CHAND SA CHERA...FF 1st part updated

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Posted: 16 years ago
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GUYS I AM STARTING A FF ON OUR FAV JODIS...HERES IS DA INTRO.....!!

CHAND SA CHERA...RR AND AS FF

Yeh kahani hai merey aur merey pariwar ki jis main pyar hai apna pan hai aur ek doosrey key liye dil mein dard bhi hai /..

yeh hein merey bauji'duniya key sab sey pyarey bauji ..jo mujhey apni jaan sey bhi zayda chahatey hein


meri ma jo duniya ki haar maa ki tarhan sirf apney bachoon key barey mein hi sochti hai...!!
maa aur bauji key beech mein ek attoth rishta hai jo pyar aur vishwas sey bana hai...

Yeh hein merey bhaiya..jitni bhooli surat utney hi sedhey bhi hein ...par merey liye yeh duniya key sab sey pyareyy bhaiya hein

yeh hein merey bhaiya key demag ki chabi..mera matlab hai meri bhabhi..yeh sochti jitna hein us sey kahein zayada bolti bhi hein

arrey is key barey mein toh main bhool hi gai yeh hai meri sab sey pyari behen SADHAN ...yeh kehna mushkil hai key is ka dil zayda pyara hai ya is ka chehra..jo bhi ho merey liye toh hai yeh meri hoti behen sadhna....

App soch rahey hoon gey main hoon kaun????

...main hoon RAGHNI..............????

CHAND SA CEHRA............!!!

COMING

SOO00N!!!!

I HOPE U LIKED DA INTRO..PLEASE DONT FORGET 2 LAVE UR COMMENTS GUYS....

LOVE RAYM...!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww please comment guys....???? i am waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i will reply.......that was a great intro.........cant wait to see an official first part......bohut badiya!!!!!!! jaldi update karna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetusidhu

i will reply.......that was a great intro.........cant wait to see an official first part......bohut badiya!!!!!!! jaldi update karna

aww thankx dear i will update very jaldi😆😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely start raym...please update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok!!!!!! hum intezaar karenge update ka!!!!!! cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nice Ryam do continue...!!! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww.. i jz lubb d Intro.. swtiee plzzzzzzzzz continue SoOn... im w88in.. lubb FF.. Awesum Awesum ... 😉
sahi kaha sach mein chad jaisa chehra hai apka.. 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice intro, do continue.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHAND SA CEHRA....!!!
FIRST PART.....
We can see a small house…wooden door enterance decorated with beautiful rangoli and a middle age woman singing arti…..
After pooja da woman turned around and called……..ragini beta zara neechey toh aana

Ragini who was busy writing dairy replied ….ji ma aa rahi hoon..

grabbing her dupptta she rushed down stairs…haan maa kuch kaam tha??

Maa patted her head and said…..beta raat tujhey jo kaam batya tha who kiya key nahi

Ragini looked confused…kesa kaam maa??

Maa said softly…kaal bazaar sey haldi sey bani hui cream la kar di thi na suna hai hamerey paroos mein jo lala ji rehtey hein un ki larki ka rang bhi issi cream sey nikala hai…bass tu haar raat yaad sey laga liya kar

Ragini added sadly….maa cream sey kuch nahi hota jissey bhagwan ney jesa banaya hai woh wesey hi rahey ga

Suddenly sadhana interrupted from behind…..haan maa ji ji sahi reh rahi hai jisey bahgwan ney jesa banya hai who wesey hi rahey ga…meri jiji jesa toh purey mumbai main koi nahi hai…saying dat sahe hugged ragini

Maa smiled….bass meri toh yahi dua hai key is ghar mein tum bachoon ka pyaar yun hi bana rahey

Just dan malini(ragini bhabhi) walked in…..aaey haeey jhoot toh main bolti nahi maa ji apni jo sharma ji hai na kaal hi keh rahey they key ek barey ghar ka rishta hai un ki nazar mein ragini key liye,main ney toh saf keh diya bhai pehley chehra dekh lo…ek dafa pehley bhi ek larka humari raghini ko reject kar chukka hai abb bhala humari ragini kaam hai kisi sey…..

Maa said loudly …veenu ki bahu baat kartey huey sooch liya kar….she turned angirly and walked towards da kitchen

Malini…aeey haeey ab aesa kya keh diya tu boal sadhna main ney jhoot kaha??? Main ney toh ragini ki bhalai key liye unhey pehley hi bata diya hai key us main kya kami hai ab is main ghalat kiya hai

Ragini was hurt tears were formed in her eyes she tried her best not 2 cry while Sadhna replied…..bhabhi jiji main koi kami nahi aur jiji jis ghar mein jaey gi wahan khusiyan hi khusiyan hoon gi ,chalo jiji aaj ghar main bohat kaam hai…saying so she grabbed raginiz hand and walked away leaving vinu ki bahu in anger……bari ayi apni jiji key gunn ganey wali main bhi dekhti hoon kaun shadi karta hai is ragini sey??????????????????????

2 be continued...pls pls leave ur comments

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