~The Caged Bird Flies~ A Vidarth FF -Chapter I updated-Pg5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChaiBiskoot

RES!

im catching the next flight to meet u and give u a full dabba of gulab jamuns and laddoos.. mind u i never share sweets with anyone 😆



Nehu dear, thank you so much...aaja aaja , m waiting! I love gulab jamun.. Btw if u come here I wil be so happy I won't really need the sweets!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --aimy--

Trups...thats a nice begenning.
I wonder if VidArth have met before or are they going to meet for the 1st time.
Chalo...will wait for the next update to know that. So update fast. 😃



Thanks Aimy...maybe they know each other, maybe they don't ... 😊
Ya next update will reveal that... will update soonish.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ur so so poetic trups 😃 and i loved reading it.. another thing common between us..😆 its d first thing i started writing before moving onto stories..

Simply soothing.. those lines.. and that was just the start !

I liked the whole build up.. was magnificent 👏

And thsi tells me its going to be a great one!
im gonna kill all of u people for writing such awesome stuff wen my exams are near.. 4th year mein fail hojana hai mujhe ab 😆


Edited by ChaiBiskoot - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChaiBiskoot


ur so so poetic trups 😃 and i loved reading it.. another thing common between us..😆 its d first thing i started writing before moving onto stories..

Simply soothing.. those lines.. and that was just the start !

I liked the whole build up.. was magnificent 👏

And thsi tells me its going to be a great one!
im gonna kill all of u people for writing such awesome stuff wen my exams are near.. 4th year mein fail hojana hai mujhe ab 😆




Nehu dear..thank you so much !!🤗
Thank you for such lovely comments..
Arre nahi re tu aise kaise fail hogi? Tere dean ka number de, Sanyukta se phone karati Hun..woh aise Khabar legi ki tu top karegi..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Happy_hippy


Hello Everyone, I am here with my First FF on this forum and my first Vidarth FF. I started watching SH only because of Randhir, but slowly and gradually started liking Vidushi . I always had this story in mind but could not develop the characters properly. But when I saw Vidarth together, I instantly knew I had to pen down my story.

I would like to dedicate this FF to Ash (Burn_the_Ashes) for making me fall in love with Vidarth over and over again with her wonderful OS's and Chandni (Moony87) , my first friend on IF. 🤗

Aaj main tera style copying karing Hippy. Ek to dedication us par First Friend ka medal .. "Bas kar rulaayegi kya?".. 😆😆😆 .. Tere username ki tarah Happy kar diya tune.. 😃


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Synopsis : She was a lonely soul lost in a crowd .
He was a wanderer, searching for his destination.
Together,they would find each other!


Intense.. Such stories are intense .. And I am up with every alert cell to read this.. 😃


~ The Caged Bird Flies ~

She lay in the warmth of the cocoon
The eerie silence soothed her soul
Clangor of awakening made a deafening sound
She stirred and knew it was time.
Her dreary eyes foraged for the light
Her body beat with surreal rhythm
She wanted to break out
Soar into the sky
To the flight of freedom
She gingerly stepped out
Took a giant leap of faith
She slipped and fell
She was falling
Falling deep into the abyss
His hand stretched out of nowhere
He pulled her weightless body
and planted her feet firmly onto the ground
He helped her spread her wings
He let the Caged bird fly!

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Okay... Phew.. Girl.. I have no damn knowledge rather hold on poetry. But these lines made sense to even a non-poetic person like me. Simple and effective.. 👏👏👏
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~Prologue ~

She gaped at the exquisite parchment that held her future,her future written in golden ink. How she wished she could turn back time. For a moment she took her eyes off the future and gazed out across the vast blue sky. Her eyes traversed along the path taken by the winged creatures,enjoying their flight to freedom.

These lines gave me goosebumps yaar. We all do that sometimes. So perfectly written. I just visualized it. 👏👏👏

"What is the purpose of their life," she mulled over the boon of their existence.
"I haven't changed all these years ,10 yrs and I am still the same,"she smiled at this juvenile thought.A part of her conscious mind had already tripped and rolled down memory lane. The lane halted at the doorstep of a coy 12 year old who was beaming at the wiggly little thingies,swimming happily in a big tank that adorned her side wall.Barely able to contain her excitement ,she blurted out "Ok, done , I'll call him Bluey " and chirped with glee. She had just baptized her new fish , not all ,just the one sulking in the corner.

"Why don't you name the others? And why Bluey?"her Mom inquired.
"You can name the other ones Ma,and Bluey ,coz its blue in color!" she replied and broke out into a wide toothed grin.
From then on, she was always at Bluey's beck and call. One fine day when she was mouthing sweet nothings to Bluey, she asked all of a sudden, "Ma,what is Bluey's purpose in life?"
Her Mom just rolled her eyes and muttered"Kids, say the darnest things these days" and left the innocent child wondering about the fish's goal in life.
She looked at Bluey and assured him, "One day, I shall know my love!".
The very next day, she found Bluey's limp body floating about in the tank. "Why is Bluey not moving,Ma?" the lil kid inquired with a quivering voice.Everyone's silent demeanor made her realise the gravity of the situation, he had passed onto to another world!
"I know the answer now ,Bluey,"she spoke, snapping out from her reverie.
"I know now,my love, you were nothing but a physical entity whose life was trapped in a cage and one fine day your soul left the body!

