~~**Tum Mile**~~RR...FF (chap6) pg12

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Sharma Family

Sharma ji

He is retired from work and spends most of his time helping in housework. He is not very rich but he always tries to fulfill the needs of his children'..his life lies in his families happiness. He is a man in his late 50's'he's kind and generous. He loves his daughter Ragini a lot.


Vinu

He is 25 years old. He's handsome and a very nice man. He works in a mobile company owned by the Rajvanchs. He got married 6 moths ago. He loves his wife and his sister is his life. He is a very respectful and good son'everyone would love to have a son like him.


Malti

She is 24 years old. A house wife. She is a very jockey and sweet person. She loves Ragini a lot. She plays the role of a true friend, sister and mother for Ragini. Both of them love each other and get along really well. Malti is a very nice and adarsh bahu she is the lead of the house. She is a fun loving and easy going person.

Rajvanch Family

Inderjeet Rajvanch

A successful business man. He is always busy in work and rarely seen at home. He owns a well know mobile company. He is very kind and generous. He loves his family a lot'money means nothing to him. His life lies in his son's happiness.

Vasundara Rajvanch

She is a house wife and also a business woman. Status means a lot to her and she can be self centered sometimes. She's strict and sometimes stubborn but she loves her family and can do anything for her son's happiness.

Friends

Amina

She's Ranvir's best friend, and she has always played a role of a sister in Ranvir's life. They both know eachother since childhood. Ranvir has never kept a secret from Amina'they both can understand each others feelings without telling each other. Amina loves teasing ranvir and she is also Ranvir's classmate.

Prem

A sensible and serious person. He is Ragini's cousin'both of them are very close to each other and prem has always helped ragini out in her difficult times. Their bond is unbreakable and Prem is very protective about Ragini. He is also in the same class as Ragini.

Promo: ragvir see each other for the first time and guess wht?? They have a fight'😃


hope u guys like it...a special thanx to deepi👏for helping me out...

Index😃

CHAP 1..PG 2😳

CHAP 2..PG 3😳

CHAP 3..PG 5😳

CHAP 4..PG 7😳

CHAP 5...PG9😳

CHAP 6...PG12😳


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Nice character introduction. keep it on
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amina introduction part is very good. I m waiting for your first chapter 😳
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WOWWW aminaa i m really looking fwd to thsi FF hailahh my Kinny i mean Ranvirr loves Musiccc ooo lalala hehehhh cant wiatttt intro is just Dhamaaal
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thanx @rose_e, pankhi and saniha di 1st chap will be up soon...
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perfect yaar...
GREAT!
ab jaldi se first part likh de.
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character intro was rly good
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Character intro is great. Ab first chap jaldi update kar na.
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okay guys here is the first chap... and do hit the like button if u like it...and all of u are welcome to comment or criticize😊
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Chapter 1

Rajvanch House.

Its morning, Vasu and Inderjeet are sitting on the dinning table doing breakfast and talking about a business deal when someone enters the room….

"Good morning, uncle aunty." It is Amina. She is a tall girl, with long black hair and beautiful features. She was wearing a black long skirt with a red top.

"Good morning, beta." Both Vasu and Inderjeet reply.

"Come sit, have breakfast with us." Vasu offers.

"nahi aunty, I just had breakfast and I am already getting late for collage." Vasu nodes.

"Aunty wo ladka utha nahi??" Amina asks

"Nahi yeh ladka bhi na , ajj collage ka pehla din hai aur ajj hi late hoo ga." Vasu replies in a worried voice.

"Don't worry aunty, main hoon na abhi uski khabar laati hoon." With this Amina hurried upstairs. It was a big room with a huge window on one of the walls. Everything in the room was white. The room was in a very bad condition, the floor was covered with clothes and there he was sleeping, half on the bed and half on the floor, taking deep breaths and smiling slightly.

