It gets verse: A Vidarth tale - Page 3

Originally posted by: ChaiBiskoot

some things need a standing ovation.. 👏

ok m sitting right now and pondering over each and every line! This is awhsum !

This show is churning my brain

how could they be so blind to her endless pain?

For once she wants a rosy life

devoid of hatred and of strife

Give her the love she needs so bad

enough of tolerance we've had

how lame was this? 🤣

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

Anu Di!!!

This means a whole lot to Me!!!!

I'm glad you read this n I'm glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: LoonyLuna

A wonderful poem from very talented writers👏❤️ VidArth my OTP!!I am going down with this ship!!😃

Originally posted by: Vikruti

I read this thrice, and still didn't know what to say.

For a moment, I was rendered speechless. Aww...I know.. Ashu tends to make us all go like that, with her poetry!😉 She's fabulous, no?

How did you all pull up something with such perfection and grace? >>That's how Ashu's stuff are!! Especially poetry!

I have to say this was sheer brilliance and awesomeness. True that, sis!!👏

Parth's changing views towards Vidhushi's strength and behaviour was a thrilling read.

The curiousity, the reflection, and the love were penned beautifully.

Oh but the absolute best, was the confession that finally did proceed!

🤗

LOL...hand to try putting my comment into something like a poem...

Ah but you guys did awesome here!

Thankooo!!!!

Originally posted by: Vikruti

Like they say, "Sirf ek johri heere ki kadar janta hai,"

Hum sab woh ek johri hai... aur VidArth woh ek heera

Creatives galat heere pe nazar daal rahe hai 😆

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

ASHU!!!! I can't believe you bloody posted this!! *falling off my chair again*

🤣 Such impromptu stuff and it's on a separate thread here! 🤣 🤣 Somebody pinch me please! No, don't! I already believe this!! 🤣

Anywho, babe, what the?! *looking at the rest of the poem* You make me speechless with your poetry!

👏

Suga, you rock!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ChaiBiskoot

😆 i tell ya.. u ,me ,phoeny should meet and write stuff like there is no tomorrow.. though u wil have to teach me first how to write brilliantly 😆

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

If I rock I better be a diamond.

Ok that was lame!

But collabs with you, no matter How impromptu are always worth reading :)

So stick your tush firmly to that chair and stop falling of :)

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Mahaan insaan!!! Tu pehle likh toh! You already write so awesomes-ly!! I know, that ain't a word, but I don't give a damn right now! 🤣

Anywho, just-just-- just come back fast... Time sure does drag along like a snail... when we want it to fly! Hmmph!