Decide a Romantic Sequence For Ranvir/Ragini Now - Page 44

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sachdevi

woooooooow sanju amazing yaar mindblowing fantastic yaar👏tooooooooo good i love they line when ragini said kitna bolte hai aap wow remindes me of balcony scene i just❤️and you know na i just adore wada raha sanam i want to see the vm on this song its my fav song

i love every part ranvir doing shopping with rag and pitna un guys ko
muhaaaaaaaaaaaaa very nice sanju
waiting for the 4 one

hehee thank u thank u preet 😊
I always try to add atleast some humour in it.!
and woh gaana i listened to it yesterday in the car and then i thought hehe these lines suit my scene, so thought to add it...even this is my all time fav song!
yup the forth one m writing @tm hopefully it'll be up by tonite 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

haaye!!

zakhamo pe namak chidakna chahti hai tu?
main..teri aur kinshuk ki shaadi mein...dance karoon?
dimaag kharaab hai kya mera?
chal theek hai karungi dance...main aur tere jiju dono karenge..!
dinu i already have someone yaar...!
kinshuk ko tu rakhle..!

awwwwwwwwwww sanj awwwwwwwwww
realllyyyyyyyyyy w0wwwwwwww
wh0z dat lucky guyyy w0000wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
hamain b milwa0 shilwa0 unseyy apney unn se aur hamare jiju se😉
muwahhh sanjjjjjjjjjjjjj u gave me my lyf my luvv my eveyrthing my sansein my kinchuuuuuuuuuu😳😳😳
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thankss al0tttttttttttttttttttt😳😳luvvv u sis luvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😳😳😳
u gave me ma kinchuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu allah kaare ap apney unn k saath hamesha khush rahein😉
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ya sureee u ave t0 inshallah u ave t0 dance 0n
dina n kinshuks wedding ameennn😉tu aur jijaG dance kernaa 0k😉
aur dina aur tere jijaG kinchu bhe dance karenge den 0k😃😳😃dina apni shaadi pe b karege😳😳
awwwwwwww muwahhh DINA N KINSHUK 4 EVAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Mrs.Dina Kinshuk Mahajan😳😳ameenn😳😳😳
Edited by KinshukLuvsDina - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KinshukLuvsDina

awwwwwwwwwww sanj awwwwwwwwww
realllyyyyyyyyyy w0wwwwwwww
wh0z dat lucky guyyy w0000wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
hamain b milwa0 shilwa0 unseyy apney unn se aur hamare jiju se😉
muwahhh sanjjjjjjjjjjjjj u gave me my lyf my luvv my eveyrthing my sansein my kinchuuuuuuuuuu😳😳😳
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thankss al0tttttttttttttttttttt😳😳luvvv u sis luvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😳😳😳
u gave me ma kinchuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu allah kaare ap apney unn k saath hamesha khush rahein😉
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ya sureee u ave t0 inshallah u ave t0 dance 0n
dina n kinshuks wedding ameennn😉tu aur jijaG dance kernaa 0k😉
aur dina aur tere jijaG kinchu bhe dance karenge den 0k😃😳😃dina apni shaadi pe b karege😳😳
awwwwwwww muwahhh DINA N KINSHUK 4 EVAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Mrs.Dina Kinshuk Mahajan😳😳ameenn😳😳😳

tu agar Cc mein aati toh tujhe pata chalta..!
every week woh wahaan jeenu se baatein karta hai! 😆
unka naam hai harj 😊
heheh chal chal tu bhi kya yaad karegi ki sanju ne apni dinu ke liye itni badi qurbaani di 😆
hehe haan zaroor zaroor, lekin sabse pehla invitation mujhe dena okay 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww...Sanju...really well written yaar!👏 Keep up the good work n we'll all be waiting for the next Part!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
Dina Sanju Ze eveone thnkss alotttttt
eveone thnk thnk u thnk uu
Sanjuu i will rread ur scene veryy sooooonnn

abhi u al knw i m a bit busyy with myy sttudiesssss😡

Love ya all

tczz byeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx luv sakshi 😊
@ sanhu: okie sanhu will be waiting for your comments 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kamuralee

sanu sanu kya scene likka hai ttune . Muwaaaaaaah and I love so much.
Kash aise kuc hua tha to kitna acha hota na

Maine dharra ko padke sunaya wo bu has rahe the. TTuna kithini awesome likka like our ragvir. Aise Scenes likenge tho meri heartbeats thezi se chal rahi hai. Arey yaar kash aise ek scene hota to sach mai mai pagal hojavoga😍

Awesomd Mindblowing and soooooooo romantic!!!!!!!

aww Sukuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗 Thnkuu Sukuuuuuuuu and Dhara ko bhi thnks bolaa wesey i got in touch with herr heh she must have told u
Suku thnks aloott han i hope aisa kuch ho ab maien sNAJU KA SCEEN PERHNA HAII I M SURE AWESOEM HOGA
Prema🤗 thnk premaaa😳thnks alottttttttt
Sanjuuuuuuuu aaj raat main pakka perahi hunn ur sceneeeeeeee and coment kkerungi thn oki😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

This is the continuation of my previous scene 😊

for those who haven't read my scenes here r the links to their pages 😊

Part 1 - http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1224584&TPN=36

Part 2- http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1224584&TPN=47

Okay..let's get started on part 3 😊

Part 3

Ragvir are still hugging, until ranvir notices that people are looking at them and giving that how romantic look!

