ranya os kya pyar karoge mujhse mature concept

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hey guys its me fiza this a os on ranya...it was request from my sweet ...chutki (sneha)..concept was hers ...basicallyranya confessing there love and what happens before she marrys mp
do comment i worked really hard
*Warning: Mature concept and very very slight mature content if that even is mature ...
kya pyar karoge mujhse
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The rays of the sun hit my face and I slowly opened my eyes 'the sunshine was always my alarm clock

That woke me up with hope of having a good day ahead of me 'but this morning I woke up knowing that hope was no use'this wasn't like any other morning ..it was the start of my wedding functions

Today was my haldi and mehndi, and sangeet and tommrow my wedding and then my wedding night

The thought of that gave me shivers ..i was so damn frightened at the thought of mp touching me '

I got up and walked to my window wear I could see ranveer down stairs telling the phoolwala to set the flowers up perfectly '

I was looking staright at him ..and so was he '(eyelock)

"I couldn't bare the thought of mp doing anything 'and more over I knew that more then me this most be killing ranveer inside" '. "he doesn't show it 'his rough and though strong guy iamge shouldn't break in front of me" .."but I could see it in his eyes ever minute he kept trying to keep busy

But he was heart broken" ' "there was a unspoken bond between us

We both knew the feelings we had for each other

Suddenly our eyelock broke at the sound of a knock on my door

"Hello madam 'aaj is your haladi and mehendi get dressed haldi will becoming any time yeh lo rnaveer had told to give you these ..it was a tray of clothes and jewelry" Said malika

I smiled and went and changed

I came down and sat in the hall malika was apply the haldi on me 'it was if some was apply mud '

This wasn't haldi 'for me kalic tha (black)

.."every girls dream of her wedding day was so special..and for me I was marrying india most wanted man for my contury" '.

"I couldn't bare all this ..i dont know how I handeled my self"

After the haldi was over I showered and came down for the mehndi

Wearing what ranveer had chose

"He came up to me 'you look beautiful aliya aao na" he said

I just stood there looking at him ..trying to read his eyes ..he made sit down and looked away

Malika was sitting right next to me putting mendi as .well

"Malika was from the guys side as well mp had sent her ..he didn't know we know one another"

"Ranveer was right there in front watching all this spectacle 'like nothing is wrong ..i hated when he acted like that"'

The mehndi walai asked me "aap ki dulhe ka name kya hai'initials kya hai" says the girl

"I was looking at ranveer I wanted scream and say ranveer mere dulha bana ka haak ranveer ko hai ' he is my dulha'my dulha's anme is ranveer" but 'i was quite. And looked away

Malika gave me a comforting look 'and said "mp write mp"

The mehndi was applied on my hands and feet

Mehndi wale said" i bet aap ki mehndi dark hogi 'who aap se bhot pyar kar the hai"

Those words pierced ranveers and aaliya's heart

Aaliya ek surprise hai says malika

Nargis came in front of her and huged her

"Aaliya himat mat haro 'hum hai na..bhot pyaari lag reh ho" said nargis

"Aaliya no tears please ..be strong" says malika

"Lets enjoy this moment kaise bhi hai laken aaj aap ki mehndi hai na"says malika

Malika grabed nargis and they danced

To the song rab rakha

Rab rakha
Rab rakha
Rab rakha

Yeh khushi yeh khushi ka samaa
Dil mein goonji hai shehnaaiyan
Yeh khushi yeh khushi ka samaa
Dil mein goonji hai shehnaaiyan


Yeh haseen yeh dilnasheen
Ik mohabbat ki hai jo dastaan
Rab rakha
Rab rakha
Rab rakha

Celebrate the feeling for a day and evening
Beautiful hearts are beating love is in the air
Celebrate the feeling for a day and evening
Beautiful hearts are beating love is in the air


Aaliya is just staring at ranveer and so is ranveer

Koi poochhe aankhon ne aankhon se
Kya keh diya kya sunn liya
Keh de na chupke se dono ne
Hai chunn liya ik saathiya

suddenly malika pulls ranveer into dance and so does nargis pull aaliya

Nachle yeh dil mera kahi da
O aaja nachle yeh dil mera kahi da
Saath tera bas chaahida
O goriye saath tera bas chaahida
while dancing it was if no else was there except them

Ranveer carefully took aaliya hand and twirled her
Nachle yeh dil mera kahi da
O aaja nachle yeh dil mera kahi da

Tumko yun jo dekhun jaane kyun
Mera jiya dhadke piya
Mehki si lehki si dehki si
Main hoon piya yeh kya kiya
suddenly aaliya moves away and goes in the kitchen she goes to try drink water but isn't able to ranveer comes there and hold the glass for her and makes her drink it

Eye lock

Later that night in her house everyone was gone except ranveer

He was sleeping down stairs or trying to

Aaliya gets up from her bed looks at her hands and is just so sad

"Nahin ho sak tha yeh" she goes down and wakes ranveer

She hugs him

And crys

"Ranveer I cant do this '. I cant be his wife ' I cant get close to him 'I cant digest the fact that he will" 'ranveer stoped her and whipped her tears

