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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Sorry Yukta
I know I am really late, and you are never late to comment on my FF..
So here is a lambawala to make up for it...
It was A-W-E-S-O-M-E...
Trust me that title was awesome, and lovely... Really loved the proluge and yes eagerly waiting for the update...
I am really impressed with your writing, its awesome...
And yes, soon enough will be one of the biggest stalkers of this FF...
So please continue soon, before I die...
Love you loads..
Prishi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ArshaParsh

Sorry Yukta
I know I am really late, and you are never late to comment on my FF..
So here is a lambawala to make up for it...
It was A-W-E-S-O-M-E...
Trust me that title was awesome, and lovely... Really loved the proluge and yes eagerly waiting for the update...
I am really impressed with your writing, its awesome...
And yes, soon enough will be one of the biggest stalkers of this FF...
So please continue soon, before I die...
Love you loads..
Prishi


Its ok if you are late also but just want your comments regarding my ff
And thank you so so much for liking it and I am really happy by your comment and will update soon
Love yukta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Wow dear,it sounds really really awesome
Pls update soon
Thanx for the pm
Love
Pari
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Iam back with part 1 please do like it and tell me to continue or not and keya my little poetry is for you so tell me hows it

CHAPTER 1

AANKHE MILLE
DILL MILLE...
HOGI HASEEN YEH RAAT
KYUKI YAHI SE HOGI EK NAYI SHURUWATH...

(At night 11:30)
A beautiful girl sleeping with lots of tensions and sadness because life didnt give her hapiness that she deserves but may be god have other plans for her just then her phone rings...and she picks up
S:Hello ( in sleepy tone)
K:Sanyu need your help jaldi ghar aaja
S(worried):Kya hua tu thik haina
K:Actually mera leg slip ho gaya shayad leg mein sprain ho gaya hai
S:Oh god rukh mein aati hun

(At Road)
S (mumurs ) : Yeh kaustu bhi na apna dhyan nahi rakhti din bhar uchalti rehti hai aur ab raat ko koi auto bhi nahi milega ab kya karun
Guy1 : Ohji madam hum chode kya aapko waise bohot din ho gaye kissi khubsurat ladki ki madat nahi ki
Guy2 :Sahi bol raha hai chote iss chammak challo ki todhi madat kar dete hai
S:Zyaada hoshiyar samajhte ho apne aap ko chup chap chale jao yaha se agar apni tange nahi tudwana chahte toh
Guy1 : Ladki lagta hai kadak maal hai ( with that he comes closer and recieves punch from sanyu)
Guy1 : Aaahhh mera daanth tut gaya
Guy2 : Ae ladki yeh tune accha nahi kiya(he also comes and sanyu starts punching to them)
S:Sharam nahi aati na tum logo ko ladki ko chedne mein shayad apni maa ki bhi izzat nahi karte tum jaise logo ke wajah se hum ladkio ko ghar se nahi nikalne dete par hum ladkiyaan kissi se bhi kam nahi agar todhi akal aa gayi toh bhag saale yaha se bloody cheepster
(And someone watching this from behind and feeling proud and mesmerized by her action, beauty and attitude)
Guy2 ( in mind ) : Bhai ko bulata hun (with that both runs away and again sanyu starts walking)
S:Saare ladke trust ke layak hi nahi hote ladkio ki kuch izzat nahi karte saalo ko aur pitna chahiye tha (and she stops and looks back and found that two guys are back with their gang)
S:(in mind ) : Sanyu bhag yaha se maa sahi kehti hai mein apne liye pange le leti hun mein do logo ko pit sakti hun lekin yeh toh puri baarat leke aa gaye ab kya karun
Guy1 : kyu ab nahi marogi (and he tries to pull her dupatta just then he receives punch but this time from our hero that is non other than randhir
Guy2 and 3:Ab tujhe hum dekte hai and tries to smash his head from hockey stick but he held that and starts beating them badly and everyone runs away
R:Are you ok
S:Ya thanks
R:Its my pleasure by the way I am randhir friends
S:Excuse me first meeting mein aap logo ko friend banna lete hai
R:Ha actually mujhe friends banana accha lagta hai specially tumhare jaise logo se
S:Mere jaise matlab
R:Matlab mene tumhe pehle unn gundo ko marte hue dekha and I am just shocked to see such attitude
S:Tumne abhi tak mera attitude dekha hi kaha hai anyways thanks again mujhe jana chahiye I am getting late
R:Mein chod deta hun
S:Listen mister I am not your friend tumne meri help ki uske liye thanks stranger ho so behave like that and waise bhi unn ladko mein aur tum mein koi farak nahi hai
R:Excuse me
S:Aur nahi toh kya tum mera picha kar rahe the na
R:Oh hello yeh road sirf tumhara nahi hai aur mein stalker nahi hun ki logo ka picha karun but its ok mujhe jaldi gussa nahi aata toh tumhe maaf kia
S:Whatever mere paas time nahi hai tumhare saath argue karne ke liye so bye (and she turns to go but she tripped on the stone and was about to fall when two strong arms hold her waist and they share a strange eye lock strange because they saw some undefined feeling for each other which soon to be defined and they dont know but they wanted this moment to freeze and to feel this blissful night in eachother embrace after sometime they are back to their positions)
R:pair pe lagi toh nahi
S:Nahi I am absolutely fine thanks ab mein chalti hun bye (and she moves)
R:Hey lady boxer apna naam toh batati jao
S:Agar kismat ne phir milwaya toh shayad apna naam bata dun
R:Mein uss din ka intezaar karunga (wide smile)
S(in mind ) : Shayad mein bhi (smiles back at him)

PRECAPE : NEW BEGINING KYA RANDHIR KO PATA CHALEGA LADY BOXER KA NAAM?

So hows it and I dont know to describe fighting scenes so sandles are welcome and tell me to continue or not
Love yukta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Res..
unres..

Yey...
me first..

Coming to ur update...
👏 wow amazing update...
their first convo is so so cute.. 😳
sanyu ko apna naam bata dena chahiye..
or randhir hena...
btw u penned down so beautifully...

thanks for the pm.
agla update jaldi...

happy diwali yukki.. 😊
Edited by thundercute - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
It was superb yr

Sanyu the Lady boxer kya band bajaya goons k
Hero ki bi entry hogi
Bt hmari sanyu ne apna naam hi ni btaya

Eagrly wtng for next
Do update soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: thundercute

Res..
unres..

Yey...
me first..

Coming to ur update...
👏 wow amazing update...
their first convo is so so cute.. 😳
sanyu ko apna naam bata dena chahiye..
or randhir hena...
btw u penned down so beautifully...

thanks for the pm.
agla update jaldi...


Good praguu aise hi first comment karti rehna and really happy you liked it aur next part ekdum jaldi se update karungi as diwali gift keep loving my ff like this
Love yukta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was superb yr

Sanyu the Lady boxer kya band bajaya goons k
Hero ki bi entry hogi
Bt hmari sanyu ne apna naam hi ni btaya

Eagrly wtng for next
Do update soon

Keep smiling 😊


Our sanyu is unique na toh naam itne jaldi kaise bata ti but dont worry randhir ko naam jaldi pata chalega unique style mein stay tuned thanks for liking it
Love yukta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awersome prt
Lady boxer hmm nice one
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
lovely concept
very interesting
continue asap :)))

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