||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
Anytime Sanju! 😊

Ooh, cant wait for chapter 4! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 4

"Tum?" Ranvir and Ragini say sounding shocked. "Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho? Asks Ragini angrily. "Main yahaan kya kar raha hoon matlab? Mere ghar mein aake mujhi se pooch rahi ho ki main yahaan kya kar raha hoon? Yeh sawaal toh mujhe tumse poochna chahiye, kit um, meri ghar mein, meri party mein kya kar rahi ho?" Replies Ranvir angrily 😆 "Tumhara ghar? Tum jaisa loafer or Rajvansh?" says Ragini surprisingly. Ranvir Responds surprisingly "Kya? Loafar? Dekho…" Aalekh interups "uhhhh….I guess you guys have already met" "Bro, yeh humari party mein kya kar rahi hai?" asks ranvir. "Ranvir, yeh humare business partner Vineet Sharma Ki Behn hai. aur yeh sadhna, sadhna Sharma, vineet aur Ragini Sharma ki behn" responds aalekh. "ek minute yeh jungly billi aapki behn hai? aap itni sundar hai ki…" Ragini looks at ranvir in anger, sadhna trying to stop her laugh by covering her mouth with her hand slightly "I mean you gotta be joking…it's a joke right?" continues ranvir "Nahi Ranvir, Ragini sach mein meri behn hai." says saadhna laughingly. "Ranvir dissappointgly says "oh god, this can't happen, here we have beauty and on the other ms beast 😆" Ragini turns around in shock. "you think you're very smart?" asks ragini sarcasticly. "Correction, I don't think I am smart I Know I'm smart" Ragini looks the other way in anger as Ranvir provokes her by saying "kya hua? Mujhe den eke liye gaaliya soch rahi ho? 😆" "Main tum jaiso ke muh nahi lagna chahti" replies ragini in anger. "Mujh jaise ladko ko…oh waise ab tak mere jaise kitne ladko mil chuki ho?" Asks ranvir sarcastically while ragini looks at him in anger. "okay, that's it both you. Cut it now. Jhagdana bandh karo ab please" interrupts aalekh. "C'mon ragini, tum toh iske peeche hi padh gayi ho, I mean he's so sweet" adds Sadhna. "Sweet my foot. Sadhna tumhe pata nahi isne mere saath aaj kya kya kiya. Pehle mujhse administration office mein takraya, phir college ke bahar takraya aur mujhe keechad mein gira diya, uske baad ismein itni bhi decency nahi hai ki apologise kar sakey" Ragini says to sadhna in anger. "wait wait wait, isne tumhe keechad mein giraya?" interrupts aalekh. "bhaiya galati se gira diya tha" replies ranvir. Aalekh says "agar galati se giraya that oh tumne apologise karni chahiye thi…jo ke….." Ranvir adds "nahi ki, aur karunga bhi nahi. Aap jaante nahi bhaiya isne mujhse kya kya kaha." "Ranvir, galati tumhari thi, tumhe apologise karna chahiye" explains Aalekh. Ranvir disappointingly turns the otherway. "Ranvir, apologise karne se koi chotta bada nahi ho jaata, chalo apologise karo" Ranvir disappointingly looks at aalekh and then at ragini in anger. "Okay…I'm Sorry" Ragini smirks he expressions tell ranvir You lost! "NOT: add ranvir and walks off leaving the three surprised. Aalekh turns to ragini and apologises to her on his brother behalf. Ragini says it's okay, but whatever she is thinking is not so good for ranvir 😆. Everyone is on the dance floor. Aalekh offers sadhna to dance with him along with sadhna happily accepting his offer and joins him with a dance. Ragini walks around the party while looking at Saalekh dance. Ranvir notices Ragini walking around. He mischievously walks towards her and puts his feet forward, Ragini trips and is about to fall but Ranvir catches her. Ragini angrily looks at him. "Dekh kar chala karo." Says Ranvir. Ragini pushes him away and walks off.

