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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jayavanga

That would be a real treat to watch , but aalekh copying ranvir;s style of hugging is ok ? but copy same words hmmm that doesnt sound gud, better aalekh says something cute on his own... no offense plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz bura bilkul mat manana


thnx for the suggestion. will try to change it the next time i write 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
yeah really good keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
omgg
wonderfull👏
wish it was there
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Posted: 16 years ago
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vasu goes to aalekh .but aalekh is angry with her and he gets scared thinking of the red roses. aalekh runs to the terrace and vasu follows him.🤢 but he gets more and more scared.he is about to jump from the roof 😕and vasu is helplessly caling for sadhna. sadhna hearing all the comotion cmes running and she sees this and gets stunned.😕
she shouts aalekji!!!🥱
and she tries to pull him back and vasu also helps her .😕
and sadhna succeds in pulling him back and aalekh and sadi falls on the floor with alekh on top of her 😆😆sadhna is just releived that aalekh is safe😊. .aalekh just stares at sadhna and 😆😆looks into her eyes. and even in such a situation(aalekh is scared of vasu)
he feels something.😊he remembers what ragini told him the othe day abt love. he feeels an intense desire to kiss sadhna.👏⭐️ he gives a kiss on her cheek and she looks stunned⭐️😳and just them chotimaa and ragini come running hearing all the commotion and they sees this😳😳😳.chotimaa and argini also get happy seeing this and even vasu who was sad had a smile on her face .😛😊😳
ragini helps aalekh and sadhna get up and the 3 go to saalekh's room.
sadhna goes to get water for aalekh .and ragii says to aalekh that waht he did was right and he made sadhna so happy😊 aalekh also gets happy.ragini leaves as she has got some work.
sadhna asks aalekh why he was going to jump from the roof and he says that he is scared of vasu.😡 and sadhna asks him to forget abt the roses and thin abt the nice things she has done for him and ranvir. aalekh says ohk ohk!!and vasu who is standing outside the room hears this and gets happy.😊😛
😛and sadhna and aalekh hug.😳
at night;
sadhna goes to her sofa to sleep and aalekh is already on the bed.he thinks to himself his dost is socaring and loing an shares everything with me. why don't i do something for her??😆😆
and he calls sadhna. 😛😊sadhna comes over to him and asks abt the matter and aalekh asks her to sleep on the bed from today . sadhna is so happy and she cries a bit(khushi ka aasu) aalekh asks if something is wrong?😳😳 and he syas to himself that hell ask ragini whether what he did was right r wrong.sadhna takes her blanket and comes to the bed. aalekh says that he is too scared to lie on the side of the bed .so theyl have to share 3/4th of the bed . sadhna agrees and its really conjusted and aalekh hugs sadhna while in hi sleep.😳😳
in the morning
sadhna is already up and she is getting ready. and just then someone knocks on the door.
she opens an it is ragini and she ses a happy and cheerful sadhna 😊😛
she gives sadhna tea and just hen alekh gets up and he says good morining. he asks ragini whether he did something wrong when he asked sadhna to sleep with him??
😆😆😃
😆😆😃sadhna just blushes 😳😳😳and ragini gets happy. and ragini says jijiaji aap nee teek kiya.😃
😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nasco
You are just toooo gooood....
Your writing is great too & u have a lovely creative mind too!!!
I would love to watch scenes like these!!!!
Fantastic
xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasco

vasu goes to aalekh .but aalekh is angry with her and he gets scared thinking of the red roses. aalekh runs to the terrace and vasu follows him.🤢 but he gets more and more scared.he is about to jump from the roof 😕and vasu is helplessly caling for sadhna. sadhna hearing all the comotion cmes running and she sees this and gets stunned.😕
she shouts aalekji!!!🥱
and she tries to pull him back and vasu also helps her .😕
and sadhna succeds in pulling him back and aalekh and sadi falls on the floor with alekh on top of her 😆😆sadhna is just releived that aalekh is safe😊. .aalekh just stares at sadhna and 😆😆looks into her eyes. and even in such a situation(aalekh is scared of vasu)
he feels something.😊he remembers what ragini told him the othe day abt love. he feeels an intense desire to kiss sadhna.👏⭐️ he gives a kiss on her cheek and she looks stunned⭐️😳and just them chotimaa and ragini come running hearing all the commotion and they sees this😳😳😳.chotimaa and argini also get happy seeing this and even vasu who was sad had a smile on her face .😛😊😳
ragini helps aalekh and sadhna get up and the 3 go to saalekh's room.
sadhna goes to get water for aalekh .and ragii says to aalekh that waht he did was right and he made sadhna so happy😊 aalekh also gets happy.ragini leaves as she has got some work.
sadhna asks aalekh why he was going to jump from the roof and he says that he is scared of vasu.😡 and sadhna asks him to forget abt the roses and thin abt the nice things she has done for him and ranvir. aalekh says ohk ohk!!and vasu who is standing outside the room hears this and gets happy.😊😛
😛and sadhna and aalekh hug.😳
at night;
sadhna goes to her sofa to sleep and aalekh is already on the bed.he thinks to himself his dost is socaring and loing an shares everything with me. why don't i do something for her??😆😆
and he calls sadhna. 😛😊sadhna comes over to him and asks abt the matter and aalekh asks her to sleep on the bed from today . sadhna is so happy and she cries a bit(khushi ka aasu) aalekh asks if something is wrong?😳😳 and he syas to himself that hell ask ragini whether what he did was right r wrong.sadhna takes her blanket and comes to the bed. aalekh says that he is too scared to lie on the side of the bed .so theyl have to share 3/4th of the bed . sadhna agrees and its really conjusted and aalekh hugs sadhna while in hi sleep.😳😳
in the morning
sadhna is already up and she is getting ready. and just then someone knocks on the door.
she opens an it is ragini and she ses a happy and cheerful sadhna 😊😛
she gives sadhna tea and just hen alekh gets up and he says good morining. he asks ragini whether he did something wrong when he asked sadhna to sleep with him??
😆😆😃
😆😆😃sadhna just blushes 😳😳😳and ragini gets happy. and ragini says jijiaji aap nee teek kiya.😃
😃



