30th july written update - complete

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Posted: 17 years ago
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30th july written update!!

Starts off with where it left off yesterday! Saagar reading the letter

Ganga: im going Saagar, now this is the only way that will distance you from me and bring you close to Kaveri didi, and that is of death! (Saagar shocked, screen goes black/white, to colour with the camera spinning on Saagar's shocked face, the camera continues to zoom in on his face, he continues to read the letter) Yes Saagar, I am going to give myself to death! (Saagar's face shocked again) Forget me and marry Kaveri didi, and this will be your greatest gift for our love! (Saagar shocked, the camera spins on his shocked face, with thunder in the background, the letter falls out of his hand to the floor)

Saagar: Ganga you can't do this big injustice with me, (Saagar shocked) you can't! (the camera spins on his shocked face, we see the letter on the floor, the camera goes back to his face, hes still shocked, he starts getting panicky) GANGAAA!! (and he runs out the room)

Saagar is in his car, driving, while the sad sangam music plays, he is looking around to see if he can see ganga, he wipes his tears and has a flashback of the first time they met, the mandir scenes back in the village, and when he saw ganga looking at the payals!

Ganga is walking (the music is still playing), she also has some flashbacks of moments back in the village and the scene where saagar held her hand when they went to through khurana's ashes!

Saagar is still driving and looking around, he has a flashback of when he gave ganga the wedding sari, he wipes his tears!

Ganga is seen walking, she has a flashback of saagar letting go of her hand and continuing to hug kaveri, her face is shown with tears!

Saagar is driving and has a flashback of the night they spent together back in the village!

Ganga is walking, and a man tries to tell her something (its muted as the music is still playing) she doesn't hear him and continues walking!

Saagar is in his car, looking around and ganga is seen walking!

We see a knife in a mandir, and a statue of God, Ganga walks into the mandir (the music har har gange plays, while theirs camera sequence of ganga's face and then the statue! saagar's car slides in from the left, then ganga's face slides back in!)

Ganga: Saagar, with those some moments I spent with you, I got my whole life's happiness, these were the moments I was missing from my life! And now, now death, (camera shot of the statue of God) I'm bringing only death close to me (she has tears in her eyes)

Saagar in his car slides in again (he is looking very disturbed), and then ganga slides in!

The camera zooms in on the knife, which Ganga is looking at! (theres a sequene between the knife and Ganga and Ganga and the statue) all the bells in the mandir start ringing, as she walks closer to the knife (theres another sequence between the knife, the statue and Ganga), Ganga then picks up the knife (another sequence between ganga and the statue), ganga slowly starts to walk back with the knife in her hand)

Saagar runs into the bit where the man was trying to talk to ganga, the man is seen sleeping, saagar is seen looking around, the man wakes up!

Saagar: Gangaaa??

Saagar asks the man something and the man points to the direction where Ganga went, saagar is shocked, and runs in that direction!

Ganga is shown in the mandir again talking to the statue!

Ganga: I know Maa, you are the one who gave birth to me, (the bells are still ringing and theres a sequence on the statue) and now in front of you I will end this life, (sequence on the statue) with the hope that Saagar will accept Kaveri didi, (sequence on the statue) Saagar will have to understand, that in this life Saagar and Ganga's meeting/union will never happen, (sequence on the statue) never.. (Never continues to echo)

Ganga holds the knife out in front of her, (theres a shock sequence on ganga's face and the statue, while the bells are still ringing and theres thunder in the background), she is about to stab herself!

Saagar: Ganga! stop (stop echoes)

Ganga stops and turns around, she sees saagar standing there!

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Ganga is shocked, the camera switches from Saagar's face to Ganga's face, going from back/white to colour again, then the sequence finishes with the idol, which also goes black.white to colour, there is also thunder in the background)

Saagar has his hand out and is panicking….

Saagar: what is this that you are doing? What are you doing? (he tries running up to her)

Ganga: stop there Saagar! (he stops) Stop there! (Saagar shocked) Saagar when dreams break, then those who see dreams have no right to live, (Saagar shocked) let me die, (Saagar shocked) let me go!

