28th August 08 Written update *NOTE* nd short/long

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i am so sorry i have been busy!! but i will be posting the written update evry soon!! please be patient!!!
i apologise for the delay!!
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Short Update!
    Shanta is saying to RM how his announcement brought more happiness to the wedding! Shubodh says that its joy and a worry to give away your sister! Ganga comes and Shakuntala says she will be back really soon to take her away! Ganga is taking Kaveri to her bedroom, she tells her she looks beautiful! RM tells his mum to go sleep, she shows him some Bangles, and tells RM to give them to Ganga! Ganga brings Kaveri to the bedroom, Kaveri questions Ganga on RM! Saagar walks in, Ganga leaves and cries outside the door! Kaveri hugs Saagar Ganga is in her room crying, with Sangam song playing, she has flashbacks of her and Saagar and SaKa's wedding! She then has a falshback of the talk between her and RM! We discover he refused to accept her at first as he thought she understood love as being a game! Ganga then reveals she wants to forget her past and RM accepts her! Ganga (in her bedroom) then says she needs to become stronger!
  • Saagar is reluctant to hug Kaveri, Kaveri sees this and questions if he still loves the other girl!! It ends on Saagar's face which has tears in his eyes!

Long Update

Shanta, Shubodh, RM, Shakuntala and RM-Bua are standing together!
Shanta: on this happy occasion, by Rahul and Jhanvi giving us this good news they have made it more happier!

Shubodh: not just the happiness, we have maintained two responsibilities! One Kaveri got married and came into this house as a bride! And Second Jhanvi will be a bride and leave this house! Do you know begum, for a brother, to farewell a sister is a joy as well as a worry! But I'm not worried, ask why!

Shanta: Why?

Shubodh: Because the hosue Jahnvi is going, is no strange place for us! It's my best firiend's house! (and he hugs RM!)

Bua: Damadji, this is suh a good thing, but, Ramji jhoot na bulvaye, I think that this good thing should be done really soon! I am right aren't I? (she asks Shakuntala who nods!)

Ganga comes!

Ganga: you are going already?

Shakuntala: we are going for now, but we will come back quick and take you with us! (Ganga looks down, while everyone else smiles!) Really Jhanvi, you have given us great happiness, now we are witing for the time you come into out hosue as a bride! (Ganga looks down, while everyone else smiles! Ganga touches Shakuntala's feet!) Be Happy!

RM folds his hands to everyone to say that he is leaving!

At night, Ganga is walking with Kaveri in the corridor!

Ganga: you are looking really beautiful! (They carry on walking!) Saagar must never have seen this appearance of yours before! (they walk a bit more!) One minute! (she stops Kaveri and lowers her veil over her eyes! Ganga sees this and looks a bit upset! They carry on walking and she smiles!)

At RM house!

Shakuntala: Really Rahul, today you have made me the world's luckiest mother! (RM smiles!) I am very very happy!

Rahul: (he puts his hands on Shakuntala's shoulders!) Maa, by seeing you like this I am very delighted! (Shakuntala smiles and starts to turn!) Anyways, now you go to sleep! And yes, before sleeping take your medicine! Good night!

Shakuntala: Good night! (RM starts to walk away!) Hold on Rahul, I want to show you something! (she wlaks towards the cupboard!)

She takes a box out of the cupboard, and faces RM holding it! RM looks confused! Shakuntala walks towards him! She opens the box! It's two Bangles, RM picks one up and looks at it!

RM: this Bangle?

Shakuntala: this bangle your grandmother gave to me, to give to my daughter-in-law! (RM puts the Bangle back in the box!) And now, this dream has came with happiness! Your birde is coming into this house Rahul! But I cannot wait anymore! I want to give her this Kangan really fast!

RM: Really Maa, JHanvi is lucky! (he touches Shakuntala's cheek!) That she is getting a mother like you!

Shakuntala: And Jhanvi is also lucky, that you have came into her life! (RM smiles, and puts his hand on Shakuntala's shoulders again!) I'm telling the truth Rahul, I know you will always keep her happy! You won't let a shadow of sadness fall on her! You will take on all her grieves! You will give her true love! (She puts the box in RM's hands!) I know! (RM is smiling like a Cheshire cat!)

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Ganga brings Kaveri into the bedroom! Kaveri sees a picture of Saagar on the table, she looks at it and smiles, she then looks at Ganga who smiles!

Ganga: come!

They walk towards the bed, which has been decorated!

Ganga: Sit! (she makes Kaveri sit on the end of the bed!) I will go Didi! (she starts to walk away when Kaveri grabs her hand!)

