A Thin Line||Sandhir Drabble - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

wow..it was wonderful drabble :)
u perfectly showed variations in randhir thoughts n emotions of what he is n what he's not in reality n mainly about Sanyukta..I loved it

khushi


Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wow... doesn't really seem like ur first one... this was beautiful...
pls continue writing more n more dear. u're good. XD
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: aleena.1884

wow... doesn't really seem like ur first one... this was beautiful...
pls continue writing more n more dear. u're good. XD


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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Hawww.
This was the cure to my mopeyness (is that even a word )
Beautiful piece yaar.
Reading it from Mobile so will give detailed reaction later.
Loved it so much Voldie (ur username makes me shake with fear)
Cya soon
Ash
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: infernofyre

Hawww.
This was the cure to my mopeyness (is that even a word )
Beautiful piece yaar.
Reading it from Mobile so will give detailed reaction later.
Loved it so much Voldie (ur username makes me shake with fear)
Cya soon
Ash


I'm so sorry for not replying earlier 😭
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Beautiful!👏
It was like reading an excerpt from Randhir's Biography.

I didn't understand why you named this 'A Thin Line', but when I pondered about it for a while, I realized the importance of the last line..

"He Hated the fact that he Loved Her."

The thin line between Love and Hate.
Randhir has one foot on each side, leaning on the side that suits him whenever he wants, but somehow being pulled back by the other..

I hope am making sense here.

Love it!

Annie
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Beautiful!👏

It was like reading an excerpt from Randhir's Biography.

I didn't understand why you named this 'A Thin Line', but when I pondered about it for a while, I realized the importance of the last line..

"He Hated the fact that he Loved Her."

The thin line between Love and Hate.
Randhir has one foot on each side, leaning on the side that suits him whenever he wants, but somehow being pulled back by the other..

I hope am making sense here.

Love it!

Annie


Thanks!
I actually had the entire thing typed out. On word under the title Sadda Haq, and I didn't know what to name this. When I posted it, I randomly decided on the title. Glad you liked it!

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