*~*Kahin Pyaar Na Ho Jaaye!*~*RR FF Chpt 3 pg 8 - Page 3

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its beautiful hun...keep i tup
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It is beautiful yaar ,keep it up ,I will be waiting 🤗
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Chapter 1

"Om bhur bhuvah swah tatsa vitoor varenyam?

Bhargo devasya dhimahe dhiyoyona prachodayaat

Om Jai Jagdish Hare, Swami Jai Jagdish Hare,

Bhakt Jano Ke Sankat, Daas Jano Ke Sankat

Kshan mein Door Kare, Om Jai Jagdish Hare."

Sings a girl sitting in the mandir. PC joins the girl and so does Kaushi. Vinu also wakes up and leaves for the prayers, Malti is still sleeping, and feels a little annoyed by the singing, she covers her ear with the pillow and goes back to sleep.
"Mata pita tum mere

Sharan Paoon main kiski

Swami sharan paoon main kiski

Tum bin aur na dooja

Prabhu bin aur na dooja

Aas karoon main jiski

Om jai Jagdish hare.

Om Jai Jagdish Hare

Om...Jai...Jagdish...Hare."

The Girl is done with the prayer, she turns around and there stands a girls smiling. She is dusky in color, with beautiful features. She was wearing a nice red suit. She walks up to PC and says ""Prasad" Pc smiles and takes the prasad she then walks to Vinu and he also takes the prasad, she then walks up to Kaushi who isn't really smiling at her. Ragini says "Ma, Prasad." Kaushi takes the Aarti and says "Mera Vrat Hai." Ragini's smile fades away slowly and she takes back the Prasad. PC says "Kaushalya ji, bhagwaan ke Prasad ko na nahi kehte, kha lijiye." Ragini smiles and offers the Prasad once again. Kaushi says "Aapko yaad hai na ki aaj aapko mehra ji ke yahaan jaana hai." PC looks on at Kaushi and nods. "Main khaana lagaati hoon, aap jaake tayaar ho jaaiye." Vinu says "Ma, Prasad toh..." Kaushi turns to Vinu and says "Tujhe office nahi jaana hai kya? Ja jaakar tayaar ho ja." Vinu looks on at Kaushi and leaves to get ready. Kaushi looks at Ragini angrily and says "Tu yahaan khadi khadi kya dekh rahi hai? Kaha na ki aaj mera vrat hai." Ragini looks down. "Ja jaakar dekh bahu uthi ke nahin." Ragini still looking down, says "Ji Ma." Ragini leaves to see if malti has woken up. Kaushi watches her leave and then leaves to the kitchen.

Ragini enters Vinu's room and says "Bhabi?" Malti is still sleeping. Ragini once again calls out to her. Malti annoyingly says "kya hai?" Ragini says "Bhabi aapko neeche ma bula rahi hai." Malti gets annoyed and gets up. She says "aa rahi hoon." Ragini looks at malti. "Iss ghar mein toh mera sona haraa ho gaya hai. Pehle raat raat bhar kaam karo, aur phir subah phir kaam pe lag jao. Araam toh jaise haraam hai is ghar mein." Ragini looks on at Malti. Malti sees Ragini and says "Tu yahaan kya kar rahi hai? Kaha na aa rahi hoon." Ragini slowly nods her head and then leaves. Malti says "Subah subah is manhood ki shakal dekh li, pata nahi din kaisa jaayega." Malti then gets up and leaves to have a shower.