The sudden transition from present to past was smooth yaaar.. Butter smooth. She reminds me of ME... Nope not the fishes.. but the thought process. Seriously.. we are so stuck up in life that we don't know what we want? Why we are here?.. It's all a mechanical life. Aaah.. beauty yaar.. 👏👏

She knew the answer as she was feeling exactly the same.
Trapped inside a physical form ,aching to break out! Her eyes then shifted from the present to her immediate future, to the glittering piece of paper in her hands. She read it out aloud,

Mr. and Mrs.Arvind Kataria request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their daughter
" Vidushi Kataria
with
Sahil Khanna"
on Saturday,23rd March,2014
109,La Belle Vue,
Mumbai

She read the text for the umpteenth time and knew , her fate was sealed! There was no escape! The Bird would never fly again!

22 KI AGE MEIN SHAAADI.. Aaah Hindustani parents.. 😡😡 .. Sahil.. Kya ye wahi sahil hai jispe mera dil fida hai.. 😳.. Parth na aane waala hota is ishtory mein to main bol deti.. ke Sahil hai yaar.. kar le byaah.. LOL.. Khair jokes apart.. Marriage at such a young age.. Its umm.. actually not a good idea.. 😭

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"I sometimes don't understand how on earth I put up with you?Yo, Vishwamitra, should I conjure up a Menaka for you?"

Maar sutiyaa.. Ye Randhir hi ho sakta hai .. With these lines.. 🤣

There was a deafening silence that had engulfed the room and Randhir was never at ease with silence.

Haaa.. I was right.. 😆😆😆 😎 Umm.. Also.. Will I be reading too much between the lines if I say that "never at ease with silence" is something meaningful?

Oblivious to his barking, a soul was stirring to normalcy in the same physical space.
"You seem to have inherited the art of irritation from someone," Parth retorted calmly, while he gingerly opened his eyes.He was never affected by Randhir's histrionics , but today, was an anomaly.

I LOVE YOU.. WHY.. Coz Parth gives it back here to Randhir in a "pyaar se maaroon?" way.. 😆😆

"Does your mediation really block out external voices ? Or you trying to shut me off!
Come on Parth, "Bhai" called again. We need to get going or else he is gonna skin us alive. I don't wanna get into trouble just 'coz my dear friend decided to hang his arse upside down like a bat!

HAHAHA.. LIKE A BATTT... Shit I can imagine this.. 👏👏🤣 .. "Bhai" .. Ahaaan.. Someone gives orders to RANDHIR.. Bhai ye "Bhai" to dekhna maangta.. 😊

"Its called Shirshasana, and for the last time, can you be a bit respectful towards this art.It's not that easy you see!" Parth snapped at RD who just shot him the "I dont give a damn" look.

Maa.. dhurii.. Tai-chi se gire.. Yoga mein atke. .. 🤣

"Ok Earthling, now back to work,Bhai has given us this address , we need to whisk away the "item" tonite." RD spoke in a hushed monotone.

"Item? please don't use such derogatory terms," Parth replied,now clearly irritated.

"I give a tiny rat's arse about that! Now come on , move it Parth, " RD spoke in a commanding voice and shoved a piece of paper in Parth's hands,

"The address of the bird to be whisked away," RD instructed Parth.

Mr.Arvind Kataria
109, La Belle Vue,
Mumbai.

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That's all Folks. Chapter 1 is on the way!! Please leave your comments and let me know if you want me to continue!

LOLWA.. KITNA Shareef kidnapper hai.. Kidnap karo lekin IZZAT SE please.. No derogatory remarks.. Mujhe bhi koi aisa kidnap kar le.. Sexy hero + shareef aadmi + free mein ghoomna.. 🤣

On serious notes, that one line leaves a lot to ponder over Parth. Someone with so much dislike for derogatory words is going to do a derogatory work. Parth would be an absolute PLEASURE to Read.👏👏 Please VIDHIR de dena 😳😳.. Randhir rocks here as well. 👏👏

Love,
Trups

Edited by Moony87 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Moony, kya badhiya feedback tha..Love u !! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh tu kab PM karne vaali thhi?? *miffed at you*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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^^^^^
*stifling a heart giggle *
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Yeh tu kab PM karne vaali thhi?? *miffed at you*



I was planning to pm everyone on the Dt after the first chapter.. I had scrapped the link for the prologue ... could not scrap u,, u have limited access!! 😊Btw Dearie, I had sent u a buddy request eons back!! Tune abhi tak accept nahi kiya !! 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I meant hearty giggle.
Damn auto correct

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