~SanDhir Ss-MisTakE~[Completed] - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
its awesome superb lovely
lovely lovely lovely
amazing fab
very very nice and intersting
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Loved it di👏
phir shaadi .. agarwals😡
it seems really amazing😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
i am waiting
i am waiting
i am waiting for next part
update plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
PART 2
Impatiently waiting for to enter that house , he tossed a little pebble in air , he waited 4 pebble to kiss earth but it ddosent happen .
He just heard a small screaming, some abuses buy that to a decent ones .
He entered. ,and he feels like home , he had never visited house and entered it yet he was feeling home.
Something was there , here that he knw from years . Something he couldn't identify . Stopping his oh-such-- philosophical thoughts .
He saw a lady in her late 50 ties , was short height but wearing a beautiful , heart warming smile , his mother hugged that lady , his father was waiting but his eyes was,restless . Yes , He was restless , He don't want to get marry soon , his parents and his melodramatic bro forced him to meet a girl once , then decide to do next .
He was waiting for that girl which bounded his parents to fix their meeting .
A fair man in his 50 ties arrived and patted his back and say " so young man ! How r u?"
He turned back and was confused , he had met him before , he typed the appearance details of this man in his mind and in 2min , he stucked to his class 10 th , van , night and scolding .
He placed all puzzle pieces and he got his answer. It was night , and he was in his coaching van , sitting beside Sam Bhaiya driver ) was getting scolding from this man .
Reason ? He was about to go in memory lane again . But that lady offered laddos , gpr which he can't wait for , he was a laddo lover .
Laddos were very yum , in excitement he compliment that lady about her cooking skills and asked in curiosity that "Aunty? How do u know I love laddos'?"
She replied "Beta I was about to make kheer but sanyu told me to make laddos ! .
He was taken aback and put laddo in plate again ! His father says ! Renuka look ! Someone is blushing .
He was not blushing but was in deep thought and was stuck to one word " Sanyu " .
He had heard it before many times , and was trying to remember the owner of this name
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Umm ! Anju ! Sanyu ko neeche le aao ! Kishore agarwal chipped !
Ha! She replied .
His heart was thumbing .
A beautiful girl in her mid 20's ,clad in white Patiala suit .entered the hall with her mother
Anju .
She lifted her eye lashes .
And he saw cold eyes , he donno why he didn't like that being them in that state .
Kishore says ! Randhir ! Yeh hamari beti .
Sanyu h mera,Matlab sanyukta agarwal hai.
And sanyu yeh randhir Singh shekawat hai.
Both heard each other's name and frozed .
She muttered gorilla and he muttered sanu!!!
He said Sikandar classes , a bit load she nodded .
He recognised sanyukta , she was his friend in a coaching class ,when they were in 10 th and they use to go coaching with same van .
Driver was Sam Bhaiyya , he even remembered that one day they reach sanu's home very late he was almost 10 in night .
He wanted to hug her friend tightly he was very happy ! But sanyukta was in aghast her life was in front of her .
All she was looking at his smile , it feels so contented to see that smile !
Suddenly he asked kishore that can we talk alone !
Kishore was taken aback by his boldness , he eyed sanyu as if saying to behave properly .
Randhir understood whole scene and he stood between kishore and sanyu and acting as if her shield !!!
He nodded ...
Both reached sanyu 's room
An awkward silence filled in the room .
Sanyu broke the ice and muttrrd a small ,audible hi !
Randhir looked towards her and hi Ki bacchi ...
And engulf in a friendly hug and said ! Sanu ! It's really you , who look too cute ! Jhalli toh hot ho gyi ! Rd said while caressing her hair .
And sanyu was numb on this gesture of randhir ,!!!
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Precap : nhi pata ...
I hope u liked it ...
Waiting 4 ur precious comments
Edited by -Moon_beam- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awesome update
eagarly waiting for next part continue asap :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Resd😆


Unreserve


Oye shru,Finally u updated this😆

Anyways,coming on the story,
Its pretty sweet
Sanyukta's father is ... Ughhh ...
But usne ek kaam zarur acha kiya,by choosing randhir😳
Intresting ... Very intresting
And the last line was supper awsome😆
Sanu ! It's really you , who look too cute ! Jhalli toh hot ho gyi !🤣


update soonish and don't foget to pm me
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Awie.. So cute
Doodh mama.. It's awesome <3
Randhir is so sweet
Gorilla...🤣 The past ladoo story was hilarious 🤣
Mujhe abhi ladoo chahiye :/
Nice.. Post the next soonish

Luv
Makkhan 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awww awesome !!!!
Soo sweet..
Gorilla🤣
Update soonish..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awsme update
Loved it


Awww rd is so cute
Rd the ladoo lover
He don't want to get marry


The past memory came rushing down


Sandhir both shocked to hear each other name
They both know each other


Rd hugged sanyu


Cnt wait to see what hppns next
Update soon



Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
that was awesome dear
i just loved it to the core
i m kicking myself for forgetting to this beautiful piece of writing
chal ab jaldi part 3 update kar
loads of love
pari

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