TS - YOUR SMILE SATISFIES MY HEART *PART 2-PG 3 ending (16+).* - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

loved d first part a lot...
it ws beautifully written

Thank you darling im glad u loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome ending ๐Ÿ‘
It was hot ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank you so mucch...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: lovearohi

loved it specially the ending so hot๐Ÿ˜ณ


Im happy u liked it...
My first try at hot stuff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
the ring randhir proposes with.
took so long to find it!
Edited by sniggybabes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
ohh Sniggy that was fantastic...
in the first part you penned down RD's feelings amazingly...
nd the most different thing in first part was Randhir's family..!!!
love you for that concept... muahh...
nd the second part...!!! *ahem ahem*
it was super hot...!! yaa like really hott...
o gal my lappy was on fire...
ek to pehle se hi yaha itni garmi hai or tune or badha di..!!
so amazingly written...
now keep writing such amazing stories...
love you
Ash.
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nd yaa the ring was too beautiful yaar...
loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

ohh Sniggy that was fantastic...

in the first part you penned down RD's feelings amazingly...
nd the most different thing in first part was Randhir's family..!!!
love you for that concept... muahh...
nd the second part...!!! *ahem ahem*
it was super hot...!! yaa like really hott...
o gal my lappy was on fire...
ek to pehle se hi yaha itni garmi hai or tune or badha di..!!
so amazingly written...
now keep writing such amazing stories...
love you
Ash.
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nd yaa the ring was too beautiful yaar...
loved it..

ashu!
thank you for all those compliments and btw maine pheli bar hot stuff likha...
or yeh le 1 balti ice
kam hai ya or du! lol !!! haha
๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿคฃ
ek ides hai mere paas... baat karenge!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by sniggybabes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sniggybabes

ashu!

thank you for all those compliments and btw maine pheli bar hot stuff likha...
or yeh le 1 balti ice
kam hai ya or du! lol !!! haha
๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿคฃ
ek ides hai mere paas... baat karenge!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

are Sniggy tune itna hot stuff diya hena ki ye ek baldi bhi kam pad jaega..๐Ÿ˜‰
but dont worry me isse kaam chala lungi... or agar jyada lagega to me bhi Manali se snow le kar aai hun...lol๐Ÿ˜†
nd yaa agar idea hai to baat karebge uske bare me...๐Ÿ˜ƒ lekin kal... kyun ke abhi to me jaing sone.๐Ÿ˜›
good night.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฑ

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Hey... I read both the parts now...
They were fab...

Luved randhir n his mom's bond...
He got his family back... ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Dat selfless help... suits randhir ... only he can do dat๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


N parth๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Second part ... sandhir united๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Randhir proposed๐Ÿ˜‰

N the end ws hot as hell...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ

P. S I luved ur ts... u r an amazing writer...plz write more.. n if possibl pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: shwetasaddahaq

Hey... I read both the parts now...

They were fab...

Luved randhir n his mom's bond...
He got his family back... ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Dat selfless help... suits randhir ... only he can do dat๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


N parth๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Second part ... sandhir united๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Randhir proposed๐Ÿ˜‰

N the end ws hot as hell...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ

P. S I luved ur ts... u r an amazing writer...plz write more.. n if possibl pm me...

im glad u loved it and tank you...
I surely will pm u my future works
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Aw, this ended just the way it should ... perfectly โค๏ธ
Do write more behnaa :*

LoVe you loads!

Keep BeLi3Ve-ing! ;)

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