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VeiledWords

@VeiledWords

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

you knw what! I LOVED IT YAAR!
the way you penned down their confusion, hats off!!!😊😊😊😊

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I read it and was planning to comment a verse of how beautifully have you adorned the traits and persona over each character and the role of the crescent shaped enemy of mine who loves to give me pain in astronomy classes.

But now... Let's comment first eh?

Tanya to be honest I really don't know how to write OS as writing myriads of human emotions and psychology is not my cup of tea. I enter this long corridor of dilemma when I settle down for a topic for an os... I have many themes trust me, but if I pen them up they would be FFs rather than OS! So miss Tanya (surname unknown) you have written something extremely desirable and genuine. No dried emotions no high village drama but the believable consequence of the ever fighting egoistic youngsters. I have no authority to judge you on your work as I myself cannot write such a wonderful tale and I am pretty envious now.

The maturity the brilliance in work, I wonder how amazing you would be at the age of 20 or 24... Durjoy sumrit Tanya...eh?

Girl you are a wonder kid, I wish I could write like you. Becoming my inspiration little fellow!

Now back story... Entered IF late as I was writing my ff... Greeted by scraps answered them. MSG popped saw urs, baad mein dekhenge! U as scrapping me the same... Writing the reply- " Tanz can we do this tomorrow please I need to complete mine " almost pressed the reply button when *ten minutes you can't spare for her shame on you Ipti *

Rushing to read, started reading, smiling all the while, how genuine it seems, designing a comment in mind, reading complete... Author's note- pehla OS tha * q Ipti baad mein comment karde ab control q Nhi ho raha*

Reading the comments...

Aadya's comment... Hmm... Next comment!

Wait a second, Tanz dedicated it to her! How could I not see?

*going up to read dedication*

Achha acha... Ha ha what? Aadisha shit! How why when?

Comments flushed! Me dead... *faints*

*back to life... BP had fallen drastically*

Yeh tune kya Kia?

Okay sorry Tanz this was pretty long... Lately rambling a lot!

I guess this is longer than the ab tak ka likha hua first episode of my FF!!!

Uff! I have no words, no gratitude no thank you... Sab chal base!

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aaw. Ipti.. U really shouldn't. Literly have tears of joy in my eyes. Lamba comments i love reading... Ur comments i die to read. I wudnt hav minded had u read my OS later..and sent me d scrap. Bt i think im speechless, robbed of all my words of gratitude fr u cuz u read it and commented immediately and so long. Im so in love wd u. And ROFL, ur BP thing xP hope ur fine now? BP chk kiya? Medicines liye? Faint hogayi Thi naa? Paani piyaa? Khaana khaaya? Gosh. Zyaada padhne lagi hai aur centi zyaada hoti hai isiliye BP high hua. Remedy..learn to laugh! And baba Aadisha ko dedicate karna hi thaa naa. I'd promised. And mature...wow. Whys evrybody finding dis mature xD chaalo koi nayi, thank youu ji. And im glad u liked it. Well im not sure re. Look like dis wont remain OS. Ppl demanding to continue..nd me wnting to continue xP mayb TS if not SS...but ovr all thank u fr d comment and such an extensive reviewm am touched. U made my day..night..dis is d third person doing so xP Love You

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: LovetheVlovers
Aaw. Ipti.. U really shouldn't. Literly have tears of joy in my eyes. Lamba comments i love reading... Ur comments i die to read. I wudnt hav minded had u read my OS later..and sent me d scrap. Bt i think im speechless, robbed of all my words of gratitude fr u cuz u read it and commented immediately and so long. Im so in love wd u. And ROFL, ur BP thing xP hope ur fine now? BP chk kiya? Medicines liye? Faint hogayi Thi naa? Paani piyaa? Khaana khaaya? Gosh. Zyaada padhne lagi hai aur centi zyaada hoti hai isiliye BP high hua. Remedy..learn to laugh! And baba Aadisha ko dedicate karna hi thaa naa. I'd promised. And mature...wow. Whys evrybody finding dis mature xD chaalo koi nayi, thank youu ji. And im glad u liked it. Well im not sure re. Look like dis wont remain OS. Ppl demanding to continue..nd me wnting to continue xP mayb TS if not SS...but ovr all thank u fr d comment and such an extensive reviewm am touched. U made my day..night..dis is d third person doing so xP Love You

Haye re... Tears and all... Lafangey parindey, show up! We all rock together!

Ab no update toh on Saturday (I am talking about my ff) coz u wasted so much of my time, for good!

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Aneendita Dutta

@..Aney..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Oh my! This is stupendous yaar 👏

Impressively splendid...!!! ⭐️

Good work...keep it up 👍🏼

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972633

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nice. . do keep writing :)

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awww.. Such a sweet OS..
Loved d tittle..!!:):)
Keep writing more girl..!!:):)

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Rekha

@Rekha85

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Such a sweet os Tanya!!!!!!!!! I wish this happened!!!!!!!!! Really liked the concept of it!!!!!!! A slip frm the tongue cud make us realise many things!!!!!!!!!!

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Tanz, meri jaan, when will you stop stealing compliments from me? xP I really, really want this to happen on the show! I can't understand why she is so insensitive!

Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago