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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

awww..sanhu mera scene bhi uss page pe hai..

u want me to post it on this page for u?

Sanju u also posted a new sceneeee😲
Yes sanju post it here
mains aarey scens aaj raat perhugiiii
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Posted: 16 years ago
haan sanhu its part 2 of the 1st scene yaar!!
i'll post part 3 tomorrow 😊
acha theek hai i'll repost it her egaian for u 😊
aur maine tera scene padha tha...and i also commented on it...
sucha chweet scene..i wish to see sumthing like that tomorrow!
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Posted: 16 years ago
this is reposted for sanhu as she is unable to open the previous page 😊
Okay guys this part 2 of my previous scene 😊
for those who haven't read my previous scene here's the link to it

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1224584&TPN=36

Okay ragvir and saalekh are really drenched in the water now!
ranvir: bhaiya, chaliye inhe leke waapis apne hotel chalte hain, warna yeh dono toh bimaar hongi hi, saath mein hum dono ko bhi bimaar kar dengi!

Aalekh: haan tum theek keh rahe ho, aur mausam bhi dekho, kitni thand hai…aur lagta hai baarish hone waali hai!

Ranvir: haan, bhaiya aap bhabi ko leke chaliye, main ragini ko leke aata hoon!

Aalekh: haan theek hai!
Ranvir rushes to ragini!
Ranvir: ragini, chalo waapis hotel chalte hain!

On the otherside
Aalekh: saadhna, saadhna..chalo waapis apne hotel chalein
saadhna: nahin aalekh ji, mujhe nahin jaana…dekhiye na kitna acha mausam hai!
Aalekh: haan acha hai, hum kal aayenge yahaan theek hai…chalo ab!
on the other side, ragini is running around like crazy…and ranvir is chasing her!
Ranvir: ragini…please, waapis apne hotel chalo!
Ragini: nahin mujhe nahin jaana!
ragini loses her balance, she is falling backwards, but ranvir grabs her!
ranvir: ragini, kya kar rahi ho tum…agar tum gir jaati toh!
Ragini: aise kaise gir jaati, aap ho na, mujhe pakkadne ke liye!
ragini winks @ him, and ranvir smiles!
ranvir: acha baba..chalo ab ghar chalo!
ragini: nahin
Ranvir: kyun?
Ragini: pehle mujhe apni godhi mein uthao!
ranvir's eyes widen with surprise
Ranvir: ragini..bhaiya ke saamne, main kaise!
ragini: array..? apni biwi ko hi toh godhi utha rahe ho, kisi aur ko toh nahin!
on the other side
there is the same thing going on!
aalekh gives in and pick sadhi up!
ranvir sees aalekh and smiles, then looks back @ ragi.
ragini: uthaiye na…warna main yahi baithi rahungi…kahin nahin jaungi!
Ranvir: acha meri maa..chalo!
ran picks ragini up and starts walking towards the hotel!
they reach the hotel, aalekh and ranvir walk to the receptionsist, carrying saadhna and ragini. They ask for thei room keys.
the receptionist gives them their room keys.!
ranvir and aalekh can't take the keys.!
ranvir: ragini ji…zara aap chabiya lene ka kasht uthayengi?
ragini smiles and takes the keys!
aalekh: sadhna…aap kisika wait kar rahe hai?
saadhna: pata nahin…kyun kisika wait karna hai kya? [she has a confused look on her face…cho cute]
aalekh rolls his eyes and manages to get the keys himself!

They walk towards the lift, and to their luck the lift is out of order!

Ranvir and aalekh look shockingly @ each other!
Ranvir: bhaiya…ab kya karein?
Aalekh: uhhh..mujhe kya pata…uhhh…seediyo se hi jaana padega!

