SanDhir OS: Stuck in The Moment - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

It is wonderful

Keep dreaming...



Thank you!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
"Always remember, we are stuck in this moment just because of you and your ego"
Wow...
Harsh and in your face truth...
It was not Randhir's tears or the Sandhir hug that captured my heart but it was this line..
Simple,plain,honest fact...
Sanyu might seem ruthless and bitchy but usse HAQ hain...
This line..
uff...
Keep writing

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Dancindoll8

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">"Always remember, we are</font><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">stuck in this moment</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">just because of you and your ego"</font>
Wow...
Harsh and in your face truth...
It was not Randhir's tears or the Sandhir hug that captured my heart but it was this line..
Simple,plain,honest fact...
Sanyu might seem ruthless and bitchy but usse HAQ hain...
This line..
uff...
Keep writing





Aww thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Kirtiii...😃 see honey i found out ur name...sooo now u hav to apologize me for my late review...😕
seriously i jus got stuck in sandhir land for a while readng ur os... its amazing..its jus a simple thought dat has come to ur mind but wat surprises me more is dat u elevated dat u transformed dat simple thought in a wonderful piece of work.👏...
One can only leave the things that belong to them, Mr. Shekhawat
u jus killed me wid dis sentence...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
OMG Kriti... this was too dood...
PLz roz aisae sapne dekha karo... nd new new os update kiya karo.
I loved it...
do write more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Kirtiii...😃 see honey i found out ur name...sooo now u hav to apologize me for my late review...😕
seriously i jus got stuck in sandhir land for a while readng ur os... its amazing..its jus a simple thought dat has come to ur mind but wat surprises me more is dat u elevated dat u transformed dat simple thought in a wonderful piece of work.👏...
<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">One can only leave the things that belong to them, Mr.
Shekhawat</font>

u jus killed me wid dis sentence...❤️




You found my name wrong.. Its Kriti.. But still you are forgiven.. Cuz you gave me such a beautiful comment!!

Thank you so much!!

I'm glad you liked it.. :D

Loads of Love ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

OMG Kriti... this was too dood...

PLz roz aisae sapne dekha karo... nd new new os update kiya karo.

I loved it...

do write more...



Dood? Milk? :o

Lol jk Ik its a typo..

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it!!

More os? In my dreams! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48


Unres karne ka irada hai? -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Res!!
_____________________

Bwahaha!! I so love pestering you!
Oh My My Partner!! I damn Envy You!! I mean I am pathetic with brief works and OS is something which i can not even imagine me writing! But the way you have sewn the myriad of emotions with such few words!! Take a bow!!
Well there is just one little Syaaapa girl!! I didn't visualize SanDhir during my read!! Though Randhir would peep in frequently,It was nari all the way!! Couldn't help it!! I had this big smile while reading and I want the same to happen in real life!! Just a few days and so much of action!!
Now lets come to the point!! You were so good with especially the 'Sweat Beads'
Reading this was a bliss!! Did I tell you that I read this twice?!! Proud I am!!
Btw in the A/N note--seriously man!! Write like knifes nahi toh pitegi! xP
You know I am a bigtime nautanki, don't you!! NaRi for life and beyonD!!
I want you to mentor me for OS writing!!
Now lets unKatti!!
Love
Iptisha🤗


Oh Please partner you write better

ofcourse u were imagining nari *cringes at the merge*

Stop shipping us, god!

I never katti-ed you :P

I'll take fees xD haha!!

Love you a lot ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn



Unres karne ka irada hai? -_-


How did moi not notice this??
If I would have read this one, moi would have unresed after a century!!

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