Ragini goes in the kitchen and sees kaushi doing all the work, Ragini walks up to her and says "Ma, aapko toh araam karna chahiye na, laaiye yeh main kar deti hoon." Kaushi doesn't look at her and says "Nahin, main khud karloongi." Ragini looks down and is upset. PC looks at this from far and feels sad, he says "Ragini. Beta yahaan aana." Ragini looks at PC and says "Ji Bauji." Ragini looks at Kaushi and then leaves. PC says "Arrey beta dekh na, mujhse yeh button nahin lag raha, tu lagaade." Ragini smiles and says "Ji Bauji." Ragini takes the kurta from PC and begins t sew the button on the kurta, PC smiles at Ragini, he then looks at Kaushi, and goes to her. He says "Kaushalya Ji, 19 saal hogaye hai Ragini ko iss ghar mein aaye, aur aap ab bhi usse itni berukhi se baat kar rahi hai? Aakhir uska kasoor kya hai?" Kaushi says "maine kaha tha aapko Ragini ko iss ghar mein laane ke liye? maine aapse keh diya tha na, ki main isse nahin apnaungi. Yeh aapke liye aapki beti hogi, par mere liye yeh kuch nahi hai. Na Jaane Kiska Paap hai yeh" Ragini overhears this and has tears in her eyes, she leaves from there. PC says "Kaushalya ji, itni kadwahat uss bechari bachi ke liye, kya kasoor kya hai uska? Woh anaath hai isliye?" Kaushi says "Ji, khaana tayaar hai, main laga deti hoon." Kaushi takes the bowl and leaves; PC looks on at her and is upset.

Ragini is on the terrace and is crying, she has flashbacks when she was told that she was adopted, and remembers kaushi's hatred towards her. PC comes on the terrace and sees Ragini in tears. He lovingly calls Ragini. Hearing her name, ragini quickly wipes away her tears and turns to look at PC. Ragini says "Bauji? Aap." PC walks up to her and says "Kaushalya ji ki baat ne tera dil dukhaya hai na?" Ragini is looking down. "Beta, aapni ma ki baato ka bura mat maan na. tu toh jaanti hai na, ki woh kaisi hai." Ragini looks up and says "Bauji, maine ma ki baat ka bura nahi maana. Maine apne ma bauji ko toh kabhi dekha nahi hai, jabse hosh sambhala hai bas aapko aur ma ji aur apne ma bauji maana hai. Agar unhone keh diya ki main unki beti nahi hoon, toh main maan loongi kya? Aap dekhiyega ek na ek din woh mujhe zaroor apnaayengi." PC has teary eyes and he smiles. He slightly pats her on her head and says "Jeeti Reh beta." Ragini smiles. "SUNIYE KHAANA LAG GAYA HAI, AA JAAIYE." Calls out kaushi. Pc says "JI AAYA." He looks at Ragini and says "Chal beta, naashta tayaar hai." Ragini smiles, PC takes Ragini with her.

Kaushi sets he table up, Ragini comes with PC. Pc looks at Ragini and then at kaushi. He says "Kaushalya ji, aap baithiye, Ragini khaana serve kardegi." Ragini looks at PC, PC nods at her smilingly. Kaushi says "Iski koi..." "Zaroor hai kaushalya ji." Interrupts PC. "Baithiye..." Kaushi looks at Ragini and then at PC. She sits down with PC. Ragini smiles and begins to serve. Malti and Vinu also join for breakfast. Vinu smells the aroma and says "Arrey wah ma, khushboo toh bohut achi aa rahi hai." Kaushi smiles. Ragini says "Bhaiya, aaj maine aapke fav samose banaye hai." Kaushi's smile fades away. Vinu smiles and says "arrey toh jaldi lao na." Ragini smiles and she brings the samosas from the kitchen and very lovingly gives it to Vinu. Vinu takes a bite and says "Wah, Ragini tumhare samose ka toh jawaab nahin." Kaushi doesn't smile. Vinu offers the samosa to malti, malti says 'Aap hi khaaiye." She looks at Ragini. "Mujhe samose pasand nahin." Ragini's smile fades away. Vinu says "ab tum nahin khaana chahti toh mat khao...waise bhi tumhe kya pata ki Samose ka taste kya hota hai...woh bhi Ragini ke haath ke baney huye. Ragini...mujhe aur samose do." Ragini smiles and gives more samosa's to Vinu. PC says "Bhai, paranthe toh roz khaate hai, par samose kabhi kabhi milte hai, hum bhi samose khaayenge." Ragini serves PC samosas aswell, she is about to place a samosa on Kaushi's plate but Kaushi says "main nahin loongi." Ragini holds herself back and says "Ma, main toh bhool hi gayi, aapko toh toh yeh sab khaana mana hai, koi baat nahin, aapke liye kichdi bani hai. " Ragini puts some kichdi in a bowl and gives it to kaushi. Kaushi takes the bowl and eats the kichdi.