Kaveri: One minute Jhanvi! (Kaveri gets up and looks at Ganga!) I wasn't able to talk to you, now tell me how all this happened, when it happened, and how long it has been going on! (Ganga looks shocked!)

Ganga: what? (she looks confused!)

Kaveri: don't try to be ignorant/unaware! (Ganga looks worried she looks down!) I am your elder sister, I understand everything! (Ganga looks up at Kaveri again!) But you didn't understand me as anything isn't it? (Ganga looks down looking worried!) You didn't tell me anything about Rahul! (Ganga looks up and is shocked!)

Ganga: Didi it's…

Kaveri: Actually I am really happy for you! Now you can marry quickly too! (Ganga shocked!)

Saagar walks in through the door, looking depressed! Kaveri sees him, Ganga also looks that way! Saagar sees them and is shocked! Him and Ganga stare at each other! Kaveri pulls her veil down! Saagar steps forward!

Ganga: I'll go! (She smiles!)

Ganga starts to walk away, she goes past Saagar, she slowly walks past, while Saagar is looking at her! Saagar looks down! As Ganga is walking out her Sari gets stuck on the door handle! She sees this! Saagar looks up and Kaveri is wlking towards him! Ganga sees this, Ganga quickly tries to take her sari off the handle! She is looking at them while dong this, Saagar is looking at Kaveri wlak towatds him! Ganga takes the sari off the handle, she quickly goes outside, pulling the door with her! She leans on the wall outside and starts to cry, while looking at the door now and again! Saagar pulls the veil off Kaveri! They look at each other!

Kaveri: Saagar, won't you say anything!

Saagar: You …… look… really beautiful! (Kaveri smiles, while Saagar also faintly smiles!)

Kaveri: Saagar, this new relationship of ours has filled me with a strange feeling! (Saagar looks worried!) My heartbeats have become stronger, and my breaths I don't know what they are saying! (Saagar is taken aback by this!) Maybe the feeling of accepting my love has made my heart uncontrollable! (Saagar is shocked!)

Kaveri smiles, she moves forward and hugs Saagar, resting her head on his chest! Saagar looks scared/worried/confused by this!)

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Ganga is in her room on her bed! The Sangam music is playing! The windows in her room are open, the curtains are blowing! Ganga is seen with tears in her eyes! She has flashbacks of Mandir scenes in the village, and of when Saagar gave her the red wedding sari, and of when he proposed! Ganga is seen crying again! She has a flashback of Saagar and Kaveri putting the Garland around each other! She is seen crying again and has a flashback of Saagar and Kaveri taking the pheras! Ganga is crying and has a flashback of Saagar putting the Mangulautra on Kaveri! She then has a flashback on their Sangam in the village! She is still sitting on the end of the bed crying! The Sangam music stops and she has a flashback of when Saagar grabbed her during the wedding preparation and told her she needs to decide to marry RM or he wont sit in the Mandap! She continues to cry and has a flashback of when she went to stop RM!

*Flashback*

Ganga gets out of the car, she starts walking towards RM! RM is looking at her with anger, he then turns his head! Ganga walks towards him!

Rahul: Speak Jhanvi! What do you want to say? (Ganga looks worried!)

Ganga: (thinks!) oh God, give me strength … (she has tears in her eyes!) That I can tell Mr. Mehra everything!

Rahul is leaning on the car, facing away from Ganga!

Ganga: Mr. Mehra … I have just come to say that… that I am ready to marry you! (Rahul is shocked, he moves away from the car and faces Ganga! They stare at each other!)

Rahul: Jhanvi, maybe you think of Love as a game! When you want you will be ready to get married, when you want you will refuse to get married! (Ganga shocked!) But, my love is no game, it's the truth of my heart! (Ganga looks down! Rahul looks away! And then turns his head back, looking down!) But what is the benefit of explaining this to you! (Ganga looks up!) you don't even have the feeling that … that when you lose your love then how much it hurts! (Ganga shocked at this, they stare at each other, Ganga looks down!)

Ganga: Mr. Mehra, the decision of whether to marry you or not, has many people's happiness linked to it! (RM looks away!) and I cannot play with those happiness! (She looks down while saying this! RM is still looking away!) Mr. Mehra, when ever you say, what ever you say, I will marry you as per your wish! (RM shocked, he looks at Ganga!)

Rahul: So you didn't take your life's biggest decision because you love me, but you took it so you can give others happiness! (Ganga shocked!) So that others' hope don't break! (Ganga looks worried!) You are ready to sacrifice your entire life! (Ganga shocked! RM looks away!) Jhanvi, I cherish your feelings and your sacrifice! (Ganga has tears in her eyes, and looks uneasy!) But I want your love, not sacrifice! (Ganga shocked!) I cannot accept this sacrifice of yours! (Ganga shocked!) I cannot form a false bond! (Ganga shocked, they stare at each other!)

