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Niti Patel

@infiniti1215

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

good luck to niti on her exams from niti!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

"little late both of them called their mothers...

"lekin mamma akash ko main kaise pehchanungi???"

"maine thodi na ussena milne ko kaha tha"

"but..."
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"mom how will i recognize manya who tho abbhi bhi aisi hi hogi na gussewaali..bilkul theeki mirchi ki tarah"

"akash tum use tang mat kana..bechari bachpan se tumhari shikayat karti aati hai aur tum bhaag jaate the"

"aap to uski hi tarafdaari karoge na"
they hung up phones...little later manya stood up to see where they had reached...at the same time the bus stopped with a jerk..they had reached pune and she fell on aksh with a thud..

"i'm sorry.woh main"

akash was looking into her eyes..the beutifel black eyes...her innocence...oh no yeh mein kya soch raha hoon ..

"its ok."

akash got down taking his luggage...manya put her luggage down ...but she cudn't getdown...as she was getting down the bus started to move...she closed her eys...but when she opened her eyes she saw akash holding out his hand...she gave her and to him not thinking of anything else

"thanx..."

"ur welcome madame mossil"

"huh "

and he proceeded towards the taxi stand...

"kyon yeh ajnabee itna jaana pehchaana lag raha hai..tu bhi kya soch rahi hai maanya...chal college chalti hoon'
she went to taxi stand
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they reached college and went near princi's ofie..they had't seen each other..manya went to sit near the girls..

"helloji main sanju..matlab sanjaut kaur"

"ii mein manya...manya sharma"

"mein rupa..rupa kashyap.."

"aur mein kiran"

"hii"

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"mara naam om..om prakash shikhawat"

"rehaan khan"

"gopal urff gopu"

"and i'm the cool dude akash rathod"

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after their encounter with princi...a girl and boy were interviewed together
om-rupa
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rehan-kiran

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gopu-sanju

manya and akashwere left...
unknowing of each other's presence they proceeded towards princi's cabin and wen they met......
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"tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm"

"tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm"
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tht's all for now hope torecive loads of cmments..and those who have commented..thanx a ton..individual replies kal tak ayegi...

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maaria

@pakirani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

wow u should think about writing the storyline for the actual show!!!! lol. really good....keep going.

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Niti Patel

@infiniti1215

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

hi niti!!! its superb!!!!!!! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!!!!!! 😃 ~niti~

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shisali

@soccorgirl1015

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

that was so so so so so so so so so good you should deffinatalyy continue....whens the next update pelase make it quick..i cant wait

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: pakirani
wow u should think about writing the storyline for the actual show!!!! lol. really good....keep going.

thanx...do check out my other fic love's life

Originally posted by: 26javey26
really good

thanx...continue reading

Originally posted by: infiniti1215
hi niti!!! its superb!!!!!!! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!!!!!! 😃 ~niti~

thanx niti ..by the way wat's ur age?

Originally posted by: soccorgirl1015
that was so so so so so so so so so good you should deffinatalyy continue....whens the next update pelase make it quick..i cant wait

thanx...will update 2day evening if possible

and to my silent readers do comment

Edited by liya16 - 17 years ago

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Niti Patel

@infiniti1215

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

hi niti.. im 17... i liv in michigan, usa... n my last name is patel... lets c how many things this niti has in common with the great writer niti... btw... wat makes me super happy is the way u spell niti N-I-T-I... many ppl spell it neeti.... so woo hoo for -iti!!!!! 😃 ~niti~

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Priya

@::Prem$_Priya::

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

It was really good!! I can't wait till Manya and Akash know that they're childhood friends... and then starts their love story!! 😃

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

update will be up tomorow as my exams will be over 😊

hope u guys r waiting

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

"tummmmmmmmmm..."

"tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm"

Princi was surprised....
"haila tum dono ek dusre ko pehchaate ho.yeh toh solid baat huyi"

"what?????"both of them said together

"i mean tum dono ek dusre ko pehchaate ho na"

"nahi"

"okkk take a chillpill"
they wer surprised by the attitude of princi..

"so he is prakash and she is ramya"

"akash"

"manya"

both of them yelled simultaneously..
the princi was bhullakd and always confused with names..

they stared at each other...being childhood friends they ddn't recognise each other..

"akash"-manya said

"manya"-akash said..

they cudn't believe that they had not recognised each other in the bus..
now they understood y the otherone felt soo familiar.

"aap dono ek dusre ko pehchaante ho na"

m:"woh"

a:"hum"

m:"bachpan"

a:"dost"

"yeh to bahut filmi hai..do bachpan ke dost mil rahe hai...ise dekhkar mujhe papu ki yaad aa rahi hai"

"pappu?"

"my childhood frend...mein toh senti ho jaaonga"

he started to tell the story by h tme time he finished it and looked where thy sat they wer gone

"haila yeh dono toh gayab ho gaye...koi abaat nahi kabhi aur suna doonga"

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after going out from ther they proceeded to hostel thinking abt each other..

"oh my god akash bilkul nahi badla..abhi aisa hi hai ..kitna tang karta hai aaj bhi..pagla"

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"manya sharma bilkul nahi badli..theeki mirchi hai mirchi hai...nakchadi..but stil very sweet and innocent"
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sanju was manya's roommate amd om was akash's roommate

later s,m,k,r,re,g,o,a. went to mess
akash and manya saw each other ...
not able to control anymore

they ran to each other and hugged each other tightly

"akash"

"manya"

all the others were stunned to see this

"yeh aksh fevikol e saath chipkane ki tarah kyun chipka hai chori se..manne kuch samaj nahi aa raha"

"oye kudi kee kar rahi hai"

"i think..yeh dono ek dusre ko jante hai'-kiran

"ho sakta hai"-rehaan

"pata nahi"-rupa

"mera sikka kehta hai ki in dono mein koi connection hai"
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done 4 the day hope like it and waiting 4 comments..thanx all reader and to ma silent readers do comment

love
niti

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