thoda practice karoonga " came a clear challenge from Anmol
Tammy turned around and was thrilled to hear Anmol agree and she called out "Guddi papa key rollers laker aoo jaldi !!" and Guddi brings it and shows it
to Anmol "Arrey yeah apko kaha mili " asked Ragini
"Who actually mama papa yeah form theen din pheley he teacher nay diya tha lekin mujey patha tha papa nahi maneygay islie mainay phele store say papa ka roller blade doonda gunni ki maddad say aur phir aaj yeah form papa ko dehkaya " a little scared Tammy have a slow reply..

"Tammana yeah achhi baat nahi hai essay chupana"
and she gives a small smack on her head , while Anmol looking at the form " Chalo ab tho yeah challenge accept karna bhi padega " and he keeps looking at the roller blade while there is a loud appluad and "yes Anmol come on u can make it" ringing in his ears reminiscing his past and the connection with the roller blade.




Preview : "Arrey yeah subah subah kaha chalegaye Kahi practice..........." Left Ragini wondering !!


So will Anmol win the special suprise for the fundraiser and get a broad smile on Tammy's face will be seen in the next part. 😊

To be continued .......


wah! wah! wah!..anmol & rollar practice...😳 bara maja ayega..
wish we could have actually see apu parcticing 😍
di I know ur imagination is flying high❤️..I agree with anjana..u should main this 2 RS😛
RS would also think why I dont have such wonderful & talented writers like this girls👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏v
atleast they dont have to be creative..they can just plain copy paste the whole FF..as u have given well described...scenes ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Anmol keeps looking at his roller blade and smiles touching the 2 inch wheels and rolling them on his palm to feel the smoothness,Tammy comes there and asks him"Papa aap naraaz tho nahi hai na ki apsey poochey bina mainay yeah saab kiya" "Arey nahi bera bachha," Anmol taking her closer " I loved this surprise kabhi tho kuch karna chahiye na different aur 8-10 saal say chooa tak nahi tha aue aaj jab haat laga hai tho ho jaye "and he take a hi fi from Tammy.

Ragini looks at them and calls out " Achaa tho baap beti ka kya chaal raha hai ,Chaliye dono haat dhokar dinner table pay aa jaaye"

Anmol and Tammy walk to the washroom and come to the dinning table. Alkeh, Khushi, also join in. "Chachu aap nahi participate karengay??" questioned Tammy looking at Alkeh, "kismay Tammy mujehy kuch nahi pata ?"

Alekh replied, Khushi looked at Alekh and said "Who papa roller blade competition hai na school mai kal isliye Tammy pooch rahi hai " "Ha who Tammy humey tho nahi atti na cycling competition hota tho mai sochtha !" Alekh laughed as he replied making everyone join the chorus. Gunni who is sitting next to Anmol asks him " Chachu I am sure aap champion reh chukey kya ??" Laughing Anmol pats her head and says " Gunni champion ka tho pata nahi lekin duo saal tak mai first ayya tha , phir chod diya pratice nahi kiya and thats history!""Arrey nahi chahu isbaar tho aap hatrick marogey" came gunni's prompt reply "yes papa u will make a hatrick this time" putting her thumbs up Tammy convinced Anmol. Anmol smiled and gave his thumbs up too.Ragini was enjoying this whole father daughter conversation.

As they walked to the flight of stairs Tammy whispered in Anmol's ears and Ragini gave an inquisitive look at them and then she walked Tammy to her room, "Chalo Tammy brush karlo aur soney kayliye ready ho jaoo !", "Magar mama " she was about to say something and the baby monitor in Ragini's hand beeped and Ragini rushed to the room, while Anmol was talking to Gunni and coming up the flight of stairs. "Papa apney promise kiya tha na ki mai apkey room mai soungi dekho mama nay mana kiya " , "Achha dekthey hai chalo apni book aur Dora wali(u know di doraemon is my favourite cartoon character....I almost watched all its episode but missed the film of it 😭)pillow lekey aoo " he prompts her and she brushes her teeth quickly and gets her stuff.. " Good night chachu" gunni wishes him and walks to her room.

"Chalo Chalo Tammy " Anmol walks her to their (AR's room) where Anmol opens the door slowly without disturbing jr and is surprised to see Ragini watching jr as he had just finished nursing and kicking and playing with his hands . "Tammana tum so na nahi hai kya ?" "Tammana ko mai aaj yaha Kahani sunakey soney ko kaha hai !!" Anmol justified her coming here. Ragini a little annoyed,"aab aap hi sambaliye usko !" got up to finish with things, in the room and while Tammy set herself on the bed and gets a book and looks at Anmol who indicates her to be quite with a smile " mai abhi atta hoon watch jr" and he goes to change and comes out in a metallic gray kurta pajama.

