VidArth - Parth/Vidushi OS - Between the Shadow and the Soul

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Sahana

@shiningstarz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

WOW.

This was amazing!

You writing is flawless. Beautiful. And having read your Kriyansh works earlier , i can say with confidence that this is definitely one of your best work.(p.s.i do love your kriyansh shots as well😉)

I actually want to see Parth/vidushi angle even in the show. They have a lot potential which needs to be explored !

Write More😃

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mindumplingss

@mindumplingss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Lovd this... I'm actually luving dem... i never hated Vidushi...i think they will make gud pair...
Their luv story will be fun
u wrote so well.. do write mors

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.Perspective.

@.Perspective.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

This is brilliance!I don't know what to say--I'm speechless!

You have lent so much depth to these characters--they'll never be the same for me after this.

Unconventional--and hence all the more beautiful! I'm still amazed--how did you do this?!It feels like you got into their minds when you wrote this.You must have an incredible imagination and a very perceptive,insightful mind.Out of the world---and the best i have come across in this forum:)

I bow to that wonderful mind of yours and this unique,fantastic piece of writing!:)

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Anamika

@.Anamika.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I loved this! So well written.

Vidhushi is easily hated by everyone because not many see through her. She's conveniently set up many barriers and hardened herself. While people realize why Randhir is the way he is, I don't think people spend enough time analyzing her. The fact that she's got here on a scholarship is no easy feat for a girl of that social class. She realizes that it's a dog eat dog world out there and the best she can do is manipulate, lie and cheat her way into it. She's no prodigy like Randhir. She's got to play her cards a different way and she does that very effectively.

I'd love to see a Parth-Vidhushi angle. You can see why Parth avoids her - she mirrors his own haunting past. But at the same time, it's very interesting to see how Vidhushi gravitates towards him. He's almost like a better version of her. He's someone with the same background yet someone who has risen above it all. Her attraction towards him shows that there must be some part of her that yearns to become like him as well, that relates to him.

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Sukriti

@sukriti11196

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow..u write awesomely..

u just made me question about

what i think about VIDHUSHI..

earlier from my POV

Vidhudhi - calculative, opportunist, and materialistic

and now

Vidhushi - calculative (but now entirely different reason)

opportunist (because that's the only way to survive)

Materialistic (past hinders yet again)

its lovely..

you should continue this..

its an interesting,

awesomely written, with

an amazing flow...

it was a treat reading something

so FRESH, NEW, CREATIVE and

OUT OF THE BOX...

loved it thoroughly...brilliance personified...

P.S - can you write more often for SADDA HAQ...????

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Dancindoll8

@Dancindoll8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

You should know that I come each day and read this drabble yet again...

Thank you for writing this...

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

"I love you like certain dark things are to be loved- in secret between the shadow and soul."
OHMYGOD THAT QUOTATION SAYS SO MUCH. I love how you have named the OS. Great choice of words. Hey, even I used the same quotation for a SanDhir FF that I wrote. :D
i was really hoping someone would put up Vidushi's character and explain it properly. There is always a reason behind everything. Thanks A LOT for writing and posting this. Now I can die peacefully and go to happy-land lol. :P
Very well written. Thank god I came across this. :D

Edited by Reminescence - 11 years ago