FanFic: Destiny-[ Part 4 +5 upd. pg.3] - Page 2

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Marthika thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Aww twinyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy......Its awsome will read it now . 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
wow it rocks!! do contiue, cant wait 2 see wa happens in dubai 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
i will continue on friday for sure!
promise
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Posted: 18 years ago
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After Chachi aur Chacha dropped and said, " Good Bye Mahi & Ganga " they left.
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Part 3: Old Memories

After Mahi & Ganga reached at Dubai, they were shocked seeing so many new things, places and people changed. When Mahi was 6 years old & Ganga was 3 years old, they lived and were raised in Dubai until they moved to London after 4 years later. Mahi & Ganga's family lived in this huge mansion named after Ganga's mother Sawatri. Ganga doesn't remember much about Dubai, so Mahi will remind her all the fun and good times they had!

Mahi: Ganga do you see our driver...?
Ganga: kyaa, humare paas ek driver bhi hai..? uska naam kya hai..?
Mahi: uuf Ganga, yeh hai humara phoorane driver. Mujhe uska naam nahin
baata. Lekin tum pooch leyna jaab aayega.
Ganga: Itne kuch hogaya yahaan aur mujhe baata bhi nahin hai..?
Mahi: Sweety (Ganga) tum sirf theen saal ki thi jaab humane Dubai ko
choodne parda.
Ganga: ohhh....

Driver: ( Standing holding a board saying Mahi & Ganga )

Mahi: wohh raha humare driver.. yeh board waale..!
Ganga: hello..

Driver: chalo mein aap dono kya luggage lay lay tha hu. Aap dono ki
journey kaisi thi?

Mahi & Ganga: Fantastic!

--------------Break-Time----------------

While seeing thru the limo outside, Ganga was amuzed by seeing all
buildings, houses, cars, people and lots more.

Mahi: Dekho Ganga, yeh humare mansion hai, jo aapka mommy ka naam hai
Sawatri Mansion !
Ganga: ohh.. wow
Mahi: We're home... (to Ganga's mom's sister and jijaji)

Welcome my children, welcome to Dubai again said Ganga's mom sister Yatra aur her husband Sanjay.

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Will continue now later o tomorrow!

Please Read, Comment & Predict the next Part!

Priyanka
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
awww awesome update!!
cantt waitt to read more..
continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
gr88!!!
I hav a question?? was Gangas parent divorced? I mean her dad lived in Mumbai and her mom in dubai.. 😕
newaiz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pori

gr88!!!
I hav a question?? was Gangas parent divorced? I mean her dad lived in Mumbai and her mom in dubai.. 😕
newaiz continue soon



no, Ganga's parents werent divorced.. her mom died when Ganga was 1 yr old but after she died they moved in London.. not mumbai!😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4: Sagar sees Ganga with Mahi

Introducing Sagar and his friends Shaan & Raj going out to meet Mahi
and Sagar starts talking to Ganga and tries to be friends with her.

Shaan: Aare Sagar, chalo hum Raj ko lekaar kayhi bhaar chalte hai...
Sagar: yeah yeah.. ok chalo..
Raj: hii guys, where are we going?

They going to Dubai sight seeing and they see Mahi...

Sagar: aare dekho, isnt that Mahi from London..?
Raj & Shaan: haan, she looks like her.. lekin uske saath yeh khoobsurat
larki kyon hai...?
Sagar: ( starts staring at her [falling in love] )....
Shaan: MAHI! MAHI! [screams her name across the street]

Mahi: turns around and looks, shes says back.. omgg Hii guys!!
Mahi and Ganga come near them, omgg what a concidence, how are you all?
When did you guys come..? omgg...

Raj: hii Mahi, how are you? when did you come back from London?
Mahi: ohh.. im great and we came back yesterday evening!
Mahi: haan, yeh meri choti cousin hai Ganga...
Mahi: [had a crush on Sagar since when she was little, even now she
does too].. oyee.. Sagar, tum itna chuup kyun haii? Tumhare mooh mein
kuch hai kya..?
Raj: nahinn wohh uske sapne mein khooye hai...!