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Saalekh are doing a close dance. A soft piece of music is playing "So, Sadhna aap apne bare mein kuch bataiye" says alekh. Sadhna laughs and says "well, main ek khuli kitaab ki tarah hoon, waise aap kya jaan na chahte hain?" Aalekh responds laughingly "main kya jaan na chahta hoon, kuch bhi bata dijiye, chaliye apni pasand aur napasand se shuru kardijiye" "Well mujhe book padhna bohut acha lagta hai." Says saadhna. "Wow, books….kis type ki books achi lagti hai aapko? Asks aalekh. "well mujhe har kisam ki books achi lagti hai, but main romantic novels zayda padti hoon" says saadhna. "Romantic.? Toh aap pyaar mein belive karti hai?" asks Aalekh. "Kyun aap nahi karte ? responds Sadhna. "Karta hoon, isiliye toh aapse poocha" Says aalekh in a low voice. "ji? Aapne kuch kaha? Asks sadhna "Ji nahi main toh bas yeh keh raha tha ki… aapki favourtie book koun si hai?" asks Aalekh "Love story by Erich segal" replies Sadhna. "hmmmmm, maine suna hai is book ke barey mein par kabhi padhi nahi." Says aalekh. "Kabhi firsat miley toh padhiye ga, bothu achi kitaab hai." Replies Sadhna. "ab aapne recommend ki hai, phir toh padhni hi padegi" says Aalekh. Sadhna smiles at aalekh. They have a silent moment. Both completely lost in each others eyes, they didn't even realise that the song is over, until everyone starts to clap. Saalekh come to their senses and let go of each other and start to clap.

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Ragini calls out to sadhna. sadhna excuses herself and goes to Ragini. Ragini says "sadhna chalo dinner karte hain." Sadhna happily leaves with Ragini. Ragini and sadhna put food in their plates. "sadhna, tujhe aalekh ache lagte hain kya?" asks Ragini. "sadhna hesistatntly says "nahin. I mean waise nahi….tu..tu kyun pooch rahi hai?" Ragini says "Nahin, maine isliye poocha kyunki mujhe lagta hai aalekh rajvansh tujhe pasand karta hai" Sadhna surprisingly looks at Ragini and asks "Tujhe aisa kun lagta hai?" Ragini happily replies "kyun ki woh tujhe dekh rahe hai." Sadhna is about turn but Ragini says "Wahaan mat dekh, thodi der rukja, thodi der mein woh humare paas aayenge." Sadhna doesn't turn and continues to put food in her plate. Sadhna and Ragini sit on the table with their food. After a while, Aalekh and Ranvir also serve themselves and aalekh is walking towards Saadhna and Ragini's Table, ranvir sees this and asks "Bro, aap wahaan kyun jaa rahe hai? Wahaan woh billi baithi hai, c'mon hum kahin aur baith te hain" "Ranvir, mujhe sadhna se business ki kuch baat karni hai, please." Says aalekh. Ranvir isn't too happy but agrees to sit with them. Ragini says "dekha sadhna, maine kya kaha tha ki aalekh yahi aayenge…aur yeh LANGOOR? Yeh bhi?" "sadhna says "ragini please, ab tum usse jhagda mat shuru kardena" Ragini says disappointingly "koshish karungi" Aalekh and Ranvir reach Sadhna and Ragini's table "excuse me, agar aapko aitraaz nah ho, toh kya hum yahaan baith sakte hai?" asks aalekh. "uhhhh..ofcourse, please baithiye" says Sadhna. Ragini chuckles, sadhna hits her with her elbow. Sadhna and Aalekh get talking while Ranvir and Ragini give each other evil looks while eating. Ranvir asks the waiter for water. There was only one glass of water and Ragini takes it before Ranvir does. "Eh, yeh paanimaine mangaya tha, yeh mera hai." Ranvir yells. "oh really? Well glass pehle maine uthaya tha." Responds Ragini teasingly. Saalekh look at ragvir fight. "Not again" says aalekh. "Maine kaha, yeh paani maine managaya tha, do mujhe." Yells Ranvir. "Paani chahiye?" asks Ragini. "Haan" responds Ranvir. Ragini smiles and throws water on Ranvir as she says "Yeh Lo paani" Ranvir is surprised and angry at the same time.😲😡

Precap: ragini is driving the car, and accidently hits Ranvir.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuu i m loving RagVir fights yaaaaaaaaaaaar subsepehle to i m so happy tht i read the scene subse pehleeeeeeeee

ek minute yeh jungly billi aapki behn hai? aap itni sundar hai ki?" Ragini looks at ranvir in anger,🤣 My Goddddddddd🤣
Ragini walking around. He mischievously walks towards her and puts his feet forward, Ragini trips and is about to fall but Ranvir catches her. Ragini angrily looks at him. "Dekh kar chala karo." Says Ranvir. Ragini pushes him away and walks off.😍
aur yeh LANGOOR? Yeh bhi🤣

Sanju i m thinking of posting this FF link to RS..cuz i m dying to watch all thiss on TV yaar i reallyy wnt Bidaai sequell

Awesome previeww is Deffooo Awesomee i cant waittttttttttttttttttttttttttt👏
Acha Do read my captionss sanjuuu Maine new banaye hainn😉😆