Ranvir: kya? Aapka matlab humein 4th floor pe seediyon se jaana hoga…inhe apni godhi mein utha ke!
Aalekh: ab aur koi raasta bhi toh nahin hai!
ranvir and aalekh are walking up the stairs..they are tired!
aalekh: ranvir, aaj ek baat toh pata chal gayi…yeh pyaar karna toh bohut bhari padha humein!
Ranvir: nahin bhaiya…pyaar karma bhari nahin padh raha…humari ye biwiyan bhaari hai!
Ragini and saadhna: Kya kaha?
Ranvir: kuch nahin…
they continue walking up the stairs!
Ranvir: acha ragini, ek baat batao
Ragini: kya?
ranvir: tum khaati kya ho?
Ragini: kyun?
Ranvir: nahin who maine tumse iss liye poocha kyun ki tum itni bhaari ho!
Ragini: kya? Maar khani hai?
ranvir: eh maarna nahin, main pehle se hi mara hua hoon!
after having a sweet tu tu main main…they finally each to their rooms!
Ranvir: shukar hai pohunch gaye!
ragini and saadhna unlock their room
Ranvir: acha baiya..subah milte hain!
Aalekh: haan agar theek rahe toh!
Ranvi: yeh bhi hai!
they say good night to each other and go inside their room

Ranvir puts her on the bed, and lies next to her
Ragini gets up and is about to leave!
Ranvir: ab kahaan jaa rahi ho?
ragini: change karne!
ranvir: acha, jao!
Ragini goes to change, ran changes his clothes aswell, and falls on the bed tiringly!
ragini comes out wearing a black night gown – looking gorgeous! Ran is completely lost just looking @ her very sweetly, ragini is still a little hyper – she winks @ ranvir, ranvir comes in his senses.
ragini comes closer to him, she grabs his arm and puts it around her, she is now resting her head on ranvir's arm. She hugs him
ranvir: kya baat hai? Aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai!
ragini: hmmmm….
ranvir: ragini, tumhe ek baat bataun, tum na mujhe aisi bohut achi lagti ho, apne aap mein mast rehna…I love you ragini.
ragini doesn't answer
ranvir: ragini..?

He looks @ ragini, she is asleep!
Ranvir smiles and turns of the lights and goes to sleep hugging ragini! [haaye such a sweet scene]

It's morning!
ragvir are sleeping!
ranvir wakes up as someone knocks on the door!
ranvir looks @ ragi who is still sleeping!
ran slowly removes his hand from under ragini's head, and then moves her hand away from his chest, and goes to open the door!
he opens the door and it's aalekh!
Ranvir: bhaiya, aap itni subah? Sab theek toh hai na?
Aalekh: kuch theek nahin hai, saadhna ne mujhe raat bhar sone nahin diya!
ranvir's lifts one of his eyebrows – hehe so cute!
Aalekh: woh saari raat baatein karti rahi…no khud soyi na mujhe sone diya, waise ragini kaisi hai?
ranvir: who theek hai..raat ko aate hi so gayi!
aalekh: atleast tumhe toh sone ko mila!
ranvir smiles!
aalekh: kair…main toh tumhe yeh batane ke liye aaya tha, ki aaj tum dono akele ghoom aao, hum shaam ko ek saath ghoomne jaayenge theek hai? Abhi mujhe neend ki sakht zaroorat hai!
ranvir smiles and says ok. Aalekh leaves and ranvir closes his door!
he goes baq and watches ragi asleep, he slightly kisses her forehead!
and calls for room service and orders 1 cup of coffee!
he continues to watch ragini asleep [ looking so pretty]
Ragini wakes up, she slowly opens her eyes, and sees ranvir
ragini: good morning!
ranvir: good morning, kaisi ho?
ragini: theek hoon kyun?
ranvir: nahin woh…theirs a knock on the door, ranvir ek minute main abhi aaya!
ran opens the door, it's room service, ran grabs the tray off the waiter and says thank u, and closes the door
he gives coffee to ragini!
she takes the cup from ran.
ranvir: ragini…mujhe nahin pata tha ki tumhe peene ka shaunk hai, yeh doosri baar hua hai.!

