RR SA FF - We are made for loving eachother!

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Hi guys,

I haven't been much of a writer, but reading other FFs I got inspired to write one myself. Please leave comments and let me know if you want more of it! 😃

Prologue:

He was everything her heart warned against—an arrogant scoundrel whose rough good looks spoke of savage pleasures. She brazenly resisted him…until one rapturous moment quelled their clash of wills, and something far more dangerous than desire threatened to conquer her senses…

He fitted the best in her Prince Charming image. And yet, she felt repulsed by the fact that they were brought together by fate and not faith. Drawn to his magnetic impulsive charms and handsome looks, she could not help but fall for the gentle man she wed herself to...

A story like no other – where there is battle all throughout - A battle between Arrogance and Pride, between Fantasy and Reality, between Intense Passion and True Love. A story where every relation they made was the one they detested!

Introduction:

Alekh Rajvansh – Oldest son of Inderjit and Vasundhara Rajvansh who is proud, arrogant, strong man who never believed in love or the fact that a woman can make him weak. He is usually quiet and loner. He manages the entire Rajvansh Empire and is a very capable and dependable businessman.

Ranvir Rajvansh – Younger son of Inderjit and Vasundhara Rajvansh. He is kind, caring person with more boyish charm. He is gentler than his brother but dutiful and loyal. He manages his family business alongside his brother.

Ragini Sharma – Daughter of PrakashChand and Kaushlya Sharma. She is pretty, sweet, kind and pampered. She loves and depends a lot on her younger sister Sadhna. She believes a lot in love and hopes to find her Prince Charming someday. She is studying to become a fashion designer.

Sadhna Sharma – She is the adoptive daughter of PrakashChand and Kaushlya Sharma. She is beautiful brave woman who loves her family a lot and can do anything for their happiness. She is very protective about her sister and would not let anyone to harm her. She is very chirpy and makes friends easily. She studies psychology and also works in an orphanage. She lives in the hope that one day she can compensate for all the things her family has done for her.

Vasundhara and Inderjit Rajvansh – They are industrial tycoons who have retired of their business duties and now let their sons handle the work. They love their children but often fail to see how their business strategies have made their son Alekh too arrogant and shrewd. They are very close to Ranvir and usually have conversations with him. They wish to get their sons married off soon.

PrakashChand and Kaushlya Sharma – They come from a middle class family who can barely support their family with their son's income. They hope that someday they would be financially secured. They have a lot of hope on getting their daughters married of to well-to-do family. They are very attached to Ragini and make sure she is protected at all times. They seek a lot of domestic help from Sadhna.

Vineet and Malti Sharma – They are PrakashChand and Kaushlya Sharma's son and daughter-in-law who live in their parent's small cottage. They wish to get Ragini and Sadhna married off soon so that they have fewer members to support. They try to get Sadhna to financially help them to satisfy their materialistic demands.

Please let me know if you want to read more 😳

Love,
Divs.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice introduction...please continue!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks guys 😃

I'll post the 1st Chapter soon!

Thanks again for your support 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your writing skills are very good 👍🏼.

But I have a problem with Ragini's character sketch.Here again she is shown weak just like in the serial.She is the elder one and depends on Sadhna but usually it's the other way round in reality.

I would be glad if you could make some changes but if you can't then it's allright 😊.
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Originally posted by: luv_ragvir

Your writing skills are very good 👍🏼.

But I have a problem with Ragini's character sketch.Here again she is shown weak just like in the serial.She is the elder one and depends on Sadhna but usually it's the other way round in reality.

I would be glad if you could make some changes but if you can't then it's allright 😊.



Hey, I appreciate your suggestion. I am sure you'll love Ragini as the story proceeds. I am trying two separate love-chemistry for both the sisters so that both their strengths and weaknesses are portrayed. I think you may like the way things turn 😉
I won't disappoint you!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am very exited to read it!
sounds very interessting:)
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Chapter 1

At Sharma Residence:

Kaushlya Niwas, a small old cottage in the middle of the town, surrounded by nice trees and gardens. It had old walls that hadn't touched paint for a very long time. But the love filled inside the house would make living so much better. The sound of the early morning prayers is heard crisp and clear in each and every corner of the house. Somewhere in a quiet lonesome walkway there are noises of a heated discussion coming.

"WHAT?" Sadhna yells. "What did you just say Bhaiyya? That you need 25,000Rs to buy a computer, and that to by the evening? How can that be possible? You know that I have recently given you 10,000Rs to buy that necklace for Bhabhi. I do not earn a lot of money working part-time. I do not have that much money with me" she turns to look at her brother who had just stopped her from going to pray. She tosses her hair back and looks at him with rage and fury. Her eyes would have looked good, but the darkness of wrath did not make a pretty sight. Her face, stirringly beautiful and young, appears nothing but dispassionate!

"Oh Sadhna, please..." begs Vinu, an average looking man with a clumsy appearance "…You know very well how much I needed the new computer. I have lots of work to do and it's getting harder for me to work manually alone. I have to manage our family, feed all of us… this is the least you can do for our happiness."

"But Bhaiyya, where shall I get this money from? You know I have no savings left from last time." says Sadhna.

"I am sure you would have some money left from you orphanage savings. Instead of giving it to those kids, why not you give it to me?" says Vinu.

"No Bhaiyya, I cannot give you the money that belongs to the kids. They are donations and they don't belong to me." says Sadhna firmly.

"So what do you want me to do now? Should I steal money so that I pay it off to my friend?" argues Vinu.

"I don't know Bhaiyya. I am sure you'll find a way out of this mess. But I am sorry, I can't help you." says Sadhna as she walks away.

"Oh God! Now what will I do? Sadhna has refused to help me! If only I could…" he thinks about a way to arrange for the money.

At Rajvansh Mansion:

Rajvansh Bhavan is nothing short of a castle, decorated in fun upbeat colours, this house offers a cheerful atmosphere to everyone who visits. But deep within, the house had its own story…

"Alekh! Alekh! Where are you? We really need to talk to you. Please come downstairs as soon as possible. Alekh! Are you even listening" shouts Vasu. She is in the hall along with Inderjit. She turns to him and says, "Do you think he would want to come down and talk to us after the marriage proposal we mentioned last night? I don't even think Alekh is interested in settling down and having a family. I feel like he is a cold emotionless man who cannot see anything but this business." Her eyes express grace and beauty even now, as she watches at her husband's apprehensive, fetching face.

"Don't worry, Vasu. I am sure he would change when he finds the right girl." says Inderjit.

"I hope so too." wishes Vasu. She sees Ranvir coming down the stairs.

"Morning Mum, Morning Dad." Ranvir says as he comes down the stairs wearing a warm smile on his boyish charming face that made the entirely house light. His gelled hair sits on nicely giving him a professional look along with the blue formals he wears. He is wearing his favourite musk perfume, which blends into the warm summer air completely.

"Good morning Ranvir. Come have breakfast. Have you seen Alekh this morning?" asks Vasu.

"Alekh Bhaiyya, he has left for office already. He said he had an important meeting and has to prepare for it." says Ranvir.

Vasu is upset, but smiles and goes to eat breakfast with her family.

At Rajvansh Empire:

Alekh walks through the door early in the morning. No one has yet turned up for work yet. He goes through some files for the meeting. He hears a glass-breaking noise. He turns to see what it is…

Coming up in next Chapter: Introduction to Alekh and Ragini!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏wow yaar so nice and well explained and diff f gr8 yaar gr8 hope alekh soon get introduce gr88 yaar👏👏really cont soon plzz

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