Saagar: what do you think? In front of my eyes you will give up your life and I will watch? (Ganga has tears in her eyes and looks down) No Ganga, you won't die alone, along with you I will also take/give up my life! (thunder strikes, Ganga is shocked) (camera sequence on Ganga and Saagar and then the statue) Till today I have given you my company at every step, today I will also give my company

Ganga: Saagar you won't do anything like that

Saagar: I will do it Ganga! (Ganga shocked) If I can't live with you, then I can die with you! (Ganga shocked – camera spins on her face and then on Saagar's)

Ganga: Saagar don't be stubborn, go from here, (thunder strikes) don't love me this much that my life will become a punishment of death (thunder strikes again)

Saagar: love is life Ganga! Yourself, me, your giving such a big punishment to both of us!

Ganga: life has given my punishment, (saagar shocked) first it gave me a dream, and it took it! (Saagar shocked) Then it gave me love, and took that too! (shock sequence on Saagar's face) At every step, it has given my punishment after punishment! (Saagar shocked) Today I will give punishment to life, punishment of death! (shock sequence on Ganga's face, Saagar's face and the idol, while thunder continues to strike in the background)

Saagar: and our love?? What about that Ganga?? (Ganga's face shown) In this what's the mistake of our love?? (Ganga lowers her eyes) I accept that in our life there are troubles, (Ganga's eyes continue to look down) but we saw dreams of spending our life together, (Ganga has tears in her eyes) don't break those dreams Ganga! Don't leave your company with life!

Ganga: those dreams were false Saagar! (Saagar shocked) We saw dreams that were never ours! (Saagar shocked) You are Kaveri didi's love, (Saagar shocked) and she has a right over you!

Saagar: and my right?? Don't I have any right over you Ganga?? (Ganga lowers her eyes again, which have tears in them) Will I be able to live after losing my reason to live? (Ganga continues to look down, while crying) By seeing my breaths being destroyed, will I be able to stay alive Ganga? (Ganga looks at him) I won't be able to stay alive! (Ganga shocked) (the sangam music starts to play in the background) My life is more important than death!

Ganga: that's why we will have to choose! A life indifferent than death, (Saagar shocked, thunder strikes) or death (Saagar shocked, there are claps of thunder in the background) (soz didn't quite catch it, due to signal) both of them…… (didn't catch that either, but could have been both of them are the same or something) (thunder claps) (sangam music gets faster)

Saagar: don't do this Ganga! Don't take my life away from me!

Ganga: Your life is Kaveri did's possession Saagar! (Saagar shocked) and I couldn't think of taking it away! (Saagar shocked) Saagar, you cannot ask for your debt of happiness from her

Saagar: Ganga try to understand (Saagar tries to walk towards her)

Ganga: Saagar.. (the sangam music stops) Look Saagar I have made my decision, (Saagar shocked, thunder strikes) between my death and Kaveri did's life I choose my death! (shock sequence on Saagar's face, the statue and Ganga's face, while thunder claps in the background) Saagar don't try to make my decision weak, (Saagar shocked, thunder strikes) for my responsibility I am begging you

Saagar: your not begging, your asking for death, (Ganga shocked) today you have made your decision heard, now listen to Saagar's decision, (Ganga shocked) between my life and death, I choose death (shock sequence on Ganga's face, Saagars face, and the statue, while thunder claps)

Saagar looks at the trident on the statue (shock sequence continues on, while thunder claps)! Saagar looks at the trident and walks over with determination on his face, he walks past Ganga (Ganga shocked), she turns around! Saagar continues to walk towards the idol, and pulls out the trident from the hands of the statue, he holds it in his hand (Ganga shocked), Ganga drops the dagger out of her hands! Saagar is aiming the trident to his stomach; Ganga runs over and stops him, by holding onto his arm

Ganga: stop Saagar! (Saagar looks at Ganga) (shock sequence on their faces) What are you doing? Saagar I cannot see you going close towards death (she has tears in her eyes)

The sangam music starts to play and Saagar also has tears in his eyes, Ganga is seen crying! Saagar grabs her shoulders

Saagar: then can I see it?? (Ganga who has tears in her hands, lowers her eyes) Ganga I cannot live without you, I cannot live without you! (tears fall out of Ganga's eyes) Promise me, (Saagar holds Ganga's hands, while thunder strikes) promise that you will never leave me, (Ganga crying) promise that you will never do such thing again (Ganga continues to cry, she gives a light nod)

Ganga: I promise you, you will also have to promise me something, (sangam music stops) (Saagar shocked) and you are under the oath of our love, (Saagar shocked) that you will never break that promise (Saagar shocked)

Saagar: (he looks down at him holding Ganga's hands) tell me what I will have to do?

