~Salekh Love Stories~ Home Alone (pg 34) part 5&6 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Agreed. School sucks. I have a final Monday...and then one on June 12th...cannot wait to be rid of this semester! Be gone basic marketing! Be gone!!!!!!

Saved on your phone? Holy WALL OF A TEXT BATMAN! It must take you forever to read on your phone...it's so long!

Secretly here...alright...I promise not to tell anyone...

We had some cute Salekh moments this past week...they are just precious.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: yanks28



I know yaar, mere bhi wohi kamzoori hai...kya karein ham sab Salekhians...Salekh ka jadoo chal gaya...shuru din se hi...in dono pe mein fida hoon...

I promise this FF will be well worth the wait...just wait till you guys read what happens in their hotel room..........!!🤢☺️

yes..we all saalekhians ki kamzori hai yeh saalekh,unka romance.caring,style and all🤗🤗..they r justrttttt perfecttt ...😉and yeah tu yeh baar mujhe upcoming story ki hints de kar ghayal math kar after all yeh saalekh ka mamlaaa hai yaarEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
nd hahazzzsaalekh ka post hai active toh rehega hiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: simransalekh

yes..we all saalekhians ki kamzori hai yeh saalekh,unka romance.caring,style and all🤗🤗..they r justrttttt perfecttt ...😉and yeah tu yeh baar mujhe upcoming story ki hints de kar ghayal math kar after all yeh saalekh ka mamlaaa hai yaar😳
nd hahazzzsaalekh ka post hai active toh rehega hi😳😳



Salekh ka maamla hai...sahi kaha...aur jahan Salekh ka maamla hai....wahan dil ka maamla haiiiii!


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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: yanks28



Salekh ka maamla hai...sahi kaha...aur jahan Salekh ka maamla hai....wahan dil ka maamla haiiiii!


Saalekh ka mamlaa...aur dil ka mamla alag kbhi nhi ho sktaaa....they r attchd 4ever😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
hello guys!!
this is shweta!!
im head over heels with this jodi .
i was busy after my 12th boads results entrance and stuff.
im sorry i culdn't visit this post earlier.
i liked allt he stories written here.
a big thnx to yanks!!
i just love d way u describe everything .i would love to read ore and more of this
i had written some scenes of saalekh before.
it was not organised into one thread or anything i just used to post them as i wrote them in different threads.
i'll find them, up and if u want i'll post it here.
only if u don't mind.
i think some of u must have alredy read them
yanks im sending a frnd request accept it ok.
and keep more of saalekh coming.😊

i din't know of a site called fanfictions.net.i had to edit my ff's earlier cause it wuld get too hot and steamy,he he i can't resist salekh my mind just wanders of imagining things ☺️
Edited by nasco - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasco

<div align="center"><font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">hello guys!!</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">this is shweta!!</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">im head over heels with this jodi .</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i was busy after my 12th boads results entrance and stuff.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">im sorry i culdn't visit this post earlier.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i liked allt he stories written here.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">a big thnx to yanks!!</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i just love d way u describe everything .i would love to read ore and more of this</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i had written some scenes of saalekh before.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">it was not organised into one thread or anything i just used to post them as i wrote them in different threads.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i'll find them, up and if u want i'll post it here.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">only if u don't mind.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i think some of u must have alredy read them</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">yanks im sending a frnd request accept it ok.</font>
<font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">and keep more of saalekh coming.😊</font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">

</font><font color="#0099ff" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i din't know of a site called fanfictions.net.i had to edit my ff's earlier cause it wuld get too hot and steamy,he he i can't resist salekh my mind just wanders of imagining things ☺️</font>
</div>



Always great to meet another Salekian.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: nasco

hello guys!!
this is shweta!!
im head over heels with this jodi .
i was busy after my 12th boads results entrance and stuff.
im sorry i culdn't visit this post earlier.
i liked allt he stories written here.
a big thnx to yanks!!
i just love d way u describe everything .i would love to read ore and more of this
i had written some scenes of saalekh before.
it was not organised into one thread or anything i just used to post them as i wrote them in different threads.
i'll find them, up and if u want i'll post it here.
only if u don't mind.
i think some of u must have alredy read them
yanks im sending a frnd request accept it ok.
and keep more of saalekh coming.😊

i din't know of a site called fanfictions.net.i had to edit my ff's earlier cause it wuld get too hot and steamy,he he i can't resist salekh my mind just wanders of imagining things ☺️




Welcome Shweta! 🤗 Thank you for your lovely compliments...they mean a lot to me...they really do...if you need any help with FanFiction.net if you wanna upload your stories there, I'll be happy to help you...it confused me a bit at first but now I love it! Can't wait to read your work...