Ragini: ranvir, I swear maine nahin pee, mujhe lagta hai kissine mere drink mein kuch mila diya tha!
ranvir: chalo kaaran job hi, lekin isse mujhe toh bohut faayda hua…issi bahaane se hi sahi par tum mere kareeb toh aayi!

Ragini blushes and ranvir looks @ ragi!
Ragini: main nahaa ke aati hoon
she is about to get up, but ranvir grabs her hand and pulls her towards himself
she loses her balance and is sitting on ran's lap
Ragini: ranvir, chodiye na.!
ranvir: kyun?
ragini: kyunki mujhe nahaana hai..

Ranvir: haan toh naha lena na!
ragini: aap chodenge toh nahaane jaungi na!
Ranvir: acha…? Kal toh tum mujhe paas la rahi thi, aur ab door jaane ko bol rahi ho?
ragini smiles.
ranvir: acha baba…jao!
Ragini gets up she is going towards the bathroom and turns around, she tells him to check it saalekh are awake?
ranvir: woh…thodi der pehle bhaiya aaye the, unhone kaha hai ki who hum dono ko shaam mein join karenge!
Ragini: kyun?
ranvir: kyunki who dono raat bhar nahin soye
ragini lifts her eyebrow (heheh so cute)
ranvir: bhaiya ne kaha ki raat ko bhabi ne bilkul bhi unhe sone nahin diya…raat bhar baatein karti rahi! Ab jaake soyi hai, toh who dono araam karenge. Toh aaj sirf tum aur main honge (winks @ ragi)
ragini smiles and goes to have a shower!
they both get ready!
ragini is wearing a black top with a white skirt (looking gorgeous)

And ran is wearing a black tee with jeans (looking HOT)

Ranvir: ragini breakfast ke liye chalein?
ragini: chaliye!
ragini orders breakfast
the waiter serves them breakfast,
ragini serves ranvir food
ranvir isn't eating!
ragini: kya hua? Aap khaa kyun nahin rahe!
Ranvir: ragini…aaj tumhare haathon se khaane ka mann kar raha hai
ragini smiles and starts feeding him – they both feed each other (awww..so cute) the finish eating

Ranvir: ab chalein?
ragini:chaliye
they go out!
ranvir and ragini are roaming around in goa, hand in hand!
ragini sees a church and comes to a stop
ranvir: kya hua? Ruk kyun gayi?
ragini: ranvir dekhiye na kitna khoobsurat church hai, baahar se itna acha hai toh andar se kaisa hoga…chaliye na chalke dekhte hai
ranvir: theek hai chalo
they both go the the church
ragini starts to pray, ranvir watches ragini pray, as soon as ragini is done, she turns around and ranvir quickly turns and closes his eyes as he is praying
ragini smiles,
ranvir is done praying
ranvir: chalein?
ragini: ji
they both leave the church.
ragvir @ a beach now! (very sweet musical is playing @ the baq)
ragini is runs to the shore
and asks ranvir to come
ranvir is standing near ragini but doesn't go in the water
ragini asks him to come in the water
ranvir sweetly nods no, and looks the other way,

Ragini splashes water in ranvir's face
ranvir looks @ ragini in surprise
ragini does it again, and run away..ranvir chases her..
ranvir grabs ragini from the waist and spins her around and they fall on the sand
ragini is on top of ranvir
they both are breathing heavily as they are tired from the running,
ragvir have an eye lock!
ranvir slighltly moves ragini's hair from her face and continues to look @ her.
ragini is shy, she gets up after a while!
she brushes the sand off her clothes.

Ranvir holds raginis hand, and brings her close to him.
ragini look ranvir in the eyes
ranvir slowly moves forward and kisses ragini's forehead
ragini smiles 😊

Ragini hugs ranvir passionately (awwwwwwwww…such a sweet scene)

Ranvir too hugs her!!!