*KNOCK KNOCK* someone knocks on the door, Ragini says 'Main dekhti hoon." Ragini opens the door and says "Aa gayi tu?" On the door stands Ragini's childhood friend Neha. Neha smiles and gives her a hug. Kaushi annoyed and says "Lo aa gayi..." PC says "Kaushalya ji please." Kauhi remains quiet. Neha enters and says "Namaste Bauji, namaste ma." Pc smiles and says "Namaste beta aao aao andar aao." Neha says "Nahin bauji main thodi jaldi mein hoon, main toh aap sab ko apne shaadi ka invitation dene aayi thi." Ragini is surprised and says "Shaadi? Teri? Aur tu ab bata rahi hai." Neha says "Ragini, sab itna jaldi hogaya ki, bata hi nahi paayi..." everyone congratulates her. Vinu says "bechara ladka." Neha says "Bhaiya? Bechara kyun?" Vinu says "Usse nahin pata ki uske kisse paala padhne waala hai...shaadi ke baad rote huye aayega." Everyone laughs. Neha says "Bhaiya..." Vinu says "Mazaak kar raha hoon." Neha smiles and says "Shaadi agle hafte hai, aur aap sab ko aana hai." Ragini says, "Hum zaroor aayenge." Neha says "tujhe toh abhi chalna hai mere saath, ab se ek haft eke liye tu mere yahaan rahegi, samjhi." PC smiles. Ragini says "Main? Uhhh...neha..." Neha says "Kya neha? Bauji ki ijaazat chahiye?" Neha turns to face PC and says "Bauji, kya aapki pyaari beti ragini ko ek haft eke liye apne saath lekar jaa sakti hoon?" PC samiles and says "Haan zaroor. Ragini, beta ja jaakar packing karle." Neha cheers with excitement and takes Ragini along to ragini's room and helps her to pack her things and both go downstairs.

Neha says "Bauji aapki beti ko lekar jaa rahi hoon ek hafte ke liye." PC smiles. Ragini takes PC and Kaushi's blessings; Kaushi dryly says "Jeeti raho." Neha says "Chaley Ragini?" Ragini nods. Both leave.

Kaushi says "shukar hai, kuch dino ke liye bala tali." Kaushi walks off, followed by Malti. Vinu and PC look upset. Vinu says "Na Jaane Ma kab Ragini ki kadar hogi." PC nods and says "Vinu beta tujhe office jaane ke liye der ho rahi hogi." Vinu says "Ji...chalta hoon bauji." Vinu takes his bag and leaves for work. PC is in thoughts.

Precap: Ragini is at Neha's and is planning out the sangeet for her 😳 A pole is about to fall on neha, ragini saves her, but then ladies begin to talk about how unlucky Ragini really is, leaving her upset!😭

Edited by Sweet_Deep - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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deep 😭😭😭sbse pehle to mera dil abhi se bher aaya hai main Ragini awwww omg poor Ragini ske sath Kaushi n Malthi arghh loved vnu bhaiya n Bauji lol aur bus icant wait to se our hero to come n tke his dulhaniya hahaa.hailah i m so excited for Nehas weding😳😳😳but preview made me😭😭😭UF IT SEEEMS is FF mein Ragi ko bht kuch sehna hoga.udate the next part jadi Deep jaldi hero ko bhi le a nits Just to good lovely cant waitt now


Edited by SanihaKaKinshuk - 15 years ago
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deep awesome yar 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwww deep, that was such a sweet chapter. I really loved Ragini's character in this FF. LOVED IT. Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Deep!
Loveleeee promo and a great update,sweets!
Keep it up!🤗
Looking forward for the update..Keep up the wonderful work!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I luved it.Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
thank you guys 😃
Saniha I am stil awaiting fr your comments 😉
Note: Ranvir will not be in the FF right now...he'll enter a while later!
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deep deep deep its awesome i don't have words👏 mari koi padha na padha teri sab padha ga lol

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