Ranvir sees this girl looking and them and smiling he smiles embarassingly at her (choooo cute)

Ranvir: Ragini...
Ragini: hmmmm....(still huggiing ranvir and has her eyes closed)
Ranvir: sab dekh rahe hain..
Ragini opens her eyes and looks around seeing everyone looking at them cutely
she lets go of ranvir and moves her hair back behind her ears (looking cute)

an old couple walks up to them and says: aap dono ki jodi hamesha salamat rahe
Ragvir look at each other
Ranvir: thank you!
they leave..
Ranvir: hmmm..chalein?
Ragini: chaliye
Ragvir start shopping now

Ragini starts to select clothes for ranvir, she gets him to try it out.
ranvir smiles and goes to try it, he tries it on and shows it ragini, ragini likes it, she gives him a whole pile of shirts and jeans 😆
ranvir takes them aswell (not to happy there)
he keeps coming back to show it ragini, ragini likes some and rejects some and then gives him another pile ( this sis all in fast forward kinds motion 😆)
Ranvir is tired now..!
he comes back to show her his shirt
ragini rejects it, saying: naa! yeh acha anhin lagta, iski sleeves chotti hai!
Ranvir is tiringly says: Ragini..bas ab chalo please..tumne kya puri dukaan khareedne hai?
Ragini: ranvir ek minute..please!

Ranvir: uffff...tumhara yeh 1 minute main peechle 1 ghante se sun raha hoon, pata nahin tum ladkiyon ko shopping ke waqt kya ho jaata hai, ek baar shuru hogayi phir khatam hone ka naam hi nahin leti...tum..
Ragini annoyingly puts her finger on ranvir's lip, ranvir has a surprised look! (very very cute)

Ragini: kitna bak bak karte ho, do minute chup nahin reh sakte?
ranvir is a cute angry face( just like the one he had when guni came in to ragvir's room after they packed for their honeymoon)

Ragini: ab aise kya dkehr ahe hai, chaliye ogayi shopping!

Ragvir go to the counter and pay for the shopping.

Ragini: ranvir yeh pakkadiye...aur yeh bhi
Ragini hands him all the shoppign bags and starts to walk ranvir looks at ragini just walk away leaving him to carry the bags
hehe ranvir is trying to hold em all at once (heheheh very cute ranvir)

Ragini turns around and see ranvir is way behind her...ran still having trouble holding the bags

Ragini: arrey ranvir jaldi chaliye na, kitna dheere chal rahe hai aap!

Ranvir just looks at ragini, and tries to rush

Ragvir are walking, ragini goes into another shop.

ranvir tiringly says

Ranvir: Ragini...ab bas karo yaar, chalo na kuch khaate hai yaar, subah se breakfast kiya aur dekho 3 baj gaye hai, mujhe bohut zoro ki bhook lag rahi hai..

Ragini: oh..acha theek hai chaliye pehle kuch khaana khaate hai

They go to a cafe, ranvir puts the shopping bags to aside, (they are sitting outside!

Ranvir: ragini, tum khaana order karo, tab tak main zara wash room hoke aata hoon

Ragini: ji!

Ranvir goes inside to go to the wash room and ragini orders food

after the waiter leaves ragini look at a group of guys looking at her.
ragini feels uncomfortable, she tries to ignore it, but they conitnue to look at her - ragini is feeling very un comfortable, she starts to adjust her top.
she looks away
The guys start walking towards her, one of the guys sits next to her, and puts her hand over her shoulder
guy: hey baby...!
ragini turns around and she moves his hand away
Ragini: yeh kya batmeezi hai? uthiye yahaan se

they guys doesn't get up,

ragini gets up angrily and tries to walk away, but the guys blocks her way
Guy: kahaan jaa rahi ho? zara humare paas bhi toh baitho

Ragini: mere raaste se hatto
Guy: agar hattna hi hota, toh rokta hi kyun.

ragini si tryig to get away but the guy grabs her hand, ragini is trying to get awat, other guys are teasing her too.
ragini slaps one of the guys
the guys is angry and starts using force on her, ragini is crying.
ranvir sees this and he rishes to her,

he pushes one of the guys away
he is angry!
They guy: hey koun hai tu? chal apna kaam kar...chal

Ranvir: woh hi toh kar raha hoon (ranivr has an angry look now)

guy: kya?

Ranvir: chal nikal le yahaa se warna tujhe chalne ke layak nahin chodunga
Guy: kya? he laughs and tries to hit ranvir
Ranvir grabs his hand and slaps the guy very hard!

The other guys try to hit ranvir, but ranvir hits the guys (WAH! go ranvir..maaro unhe)

the manager of the cafe comes to them and tries stop the fight, the police also comes

ranvir has 2 waiters holding on to him, ranvir is really angry

police man: yah kya ho raha hai yahaa?

