SanDhir Drabble - **Flamez Ov Love**

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Flamez Ov Love

Sanyu had deliberatly locked herself n Randhir into Library so that she could stay close to him throughout night in order to save him from knowing the truth regarding his parent's divorce...They decided to study there itself...Fortunately they found some candles...Sanyu placed them on table,n lighted them...Randhir looked at her,n was mesmerised by her beauty...

O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re..

He was gazing her dazzeling persona as she roamed around the table,with book in her hand,too engrossed in it to even notice him gazing her!!!!
He loved the way her sharp features appeared blinking in the blaze of candle...She was shimmering!!!He was admiring it!!!

He bowed back his head into the books,trying to distract his mind from her...But again his heart urged him to look-up...but as he looked-up,the veiw he saw made him shellshocked!!!Sanyu was deeply engrossed in her book...n acciedently her dupatta brushed the candles flame,setting it on fire...Randhir stood-up n ran towards her,yelling "Sanyu,what the hell is wrong with U...Throw off that dupatta" Sanyu saw her dupatta caught fire...She ran towards him as she was panicstricken...He almostt jumped over her n threw away her dupatta...He flung himself on her n hugged tightly,he said "Thankkk god U r ok now Sanyu..How could I live if something would have happened to U" He said this on the verge of breaking down...

She hugged him back,trying to gather what all had happened,n what all he had said...
She was in a kinda shock knowing his emotional self n his concern towards her...Then she moved him a further away to directly look into his eye...She could see the flames of burning dupatta still roaring beside them..She could feel its heat...but what burned her from inside was the fact that,Randhir,his mortal enemy confessed his inner turmoil to her...n here she was,stranded,on the cross-road,trying to deciede how to even react!!!

She dint knew what she wanted...She just dint thought anything,n reacted on her instinct...Grabbed him,stood up on her toe n kissed him!!!It was not a kiss of love,nor a kiss of hatred...It was a kiss of uncertainity...the uncertainity of her inner turmoil...She was confused what was in her heart...Her kiss had the passion,but lacked the lust of love...

But his flames has risen now...n he knew exactly what was going in his heart since so many days...he knew he cant live without her...Oh damn he knew he loved her with all his heart...n so he kissed her backk...entwining his flame of love into her soul...he kissed passionately,at times slowly,trying to grab each an every flame into every second of it...There insides had the flames of love that had always existed,n that they had always ignored...

Finally they broke apart after a couple of mins,falling short of breath...Randhir watched Sanyu's bloodshot eyes as tears streaked down her cheeks...He wiped them-off...n gazing into her eyes he said "Sanyu,I can never let anything happen to U,coz more then it hurting U,it will hurt me too..."
She stared at him n said "but why would U ??"


He felt his heart skip a beat as she came closer to him...maintaining his calm self,he spoke to her,cupping her face - "Becoz when anything hurts u,our flames of love burn me too...I love U my farzi" ...She didnt spoke anything,but just move a bit forward, n gave a peck on his lips...lovingly...

Tears sparkled thru her eyes as she saw his face shine with the Flamez of Their love...

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athena4 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome d title itself is amazing!
Keep writing,
Ananya😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome... Its perfect... sanyu's Inner turmoil described perfectly... love the os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update...so romantic... And thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful I must say.. Full of passion..
Thanks for PM !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
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Unres
...

Zaruri Soochna:
Der se unres karne k liye hum maafi chahte hain..😆😆
Aapki har saza humein qubool hai..😆😆
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Awesome mane..!!

That line, she was shimmering and he was admiring had so much glitz in it..!!😳😳
I don't know why but I felt butterflies reading that line of yours..☺️☺️☺️

The HUG, which portrayed Randhir's fear of losing his love. He hugged her with all his might, it had that passion.👏👏

And the ultimate KISS of Sanyukta's UNCERTAINTY was so passionate mane..!!👏👏
The FLAMES visible in his eyes for their "FLAMES OF LOVE" burnt it all..!!

BRAVO mane..!!👏👏

Maza a gya..!!
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwee!!! Tat was beautiful!!!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres..

Lovely Drabble piya..

Love it..
You penned it beautifully...

Love
Ayesha...
Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwie...!!!
Awesome piya didi..!!
Loved it...!!!
And the title...!!! Amazing..!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Again u came with something more interesting u alwaysvwrite somthing which touch my heart good going piya loved it..The os the title is bravo good keep writing thanks for pm
I said u na ur awesome writer 😊

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