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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
don't say thanx simo 😃
acha JTYJN padhlena...saalekh treat 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-5

All four reaches practice hall.they do hye-hello nd mv towadrs practice.sagini cums wearing practice dress.sadi wears balck nd green and ragi wears red nd blck.they both say to rahul nd dhruv to first combine steps wid them .sagini does supervv but both guys bcum unable to match wid them.sadhna shoutsTUM LOG SE EK BHI STEP ACHCHE SE NAHI HOTE! ragi sees finger to rahul nd sys rahul aayinda sa mazak kiya na dance mein toh MUJHSE BURA KOI NAHI HOGA.on the oder hand,raunit enters wid his gf who hals also taken part in it wid his sis in comp.raunit takes his cell and calls alevir.he asks that where they r?they r reply just turn.he turns and finds alevir standing there.raunit sys,'thnk god tum dono aa gyea yaar plzz help me in this salsa yaar.alekh sys agar tujhse nahi hota hai toh tune part kyu liya hmmm??raunit replies due to her gf plzz understand.rv sys ok we will help u.then alevir nd raunit and his gf enters in hall for practising.hall was partly divided in repective room wid standard facilities.sagini and dhruv and rahul were in pt no.2 whereas alevir wid runit were in pt.no4.ragini stands and sys ,"ok..lets practice one more time aur agar tum dono se achche se nahi hua toh dekhna!!"ragini warns very sharply and dhru nd rahul stucks to each oder."raunit dekh salsa bahut hi passionate dancing hai,means isme itne stlye se perform karna hota hai kii aah....."rv stops"ki..tumhe audience ko jaddu se apne taraf aakarshit karna hoga aur woh sirf aur sirf tumhe hi dekhte reh jaaye."alekh cont.here in room no.2 music is plying sagini tries to dance wid thier repective prtners but both guys mistakely step on sagin's legs and all time sagini gets hurts.finally they left.on oder way alekh plys salsa song"pyaar ki yeh kahani.."and raunit do wid his gf.but they mistk always.alevir tries really hard 4-5 times to mk him undertsand but all in failure."ragini main ek min paani pi kar aati hu"ragini nods ok and take to bring for her also.dhruv and rahul sys to bring for them also but sadhna gives a very-angry look and they shut.sumone calls raunit to tk this entry card but alekh moves to tk and sys do practice rv si showing...sadhna reaches to water driniking area.she takes one glass and drinks.she relaxes.meanwhile alekh moves to manager who is distributing entry-card.alekh gives name and take it and sadi also turns whiel taking glass.she gets shocked to see alekh and alekh also.TUM!tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..ohh achcha tumhe toh ladkiyon se misbehave karne ki aadat hai..toh phir dacne mein kaise hmm?" sadi cont alekh sys"excuse me!tumhe toh baat tak karne ki tammez nahi hai aur i m sure tumhara partner tumhare bare mein mere taraha hi sochta hoga"OH GOD HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!"sumone shouts saalekh and ragi hears."oh god ranveer ko ab kya ho gaya ihv to go"alekh goes and sadi also.raginii undrstands ki this is same guy means ranveer.alekh reaches thereand asks wat happen.rv sys ki raunit is unable to do salsa..alekh sys ok hum hi unhe achche se karke dikha te hai.sadi gives a glaas of water to drink.meanwhile she drinking ki on stadge song loudly plays and ragi gigless bcoz of water.sagini surprises and moves towards stadge.the song"pyaar ki kahani"plays.one side alekh and one side rv was standing and they thought whom to take and then they takes salha the assistant magaer of programme to dance as she is excellemnce in dancing.sagini reachws there by moving crowd.they both dance wid salha.salha feeling so lucky between these two guys as alevir were looking amazing will dancing.ranveer gies hand to salha and she dances wid him then alekh gives hadn then wid alekh.and song finishes wid amazing performance.sagini have their mouth open.both sys pappus can dance.then dhruv and rahul came by searching sagini.they take them wid them.all congratutlate alevir for their super-performance.a girl cam sanjana hugs tigtly alevir.alevir shocks.she sys"wow awsome super mindblowing omg guyss tum dono toh GOD OF DANCE HO really i luv u guysss.alevir surprises.thn sanju continues by huggin.u must tk part yaar.alekh sys ahh..no no we r just here to help our frnd raunit.raunit cums out from crowd.sanju and salha mk sad face and say kashh!tum dono hote! by the way nice to meet u comp me milenge..bye..alevir cums from stadge.dhruv sys oh ghosh teunlog kaha chali gayi thi kitna dunda mili hi nahi kher chalo ab practice karte hai sagini sys"soory we r tired now we have to go home by!!" dhruv and rahul was about to sy sumthing ki the went off.meanwhile sagini were going alevir cames in their infront in their red ferrari and gives sagini a look by moving thier googles.sagini looks shock.the camera shows eyes of sa togeder then rr togeder.soon they move off.