Ranvir angrily says: yeh ladke meri biwi ke saath batameezi kar rahe the.

The police looks at ragini and then looks the guys and he gets the constable to arrest them!
Manager apologises to ragini and ranvir. Ranvir goes to ragini and holds her hand and picks up the shopping bags

Ranvir: chalo ragini.

Ragini wipes her tears

they leave

Ranvir and Ragini stop at another beach and ragini sits down on the sand

ragini is upset while ranvir is still angry at them, he drops the shopping bags on the sand and is looking away

he then turns and looks at ragini who is upset and calms down, he walks up to ragini and kneels on his knees

Ranvir: ragini..mat ro

he wipes her tears and smiles

ragini is still upset and looks down

ranvir tries to cheer ragini up, but doesn't work!
he talks to her to change her mood,

Ranvir: arrey dekhe toh sahi kya kahreeda hai humne aaj!
he looks at the shopping but ragini isn't interested
ranvir looks at her and then he starts to sing
Ranvir: Kaisi udaasi tere chehre pe chhaayi
Kya baat hai jo teri aankh bhar aayi
Dekho to kya nazaare hain
Tumhaari tarah pyaare hain
Hanso na mere liye tum
Sabhi to yeh tumhaare hai o jaane jaan
Ragini looks at ranvir - they have an eye lock
it's pin drop silence - you can only hear the wind
Ragini has a tera rolling down from her eyes and she looks down
ranvir sighs and then he starts to look for something, he starts checking his pockets and the shopping bags! (ragini looks at him strangely)
ragini: ranvir..kya hua hua? kya dhoond rahe hain? (she is sobbing)
Ranvir: ek minute ragini, meri ek cheez kho gayi hai
Ranvir sees a person and stops him.
Ranvir: arrey bha sahab apne meri biwi ki hassi dekhi hai kahin? pata nahin kahaan kho gayi hai.
The person looks at him really weirdly and is confused! (hehehehe 😆)
Hearing this ragini smiles and ranvir looks at her smile
Ranvir: mil gayi, thank you bhai sahab
the guy walks away all confusingly
Ranvir runs to ragini and sits in front of her
Ranvir catches ragini's tear with his finger that was rolling down her cheek.
Ranvir: yeh aansoo bohut keemti hai! (he puts the finger in his mouth)
Ragini hugs ranvir
Ragini: thank you ranvir
Ranvir: kis baat ke liye?
Ragini: meri zindagi mein aane ke liye
Ranvir smiles and says
Ranvir: Yeh toh mujhe kehna chahiye
Ragini: ranvir agar aaj aap na hote toh woh log..!
Ranvir: kuch nahin karte...ragini
he hold ragini's face with hsi hands and makes her look at him
Ranvir: maine tumse kaha hai na, ki main tumhe kabhi kuch nahin hone dunga!
ranvir kisses ragini's forhead Ragini smiles while has tears in her eyes
ranvir wipes her tears away and nods no and they hug!
Ranvir: ragini waapis hotel mein chalein? bhaiya bhabi humara wait kar rahe honge!
Ragini nods yes
She wipes her tears and get up, ranvir carries all the shopping bags, ragini holds ranvir's arm.

Part 4 coming up soon

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Just read ur sceneeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
It was usuall Awesomeeeee
and yaar Sanjuu why dont u join Bidaai?Sanju i wnat u to become bidaai dilog writer i swearr
Bht hi anth dilogs tehy hehhe
The shoppin scene was lovelyy
and i enjoyed woh ghunda bhai log ke dilogs😆😆😆Sanju ur too goodd haha
Ab bus i m waitng for ur next scene..and yes teh begining was shoo GOOOOOOOOOD
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
sanju diiii jaldii part 4 post karooooo....m waitinggg........😳😃😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SanihaKaKinshuk

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Just read ur sceneeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
It was usuall Awesomeeeee
and yaar Sanjuu why dont u join Bidaai?Sanju i wnat u to become bidaai dilog writer i swearr
Bht hi anth dilogs tehy hehhe
The shoppin scene was lovelyy
and i enjoyed woh ghunda bhai log ke dilogs😆😆😆Sanju ur too goodd haha
Ab bus i m waitng for ur next scene..and yes teh begining was shoo GOOOOOOOOOD
👏

SANHU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehe!
sanhu yaar main bhi yahi soch rahi hoon ki RS ke paas jaake unhe yeh scene sunau 😆
lol...yaar kaash aisa ho sakta..main dialogue writer hoti toh puri bidaai mein sirf aur sirf ragvir aur saalekh nazar aane the 😆 no rona dhona..only happiness! 😉
i tried to think of sumfin that sounds like a bhai type dialogue! 😆
but i want to hear Ranvir says this dialogue - chal nikal yahaan se, warna tujhe chalne ke laayak bhi nahin chodunga! i was imagining him say that and OMG he was luking damn HOT in my imagination!!!
next part i'll post tonite, i have written it.! it'll kinda be a bit long i think! we'll see how it goes, when i was writing it on paper, in my lecture on wednesday 😆 it took up 5 A4 pages and my writing is small, so i'm assuming it'll be abit long!!
so i'll post it tonite 😊

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