Ganga: Mr. Mehra, we are not the ones to may relations! This job is Krishna Bhagwan's! Now I know just that… that the relations he has given me … I have to uphold them with honesty and loyalty! (RM looks down!) Mr. Mehra, believe me … I will never hurt you!

Rahul: (looks at Ganga again!) Jhanvi, you can hide your past in your heart, (Ganga shocked!) or you can maintain a new … a different relation! But my heart isn't that big! (Ganga shocked!) I have loved twice in my life! (He is looking down while saying this! Ganga looks concerned!) and I don't want to lose it for the second time, but for my love to be upheld as a duty, as a responsibility, as a burden, I cannot tolerate that! (Ganga shocked! Shock sequence! Ganga looks hurt by this, she has tears in her eyes!)

Ganga: (RM is looking away!) Look Mr. Mehra (RM turns around!) even you have a past, whose memories were very excruciating! When you were sinking in those memories, (RM looks away!) when you thought … that you will never be able to move away from the shade of those memories, then I believed … I believed that you (she puts her hand on her chest!) … you will be able to move away from Maya's shadow, (RM looks at Ganga!) you will be able to make your today and your days to come, you can forget your past! (RM looks at Ganga, Ganga looks down with tears in her eyes!) Even I have a past … (she looks up at RM!) whose memories are agonizing! (RM looks away and looks down!) I want to forget those memories, I want to come out of the shadow of these memories! (RM still looking away!) I just want to say to you that … that by the virtue of friendship, will you not help me to get rid of those memories! (Ganga has tears in her eyes and is crying, RM looks at her!)

Rahul: Are you saying the truth Jhanvi? Will you really be able to forget your past and start a new life! (Ganga slightly nods with tears in her eyes! RM smiles, Ganga looks down! RM walks towards Ganga, he puts his hands on her shoulder!) Jhanvi, maybe … maybe your past is as painful as mine …. (Ganga looks down!) or maybe more! I can understand your pain very well! (Ganga looks up at him! RM wipes Ganga's tears!) I promise Jhanvi, (he holds her hand!) after today, I will not ask anything about your past! (Ganga looks at him with awe!) And to remove those throbbing memories I will even help you! (Ganga continues to look at him with respect!) After today you are not alone Jhanvi! I am with you! (Ganga smiles!) And ahead of us, our new life is waiting for us! (Ganga faintly smiles, and puts her hand on RM's hand!)

the camera zooms in on their hands!

*Flashback ends*

Ganga gets up from the bed, she wipes her tears! She is shaking her head, we can hear the wind blowing!

Ganga: No! ….. if I have to uphold the duty of my relations… then I will have to be stronger …. One moment of weakness could ruin Saagar and Kaveri didi's happiness …. And I will not let that happen … I will not let it happen! (Shock sequence on Ganga's determined face!)

In SaKa's room! Kaveri is still hugging Saagar! Saagar looks shocked! He slowly lifts up his hand to put around Kaveri! He stops half way! Kaveri opens he eyes! She sees him clenching his fist and lowering his hand! Kaveri is shocked at this! Saagar is still looking ahead troubled! Kaveri pulls out from the hug! Thunder strikes! Saagar is gobsmacked at this! They stare at each other!

Kaveri: Saagar you… you love that girl even today! (Saagar is aghast! Shock sequence on their faces and of a tear in Saagar's eyes!)

The episode ends on Saagar's teary eyes!!

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Sorry for it being late!
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Edited by bubblez91 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the great update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx a lot for the update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks foa the loveli update, ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That's absurd...marriage is shown to be a joke...you marry someone and love someone...why ruin the poor girl's life...it would be better for her to find out the truth before you married her and grieve rather than be married to someone whom she thinks loves her and married her because of that only to find out that he in fact is still in love with someone else....
I think Ekta needs to get her creatives thinking on some different lines...every show of hers has the same underlying storyline...it's getting difficult to bear! Sorry if you guys don't agree...this is just my opinion...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasim75

That's absurd...marriage is shown to be a joke...you marry someone and love someone...why ruin the poor girl's life...it would be better for her to find out the truth before you married her and grieve rather than be married to someone whom she thinks loves her and married her because of that only to find out that he in fact is still in love with someone else....

I think Ekta needs to get her creatives thinking on some different lines...every show of hers has the same underlying storyline...it's getting difficult to bear! Sorry if you guys don't agree...this is just my opinion...

umm this isnt one of Ekta's shows...
thanx 4 da update

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