Coming up:alevir r teasing sagini by singing song"lakh-lakh nakre rehn de" and competition begins.1st round[a suspense.....]
sorry guys this part is too short but next part will big as usual.
do comment soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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simi great chap loves ragvir and saalekh part. Keep going you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmm simo mindblowing chapter yaar. Loved it to the max . Eagerly waiting for the next chap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angkidiwani

hmm simo mindblowing chapter yaar. Loved it to the max . Eagerly waiting for the next chap.

will updt soon😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-6

Sagini reaches sharma house wid surprising face.PC watches them and asks wat happen? they say nothing jst tired by dancing practice.sagiini moves to their respective rooms.sadhna opens the door and puts her bag and moves to wash-off.she is thinking ia alekh takign part??she sys to herself"cum on sadi dont think soo much if u wil think more will get tension more aur waise bhi tujhse aur ragini se best koi nahi hain so no worry".she smiles and moves towards bathroom.ragini too enters her room.she throws her bag in angrily."oh ghosh yeh ladka duffer bhi isme hai,omg ab yeh toh hume harane ke liye jee-thod mehent karenge..mujhe sadhna ne se kehna hoga kii oh ho uske paas jaati ho" she moves towards sadi's room meanwhile malti tries to stop her to tell sumthing but she doesnt listens and cont going.malti thinks ki shayad gussa saatwe aashmaan par hai.she moves .ragine enters sadi's room.she is shuoting SADHNA..SADHNAAA... sadi cums wearing face-pack on her face.ragi smiles and assks wat is this?she replies just being ready for competiton,only two days r left.ragi thinks sumthing and sys"2 din...OMG sadhnaaa[sadi screams as ragi shouts]ahh..sorry sorry u see dhruv aur rahul toh ekdum bhi hamare se fit nahi beth rahe hai..tujhe samajh nahi aata " sadi sys'uff ho ragini relax plzz hamare taal se taal uhne hi milaana hoga aur koi nahi hai hamare pass.u knw na..hume kabhi bhi bst prtners milte hi nahi hai..i hope koi toh hota haamamre liye!!" 'ranvir...woh do ladkiyan bhi ismein hai!oh god main toh unke partners ke bare mein soch raha hu"alekh sys rv rlies"yes alekh imagine woh logo toh bechare gyae" they laugh do five.

nxt morning ,sagini cums to practice hall.they see dhruv and rahul waiting 4 there.they go to chnge and strt practice.then raunit with his gf and alevir cums.raunit nd his gf was practising.soon an anooucnemt cums by sanjana ki due to some problems dance competiton ki going to held tommorw.sagini shocks so full.raunit sits on ground.alekh sees it .he aksk kya hua?raunit sys oh shitt itne kam samay mein mujhse kuch nahi hone wala maine toh socha tha ki mere paas aur 1 din hai par ab woh bhi nahi hai.ranveer mkes him undertsnads ki practice in his house also then he can be preapre."sadhna dekha na..ab isse achca hoga ki hum uss comp se apna naam hata le nahi toh inke saath[here ragi hits both guys]hum kabhi nahi jeet paayenge."sadi mkes angry face to both guys."ragini humne inhe kitna sikhaya par yeh hai ki urrgghhhh...kya bolo.."both girls rudely go from there.they cum out chnaging ad sys ab jasie bhi jo jhah tak sikhe ho usi haal mein kal comp mein aa jaana hume maaf karo humse aur nahi hoga. BYE!!"both girl moves off.alevir watches this smiles mischiviously and moves outside.sagini were going ki they hears some dhol-music.htye they turn and saw ki alevir r cuming wid group of boys in dancing mood and wid them dhruv and rahul also cums[actually alevir mk them mk they r not in mood to cum bcoz they r afraid of sagin's anger].as soon as alevir cums more close sagini runs.sagini's frndz also cum there to catch them bt get surrounds by boys.

alekh sings, lakh-lakh nakhre rehen de..chale na tere koi pehtre[by pointing dhruv]

rv sings,llakh-lakh nakhre rehen de..chale na tere koi pehtre.[by pointing rahul]

both sings' sangli badan waliyee oh sangli badan waliyee.

sagini tries to move up but dont alevir surrounds them and saingd and dance.they r showing ki they do thousands of work but cant mk good dancing pair wid dhruv-rahul they will lose.sagini had some anger.