Ragini tells the duo that she will finish off some errands in the kitchen and asks Anmol to take care, nodding his head in assurance 😆, Anmol sits next to Tammy watches jr for a while as they both keep playing with him,"papa iskey haat kitney chote hai na !! fingers small hai and so cute"noticed Tammy and Anmol smiled at her gave his finger to jr to hold, it all excitement watching them after a while jr starts getting a little restless and cries aloud. Anmol pacifies jr by picking him up and start patting him..Tammy makes her bed well and lies down with her book ready to be read while Anmol holds jr in one hand and starts reading to Tammy, jr seems to be enjoying the story too and becomes really quite and doses off on Anmol's shoulder.

Ragini walks in with a glass of milk and places it on the side next to Anmol. She notices Anmol reading the book on one side and holding jr dozing off on his shoulder and takes jr who gets disturbed with the lift , Slowly Ragini starts to cradle him to sleep and sits on the rocking chair and listens to the story Anmol reads to Tammy. In no time Tammy sleeps off , and so does Jr on Ragini all bundled up . Anmol sets Tammy's sleep properly and leaves the book on the side table and walks up to Ragini.

He kneels down next to the rocker and looks at the sleeping infant and brushes his soft silky baby hair. Ragini who sees this gesture of Anmol says " Iskay baal aap hi kitarah hai" and starts to brush Anmol's hair. Anmol gazes at Ragini who seems to notice his change of expression as if hinting something instantly romantic(😛 😍☺️),gets up and walks to the bed to put jr for a nice and cozy night sleep.

Anmol gets up and walks towards the window to see the beautiful waxing gibbous moon shinning in the clear sky with a few scattered stars. With folded hands he rests his head against the wall and keeps looking at Ragini.

Ragini bundles jr well and notices the side table that Anmol never took his glass of milk and offers it to Anmol, " Nahi Ragini mujhey nahi peeni" "Kyun kya hoaa ?" came a worried Ragini.. " Bas Kal ka mai soch raha tha ki kar paunga ya nahi, You know i don't want to disappoint Tammy ", "Anmol aap zaroor ka payengay and I am sure " she touched his cheek to assure him .. Anmol held her hand and placed a kiss on it as if thanking her of the assurance. She gave him the glass of milk and he gulped it down his throat within seconds and wiped of the stain on his lips within an instant.

Leaving the glass on the table next top the window he grabbed Ragini by the waist and brought her close to him and whispered a "Thank You !" in her ears leaving a puzzled Ragini, " Tho yeah saab natak tha muhjey paas laney kay liye !!" "Nahi sweetheart U know what agar thum saat hoti ho na tho I am sure kuch bhi mushkil nahi hoga , 10 saal pheley roller blade aur aaj bhi roller blade saab ek hi hai !" As they keep looking deeply in each others eyes , the soft breeze fills in the room and the moon shines beautifully on Ragini, Ragini unable to meet Anmol's gaze lowers her eyes.

[Bg score running]

[MALE voice]

Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Ae meri jaane wafa
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hai
Saath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaa
Tumse milke aisa laga

Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Mere sanam, teri kasam chhodenge ab na yeh haath
Yeh zindagi

Anmol lifts her chin and their eyes lock. His dark eyes gazed back at her with deep interest "Tho apko aaj say akeley sona hoga!!" "mai tho couch pay soounga ," He starts teasing her , Ragini understanding his provocation and puts her hand around his neck and starts caressing his neck " Teek hai Saat saal say tho aap who kaam kar rahey ho aur aab tho Tammmy ki wajah say sahi , " and she gives him a gaze back smiling, Anmol with his index finger starts tracing her face, moving the hair lock behind her ear and comes to her chin and draws her closer , as they are inches away from each other "Achha tho aab ko meri doori chaligi " he commanded, "Haan chalegi " was Ragini's prompt reply ,trying to move off, but his hold was really strong and she was breathing high on and their lips were inviting when a cooing distracted their attention and Anmol slowly loosen his hold and she looked at a regreted Anmol,"Apka laadla utt gaya (ufff ..pehele 1 KMH thi ab to 2 ...2 😭😆..arre mummy papa ko toda to romance karne do🤣)" he whispered to which she smiled and walked to the bed to pat him back to sleep.