Part 3 coming up soon 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
🤗🤗🤗
Kyaa Sceneeeeeeeee Hai Reeeeeeeeeee
i am speechlesss My Dearr
i Lovedd it
Awwwwwwwwwww
Ranvir was as usual looking very CUTEE
aND Aisa lagra tha really Real Mein Ranvi yeh sub kera hai hehe
The bet part was When Ranvir saidd Tum bhaari ho
haha n when Aalekh said Pyaar bhaari perhgaya
nad Ranvir replies him Pyaar nahi yeh Bhaari hainBhayya
hahaahaahaha
Oh Godddddddd
Awesomeee
Lovellyyyyyyyyyyy
Too goood i m waitinf rfor the nest part
ab dhara ka scene perhlunn
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

ohk guys here's my new scene...hope u all dont get bored after reading this

Ran: 9 baj gaye and Ragini abhi tak nahi aayi...usse is baat ki koi parwaah hi nahi hai ki uska koi besabri se intezaar kar raha hai (he makes a cute angry sa face)

Rag (in the car): Hey bhagwaan..kitna late ho gaya....bauji ke yaha kitna time lag gaya...Ramvir mera intezaar kar rahe honge, kahi naraaz naa ho jaaye....Driver aap jaldi chalaiye na, aise hi bohoy late ho gaya hai

Ran (at home): ye Ragini kaha reh gayi...uske liye itna kuch jo plan karke rakha hai, ab uska saaraa maza kharab ho jayega ( he says this to himself, when he suddenly hears the horn of his car)

Shayad ragini aa gayi hai...(he goes and switches off the light)

Ragini enters the hall and finds it completely dark, and no one is there

Rag: Ranvir...Ranvir....aap aa gaye kya??? Is light ko kya ho gaya hai..Ranvir aap ho ya nahi??

There is no reply from anyone...she gets worried about it and keeps on calling Ranvir, but doesn't gets any reply

Rag (to herself): shayad bahar honge, ek baar garden mei dekhke aati hu

Just as she turns back to go out the Ranvir switches the lights on and she hears Ranvir saying

"Ragini..Tumse kehna tha ki mai zindagi bhar tumse beinteha pyaar karta rahunga...tumhara saath mila aur sacche pyaar ke maayne samajh aa gaye, tumhara pyaar mila toh jana ke dil ka rishta kya hota hai...zindagi ko kaise jia jaaye, ye maine tumse hi sikha hai...meri manzil, meri humsafar ban jaaye isse badi khushi mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai...Thank you my Love, Thank you...Meri zindagi mei an eke liye bohot bohot shukriya

Tumhara Ranvir"

Ranvir goes and stands behind her and holding her shoulder turns her face towards him...Ragini's eyes are full of tears

Rag: Ranvir aap mujhse itna pyaar karte hai

Ran: umhmm, issezyadaa pyaar karta hu...meri zindagi, meri jaan se zyadaa pyar karta hu

Ragini gets emotional and hugs him tightly and Cries in his arms

Ran: Ragini ye kya??? Tum phir se rone lagi

Rag: phir se matlab kya???

Ran: matlab ye ki aaj itne khushi ke mauke pe bhi tum ro rahi ho...balki aaj ke din toh tumhe sbse zyadaa khush hona chahiye

Rag: Ranvir aap mere saath jab bhi hote ho, woh pal, woh din hi mere liy khushiyo se bhara hota hai

Ran: Haa who toh hai, par aaj kuch special hai..isliye double khushi

Rag: special??? Aaj aisa kya hai??

Ran: aaj (goes behind her and blindfolds her and picks her up in his arms)

Rag: Ranvir aap ye lya kar rahe hai??, pagal toh nahi ho gaye??? Chhodiye mujhe, Kisi ne dekh liya toh?? aur aap ye mujhe le kaha jaa rahe hai??

