FF Flaming Desires of a Murderer updated epilogue - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: lolita1997

Awesome prologue!!

Sounds amazing..
Do continue👏

And all the very best for the new story!!!

thanks dear. suely i'll post two parts tomorrow .😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1 DEADLY PATH

At late hours of night in the middle of the dense forest some men are chasing a person, who is in a very wretched condition. His one leg get stuck with the stone and he fall on the land. Before he get up those men surrounded him. Without wasting a second they start beating him ruthlessly.

Then one of them get a call from another person and he picked it

P- hello boss.

B- Do you killed him.

Person- he almost died boss.

Boss- killed him completely before that crush him, his soul shall fear to have a next life.

Person- ok boss. Then call get disconnected.

On the other side of forest,

A girl of 20s forget the way to her camp and get stuck herself in the middle of the forest.

She heard the voice of a person asking for help. she is scared but her curiosity makes her to go there. when she come there, she see that one person is moving towards another person who is in a deteriorated state , with a hammer in his one hand and phone in his another hand.

G- Hey, you lunatic person what are you going to do. He is almost on the verge of dying. don't you have any humaity towards Homo Sapiens.

But that fellow didn't paid any heed to girl words and attacked on that person with hammer. he killed him brutally with no mercy in his heart.

Now he move towards the girl because she interfered in his work.

Girl is scaredd but she doesn't loose her sanity and decided to act wisely.

As he come near her she said, your phone is ringing. As he checked his phone she left that place and run like Female Cheetah. That man get furious on her because in his life first time anyone escaped from him that too a girl.

He again get a call from his boss.

M- yes boss

B- your work is done or not?

M- yes but

B- what?

M- one silly girl saw me and she run away from my hands.

B- Find her, torture her and then kill her.

M- Ok boss.

On the other side,

Girl thanked her stars and her brain too for behaving smart at that moment otherwise today, no no tonight was going to be the last night of her life.

She relaxed under the banyan tree. later she heard that some people are screaming her name.

she understand that her goup members might be searching for her and she too moved towards that direction. she find them with her torch and joined them.

continued...




Edited by bolston - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Interesting concept
Something different
Do continue soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awsme update
Loved it


I guess the boss is rd
Sanyu Bach gyi

Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awesome update 1st part😉😉
she joined the troop for her life...
now will see when they will meet😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER-2 WHO ARE THEY?

A man is sleeping on a king size bed. But his sleep get disturbed by the girl sleeping beside him.Her nail gives a scratch on his shoulder and within nanosecond girl is on the floor.

M-Get lost you bloody wh**e.

G-I am sorry, i don't know how that happened.

M-(roared) just leave right now otherwise your dead body will leave this place.

Girl scared for ehr life and goes out of the room immediately by grabbing her clothes which are laid down on the floor.

He come downstairs with cigar in his one hand and wine glass in his another hand.

M- Rana did you done your work.

R-yes boss but that girl.

M- find her and kill her too.

R- i buried him in the forest only boss.

M- good. now no one ever dare to deceive Randhir Singh Shekhawat.

R- yes RSS.

Rana- boss today you are invited in Parth aggarwal's party in his house.

RSS- Informed others too and make arrangements.

Rana- yes boss.

Then a girl come inside the house not a house but it's like a royal palace with luxury. she come and hugged the RSS.

RSS- ishika you are too early today.

I-i just want to give you surprise. let's go to the bedroom. both goes inside the room.

man1- Is she boss girlfriend.

man2-no, she is just another mistress to our boss. where rana shouted on them to do their own work.

At another side of the city

Servants are running from one corner to another corner of the house becasue their madam is returning to home after her vacations.

A girl in mid 20s instructing them to keep everything spick and span especially her room.

A man come near her and sneak his arm around her waist and whispher in her ear, baby you have to take rest or you fall sick.

G-Parth dont you know how choosy your sister is.

Parth- I know vidhushi and she has to be overall she is my sister , Parth Aggarwal's sister.

After an hour a girl comes running inside the house and start screaming, bro! where are you?

P-By god grace my ears are working properly but if you scream like this very soon i'll have to use hearing machine.

G- very funny, I don't want to talk to you.

P-i am sorry sis, I am just kidding. you know na your voice is like a medicine for my all pains.

G- i know bro. both hug each other.

V- i think you forget me sanz.

S- never, ever vidhu.

V- oh please don't change my name.

S- ok fine vidhushi. I hope my bro is not bothering you much.

V- No. actually he is a great guy i ever met in my life.

S- I know . by the way he is Sanyukta aggarwal's brother.

V- like brother as sister. where parth and sanyukta hi-five each other.

V- I think you are tired sanz go to your room and take rest.

S- yes. i am very much tired especially after that incident.

P&V(both in unison)- what incident and when that happened? are you okay?

S-relax both of you I am completely fine. she narrated them whole incident that too place with her in the forest when she got missed by her team mates.

P- Are you sure.

S- 100% sure. now I am going to my room to take rest.,bye... she goes in her room.

V- parth today we have party in our house. do you want that sanz should be there.

P-it's her wish vidhushi. neither i'll force her to come nor restrict her not to come.

V-i'll talk with her later. okay.

P-yeah.

V- i heard that RSS is also attending this party.

P-yes. i want to show him my victory and his loss.

V- Are you sure parth. I mean he is too wicked and cunning fellow. even sanz is here only.

P- you stay with her in the party. don't leave her alone. RSS can't do anyhting. it's my house. he is only guest for tonight.

V- okay.

continued...


Edited by bolston - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Rd the Casanova
He uses girls and throw them

Rd wants to see that girl dead
Bt little did he know that girl will be his life

Vidharth romance
Parth loves sanyu a lot

Excited for sandhir encounter
Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Ohh great update:D
Okay so rd is a bad guy
Sanyukta and vidharth <333
Oh sandhir will meet in the party ^_^
Yeah yeah yeah !!
Excited:D
Cintinue soon

P.S - sanz is my nick name as well 😆 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
omgg
rd is bad boy

sanyu parth's sis
awesome
loved it

waiting for sandhir encounter
fast update plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
M excited for Rd and sanyu encounter!!!!!!
U write very well...update soon oolong.

Waiting

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