Anmol slightly disappointed with the mood call, walked towards Ragini and kissed her forehead and whispered "good night mai chala apney addey pay ", and goes to the couch and sets the pillow and snuggles into a deep sleep...Leaving a smile on Ragini's face.

[Next Morning, around 6 am]

Tammy wakes up promptly and sees around to make sure she doesn't disturb Ragini or jr who are in deep sleep and she tip toes towards Anmol and taps him slowly "papa uttiye apnay kaha na ki apko jaldi utade " Anmol turns around to see Tammy wiping her eyes to clear her vision and he gets up to sit and holds her by the arms, "O yes Tammy chalo mai tiyaar hokar atta hoon, Abhi bhi washroom jakey meet me in 10 mintues in the living room, aur Gunni say stopwatch lekar anna..[Gunni keeps it for her use so Anmol remebered and asked her to borrow it]

Anmol rushes down to see Tammy waiting for him " Chalo bachha lets quietly go out to the drive way aur mayray rollers kaha hai " he looks around " yeah rahey" came Gunni with them as she also wanted to see her Chachu practice and give him all the cheer before the final countdown.

Anmol sat on the steps and wore his rollers and his knee pads and wrist pads and not to forget his helmet .

"Wow chachu you look really cool " as she saw him all geared up he walked up to Gunni " Thanks " he said and started to go slowly making sure the rollers wouldn't wobble to the side, and the heels and toes don't slip when you go from side to side. To get used to the added height he readjusted his center of balance by taking the support of the nearby yard chair kept at the door. He took a few steps, then while standing still, move one foot forward while gradually increasing pressure. He made sure the roller brakes were intact and working. Then, doing the same with the other foot until he was able to "glide" back and forth in a small given area a few times. He seem to be quite comfortable , and confident after so many years and took deep breaths, and focused on the road.

"Gunni ,Tammy stop clock start karna aur batana kitney deer mai 400 meters cross karoonga" and points to the yard chair on the other end and tells them thats the finish line.

He took position and gave them the signal to start "OK 1-2-3 go " was their call starting the stop watch and Anmol started to practice his marathon.

He made to laps to cover the distance of 400 meters assuming each lap was 200 meters. His timing was pretty good at 2min.15sec and his calculations felt that he could make a 500 meters distance in 2.10 mintues. he stood up taking a deep breath and Tammy and Gunni came up to him and said " Chachu aur pratice karna hai ya ho gaya " " Ek aur baar karthey hai abhi tho bahut time hai ",looking at his wrist watch he confirmed. " Chalo " they ran to the start line and Anmol followed them.

He starts again and cheers keep engulfing the atmosphere ...

In the room, chirping of the birds and the cheers disturbed ragini's sleep. She got up to looks around to notice two key people not snuggled in but missing from the room, "Arrey Tammy Aur Anmol Kaha gaye!!",walking towards the window and sees Anmol, Gunni and Tammy in the drive way.

Taking the mobile and baby monitor she rushes down the flight of stairs to reach the main door and watches the performance being cheered by Tammy and Gunni.

As she sees from a distance Anmol approaching the point of finish which is also the place where Ragini is standing cheers still engulfing the floor. Anmol speeds up to the finish line and stops his brakes right next to Ragini breathing heavily and sweat tricking from his fair complexion.

Ragini looked at him and kept staring as she had never seen him in this gear up, He looked like an Olympian who was gearing up for an athletic meet ran through her mind as this flavor seemed differnt than usual and she smiled blushed she had every daam expression on her face.

"Chachi" "mama " came a chorus of Gunni and Tammy, Tammy hugging her and Gunni went around Ragini holding her leaning on her shoulder and looking at Anmol "Chachi Chachu kitney handsome dik rahey na is outfit mai ", Anmol kept gazing at Ragini still breathing and sweating and suddenly he took her pallu and wiped his face, "Arrey yeah kay kar rahey ho " she pulls her pallu back and smiles at Anmol "Gunni lagtha hai apkey Chachu ki tayyari ho gaye!!" and she looks at Anmol and gives him another broad smile.." Mama papa tho ready hai marey school kay race kay liye hai na papa" and Tammy reached for a Hi fi from him!!

Anmol removes his rollers sitting on the chair near by and they get inside to get ready for the event on that day.

Anmol is offered some dahi shakkar for good luck by ragini and he happily accepts it. Jr is also all dressed , Alekh and Gunni and Khushi also accompanies them. Anmol keeps his rollers in a gym bag and picks his keys up. "Papa mai apkey saat aoongi " Tammy holds anmol's hand and Ragini and jr go in one car, while Alekh, Gunni and Kushi follow them in another.