aww so sweet.. i hope they show this for real... and when sadhna'sgetting emotional when alekhji ask her to sleep on the bed they can play the song piya o piya saawariya tu samne aur tujhe milne ko tarse jiya.

i hope alkeh does things on his own to show his love for sadhna with the help of ragi then copy ranveer.

just my opnion no offence to anyone
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

lol! ur idea is fantastic i really wish it happens i would love to see the concept you wrote.

it is such a sweet idea.

thanks for sharing

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
thankyou everyone for ur feedback😊
. ill continue writing scenes like this😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow...nice imaginations...some one please e-mail this to Rajan ji....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i really like sadhna a loot and want to see her happy and i also want that mamiji and maiji to learn a lesson. according to the current track of the serial .i don't think that this will be shown soon. this is just my thought of how sadhna would get a mother's love from vasu. and naniji and mamiji learning a lessson 😛
sadhna asks aalekh who bought the neckalce as she knew he will not go out alone.😊aalekh says that chotimaa brought the necklace for him.😛
😛saalekh go to chotimaa to thank her for the necklace.
they hear chotimaa and satyanji talking that if vasu hadn't given them the money. then they could not have helped aalekh.😊
aalekh gets angry hearing vasu's name and he goes to his room. sadhna goes with him. sadhna explains to aalekh that vasu loves her a lot and that's why she found sadhna as a friend for aalekh and even she agreed to ragvir marriage and now she was the one who gave chotimaa the money to buy the necklace.😳
😛aalekh understands and saalekh go to vasu😊
vasu room
vasu is crying thinking abt aalekh .saalekh enter and allekh says sorry an thnx her for giving money to buy the necklace . vasu gets happy and vasu and aalekh hug.😃😳 and vasu says that if aalekh wants to buy anything he can ask it to her and shell buy it for him. aalekh says ohk!ohk.😳
aalekh says that it was his dost who made him understand hat badima is good. vasu hugs sadhna. aalekh says to vasu that she must love sadhna very much unlike mamiji who likes only ranvir's friend.sadhna gets sad hearing this . vasu says that sadhna is also her daughter sadhna has given her so much happiness and thy both hug again.😊
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sharma house:
mamiji says that she wants to see ragini as its a long time since they have gone to the rajvansh house.
mamaji agrees and they all go .(mamaji, mamiji, naniji. malti and vinu)

rajvansh house
sharma's enter while the rajvash's are having breakfast.ragini takes mamiji ,naniji &mlti to her room to show them the necklace that ranvir brought for her.they all like it and malti says that she would have been happier if vinuji buys her one.ragini says that sadhna also liked it very much. wich is not liked by naniji and mamiji😆

saalekh room
aalekh wants sadhna to wear the necklace . 😊⭐️sadhna at first diasagrees but then after some persuation from aalekh finally wears it.both sadhna and aalekh get out of the room just when naniji, mamiji and malti pass through the way.
malti notices that sadhna is wearing the same necklace as ragini😕
naniji and mamiji misunderstand her and humiliate sadhna by saying that she is so selfish and greedy that she demanded the same necklace as ragini.😕ragini trys to stop her mom but in vain.
naniji further asks ragini not to show sadhna anything that ranvir buys for her.(vasu who had been coming to call saalekh for breakfast heard all this)😡
aalekh is angry😡hearing all this and just when he was about to say something vasu said that sadhna is aalekh's wife and is also like her daughter she says that it was her who brought sadhna the necklace bcoz aalekh wanted to gift sadhna 👏.mamiji and naniji are angry hearing all this.vasu goes over to sadhna and comforts her 😳
😃she rubs her tears wich id not liked by nani and mamiji.👏
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plz bear with the mistakes. sorry no romantic scenes in this. il surely post a romantic scen in my next post.
share ur commets and feedbacks


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