Ran: pehli baat ghar pe koi nahi hai toh dekhne ka sawal hi nahi hai and waise bhi mai apni biwi ko utha raha hu, kisi aur ki biwi ko nahi...and dusri baat ye ki jahaa mai le chal raha hu chalo, tumhare liye ek surprise hai

Rag: surprise!! Ek aur?? Kaunsa surprise?? Kaisa surprise??

Ran: tum kitna bolti ho Ragini, kaha na chup chaap chalo..tumhe pata pad jaayega

Ranvir takes her to the terrace and removes her blindfold and turns her towards the swing, which he has decorated beautifully and has kept a cake on the swing

He hugs Ragini from back

Ran: Happy 6th month anniversary sweetheart and he kisses her cheek

Ragini looks down shyly and slowly turns her face towards him

Rag: aapko yaad tha??

Ran: ji haa madam, mujhe bohot acche se yaad tha...waise bhi ye din mai kaise bhool sakta hu, issi din hi toh meri Ragini, Ragini Sharma se Ragini Rajvansh bani thi aur mai itna important din kaise bhool sakta tha mai

Ragini smiles at him and hugs him tightly

Ran: oh, mai toh bhool hi gaya

Rag: kya??

Ran: ek min

Ranvir takes out a ring from his pocket and kneels down infront of her and puts the ring in her finger

Ran:Ye rumhare liye, tumhare Anmol ke taraf se uski pyaari Anamika ke liye ek Anmol taufa

Ragini gets very emotional and tears starts rolling down her cheeks

Ranvir gets up at once

Ran: ye kya Ragini, tum fir rone lagi!! Tum har baat pe roti kyu ho?? Tumhare aakhon mei koi nal fit kiya hua hai kya jo har baat pe barasna shuru kar deta hai

Ragini hits him lightly on his shoulder and smiles at him

Ran: that's like my Ragini...tumhe rota hua dekh dekhke ab bore ho chukka tha...thank god For a change tum hasi toh sahi

RagVir holds each others hand and goes and sits on the swing which Ranvir has decorated for Ragini, He asks Ragini to cut the cake and they both feed the cake to each other

Ran: Ragini madam, maine toh tumhe tumhara gift de diya, par mera gift?? Mujhe gift milegi bhi ya nahi?? Hmm

Rag: Ranvir aap ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho, aapko mai mil gayi isse badi aur kya gift ho sakti hai aap ke liye??

Ran: accha aisi baat hai

Rag: haa toh fir

They both have a lil laugh and Ragini keeps her head on Ranvir's shoulder and Ranvir hugs her tighly...they both talk about their old days and they remember how they first talked to each other on phone when suddenly drops of water falls on them...Ragini gets very excited to see the rain

Rag: aapko yaad hai, pichhle saal issi tarah jab barish hui thi tab maine aapko bheegne ko kahaa tha aur aapne bheegne ke baad mujhe call karke kahaa tha ki mai pagal hu...yaad hai

Ran: ofcourse yaad hai, mai who din kaise bhool sakta hu

Rag (getting out of Ranvir's arms):chaliye na Ranvir chalke bheegte hai... bearish mei bheege bohot din ho gaye and kitni acchi barish ho rahi hai...chaliye na please

Ran: tum pagal ho gayi ho??? Bimaar padna hai kya??

Rag: arey Ranvir kuch nahi hoga chaliye na

Ran: nahi Ragini, bimaar ho jaaogi

Rag: aap na bohot boring ho, aapko kuch bolna hi bekaar hai...aap baithe raho yahi mai chali

Ran: Ragini, Ragini..but Ragini doesn't listen to him and goes out to get drenched

Ragini jumps and dances like a lil kid in the rain and Ranvir watches her like that and man hi man mei khush hota hai...and says to himself

"Ragini, tumhe nahi pata mai, aaj tumhe aise dekhke kitna khush hu...bimaari ko maaro goli, tumhara Ranvir tumhare paas hi aa raha hai,"

He gets up, removes his coat and folds his sleeves (OMG he is looking so hot) and gets out in the rain...he walks towards Ragini, closer....more closer...more closer...he holds Ragini by her waist and pulls he her towards him

Ran: lets have a dance

Rag: music ke bina??