Sagar: shut up yaar! aaisa kuch nahin.. mein toh sirf sooch ra tha..
Shaan: kyaa...?
Sagar: kuch nahin... Hello Ganga, don't mind my friends.
Ganga: Hello, nice to meet you!
Sagar: Ganga, now we friends..?
Ganga: Sorry, I don't make friends that easily.
Sagar: Ohh.. Well ok, get to know me better!

Mahi, Shaan, Raj: starts staring at Sagar & Ganga talking...
Then later on Raj: laktha hai... Sagar ko pyaar hogaya...!

Mahi: shut up Raj..! kuch bhi keythe ho...
Shaan: kyun..? Are you jealous..?
Mahi: noo.. ok bye.. come on Ganga...!

Ganga: ok.. bye Sagar & Everybody!
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Part 5: Sagar calls Mahi to Hangout !

*Ring, Ring, Ring*

Mahi: picks up the phone & says Hello..
Sagar: Hi Mahi, Do u think Ganga will hangout with me for little while..?
Mahi: umm, i'll ask her..
Mahi: GANGA..... zaara yahaan yana..
Ganga: kya didi?
Mahi: would u like to go out with Sagar for little while..?
Ganga: KYAAA...? is it a DATE..? umm no..
Mahi: nahin yaar, just to know new friends !
Ganga: umm ok... but are u coming with me?
Mahi: Sorrii jaan, i won't be, but don't worry he'll drop you home safe &
sound!
Ganga: ok...

Mahi: yeahh Sagar.. woh tumhare saath jaayegi, lekin only for couple
of hours.. yhh..
Sagar: great! don't worry We are only going to the park!
Mahi: oh ok!!

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Sagar: [*Knocking on the Door*]
Mahi: opens the door and says hii..
Ganga: comes down, looking very pretty
Sagar: wow Ganga, you are looking very pretty!
Ganga: thanks
Mahi: ok.. guys see ya all n little while!

Sagar & Ganga: comes out and Ganga: stares at his hott silver car...
Ganga: wow.. kya khoobsurat gaadi hai..
Sagar: thank you!
Sagar: Mein tumko park layjoga..
Ganga: park kyun...?
Sagar: Remember yesterday you told me, you don't make friends easily
that you don't know much..? So, we are going there and i'll tell you
everything about me! Then i'll to hand my friendship to you!
Ganga: ohh.. ok

They reach at the park, it was a beautiful warm/cool weather with alot
of people at the parks with their dogs and children! Sagar & Ganga sit
under a huge tree.

Ganga: hum yahaan kyun baatye..?
Sagar: well, kyun ki.. yeh tree maine aur Mahi ne grow kiya tha jaab hum
chote thhey.. Mahi is my best friend. Ok let me introduce to you abt myself
then its you turn!
Ganga: ok..

Sagar starts:
Name: Sagar Malhotra
Age: 23
Born: Dubai
Fav. Singer: HR
Fav. Actor/Actress: Amitabh & Hema Malini
Fav. Sport: Volleyball
Education: Dubai University
Major: Business
Work: Malhotra Industries [papa aur bhai ka company]

Ganga: wow...
Sagar: ok tumhara turn ...

Ganga starts:
Name: Ganga Choudary
Age: 21
Fav. Singer: Sunidi Chauhan
Fav. Actor/Actress: Srk & Priyanka
Education: London University
Major: Fashion Designer
Work: Ganga Fashion Designs

Sagar: woahh.. fashion designer.. not badd!

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Will Continue Saturday now for part 6!!

Please Read & Comment!
Tell what will happen next...?

Priyanka
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
wow awesome! cant wait 4 next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
wow jaanu! an awesome FanFic! please continue soon!

Luvooo

Faiza 😛 😉 👏

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