And yes...we can be friends! Of course...there will be plenty more Salekh coming...trust me.😉

I know what you mean about hot n. steamy...trust me that's my biggest issue when it comes to Salekh...how to keep my writing innocent...lol...I have barely succeeded at that so far!

My next fic also needs some heavy editing beacause of the hot and steamy scenes...😆 There is no hope for me...maa ki laadli bigar gayi...😲😆

Thank you once again!!!👏⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so here is the one wich i wrote long b4 .had posted it too.
just thought i wuld post it here too!!

post ur comments guys.
ignore my mistakes😊

scene 1


sadhna woke up one morning and does not find aalekh next to her in the bed. she gets all sad, not that he is up before her. its her birthday tday and she wanted him to be there with her on this special day .she gets up and looks for him in the room.he is not there so she decides to go looking for him.she first went to get freshened up.she takes a bath and wears a blue saree with matching jewllerry and is looking beautiful as usual.

she goes down and saw indrajith and vasu sitting on the sofs indrajith is busy with some files and vasu is on the phone with her friend.she goes to the kitchen and brings teas for everyone and by the time she comes back satyan and ambika r also present there sadhna
serves them tea and takes their blessings.ragini who had gone out to se rnvir off into the office came inside and went near sadhna.sadhna expected her to remember her birthday but she also din't have any reaction.ragini told sadhna that aalekh had gone out early for a meeting and she was up because ranvir also had to go for a meeting .sadhna felt really sad hearing this and she quietly went to her room.she tried calling aalekh
ragini's point of view
ragini had remebered sadhna's birthday and had also bought gifts for her.she loved her sister more than her life and had been the first one to wish her birthday .she felt bad for not wishing sadhna tday.but she knew jijaji wuld make her sadhna happy.
aalekh's thoughts
aalekh is really desperate to meet sadhna .he had left home early because he had a plan. and he ,ranvir and ragini had made up a plan and aalekh had booked a hotel for sadhna's birthday party.he had hired a hall designer to dothe decorations and he had decorated the hall with white and red roses and ribbons. it looked awsome.
sadhna will be brought in here by ragini .evryone except sadhna new about the party .aalekh knew sadhna wuld be sad .but he culdn't help it.he wanted her birthday to be celebrated in a very grand way and he was out early to take care of the proceedings.he had called mamaji to tel them about the party and invited each and every one of them to the party.
sadhna's thoughts
sadhna tried calling aa;ekh but he din't pick up the phone. she was sitting on the bed and just then ragini came in.ragini told her that they wuld go shopping tday and sadhna tried to refuse but ragini kept on persisting so she had to give in.chotimaa was also asked to come by ragiini.they went down ready to go for shopping and vasu said that she'll also come with them.
they went to one of the biggest malls in delhi .ragini was asked to purchase a saree ,jewellry etc etc for sadhna by aalekh.he wanted it to be liked by sadhna so he had asked ragini to go shopping with her.
they went to the sarre section and selected a white colour saree for sadhna it was decarated with gold ,white and red stones .meanwhile vasu also had selected a pink colour saree with gold embroidery work .she had thought of gifting sadhna a saree.
next they proseeded to the jewellery section and sadhna bought matching jewellery for it .ragini and vasu also bought many things.
sadhna tried calling aalekh.
sadhna's thoughts
WHY IS AALEKHJI NOT TAKING MY CALL?? DID HE FORGET MY BIRTHDAY??

aalekh's thought's
SADHNA HAS BEEN CALLING ME SINCE MORNING AND I HADN'T ANSWERED HER CALLS . he was looking at his mobile screen saying "sadhna calling".ranvir seeing his bhaiyaa lost in thoughts came to him and aalekh showed him the phone. ranvir smiled at it and seeing his bhaiyaa's desperation.he asked aalekh not to take the phone as bhabhi is calling to make him remember that its her birthday tday.
aalekh doesn't take up the phone

