i write song for ragvir & saaalkh piya - Page 2

Originally posted by: *queenme*

thanks yaar.. i tried.. lol.. umm i made one up for ragvir too..:

Piya o piya sawariya


dil main is bechaini ki koi wajah hai kya
toota toota daaman mera karoon main kya
maine sab kuch toh kho diya o beliya
tu saamne phir bhi lagta mujhe adhura sa..

diya dil diya o sajana
tu saamne aur tere milne ko tarse jiya

jinko sab se zyada pyar tha wohi juda hain
ab lagta hai kuch bhi nahi theek ho raha hai
maafi ke bhi kaabil nahi parivaar mera
tu saamne phir bhi lagta mujhe adhura sa..

let me kno what u guys think,..,, first verse for ragini n second for ranvir...

Originally posted by: KiNnY-pArTnEr

Huh i coudlnt find my old topic i wrtei song piya with new lyrices and also write new song for ragvir as well😉

~~For Saalkh~~

ek pyaar ka mausom tha

jisme hum savarne lage the

jo tumne mere liya kiya woh koi hor kar na paaya

tujko kaise kahoon jaaniya

tu hai meri jaan.

ab yeh dil dhadke ga sirf teri liya o saatiya

ab aaja wapas kaise jeoon main tere bina jaaniyna😉

~~~~For Ragvir~~~

pal pal tu mukskaro

teri khamoshi hi meri bandgi hai

teri khushbo mera sanseo mein basi hoye hai is tara

na ji payagne tera bina na mar payenga

ab tu hi meri har sada ki khushi hai

😉

be honest tel me how is it😃😆

plz do cmment and let me know how is it

i accept every kind of comments😆

Originally posted by: Crimson_Sky

Great song Sania...

Here is something by me:

~~~ Sadhna ~~~~
Ek sapna, maine dekha... (soft music)

...Maine dekha tujhe paas... (jingles)
Tere akhon mein mera chera tha... (jingles)
Teri khushboo main meri har saans.... (twinkles)

O mere sathiya (echo), mere hamsafar (echo)...O mereee hamnawaaz... (loud orchestra!)

.............xxxx.............xxxxx.......................xxxxxx.............

~~~~RagVir~~~~~~~

Hum ho...tum ho.... ab kya hai fikar... (ding ding ding)
Pass aa, na ja... a - a - O jaane jigaar!... (rock)
Ab na koi hai idhaaar!!!! (drums...rolll)
Chal...pyaar karen... chal pyar karein.... ikraar karin...OOO...izhar karein!!! (drums beat)

Originally posted by: scrpngl

WOW..Sania...amazing song.. 👏 😳
so cute! 😳

Originally posted by: *queenme*

aww those are all really nice.. heres my try.. on the tune of piya o piya:

saalekh:

Piya O Piya Sawariya
Tu Saamne Aur Tere Milne Ko Tarse Jiya

Vaada kiya jo maine woh main nibha nahi paya
Sab kuch jaanke bhi main kuch bhi kehnahi paya
Tu har pal mujhko samajti hai o jaaniya
Tum aa gayi aur sau khushiyon ne sajdaa kiya...

Piya O Piya Sawariya
Tu saamne aur tere milne ko tarse jiya

Pyar main karti hoon tumse aur karti rahoongi
chahe jitni door hoon main tumhe yaad karoongi
Shaadi koi khel toh nahi o saathiya
Tu saamne aur main hogayi ek paraaya...