Ran: of oh Ragini, tum uski kyu tension leti ho...he takes out his cell and plays KKHH ka instrumental tune...Ragini smiles at him and they start dancing

While dancing they get closer and closer and gets lost into each other completely...they keep on dancing even when the music is over....Ragini gets back to her senses and feels shy and she gets out of his arm, but Ranvir is still in that romantic mood only, he bends forward to kiss her but before he could kiss her she runs away but Ranvir grabs her hand and starts walking towards her..closer,..more closer....and finally he pulls her towards him and lifts her in his arms and takes her to their bedroom and after reaching the bedroom closes the door

(aage ka leaving up to ur imagination)


Ohoooooooooooooooo*HUGS*
Kya Romantic Scene likhdiy dharaaaaa Jiii
Ahem Ahemm
hahaha
WOWWWWWWWWWW
Yeh scene perhke i m imagining tom episodeeeeeee😳haaye
Finaly RagVir in Rainn
hehe
Dharaa
Aaagey ka maien imaginer kerliya
yahan paste kerun😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SanihaKaKinshuk

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

🤗🤗🤗
Kyaa Sceneeeeeeeee Hai Reeeeeeeeeee
i am speechlesss My Dearr
i Lovedd it
Awwwwwwwwwww
Ranvir was as usual looking very CUTEE
aND Aisa lagra tha really Real Mein Ranvi yeh sub kera hai hehe
The bet part was When Ranvir saidd Tum bhaari ho
haha n when Aalekh said Pyaar bhaari perhgaya
nad Ranvir replies him Pyaar nahi yeh Bhaari hainBhayya
hahaahaahaha
Oh Godddddddd
Awesomeee
Lovellyyyyyyyyyyy
Too goood i m waitinf rfor the nest part
ab dhara ka scene perhlunn

heheheh sanhu..
yaar i wnted some humour in there...so i thought to write sumfin like that 😆
i really wish to have a scene like that where he says that dialogue..it'll be cute!!
next scene will up tonite 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
il s00n read dhara n sanj's scene n c0mment:)
n my RR SCENE is 0n da way t00;)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

heheheh sanhu..

yaar i wnted some humour in there...so i thought to write sumfin like that 😆
i really wish to have a scene like that where he says that dialogue..it'll be cute!!
next scene will up tonite 😊

WOWWWWWWWWWWW
i a m waitingggggggggggggg😳😳😳
ye si really hopeee tht
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

@ dharaa: dharaa.....haaye itna cute chene tha yaal...

tu itne lomantic kabche hogyai huh?
mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha meli gj itni lomantic hai 😊
HAAYE..itne cute schene likha tune...love it



aww di, thantu thantu sho much 😆
mai toh aishe hi bohot lomantic hu 😉 but zyadaa dithati nahi batthi hu na 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SanihaKaKinshuk

Ohoooooooooooooooo*HUGS*
Kya Romantic Scene likhdiy dharaaaaa Jiii
Ahem Ahemm
hahaha
WOWWWWWWWWWW
Yeh scene perhke i m imagining tom episodeeeeeee😳haaye
Finaly RagVir in Rainn
hehe
Dharaa
Aaagey ka maien imaginer kerliya
yahan paste kerun😆



sanhuuu 🤗thank u shoo shoo shoo shoo much 😃
sanhu imagine what my haalat was when i was writing this scene
sanhu RagVir ne kya haal bana diya hai 😆

sanhu go ahead tera, imagination toh out of the world hota hai 😉 😆




Edited by dharaa - 16 years ago

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