Edited by SanihaKaKinshuk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG sanju di, the bestest part so far

loving RagVir ke fights and SaAlekh ka silent love story

i can already imagine the loe story between this jungli billi and langoor 🤣🤣🤣

I LOVED this part
Ragini walking around. He mischievously walks towards her and puts his feet forward, Ragini trips and is about to fall but Ranvir catches her. Ragini angrily looks at him. "Dekh kar chala karo." Says Ranvir. Ragini pushes him away and walks off.😍😍,

this part was seriously very cute, loved the way they keep on fighting every time they meet.
the preview sounds awesome now i m dying to read the next part
update it soon di

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SanihaKaKinshuk

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuu i m loving RagVir fights yaaaaaaaaaaaar subsepehle to i m so happy tht i read the scene subse pehleeeeeeeee

ek minute yeh jungly billi aapki behn hai? aap itni sundar hai ki?" Ragini looks at ranvir in anger,🤣 My Goddddddddd🤣
Ragini walking around. He mischievously walks towards her and puts his feet forward, Ragini trips and is about to fall but Ranvir catches her. Ragini angrily looks at him. "Dekh kar chala karo." Says Ranvir. Ragini pushes him away and walks off.😍
aur yeh LANGOOR? Yeh bhi🤣

Sanju i m thinking of posting this FF link to RS..cuz i m dying to watch all thiss on TV yaar i reallyy wnt Bidaai sequell

Awesome previeww is Deffooo Awesomee i cant waittttttttttttttttttttttttttt👏
Acha Do read my captionss sanjuuu Maine new banaye hainn😉😆

🤣
m gald ur loving them heheehehee...
M glad too k u read the scene first 😊
heheh tere yeh scene fav hain? 😆
mine was the last scene...🤣 ragini throws water on Ranvir's face...now this is something i'd like to see...
hehehhee..lol...bhej de bhej de...atleast the creatives will get some ideas from us...and really i want RS' next show to be something like this....enough with the family shows now...I want something for youngsters...i also suggested it to him.
yup I'll just read your captions 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

OMG sanju di, the bestest part so far

loving RagVir ke fights and SaAlekh ka silent love story

i can already imagine the loe story between this jungli billi and langoor 🤣🤣🤣

I LOVED this part

Ragini walking around. He mischievously walks towards her and puts his feet forward, Ragini trips and is about to fall but Ranvir catches her. Ragini angrily looks at him. "Dekh kar chala karo." Says Ranvir. Ragini pushes him away and walks off.😍😍,

this part was seriously very cute, loved the way they keep on fighting every time they meet.
the preview sounds awesome now i m dying to read the next part
update it soon di

p=))] GJ...............m sooooooooooooo happy ki your loving this hehehehe....
M tryign to make it as detailed as i can 😉
😆 yaar tujhebhi woh acha laga...koi climax ke baare mein bhi toh batao....
ragini ne paani maara ranvir ke upar yaar...no one told me how it was?
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ parvathykrishna: Thank you 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

🤣

m gald ur loving them heheehehee...
M glad too k u read the scene first 😊
heheh tere yeh scene fav hain? 😆
mine was the last scene...🤣 ragini throws water on Ranvir's face...now this is something i'd like to see...
hehehhee..lol...bhej de bhej de...atleast the creatives will get some ideas from us...and really i want RS' next show to be something like this....enough with the family shows now...I want something for youngsters...i also suggested it to him.
yup I'll just read your captions 😉

Ragini smiles and throws water on Ranvir as she says "Yeh Lo paani" Ranvir is surprised and angry at the same time🤣
Ohh Sorryyy jii maine yeh throws yeh wrd miss kiya tah🤣🤣 Uff kya baat hai Ragini🤣
Sanjuuuuuuuuu all i can say is tht i really Cant wait yaaar..i am so impatient ke main kya bataaun
Mujhe pata haii Abhi Bht Mast Scenes aane waaley hain🤣🤣
BACHAOOOOOO
and yes yeh to RS ko zarur bhejungii n kahungi KinRul ko hi lein busssss😃😃😃
Haan yaar exactlyy ab kuch youngsters ke liye bhi hon achayehh😉But ek imprtant baa yeh hai ke KinRul hi hon😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...............

SANJU DIIIIIIII...........great jobbbb.....mindblowinggggggggggggggggggggg........amazinggggggggggggggggggggg.............wat a scene...........ragvir fightt is amazinggggggggggggggggg,,,,,,,,,.......jangli billi n langoor toh kamal k hai......🤣.......aweeeee,ending is fantasticcccccc yaaarrrrrrrrrrr.....🤣🤣🤣....aweeee raginiii paani gira diaaaa ranvir pee...wowwwwwwww🤣🤣🤣....reallyyyyyyyy canttttttt wait for the next partttt...hayeeeee.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello hai jii mai lekha hun aap ki FF ki silent reader thi aur mujhe ek baat kehni thi aapse ke aap bohot accha likhti hai. apne next updt mujhe pm zaroor keejiyega

lekha

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