Ek din tera hojaon ga{SaLekh FF}Part 50 page 91 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Why is Alekh Sadhna's cousin ... =( ...

And why should a girl love a flirt? (although ... I know about the "bad boy" symdrome ... and I also know about the "bad girl" syndrome for men ... find that really foolish).

Anyways ... go ahead ... write you FF 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Ice-Thinker

Why is Alekh Sadhna's cousin ... =( ...


And why should a girl love a flirt? (although ... I know about the "bad boy" symdrome ... and I also know about the "bad girl" syndrome for men ... find that really foolish).

Anyways ... go ahead ... write you FF 👏



hey 😊
thanxx 4 reading it... itz just a thought came into mind that thingz can go in tiz manner n i started writing it. sadhna is alekh's cousin coz thatz wat i wanted to write abt(theres nothing like a real character of both from d serial ) .. secondly..if a guy is showing as he is getting interesting in her although hez not..one can feel that he mite b love.. n vise versa.. its not like hez a 'bad boy' .. its like hez like that ..marrigae is not in his cards yet n he dnt luv her..it waz sadhna who thoought that he luved her but he didnt 😊
thanku soo much 4 d comment... it makes me write better 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Usually people who treate love and commitment lightly dont stop just at the first step of demeaning it.

But yes ... everyone have their choice.

Bad Boy Syndrome is famous... so is bad girl.... check around the net you may find interesting data.

But write!...Writing is a wonderful art. You have all my best wishes =)
Edited by Ice-Thinker - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
i respect ur comment 😊
thankuu so0o0 much 4 d wishes.. meanz alot 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 7:
next day(holiday) alekhs wakes up early in d morning n started preparation for their meet

A: kia pehnon..(alekh is luking for wat to wear, hez throwing one shirt after another)
A: blue..black..red.. kia shirt pehnoo

Alekh mom cumz
AM: alekh yeh kia kar rahey ho? aur aj chutti waley din itni jaldi uth gaye
A: mom wo kahein jana hai zaroori
AM: haan to mujhe bolo.. mei kar deti hon..jana kab hai
A: maa 5 baje
AM: 5 baje?? aur tum subha k 8 baje se janey k liye shirt dkh rhaey ho
A: (alekh pauses 4 a while) haan maa bus chorey ap ..mei kar lon ga
AM: (she smiles) alekh!!
A: mom plzz (as he knw that she will definelty tease him)
AM: ok ok...
she leaves

its 4 pm ., alekh is all set to go
while driving he saw a flower shop n think of sadhna.. he went there.. n abt to buy red roses.. but he didnt.. he bought a beautiful bouquet of tulips for her

he reached at coffe shop around 4.15 n waiting for her..

clock strikes 5.15 but theres no sign of sadhna.. he gets worried..

after ten minz a girl enterd in coffe shop... wearing a beautiful yet simple red n green combo chori dar...open hair
alekh eyes strikes there.. it waz sadhna... he standz up n lost in her beauty,she waz luking very pretty...she cumz near his table n alekh keeps on staring her n memerising her

S: hi

alekh keep on staring

S: alekh

he still keep staring her

S: alekh
she feels bit awkward as lotz of people were there

S: alekhhh

A: haan
S: hi

A: ohh hi sadhna..
but before they sits alekh gives her bouque of flowers

S: thanxx...its really pretty

A: yeah very pretty (he keeps luking at her)

sadhna luks dwn
A: ohh.. betho na
they both sits


Alekh saw that she is a bit disformtable.. he started

A: tiz place is realy nice.. i use to com here quite offen
S: yah its nice..
A: soo kia lo gi tum..kuch order karein
S: nahi kuch nahi
A: aisey kasiey.. kuch to
S: cappiciu
A: okk.. aur kuch kaheny ko
sadhna nodz 'no'
alekh orders 2 cappicinu coffe


A: tumhey kuch baat karni thi..kaho
sadhna hesitates to start but she have to
S: alekh.... tum jantey ho k jo kuch horaha hai...wo..i mean shadi
A: (he suddenly get confused) sadhna tum khush to hona is shadi se...koi problem hai?
S: nahi koi problem nahhi hai..sahdi k liye miene khud haan ki hai..n am happy per... ek baat hai jo tumhey nahi pata..aur mei chahti hon k tumhey pata honi chaiye
A: haan to kaho
S: rahul
A: (luks up) rahul
S: college mei..mera... past
A: ek min sadhna... tumhara past kia tha..us bare mei koi bat nahi karna chata mei... mei tumhara ajj ho,,aur aney wala kal.. guzri hui baaton ko yaad karney se kuch hasil nahi hota.... mei bus yeh janta ho k ab hum dono ki zindagi ek hogi,..ek saath.. jahan guzri hui baton ka koi dakhil nahi hoga...
S: (smiles)
A: hasti raha karo..achi lagti ho
suddenly her smiles vanishes
A: kia huwa?
S: kuch nahi

they both had a coffe
S: chalein?
A: kyun??
S:(sadhna luks up questiongly)
A:i mean haan sure

both were walking out from d cafe
there waz a park oppsite d cafe ..alekh wantd to spend sum time with her..so he say

A: dreamz park chalein?
S: (sadhna luks up) ahh.?
A: haan ..if u say so
S: nahi alekh its quite late. phir kabhi
A: ohh... its ok
alekh gets bit dissapointed so he luks dwn...sadhna watchs alekh disspointed n feels bit bad dan suddenly while walking to d car .. a lil stone comes under her foot n she waz abt to fall but alekh catches her... both had a eye lock..

"tera honey laga laga hon,khney laga hon..jab se mila hon"

after few secondz sadhna breaks k eye contact but alekh keep on staring her while holding her..

S: alekh
he keeps on staring
S: alekh..
A: (back to his sense) haan
she standz up
A: u ok? tum theek hona..lagi to nahi
S: nahi am fine
A: u sure
S: yeah i am.. just a lil stone.. am ok..ab chalein

they reached the car.. n alekh opens d car door for her

they reached home .... sadhna says bye to alekh n abt to leave when alekh calls her name
A: "sadhna"

Sadhna turns

Precap:
Sadhna goes to window n is surprised to c alekh still standing there
Edited by Sunny-Malik - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
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wowowowow fabulous update ghazabbb..👏hw u mk wted yaar i think u forgot ur ff.fabulous i luv this alekh purely in love wow😍...and sadhna mst be luking amazing in tht dress.😍.great combo.thnks for my song currently i m listening to this song😳...i will comented earlier bt there was prob of net..bt i m sensing sadhna ahs a probelm bt she is hidingg😕..well good dialogues and expression describeddd..precap seems interestiggg⭐️

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
hey sunny sorry i was busy with college so couldn't comment previously.
Just read all the chapters. Great work my friend u did a fantastic job. Keep going can't wait for next chapter.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
great work!
I'm waiting for the next part!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
omg
omg
omg
i'm still blushing yaar...........
this update was great.becoz it was full salekh scene.............i loved it.i'm dying to have some more salekh
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: simransalekh


<font color="#ff0000">wowowowow fabulous update ghazabbb..👏hw u mk wted yaar i think u forgot ur ff.fabulous i luv this alekh purely in love wow😍...and sadhna mst be luking amazing in tht dress.😍.great combo.thnks for my song currently i m listening to this song😳...i will comented earlier bt there was prob of net..bt i m sensing sadhna ahs a probelm bt she is hidingg😕..well good dialogues and expression describeddd..precap seems interestiggg⭐️</font>


aww thankuuu so0o0o very much dear 😊 ..am glad that u guyz r liking it.. hope i came up 2 u expectationzz 😃

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