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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Omg anu that was such a lovely os 👏
loved it yar but at the same time emotional too 😭
this sanyu ki family 😡 os mai bhi kabab mai haddi 😡
But the flashbacks were very nicely described
and the way yoh portrayed the emotions of the present 👏 superb
but u know one suggestion
isko ts mai convert krke 1 happy ending de do 😉
otherwise you penned it beautifully 👏
in short u nailed it dude 👏
keep writing 😉

Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago

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_Angel_love_

@_Angel_love_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

res

unress

Hiii Anu🤗

it was lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,

lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,

lovely,lovely,lovely update dear😳😳

lovely,nicely,beautifully n brilliantly written👏👏

love it to the core❤️

Very well you've describe the scenario⭐️⭐️

Beautifully you've portrayed the emotions👏👏

Really it was an emotional update..Anu😭 😭

Moi really feeling Bad for SanDhir..😭😭

it really touced my heart ❤️

SanDhir love each other to the core..☺️

There meet..date..confession..

each every point was nicely pinned...👏⭐️

The pain was outstandingly nailed..!!!👏👏

They got separated🥺 because of Sanyu's family..

Last part was lovely..😳

Anu..Ur an amazing,awesome,fantastic,fab,

lovely n experience writer👏👏

And Yes,I think you've done PHD in emotional Story..!!

Keep it up👍🏼

Thank You, for dedicating the update it mines a lot...😳

I think Malai n Moi became expert in giving Dhamki's..🤣 🤣

Thx 4 updating..

Lots of love n Hug

Bushra 🤗

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Ress

Unress

Yr it was so heart wrenching

Moi crying yr

Feeling very bad for sandhir
Both luvs each other so much
Still they cnt be together

Cruel destiny played its game

The fb scene was so amzng

From their first meeting to their date it was fab

Yr I so wanted it a happy ending

Yr if possible continue it n give a happy ending plz ( puppy face)

Luv u yr
Keep smiling

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BornAries

@BornAries

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow! so our Dhamki did a commendable job here... yahh!! *evil smirk * ... Well Done Patner... we did it... 🤣

Anu I loved it<3 <3

Their First meeting... wow! fighting cutely over a book...

Randhir mesmerized by her...decided to give it to her...that Was so cute...

I loved that line - "now i have Another assignment to do " 😳 😳 hayee!! my Cute naughty Romantic si Randhir... 😳

I love their First date... Having Gol-gappas... that part seems so real! <3 <3

I loved Sanyu's definition of Cuteness... aww! that was really cute... Brilliantly Written Anu.. <3

wow! how cutely Randhir made her wear his gift... loved it...

OMG! their last date... it was beautiful...

I so want this to be a happy ending... 😭

I loved it Anu... :* 🤗

Awesome OS... <3 <3

aww! U dedicated this to me and Patner? Thank U dear...

I agree with U Kismis... We became experts in Giving Dhamkis I guess 🤣

and Hugs U back 🤗 Tumse bhi tight Wala ... 😳

LOve U <3

PS: is there in chances to make it a TS with happy ending?? Plzzz :) :)

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-chocoangel-

@-chocoangel-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Resssummm

Heyyy k I think mujhe yaha unress nhi karna chaahiye but still I m going to unress yaaay

Coming to point thanks to everyone who threatened u

Btw one question do u love flood I guess u do thats why sad ending had h yaar moi hate rona dhona

awsum brilliant os as usual

Start me I thought whats rd doing then that phone call I was like this😕

The flashback eeeks love at 1st sight rd awwwieee naughty love u😃 this was my expression

Their talks awww 8 month anniversary i forgot its title means i forgot ye obvio sad hoga

this i actually thought this is going to

hv happy ending

But her decision the last date thing realisation hit me

Moi crying imma like this😭

The 1st date her pov regarding date😳

Their last date her decision moi ro rok dead🤢😭

Kyu kyu kyu sad ending kyu kyu kyu😡

But gussa bhi nhi ho skti it was heart touching reee🥱

Btw moi kisika maggie masala churaane waaali hu

agar iske baad sad ending di tooo

To moi kya karungi

Arghhh kuch nhi tissue ki shop pe bhaagungi

New os sooonishhh

Aur agar use jldi update nhi kiya tooo

Just I

Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago

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SAKSHI SINGH

@cuteparsh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

res😡
kafi jaldi res kiya maine😡
unres
omggg😲😲
it was just fabulous dear👏👏
their 1st meet⭐️⭐️
so sweet😳😳
2nd one
naughty 😳😳
3rd one and 4th also
was perfect
but where you end yaar😭😭
isiliye moi ko love se dar lagta hai😭😭
judail 😭😭
i also crying for rd and sanyu😭😭
itna kyo rulaya yaar😭😭
thanks for pm😭😭
lots of luv
bori

Edited by cuteparsh - 10 years ago