Ganga: marry Kaveri didi.. (Saagar shocked, face goes black/white and back to colour, Ganga's face is shown, and the idol! Black/white shock sequence between Saagar, Ganga and the idol, then shock sequence continues in colour)

Saagar: nooo…. I cant do this.. (he gently shakes his head) I cannot promise you this

Ganga: then okay, I will not fulfil my promise! (shock sequence) If not today, then tomorrow, it not now then some other time, then you will lose me Saagar, (Saagar shocked) think Saagar, if you want to save my life then marry Kaveri didi, (Saagar shocked, Saagar and Ganga have let go of their hands and Ganga is standing away from Saagar) my life is in your hands

Saagar: (Saagar walks towards Ganga) in my life I have only seen one dream, to spend my life with you, today you broke even that dream, (Ganga ahs tears in her eyes) (Saagar starts to shake his head, he also has tears in his eyes) I cannot live without you, in my life there is no one more important than you, I promise you that I will marry Kaveri, (he holds Ganga's hands again) but you will have to make me a promise, you will have to live in my house with my family, (Ganga shocked) if you have a house then that's my house, if you have a family then it's my family, I will not let you be separated from me! Promise me; (Ganga is crying) promise me that this will happen!

Ganga: I promise you, but you will have to promise me something, you will never tell Kaveri didi anything about us

Saagar looks down, while Ganga is crying, he looks back up, with tears in his eyes!

Saagar: I promise you

The Sangam music plays in the background, he wipes Ganga's tears, they look at each other, Ganga wipes Saagar's tears (tears a flashback of the sangam back in the village) Saagar holds Ganga's hands, and they put their foreheads against each other (they have a flashback of the mandir scene in the village), the camera focuses on Saagar holding Ganga's hands, the camera moves up to their faces, both are seen crying! Ganga moves her forehead away from Saagar and pulls her hands out from Saagar's! Saagar looks up at Ganga's face and is shocked! Ganga starts walking away, Saagar looks at her, Ganga continues to walk away, while Saagar looks at her walking away! (the Sangam music stops) Saagar looks down!

It is morning, Kaveri is seen sleeping in her room, and the sun shines into her room, which wakes Kaveri up! She gets a jug of water from her bedside table and is going to fill it up! She is walking in the corridor and walks past Saagar's room, she notices no one is in their, she goes in and calls out his name!

Saagar and Ganga are in the car driving home, both have tears in their eyes, Saagar looks over to Ganga, who is looking straight ahead!

Kaveri continues to walk into Saagar's room, she looks around and sees his bed (which looks like it has been slept in)

Kaveri: where has Saagar gone this early in the morning??

The episode ends on her worried face!

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that is todays written update!! that episode is a must watch episode, it was a very emotional episode, with so many promises made, now we have to watch and see whether this promises are fulfilled or are broken!!
firstly i would like to say that i may have made mistakes, but thats because the sound was cut of on the videos and i have tried to interpret some speech!!
secondly please to tell me how the update is and if i can improve it for tomorrow!!
hope u enjoy the update and i will see you lot tomorrow!!
xxxx
Edited by bubblez91 - 17 years ago

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Soapgirl thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks :) waiting for the next part ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for updating the first part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG 2day's epi seems kool


looking 4ward to reading da oda parts

tnx for da update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: damilola

OMG 2day's epi seems kool


looking 4ward to reading da oda parts

tnx for da update

yh it was very cool! it was emotional, and saagar was crying, it was so sad!!
ur welcome,. the other parts have been added!!
xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hmm it was sch n emotional epsde..😳Cheerz 4 updte..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bubblez91

yh it was very cool! it was emotional, and saagar was crying, it was so sad!!
ur welcome,. the other parts have been added!!
xxx



yea i saw it

tnx for da lovely update

i felt like crying while reading da update imagine wats gonna happen wen i watch it


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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg thankx loooks like gotta read an essay lol...thanks for the detailed update ....u have done a wonderful job!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for updating the full thing!
It was a great update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update! thankyou! 👏

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