"Aaliya I understand laken your gonna be his wife" 'says ranveer

"Ranveer I love you ..damn it I love you ..and I know you do to"screams aaliua

Ranveer cups aaliyas face ilove you too aaliya

"Jitna this hurts you its killing me 'the thought of mp and you alone in a bedroom on your wedding night"' he bangs his fist on the coffee table

"But aaliya we don't have a choice" says ranveer

"Kya ' she is shocked fine ranveer fine but tell me

this ranveer and after the mission is done what about my life who will marry me huh" crys aaliya

"I will marry you aaliya I promise" says ranveer

"Ranveer fine If I have to go to mp..and fulfill the duties of a wife ll do it '

But ek bar plz muhje pyar karo" '. Says aaliya

"What" says ranveer

"Pagal hoge ho tum 'hum aisa nahin kar sak the aaliya" yells ranveer

"Ranveer please understand me ..if mp has to touch me fine but before that"'

"Before his disguting touch 'I want you to touch me ...you have the right ..of my jism jann 'you're the one I love" ' crys aaliya

"Agar tum ek bare muhje pyaar kare then kal raat 'iwill drink that poisin ..and do what ever I have to 'it will be easier for me 'I want to be in your arms ranveer ..i want to be loved by you"

She huged him

He looked up at her ..her eyes filled with tears 'he could see the fear .in them ..he slowly kissed her ..and whispered in her ear "theek hai 'aur mera jo hai iss pe mera phele haak hota 'I love you aaliya..i cant just let go in the lion's den like this '.if this what you want theek ..hai I promise I will marry after you divorce mp" he picks her up in his arms and takes her upstairs

He sits her on the bed 'takes off his jacket And slowly lays her downs lays near her leans In for a kiss and turns off the lights ''''..

The end

Chutki(Sneha) this is for you ..just like you asked ..hope you like it 'and every one else please do comment 'I worked really hard trying to make a good ranya os..it killed me since I love mp 'n maheen but for my chutki(sneha) its worth it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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let me read first

fiza di thnku so much for this ranya os

it was great
i just loved the every part of it

Today was my haldi and mehndi, and sangeet and tommrow my wedding and tehn my wedding night

The thought of that gave me shivers ..i was so damn frightened at the thought of mp touching me ' poor aaliya and ranveer


"I couldn't bare the thought of him doing anything 'and more over I knew that more then me this most be killing ranveer inside" '. "he doesn't show it 'his rough and though strong guy iamge shouldn't break in front of me" .."but I could see it in his eyes ever minute he kept trying to keep busy

But he was heart broken" ' "there was a unspoken bond between us

We both knew the feels we had for each other i just loved this

their pain one could feel it

loved the song rab rakha

and finally ranya become one

di
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehamaanvirman


let me read first

fiza di thnku so much for this ranya os

it was great
i just loved the every part of it

Today was my haldi and mehndi, and sangeet and tommrow my wedding and tehn my wedding night

The thought of that gave me shivers ..i was so damn frightened at the thought of mp touching me ' poor aaliya and ranveer


"I couldn't bare the thought of him doing anything 'and more over I knew that more then me this most be killing ranveer inside" '. "he doesn't show it 'his rough and though strong guy iamge shouldn't break in front of me" .."but I could see it in his eyes ever minute he kept trying to keep busy

But he was heart broken" ' "there was a unspoken bond between us

We both knew the feels we had for each other i just loved this

their pain one could feel it

loved the song rab rakha

and finally ranya become one

di

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow fiza jaan this was super I honestly want to see this all happening.. Every single word you said hope it comes true xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey fiza u r a good writer ...whatever u wrote except the last part will most probably happen in this show coz we see these things in most of the shows 😆 after all this is also a cliche show 😆,usually heroine sacrifices her hero to some other girl for time being , here hero is doing it 😆 ... but one thing fiza ,mp is a christian no ,will they have haldi , mehandi etc 🤔


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zeni

Wow fiza jaan this was super I honestly want to see this all happening.. Every single word you said hope it comes true xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --jas--

hey fiza u r a good writer ...whatever u wrote except the last part will most probably happen in this show coz we see these things in most of the shows 😆 after all this is also a cliche show 😆,usually heroine sacrifices her hero to some other girl for time being , here hero is doing it 😆 ... but one thing fiza ,mp is a christian no ,will they have haldi , mehandi etc 🤔


i thought mp was hindu n wife was christian ..n e ways mehreen is muslim ..and we do mehndi haldi in our weddings so yeah ..thats y
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You have put in alot of work. It was a pleasure to read.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh It Was Awsum Fiza...I Seriously Have A Feeling This Is Gonna Happen I Mean Ranveer Missing Aaliya...All That..Actually It Was Wonderful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovd it!! i lovd d way hw u presented it!

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