FIrSt EpIsOdE uPdAtE: oct.23.07.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys...please forgive my spelling mistakes...and sry if i miss some things...my first time writing an update...i'll do two..short and long....sry guys still don't know all the names..so for now i'll say blah's daughter or son...again sry for the late update

FiRsT ePiSoDe:

short forms;

characters:

gayatri-gayu

pariksit: par.

mamaji: ma

mamiji:mimi

short update:

    intro of gay....she finds out she is pregnant with their first baby par gets fired. from his job.....
  • he comes home to inform everyone..and so mamji kicks them out of the house....

long update:

scene 1: ouside house in the lot..

intoduction of gayu..praying to tulsi ma andwatering her..she prays to god that her dream comes true of having a family of her own...

scene 2: in the house

gayu is heading out, when mamiji stops her asking her where she is headed..to that gay replys that she will be back soon...mamiji says i'm asking u where u are going not when u will be back( gosh take a chill pill mamiji)....gayu replys she is going to the doctor's office....to which mamiji says u look fine to me then why do u need to go???..just then mamiji's daughter enters(sry don't know her name yet) saying sar dard hora hoga...mummy bade ghar ki beti hai ek mamoli sar dard nahi sehen kar sakti..translation...she probably has a headache...she is a rich family's daughter she can't take the pain....(god get a life...poor gay). mamiji taunts gayu again saying money doesn't grow on trees and neither does your father give us money or neither does your husband earn so much money( god she is making such a big issue),..upon this gayu quitely walks away..and mamiji is still going on....

scene 3: doctor's office

at the doctor's office gayu has her hand joined praying... the doctor tells gay that she has to face the truth....upon this gayu gets worried.....then the doctor tells her that she is pregnant...gayu suddently starts to smile she is so happy..that finally her dream has come true....she touches the doctor's feet and thinks to herself..that she will give her baby all the happiness in the world that she never got...she will never let him out of her site....

scene 4: factory location godown

ramakant (par's manager) and an employee are talking about movie tickets...then they intro par..where par is woking..he is telling the workers to put the boxes in the truck...when he overhears an employee talking about how they write that they have send this many amount of boxes and in reality they send a diff amount...par talks to the employee about why this is happening...they employee says he made a mistake and will fix it....upon that par walks away and ramakant arrives and he talks to the employee about doing something about par or their business will be in big trouble...

scene 5: telephone booth

a peon comes running to par telling him there is a call for him...par picks up the phone..on the other side is gayu..she is quite...par realises it is her and takes her name...gayu suprisingly asks how he knew he tells her..to recognize her he only needs to hear her silence(kya relationship hai)...he then asks her why she called...she tells him to guess why she is so happy...he thinks for a while and starts to smile..saying gay are u...she syas yes...(wat a cute scene😳)...he tells her not to tell anyone he is coming home with a box of sweets and he will tell everyone...

scene 6: in the house

mamaji is bringing two guys who are carrying bags on their backs...he asks them to place it in the corner...he places his hands in his pockets removing two notes..he puts one back in his pocket and gives the guys a rs.10note😆😆(good this ma is too canjos)...just then mam enters and asks him wat all this is...he tells her that the cost of this has increased in the market so they will sale these....mam is very happy hearing this....

scene 7: in the house

gayu comes in the house with a big smile and a brown envelope in her hand....she sees ma and mam sitting and chatting..she quitely walks passing them towards the mandir...she places the envelope under the mandir and thanxs god..upon seeing this mamiji taunts gay..telling ma kaun si bemar hai...upon this ma says she is sick..now how much money is it going to cost us....(so rude..)..just then ma's son enters asking ma for rs.100..to which ma replying even u want money...son says that if we win this lottery we will be crorepati's.....mam replys that ma even doesn't dream in the fear that how much will it cost(god how canjoos)....ma says to his son that he better stop dreaming otherwise he will go crazy....his son replys that u watch i will be rich i wil buy a bunglow will lots of servants so that my gayu bhabi won't have to work..(how sweet😊)....he stands up asking gay for blessings..gay blesses him saying that one day he will become a very rich man....gay leaves from there...

scene 8: mandir room

gayu goes back and prays she is about to remove the envelope and leave when ma's daughter comes in asking her to make tea..because her husband is coming home soon(god why should gayu make tea for your husband..make it yourself..like the way u taunt her yourself)...gayu sweetly agrees..she leaves the envelope there are goes to the kitchen..ma's daughter picks up the envelope reads the report which says gay is preggy....she has a big smirk on her face...

scene 9: par's work

par reaches his bosses office....there he sees ramakant sitting with his boss..his boss blames him for the mistakes in the accounts to with ramakant adds mirch masala....his boss says they can't have such people working here..par has a sad facial expression...

scene 10: in the house

ma's daughter's hubby comes home...he tries to blackmail ma for money...but is unsuccessful

scene 11: outside the house

par arrives home in his bicycle...gayu runs to him..and they have a sweet hug..she saks him where are the sweets he looks sadly at her asking her to go inside with him...ma is waiting for par...as par enters ma asks him for money..but par replys that je has lost his job...ma starts taunting him...and mam adds in...ma's daughter adds the masala by telling them that gay is preggy....to which ma n mam taunt them even more..and ma tells gayu to abort the child(god how dare he)...the epi ends on the sad faces of par and gayu....

precap: par and gayu are in their new home...where their neighbour helps them set up...they both look really happy...

rating out of 5: i would give it 5.....

i think the first epi has done lots of justice..lots of emotions soon...

star of epi goes definately to gay: for her brilliant performance...

till monday guys....have fun...

luv margi😳

sry guys...i changed her short form to gayu....

Edited by gujugurl - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot. can u use some other short name for gayatri please.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: punirag

thanks a lot. can u use some other short name for gayatri please.

sry yaar..i changed it now.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds like yet another family saga.

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