SANDHIR OS:~TERA NAAM DOON updated

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Hey guys!!!!i ws listening to dis tera naam doon song frm its entertainment and the only thing came to my mind ws randhir☺️so i thought of writng an os related to current track!!!!😆

its my frst time on writing an os!!!!

i realy dont know hw it will b but i want to write!!!
so here you go!!!
TERA NAAM DOON

Yoyo:oye rd paji ap ko kya hogaya ??abhi to ek ko ap lal pila kar rahe the to ab kyu bhej diya in logo ko???
Rd:wo agayi na!!!
Yoyo:oji kaun agayi??kya bol rahe ho???
Rd:wo wo authorities agayi hai!!!aur kuch nhi!!!
Chela:rd bhai ap itna smile kyu kar rhe ho???
Rd:kyu kar nhi sakta!!huh...and he ws leaving frm dere
Chela:yoyo paji wo rd bhai kuch zyada hi
Yoyo:oye chup kar oye
Chela:oji mera matlab hai ki jab ap bhabhi ji ko dekh k ate ho to wo gulabi ho jate ho na !!rd paji bhi kuch glow show nhi kar rhe??
Yoyo:oye agar bina makeup k koi glow kare to bilkul dil mei pyar ka laddu phuta hai!!!!

Rd on hearing dis smiles mre dreamily !!!!

Koyi jaage soye mujh mein
Meri raatein or mere din saare khoye usmein

Vd:sanyukta u r his motivation!!!uski ego ko trigger tum karti ho!!!...she ws walking on the grounds remembering dis!!!
she did as vd sir told her to!!she lied to him dat her engagement is cancelled!!!rd ws back to his self-mode!!!he ws back to dream team!!!but she felt a weight in her heart!!!!and dat was the lie!!!she lied to everyone in dream team!!!she ws lying for dream team but still she couldn't fathom her heart!!!wen she saw rd standing at a dist. Talking over phone!!!he ws smiling and talking!!!watching him smiling a small smile crept in sanyukta's face!!!but the thought of lie snatched it again!!!she turned to go but stopped when he heard her name from his mouth!!!

Sanyu:zarur meri burai kar raha hoga!!aur ata kya hai!!!bt she ws amazed wat she heard next!!!!she hid herself behind a near by pillar to hear him more prominently!!!
Rd:no dad!!aisa kuch nhi hai!!!wo to bas muh se nikal gaya!!nhi dad usne kuch nhi kiya hai!!!wo dad uski engagement cancel hogayi hai to wapas agayi hai!!stop it dad!!!she is not like others!!!she is different!!dad wo achi hai !!pls dad!!!dad I respect her!!dad uski family mei koi uski dreams ko nhi manta hai!!!aur dreams ko follow karna kuch bura to nhi hai!!!no no no dad!!i know it!!ok fine!!!sorry!!!and he cuts the call

Sanyu ws smiling!!!though she could only hear one side talk but she could guess what his father was saying to him!!!she felt happy to hear that someone was there who respect her and her dreams!!!but she never imagined dat it could be her mortal enemy!!


Koyi itna apna laage, mera nadaan yeh dil
Jaise dhadke usmein

She was in canteen thinking about the engagement thing after talking to Sameer!!!!
Kausto:kya soch rahi hai???
Sanyu:yeh Sameer ek hai aur yaha vd sir ne jo jhuth bolne ko bola hai!!!!mujhse nhi ho raha hai kaustoki!!!
Kausto:dnt worry sab theek ho jayega !!!wait, kuch lati hu tere liye
Sanyu:nhi mei jati hoon ruk!!!and she went to order !!!when she was going to take the cup of tea she felt another hand on hers!!!she looked at the hand and den at the person!!!she smiled remembering wat she heard dat time!!!!
Rd:yeh meine pehle order kiya hai
Sanyu:ok lelo!!!
Rd :huh???kyu abhi se har man liya!!!
Sanyu smiled a bit more and crossed her arms
Sanyu:wo to task ke waqt dekh lenge!!!and she tuk the other cup and went away smiling
Rd smiled and was luking at her dreamily!!!he tuk the cup and sipped !!!and the next moment he felt a hot sensation on lips and placed the cup back on counter wincing a bit
Canteen boy:kya ap bhi na!!!dhyan kaha tha???
Rd looked at sanyukta who was sitting and laughing with kaustoki!!!

Mujhe jo, huwa hai, iski na dawa hai
Kisi ne chuwa hai dil yeh, kiski nazar ka hai asar
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon
Main keh doon sabhi ko ke tera hi hai yeh asar
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon

Vids:mujhe jitna pata tha sanyukta ki to engagement cancel nhi postpone huya tha!!
Sahil:offo vidhushi!!!abhi to wo agayi na!!!
Vids:nhi per
Rd was hearing dis standing at the library door ..he went upto vidhushi
Rd:abhi kya kaha tumne??
vidS:kya??
Rd:sanyukta ki engagement cancel nhi postpone huyi hai
Vids:ha mujhe to yehi pata tha!!!pata nhi kab cancel kar diya!!!!
Listening to dis he sighed in relief and went from dere!!!

Koyi dastak deke dil mein milne ko aata hai
Mujh mein reh jaata hai

He was going to vd sir to apologise for his behavior when hE sensed his lady love inside!!!he stood dere hearing their talk !!!and he regreted his decision when he came to know dat she lied!!!her engagement was postponed not cancelled.he left from dere with the feeling of hatred and anger.whereas sanyukta after talking to vardhan was satisfied!!she felt the weight in heart loosing as what she was doing would be best for dream team and would bring out the best out of randhir!!