then alekh cums infront of sadhna and sings"raga ka bag leke chali kaha uyi maa...maslegi hil neeche kiska dil uyi maa.."rv sings to ragi"raga ka bag leke chali kaha uyi maa...maslegi hil neeche kiska dil uyi maa.."then allu mk dhruv dance by standing him behind[it is funny to wacth]"tere akka da laskara tere lak da hu lara[2]rv sings by mking rahul dance"tujhko dalte hai dana-dana.."both bro joins and dance infront of sagini,llakh-lakh nakhre rehen de..chale na tere koi pehtresangli badan waliyee oh sangli badan waliyee[2]

then finally sagin cums out..but they thinks wrong there also alevir cums finally by running and jumping and dacne arround sagini funnily.alekh puts his hand on sadi's shoulder and sings"gusse da bhaar tere baas da nahi na..[sadi jhoks her shoulder]alekh smiles.ranvir sings"mere hi jaisa tujhe jachega kammena[ragi shcoks but soon rv mk rahul stand infront tht he is tellign abt rahul]rv sings"gusse da bhaar tere baas da nahi na..[he is running behind ragini and ragi also running][jst so funny to watch] alekh runs behind sadhna by tking dhruv and singign"mere hi jaisa tujhe jachega kammena.."[sadi is king so funny face by running].dhruv and rahul sings'nahi toh inni-mini soni mere layyek nahi honi[2] sagin sees eye to them.alevri cums from side "yu hi jhel raha tujhe jana-jana"finally lstlyy all boys aga sings songs and sagin raches to their car and moves out from there.alevir luaghs so nicely nd do a high five.and pulls dhruv and rahul's cheek naughtily.

