Nirbhaya : The fearless fighter

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay, I know Nirbhaya has nothing to do with Sadda haq. But this is a poem I'd written for her when she died (._.)

Nirbhaya, you'll always stay alive in our hearts... ❤️

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Maa ki laadli, pita k aankho ka noor
Chal padi vo chodh k sab ko door
Aai thi vo dilli karne poore uske sapne
Chodh k apna ghar aur uske apne
Socha tha rajhdhani me apni jagah, apni alag pehchaan banaegi
Kya malum tha usse ki yahi dilli uske jeene ki har vajah cheen le jayegi
16 december ki wo raat
Thi vo apne dost k saath
Hasti, khilkhilati vo vapas aa rhi thi
Bekhabar ki vo bus usse kis dard ki ore le ja rhi thi
40 minute ki hevaniyat, 2 ghante sadak pe padi rahi
Aspatal pahunchte pahunchte saanse thi ukhadne lagi
Halaaton se phir bhi nhi haari thi
Maut k khilaaf ladti jaa rhi thi
Phir jab usko hosh aaya
Maa se usne milna chaha
Na dard zaahir kiya, na jataya gussa
Bas puchi "Maa, mae bach jaungi na?"
Doctor bhi the heraan
Sun k uske muh se ese vaan
Itni bahadur thi vo, itni sahasi
Yeh sab seh k bhi vo thi jeena chahti
Vo chahti thi insaaf, chahti thi nyaye
Chahti thi unn kutto ko faansi pe chadta dekh paaye
13 din sehati rahi, tadapti rahi
Ek ek lamha maut se ladti rahi
Aakhri saans tak bas yahi kehti rahi
"Maa, mae jeena chahti hun
Maa, mae jeena chahti hun"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am crying
thanks fr sharing dear...yes she was a fearless fighter...my salute to her bravery
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing kirti...loved it..nirbhaya ka pain sochke v dil kamp uthta hai mera..aur badkismati to ye hai wo ghatiya lag avi v zinda hai iss duniya main.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg..!!!
Im crying ri8 nw...!!!
She Will stay forever in my heart...
Yes yes..!!! A true fearless fighter she is..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just the theme made me choke... Will read the poem later! The girl who was admitted where I am right now, can say nothing more as of now!!
Thank you for raising this Kriti!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

i am crying

thanks fr sharing dear...yes she was a fearless fighter...my salute to her bravery




I cant believe I made the happiest girl cry! Sorry for that!

I'm glad you liked it, though!

And yes she deserves a saulte ('-')7
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have goosebumps and am not in the state of describing your work... Just wondering how do I sleep tonight!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

amazing kirti...loved it..nirbhaya ka pain sochke v dil kamp uthta hai mera..aur badkismati to ye hai wo ghatiya lag avi v zinda hai iss duniya main.



Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Ikr?! I wish I could kill those f**kers with my own hands!! (excuse my language)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Omg..!!!
Im crying ri8 nw...!!!
She Will stay forever in my heart...
Yes yes..!!! A true fearless fighter she is..!!



I'm sorry for making you cry.. I myself had cried writing this... Im glad you liked it, though.. And yes she was true fighter ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn




I cant believe I made the happiest girl cry! Sorry for that!

I'm glad you liked it, though!

And yes she deserves a saulte ('-')7


don't say sorry yr..its the bitter truth.😭

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