SanDhir Collab OS: When Wrong Seems Right| Happy Birthday Aadya ❤️ - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
*comes stealthily to read thinking herself to be first*
*realizes how impossible that could be when two bestestestestest Writers have collaborated on SanDhir*
*tries to RES seven times, but laptop shuts down every time*
*growls with anger*
*comes online via PC*
*finally RESes*
Before I am strangled to death for being late!
Sowwy Soul sis

Res!
Miss (no worries not revealing that elegant name! xP) Payal!
Shall unres at the pace you unres! xP

Btw Miss Payal! How was andejam??
And Soul sis! Planned the anni??
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
*returned from SANDHIR land jus a few mins back*
now unresng😆
HAPPY BIRTHDAY AADYA🥳
dis one is totally fantastic guys👏
Tanz n Payal dis is superb...plz do write more on SANDHIR...its not jus sandhir ohkie
u know wat i mean😉...nly SANDHIR😆
Edited by Harita1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
*speechless*...yaar mai to kehti hu ki SH ki story tum hi likh lo...mera to bheja fry ho chuka hai SARTH scenes dekh dekh kar...They r showing us no progress in SANDHIR's track...Sanyukta keeps running behind Parth and RD behind Sanyukta...Anyways,it was a pleasure to read the OS and don't u dare call it a crap!! HAPPY B'DAY AADYA!! Enjoy darling...Love,Aastha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
I don't know if I res'd but it's not on the first page so, what the heck! ;)
Warning: I'm reading and commenting simultaneously.


I love how you've written the title <3 Anything with blue is :')

Ghagra Choli. Haila, it's like THE kapde for romance, what with the dori and matak and lachak of the kamar. 🤣 Randhir ke dimaag mein sane voice bhi hai? 😲 AND WHAT? Dori untie bhi kardi. Randhir is fast ;) HAILA. I'm in shock. Itni jaldi kaise karvadi? Shouldn't she be taking lambi saansein or saying 'Kya kar rahe ho, chodo na?' YEH KYA KARDI? 😲

MASTERNI JEE. 🤣 She's so dumb man, seriously. 🤣 Aur apna Randhir bhi kya swift jhoot bolta hai. So ishmart. 😎 After all, training kisse li. 🤣 Idhar bhi complain, how old are you, two Randhir? 😳 But at least he got her out. Bike ride.

Button scene bhi daal di. This is the only part I saw in this episode. 🤣 But hayye, the proximity is beautiphul And Sanyu ka sass was 😎 I love her man, she's cool :D

Poor little red shirt. Haan haan, hume sab pata hai madam, kaun poor hai aur kaun rich. 😳 Bechare shirt ko bhi excuse bana diya apne looove ke liye. Jeez Sanyu, I expected better. 🤣

He wanted to see his Farzi? 😲 Shock laga laga laga shock laga. 😲 Yeh tune kya kiya? I mean, tum dono ne. BI ka idhar bhi ghusa diya. But yeah, double hotness is cute and is always loved. 😆 Idhar bhi vahi hua. And controllable emotions. <3 Bechara Randhir is lattoo over her. 😳 Apne dimaag ko samjha bhi nahi paa raha hai. Randhu Baba ki jai. _/\_ Uske peeche hi pad gaya -_-

And finally. I loved the dialogues when she was shouting at him. It was one kutti wala, one caring wala. That was the highlight for me <3 So well done that. :') And then baarish. All the best things happen in the rain. Well, almost all. But maine voh end ka kiss expect nahi kiya *_* SO SEXY. 😳 Now it will come in my dreams too. YOU TWO -_- Baarish mein kiss, koi karta hai kya aisa readers ke saath -_- Hadh hai.

Payal and Kutti, great job. <3 And Kutti, I swear I WILL KILL YOU if I say I'm better -_- Kill kyun, mein terko batangi nahi ki maine kuch likha hai -_- But seriously, I loved the OS. <3 Keep it going :')
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
OMG TANYA!!!!

YOU CANNOT BE 13 YEARS OLD!!! REALLY!!!!
YOU SOUND TOO ROMANTIC FOR THAT!!!
LOVE YOU GUYS FOR THIS OS!
PERFECTLY WRITTEN!
GREAT CONCEPT!!!
AND SOOO SANDHIRILICIOUS!!!!!

LOVED IT A LOT!!!!

YOU GUYS MADE MY DAY!!!

NOW I CAN STUDY PEACEFULLY!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
OMG!!!
Thats one of the best works I have read here. It was Spectacular❤️

Really havent read such fabulously written piece!!!

How I wished cvs could just look at this...amazing. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Tanz. Sry 4r commenting this late. I was damn busy these days...
Shifting and all... :-(
coming to update.
So finally i got smthng good to read on precap jise cv's ne bad me bkwas bana diya tha.
Sandhir fell on bed.
Nd the name masterniji
🤣
i was like.
Bwahahahaha
🤣 🤣
nd randhir the genius. Itni jaldi bevkuf bhi bana dia masterniji ko. Or wo ban bhi gyi.
Randhir tu mahan h yr.
N masterniji ka toh kya kehna.
🤣 🤣
dat shirt part was amazing. U hv realy used it in a cute way.
The best part about this update was
wo sugar factory aka parth yaha nahi tha.
I so hate him.
Thnx dat u didnt added him here.
Oh gosh
barish, plus sandhir together that too so close.
How romantic.
I was expecting smthng when it started raining. And tanz u nevr dissappoint us.
U hv so perfectly used the rain.
They kissed. And kissed. 😳
for that kissing part luv u.
So finally a happy ending.
They r so diffrnt bt yet the same.
Nd ya the title is so perfect.
Ekdm rocking update.
This is such a super duper mindblowing b'day gift.
Happy belated b'day aadya..
C how much ur frnz luv u.

n ya i dnt undrstnd y u ppl alwaz cal ur stuff.
Crap and all.

Thank u so much
tanz and payal
aisehi hum sandhirians ko khush krte rehna.
U guys make a perfct pair.

love ya
😳
*priyanka*
Edited by angelpriyu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
awsme update yar and happy birthday AADYA
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
i came back again to read this OS... amazingly penned down
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Right till the end, it was one hell of an os...good work girls😃

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