[St Marks school grounds]

They reach the school and after parking they come across a sign board "Line check in participants" and Anmol follows the direction and shows the volteers the forum and he signs up a sheet. " Apka jersey No 5 hai yeah lejiye 5 minute mai vaha startline kay yaha khade ho jaeeye " a voulnteer gives him a red jersey with the number 5 printed on it.

Quickly Anmol wears the jersey over his outfit , adjusts his helmet and goes to meet Ragini and Tammana. "all the best papa " Tammana hugs and wishes him. " Thanks sweetheart " Anmol kisses her forehead.

Ragini embraces Anmol while holding jr "Best of luck" came a confident call from her and he kissed her forehead and caressed jr. As he walked of Alekh, Gunni and Khushi shouted in chorus " all the best!" waving back Anmol wore his coolers which were specially used by bikers and roller bladders and walked towards the start line looking around at the field and calculating his distance of coverage and timing he noted during his practice.

Families went up to the stand to cheer their participants. The rajvansh parivaar were sitting in in the second row and the track was visible with full coverage.

[Annoucement: "Welcome to the 3rd annual St marks fund raiser compition. Aaj kal sports meet mai inter school kay participants parents hai aur kushi ki baat hai ki saab parents nay kafy tayyari ki hai is noble cause kay liye. Wishing them all the best and may the best man win. I request all participants to assemble at the start line. 500 meters ka race hai aur field 250 meters ka circumference hai , so aap saab ko 2 lap bana padega, So aap saab log tayyar hai "]

Cheers are heard by the spectators and the participants way their way to the crowd.

Anmol is standing on lane 5 wearing No5 jersey, Similar appearance is seen with other participants who are standing in their respective lanes. Anmol tightens his roller blades and makes sure they are sitting properly.

The participants take their position in their tracks

[Announcement :" participants aap saab log position ley lijiye,aur count down shuru ho raha hai ", 5-4-3-2-1 and BANG!!]

Off they go the participants on their respective tracks, participants on lane 1, 3 go half way and loose their balance and with draw from the race, Anmol on track 5 and another participant on track 6 seem to be going neck to neck during the first half of the lap

[Announcement : "lane 5 or 6 kar participant baraabar daud rahey hai apney roller blades pay lagtha hai hi tie hoga]

"Come on Chachu " came a loud cheer from the crowd as Anmol moved ahead on his lane, " dad come one you got to be faster " came a neighouring cheer " lane 6 lane 6 " the boy kept cheering.

"Jersey no 5 merey papa merey papa " Tammy also joined the cheer.

Anmol could hear all these cheers and made him very confident of his win. It truly felt like old times for him.

One lap was almost completed and only participants from lane 2 , 4, 5, 6 were still on track, Suddenly lane 2 participant seem to slow down and stopped completely as he couldn't take it any more, and walked out of the track field

[Announcement : "Lagtha hai sirf 3 participants bachey hai dekthey kiski haar ho gi aur kiski jeet" ]

Cheering still going on

Anmol seem to have speed-ed up his rollers and zoomed way ahead in the second lap covering the 2/3rd of the distance and to a quick look back and noticed that participant in lane 4 had also pulled out and lane 6 participant was still a for long away which gave him the thought he would take time to catch up, as he turned back to speed up one of his rollers got unlocked and he lost his balance and fell😭

" ANMOL , PAPA, ANMOL , Chachu " came a scream from the crowd....The shocked expression on Ragini's face ....

Preview: [Annoucement: lagtha hai yeah compition ka faisala mushkil ho gaya hai , magar jeetheney waley hai .........."]

To be continued !!


wah! di apto ek pakki FF writer hai..kya mor pe scene end kiya hai apne😈😭
bechara my anmol fell😭 what happened to him????
pls di continue soon😊😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Shanti:

Gr8 update Hun!👏👏👏👏...i can imagine just how cute n complete Anmol's family will look with Ragini, Tammy n Anmol Jr...😳...love their convos n truly hope to see the CTs build up on this track in Season 2!😃😉😳...those L'il Angini moments are really sweet!😳...just goes to show how much Anmol loves n adores his Ragini...🤗...the roller blade race for the Fund Raiser is interesting...😊...wanna know what happens next..😉...have a feeling Anmol will win this contest for Tammy!😳...do update soon yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Thanks poonam and Chandrika !!

yep Fundraiser for Tammy's school and Anmol does everything to keep his princess happy !!

We'll see whats in store in the coming parts !!😉

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