"Acha tou yeh abhi tak soo raha hai hmm abhi dekhna bachoou." With this Amina threw a bucket full of water on that guy. The guy woke up with a scream. The guy had dark brown eyes, black hair not very short not very long some of them coming on his forehead, he was wearing a t shirt and some shorts….it was our one and only Ranvir…

"KYA HAI AMI, KITNI BAAR KAHA HAI MUJHA TANG NA KIYA KAR, ARAAM SA SOO RAHA THA….KHWAB MAIN DATE PER JANAY HI LAGA THA KA TU TAPAK GAYI." Ranvir signs loudly.

"Hoo gaya, bakwas kar li? Ab tayar hoo ja time dekha hai??" Amina replied angrily.

Ranvir looks at the watch and yells, "Oh shit, 9 baj gaya sirf iak ghanta rehta hai?"

"Ji hain" Amina replied.

"Sorry sweeti aisa hi tum per gussa kiya." Ranvir says.

"Chal chal ab makhan kum laga…main tera wait karoo gi jaldi anaa." Amina replied while smiling slightly.

"Yes Boss" Ranvir has a naughty look on his face, Amina just gives him a looser look and goes away.

Sharma House

"Malti meri tie kahan hai?" Vinu yells from a room.

"Bahuu mera chashma dekha?" Sharma ji asks.

"Aayi baaba 2 minutes sabar karoo."Malti replies from the kitchen and the camera focuses on a girl whose setting food on a try. She is wearing a saree with heavy work on the borders.

"Yeh li jiyaa bauji app ka chashma aur yeh loo Vinu ji app ki tie." Malti gave Vinu the tie. The camera focuses on Vinu. He's was wearing a suit and getting ready for office.

"Beta Ragini kahan hai, ajj college ka pehla din hai wo late hoo jayaa gi." Sharma ji asks Malti. The camera focuses on a man how's holding a book in his hand. He is wearing a shalwar kameez.

"Bauji wo mandir gayi thi abhi atti he hogi." Malti replies.

At that very moment someone enters the room. Its none other then Ragini. (I haven't given Ragini's description yet it's for later)

"Namasta bauji….good morning bhaiya." Ragini greets her family and gives parsad to them.

"Ragini ja jaldi sa tayar hoo ja..nahi tu college ka liya late hoo jaya gi." Malti bhabi says. Ragini smiles and goes to her room.

College

Ranvir parks his BMW in the car park and gets out of the car. He is wearing a purple t- shirt with some skinny jeans (his hairstyle is just like the mystery track). Amina is waiting for him in the car park.

"Hi chipkali!" Ranvir calls out to Amina.

Amina gives him a look and says "Whatever!!"

They start walking towards the collage when Ranvir sees a group of girls looking at him. Ranvir winks at them and they all giggle. Amina sees this and stares at him…shocked!!

"Kya." Ranvir asks looking innocent.

"Tumha wo ladkiyaan achi lagi?" Amina asks with a raised eyebrow.

"Mujhe…RAGVIR RAJVANCH ko yeh mamooli si ladkiyaan achi lagaa gi..NO WAY." Ranvir says with a irritated face.

"Tu ajj batah hi dou tumha kaisi ladki chahiya." Amina asks him.

"Tu sunoo.. mera type ki laadki ki ankha khoobsoorat honi chahiya" the camera focuses on Ragini's eyes. "Uska kaala Ghana baal jin ko wo apna chahra sa attati raha." Ragini is trying to take her hair away from eyes. "Woo jab chala tu jaisa…"

"Bas bas both hoo gaya Bhagwan hi tumhari madat karaa." Amina says interrupting Ranvir in mid sentence. Ranvir looks at Amina sarcastically and they continue walking towards the college.

On the other hand Ragini is walking up to the college gate. She's wearing a black shirt with a pair of dark blue jeans. Her hair are in layers and she has let them loose(just like parul). She's wearing a little makeup and looking extremely gorgeous.

"Araa tum a gayi Ragini, main kab sa tumhara wait ker raha hoon." Prem says.

"Hi, Prem kaisa hoo, sorry yaar late hoo gayi." Ragini replies with a sweet smile.

"I'm fine as usual, let's go up to the class." Prem says. Ragini nodes and they walk up to the class together.

Precape: Ranvir and Ragini see each other for the first time and they have a fight…

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