Finally the day of competiton cums,sagini r doing packing for reahcing to comp.kaushi cums and gives aarti to both girl.she sys tht she will definaltely won this comp.GOD is wid them.sagini wacthes each oder wid lil sad face.then PC also cums and sys wow my both daughter r ready.today they will definately rock.sagin hugs PC.PC gives kiss on both's head.ragini asks dad we will na??PC smiles and sys arre why not..u r best ur partners r best toh phir?sagin aga watches eac oder wid great sad face.then kaushi sys now to move oderwise they will get late..sagini tks their bags and moves to competion palce.there in rajwansh house.alekh faslty cums out from bathing. he has worn a v-shaped,to chest size,a green t-shirt wid designs on middle and a stylish blck jeans.he tks his watch and just move out. there rv also cums out wearing a blcak round neck t-shirt wid written lost of jumbk=led nos in it and a stlyish light blue jeans wid a thick jakcet of light grey colour.both cums downsatirs and sys tht htye must reach soon oderwise they'll late.they infrom vasu ki dosesnt have time to do breakfast but vasu mk them eat lil.they soon move out but sys tht raunit is going to perform he is his so close frnd so mom dad u mst cum.vasu-inder agrees.sagini's car stops.they faslty cums out.they tires to find whether dhruv-rahul cum or not,bt they didnt see their car.sadhna get worried but ragi sys n worry they will cum.then they go inside.just they go alevir cums by their red merceedes wid open air.they stops slightly.they cums out from car and enters.sagini enteres in their green room and alevir enters in raunit's green-room.alevir hugs raunit."dude...dunt worry aaj tumhi jeetoge.teri takkar koi nahi hai"all sys rv also sys"ha yaar no prob everything will be prefect hmm..waise sonia kaha hai" he sys ki usne toh mujhe pehle se hi keh diya hai kii agar main yeh comp hara toh hamara break-up..waise woh apne green-room me ready ho rahi hai..alevir smils.raunit aksk wat?they sys nothing..Soon competion strts.host cums and wlecoms all guests and audiences.one side full boys and girls were stiitng and on oder side some parents and oder audinces were sitting.the MEGA-DANCE competiton strts.sagini's frnd make them out oin bckstagde to show oders performance and sys them to do better than any oder group.Sadhna has worn a long sleevless red frock wid open hair and haivng some hari red in colour and is looking stunning.ragi had wore a skin colour sleevless top short wid sliver desings on it wid a skin-sliver mix color thin slakes trouser and had ponid her hair long lookign like sweet amazing.. then backly sanjana cums and sys ki u both r ready na..iske baad jo perfromance hai uske baad aap dono ka hai hmm ok" sanju moves off.ragini sys omg rahul-dhruv abui tak nahi aaye hai.sadi cums in mood of crying.soon backly alevir cums to see perfromance.sadi sys omg ab kya kare ragni mujhe bahut darr lag araha hai inhone hume ain waqt par dhokha diya..'ragi tires to call them but it sys switch off.sagini's frnd neha points towards alevir to tk as partners.sagin sys wat r u mad?/woh..woh hamari madad kyu karnege naahii..kabhi nahi.." neha sys cum on yaar abhi jhagda chodo abhi hume help len hi hoga its ur good luck ki woh log comp mein nahi hai..so go ask them 4 help!"sadi sys no..no..it is impossible.ragi sys sadhna..chalo help magte haii lts try.." neha do sihara to alevir 1st they dunt see and soon they see nd cums there.they r shocked ot see sagini there.neha tells all thing.alevir gets surprises.alekh sys'KYA??[neha screams]mujhe bewakoof samajh rakha hai jo main iske saath danc karonga..[sadi downs her face sadly]aur wiase bhi woh thappad mujhe aaj tak yaad hai so sorry.[sadi watches alekh wid sad mood]rv also replies by watching ragi"aur main..mujhe bhi kisi se thappad kha ke uske mada karne ki zarooorat nahi hai..[ragi watches to rv].sadhna sys plzz plzz main us galti ke liye haath jhodkar maafi mangti ho..plzz help us' " ha..main bhi tumse sorry bolti ho plzz help'alevir watches to each oder.and sys NO..SORRY.. aur waise bhi hamara nst frnd hai isme so no help.they move 4m there.sagini had tears in their eyes.soon tht performance also ends..and hos announces their name...host sys now their is gropu of two sis after two bros.their name is SAGINI ,means sadhna and ragini.so plzz now 1st i want to call sadhna and his partnet to plzz perform.sadhna sys ragini main jaa kar hamara naam iss comp se haata leti hu..ragin wid teraly eyes sys ok..their all frnds r in bad mood.sadhna is slowly moving towards stadge.all claps wen sadi cums.PC kaushi,malti vinu all gives A zrodar clap.sadi is giivign fake smile.host puts hand over mike and sys aapka partner kaha hai??sadi abt to sys ki suddnely music plys and lights off and host sys aapne bataya nahi aapka partner aa chuka hai..ah.... main jata ho"sadhna is 1stly so shock..who is there ragi and all frndz r alos in surprise mood.soon 4m oder side alekh cums by wearing a shining red full sleeve loose v-shp shirt undersuit wid a lose balck stlyish paint.[SRK WORE IN SONG"LOVE MERA HIT-HIT" 4M BILLU BARBER] sadi is so surprise to see alekh.vasu-inder also shocks.soon bc dancers cum and sadi firstly strst dancing in surprise bt soon alekh mk her comfort.while dancing they r soo close to each oder.all girls and boys in audience strts dancinf wid them in soo cheer.all girls shouts by watching them.ragi is so happy tht sadi is perfromiing so well wid alekh.alekh mke some new moves and turns in dacne.at the end alekh picks up sadi in great way and slowly mk her down.they r never close b4 like this in dance as they cum.soon they cum out of stadge.sadhna cums and hugs ragi.ragi thnks alekh to help sadhna.alekh is in no mood wid tlaking wid them.he goes from there.sadi watches him.then host announces ragi's name.sadi sys no worry woh bhi aayega...'ragi goesbut she has fear in her heart.as ragi tks second step music plays rv cums out waering from oder side waeirng a full white t-shirt wid half sleevless thin blezer wid shiny blue jeans.they do dance on"love me-love me" from film wanted.agan audience shuots loudly.vasu-inder aga watches to ranveer wid surprise mood.ragivr r dancing so koolin this song.and just like saalekh sumtimes thy cum so close ki they didnt knw it.they also do one exctitn g move in dance by which audeince amazed.sadi also got very happyy..and then they finishes dance by ragini sitting on rv's lap.then they cums out of stadge.sadi hugs ragi in hapy way.she also thnks rv rv gave a fake smile and sys maine aur alekh ne bas iss round ke liye aapki madad kar di hope agar aap final mein pahuche toh jo romantic sequence pe dance karna hai wh hhume na larna pade..kyunki tum dono ke saath hum bhai romance.." alekh cums sys"kabhi nahi.."sagini surprises.they cmare shows forusome faces by side and ends by showing their faces pairly togeder.

coming UP:will alevir help sagini in dacne or will sagini get selected4 final.yet raunit is not aware of this will he??

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
very good.. haha t'm listing to Tu jane na song right now of Ajab prem
ki ghazab kahani heheh..
Very nice chap.. I want to read more... Please uptade soon.. :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woh!!a very cute one...
please update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
woohhhhh i love this song😉 and a big 🤗 hug for u for making this chapter soooo beautiful. I just loved it simo keep it up 👍🏼.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤗thnks to my alll 3 awsome guys 4 reading my ff i will try to updt soon hp my all frdz read soon

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