Koyi qismat jaisa laage, khushiyaan in haathon pe
Likhta hi jaata hai

Randhir was in store room throwing and breaking all the machines he could get!!he was hurted because she lied!!!he was angry of himself that a year ago it was him who fixed her marriage!!it hurted him when he felt that to postpone the marriage she burnt her face purposely!!!he was hurted that she would leave him just like his mother!!!she lied just like his mother!!!and dis thought made him more angry and he was going to throw another machine when he heard her shouting his name...he turned back to find her standing at the door fuming
Sanyukta:randhir yeh tum kya kar rahe ho????pagal ho gaye ho!!!
Rd threw the machine at a corner and grabbed her arms and shaking her
Rd:tumne jhuth kyu bola???bolo???tum bhi us aurat ki tarah mujhe jhuth bola!!kyu????
He left her wid a jerk and turned around to avoid her seeing his tears
Sanyu:jhuth!!!meine kaunsa...and she stopped when she realized rd to know about the lie!!!
Rd turned and pointed his finger at her
Rd:tum sochti kya ho apne ap ko???ha???kyu bola jhuth tumne???
Sanyu:nhi !!!meine jhuth nhi bola hai!!!!mera engagement sach mei cancel ho gaya hai!!!mei kyu bhala jhuth bolungi
Rd smiled sadly and distanced himself from her:meine to engagement ki bat bola hi nhi

Yeh kaisi khata hai, jiski na saza hai
Kisi ne chuwa hai dil yeh, kiski dua ka hai asar
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon

rd:tumhara engagement postpone huya hai sirf r8????u lied to me!!!
his voice soft!!!and eyes showing his pain .pain of his heart breaking once again and only he knew dat wat turmoil ws going inside his heart!!!!
and sanyukta stood dere motionless not knowing hw to soothe the crying soul in front of him
she felt her eyes warm and when she touched the corner of her eyes she could feel the tears...
rd:tumne jhuth kyu bola...he shouted with al his might
sanyu:ha bola hai meine jhuth!!!she too shouted with equal force
sanyu:kyuki tumhe team mei wapas lane k liye aur koi rasta nhi tha!!!!because I only trigger your ego!!i am the one with whom u compete!!!i am the one whom you need...
She stopped sensing wat she blurted out just now..she looked up to find rd gazing at her with blank expression
Sanyu:listen rd I just know dat we both compete each odr and to bring out the best we need each other!!!
Rd:per 2 mahine bad ka kya
Sanyu:pata nhi...she smiled sadly
Rd:phirse chali jaogi???his voice choked
Sanyu:jana to hoga per jhuth ko sach bhi bana sakti hoon
Rd:matlab??
Sanyu:agar chehra bigar k engagement postpone ho sakta hai to cancel to zarur kar sakti hoon per ha mei tumhe apna plan nhi bataungi kyu ki tum to thehre apni bhaiya ji k chamche!!phirse kuch bolke uske sath...
Rd:is bar nhi karunga!!!

Zari waale kaagazon mein lipta huwa
Kitne haseen rangon mein ranga huwa
Yeh kya tohfa Khuda ne mujhe hai de diya
Yeh kya tohfa Khuda ne mujhe hai de diya


Sanyu:kya????yeh tum bol rahe ho
Rd got irritated:ha mei bol raha hu!!!kush!!!karu to galat na karu to galat!!!tum larkiya chahte kya ho
Sanyu:tumhe kaise pata hoga????kisise dosti kari hai????humesha gussa karte ho aur ego boast karte ho???
Rd:ek tumhe nhi sambhal pata aur dusra nhi chahiye!!
Sanyu:kya???rss mujhse darta hai!!!
Rd:darta nhi hoon!!!tumhe bas 2 min k liye barawa diya!!!huh !!aur waise bhi mujhe doston ki zarurat nhi hai!!
Sanyu:ha ha pata hai kitna zarurat nhi hai!!!sarcasm dipping from each word
Rd:farzi
Sanyu:acha chalo ek deal karte hai!!!dekho hum dono mei to jhagre k ilawa aur kuch hota nhi hai to ek kam karte hai hum yeh deal karte hai !!hum frenemies ban jate hai!!!dream team k waqt team work karenge as a friend aur dusre waqt dushmani...she forwarded her hand
Rd smirked and held her hand
Rd:as usual u r wrong bimbo!!!dream team k waqt dushmani, kyu ki we both bring out the best by trigging our ego aur baki k samay k liye dosti ummm try karunga...he smirked and went out from dere
Sanyu :sadu!!!har waqt mujhe galat prove karne mei laga rehta hai!!!
she smiled whole heartedly as it was starting of something new!!she was happy as the picture of rd in her mind was changing but as a good one!!


Labon se raaz yeh phisal na jaay na
Labon se raaz yeh phisal na jaay na

Rd:pagal bimbo!!!is bar kuch garbar nhi hoga!!!!mei honei nhi dunga!!rss ka promise!!!

Pighalne laga hai iske liye mera sabar
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon
Pooche jo koyi toh tera naam doon

ok i wrap it here!!!!it was a try so bad comments are also invited as well as gud!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...
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me too want the same thing to happen in the show loved it... Thanx for the PM
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Yaar kl se mere dimag mai bhi randhir ki yehi future line aarai hai...welll...isse aage tou OS mai hi dedooo...pm meee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES ME TOO😉

unres

omg anisha its superb yaar 😊

i have no words to explain, its amazing

rd sanyu convo was very cute

i like every bit of os

u r amazing ff as well as os writer

thanks for pm🤗

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m xcited ...
waiting for update!!!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice do continue and PM as well
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awesome cute update yar keep writting :))
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awww. that was cute... 😊
love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandra22

awww. that was cute... 😊

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samyuktha😳

THNKS A LOT

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