sadhn ,ragini , vasu and chotimaa did their shopping and came back home. sadhna ,ragini went to their rooms and ragini called ranvir to inform him that they were done with the shopping and she asked him to give the phone to jijaji.aalekh took the phone and she told him that they bought a white colour saree and matching jewellry for sadhna she
hangs upand then goes to sadhna's room with vasu .
they tell sadhna that they have to go for aparty organised by vasu's friend and sadhna and ragini also should go with her.sadhna reluctantly agrees.
vasu asks sadhna to wear the saree she bought tday and sadhna agrees .she gets dressed up in the new saree and is looking stunning.ragini wearing a blue saree is also looking beautiful.
they all get into the car and proceeds towards the hotel.ragini messages ranvir telling him that they r on the way to the hotel.sadhna tries calling aalekh.
they reach the hotel and its decorated with lights outside too.they enter into the lobby and its well furnished with huge curtains,paintings and other things.the receptionist takes them to the hall .ragini messages ranvir that they have reached the hotel and ranvir messages her back that everything is well set.
vasu,sadhna,ragini and chotimaa went to the hall.the entrance was closed and vasu asked sahna to open it and sadhna pushed the door open.
🥳🥳*****surprise*****🥳🥳
sadhna got the surprise of her life to see aalekh standing there with a bouquet of roses and he gave it to sadhna and said "happy birthday sadhna".he was joined by ranvir,indrajith,satyen,naeen,avni ,mamaji,mamiji,vinu,malti,naniji.
sadhna felt so happy and she felt that she was the happiest person inthe world now.
aalekh gave her a red balloon with i love u encrypted on it.she took it from him and she had tears in her eyes.he wiped out her tears and said that he did all this to see her happy and now she is crying??she smiles at this and he says that he wuldn't let her cry and will always be there for her and he explains that he felt really bad for not wishing her happy birthday earlier.he goes down on her knees and takes her hand and pulls out a hear shaped boxfrom his pocket.he pulls out a heart shaped ring and puts it on sadhna's finger.he kisess her hand making her go read with shyness and he gets up and hugs sadhna and everyone claps.
everyone wish sadhna happy birthday and ranvir and ragini brings the cake.sadhna cuts the cake and puts a piece in aalekh's mouth and h also does the same.
aalekh then tells that he has something for her and he goes to the end of the hall where something is kept covered.he pulls off the cover and it is a heartshape photo frame of aalekh and sadhna .it was soo beautiful and sadhna was very happy to get a husband like aalekh in her life.
Edited by nasco - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shweta I was so excited and I read it fast! That's really sweet...we had an Alekh birthday, why not have a Sadhna birthday too?

Yes it's like Sadhna to start crying even at happy moments...awwww hamari Sadhna...

It must be killing Alekh having to ignore Sadhna's calls...poor baby...

Loved that you incorporated different point of views...good work!!!!!👍🏼👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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note:this is another random scene not a continuation
scene 2

alekh wakes up in the morning and saw sadhna sitting infront of the mirror combing her hair and looking beautiful as usual he went up to her and filled her maang and helped her put the mangalsutra.

sadhna was really happy and thanked hinm and he said he doesn't want a thnku instead he wants a kiss on the chek.
sadhna says that she can't do it and runs from the room.aalekh tries to get her but she was too fast for him tday.she goes downatirs and meets vasu .sadhna gets her blessings and vasu asks about aaalekh sadhna says that he is upstairs in his room.she asks vasu about indrajith and she tells sadhna that he ahs already left for office.sadhna goes to the kitchen and finds chotimaa and ragini there.sadhna greets them and asks them what they r preparing and ragini says that they r preparing channa masala and chappati tday.sadhna goes to help them and ragini goes to the storerom attached to the kitchen where the cereals,pulses and masala's r kept.
ragini goes to take the msala from the store room nd sadhna starts mixing the flour .the dough is sticking to her hands and just then ragini cals out to them that she can't find the masala and chotimaa goes to help her find it as sadhna's hand is full of flour and she continues mixing it.
aalekh comes down and ses vasu reading the newspaper and he knew sadhna wuld be in the kitchen so he manages to sneak into the kitchen without being noticed.
he sees sadhna mixing th flour and doesn't see chotimaa and ragini as they r still in the store room.
he goes behind sadhna and hugs her from behind sadhna got startled and she says "chodiye alekhji"
but he doesn't budge he says that she got away from hi in the morning and now he won't let her go is she doesn't give a kiss to him.sadhna blushes red and she tris to push him off her but isn't sucessful as she can't use her hands fully becasue the dough is sticking onto her hand.aalekh rests his head on her shoulders and tries to kiss her when they hear someone gigling. they turn around to see chotima and ragini laughing and sadhna is crimson red in colour (embarassed and shy)aalekh tries to make up some excuse but culdn't find anything so he turns to leave when he ses vasu standing near the kitchen door smiling.
aalekh goes out without saying anything .
vasu talks with indrajith thet they must allow saalekh to spend time with each other and she suggests a plan of sending them to some hillstation.indrajith agrees and he suggests that they send ragvir also there.
vasu agrees and just prays to god that she gets a grandchild soon.

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