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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Aaarrr!!!! Gurl! Thanks for the forwarding me the links to this SS!!!

That line though, "TUMHAARA MCP!!!!" Died... In SanDhir heaven... Should be back on Earth soon☺️ (OMG! We need to talk abt Beintehaa today)

Please Update sooon!!!!!!

Jaldi! Abhi... Lool, you must still be sleeping 😆... Anyways! Loving the SS! Conti soon and glad that you sent me these links 😃

Pari(dhi😆)

Paridhi!! You commented! Yay!! Its surprising how we got so close just in one day...yea yea. I know ur lovable but I am more xP
And look, surprisingly I got up quite early, considering the time i slept xP
I am glad you got to go to SanDhir heaven, I have visited that quite many times...its blissful!
Umm yeah I shall update ASAP xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part1: beautifully written. sanyukta's apology and outburst of "mere mcp" was best part.
Part2: Randhir-Sanyukta fight on a mere burger?? Bechara burger!!
Parth GURUJI?? ROFL.
u wrote the humourous part very well. Jealous Randhir-i love dat part
Part3:awww sanyukta murmuring in the sleep..supa cute. Nd ending hillarious..angel devil talk always rocks!!!
Update ASAP
LOVE YA
SAMAIRA
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey peeps! Here's a double update! One for Priya di and the other for Adsy! Both of you finished your exams na? So isiliye this is for you! xD And to all the readers who appreciated this story, Thank you!
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Feelings
~Chapter 4~
Sanyukta had heard everything that Randhir had said, but that didn't change the fact that she had been inebriated with bhang. Thus it wasn't a surprise to Kaustaki and the others, when Sanyukta woke up with an awful hangover in the morning.

She walked, or rather staggered, into the class, holding her head in one hand while clutching her hand bag in the other. She was dressed in white Patiala and a sleeveless pink kurti. Her hair was open, scattered around her back messily, she'd felt to lazy to brush it, let alone tie it up neatly. Luckily, she'd not been late. She took her seat beside Kaustaki, just as Vardhaan sir entered the classroom.

Sanyukta tried to focus on the lecture but she had not yet recovered from her hangover. Her mind kept drifting away to last night, trying to reminiscence the incidents that had taken place...Parth dropping her to the hostel, Randhir coming to check on her, whispering in he rear, drawing the blanket...

V: Sanyukta Aggarwal!

Sanyukta's line of thoughts broke as she heard Vardhaan Sir's domineering voice.

V: What did I just say?

S: Umm.uh...Sir.

V: Stop stuttering.

S: I am sorry sir. I wasn't paying attention.

V: Get out of my class.

S: Huh?

V: You heard me. Get out. NOW!

Sanyukta knew better than to argue with sir. She lowered her head and slowly walked out of the class. She turned to look at Parth who gave her a sympathetic look which made her smile slightly. Randhir was upset. Sanyukta had smiled at Parth but she hadn't even glanced at him! He knew she wouldn't remember anything that happened last night but...Oh damn!

'What the hell is wrong with me? How the hell do I care who she smiles at and who she doesn't!'', Randhir mentally chided himself. As Sanyukta was about to step outside the door of the classroom, her head started to spin. Her vision blurred and she held on to the classroom door for support. Before she knew it, her vision blacked out and she fainted, daintily landing on the floor with a slight thud. Parth was the first to rush towards her.

P: Sanyukta!! Are you fine?! Utho Sanyu. Aakhein kholo!

Vardhaan sir and the others also came rushing to her.

V: Parth. Take her to the medical room immediately.

P: Yes sir.

Parth gently lifted Sanyukta up in his arms(bridal style) and walked out of the class hurriedly. Two pairs of eyes belonging to two fierce people, stood glaring at the door, from where Parth had just rushed out.

'What the...Yeh loser apne aap ko samajhta kya hai? Aur Vardhaan sir? Unhe kya hogaya? Parth ko kaise Sanyukta ko le jaane bola? Shit. I need a date with my punching bag.'', thought Randhir, fiercely as he stomped out of the classroom.

Vidushi on the other hand just glared at the door and grumbled, clenching her fists before leaving the class in a haste.

-----------At the Medical Room------------

P: Nurse, yeh kab tak theek ho jaegi?

N: Beta asal mein inhe rest ki jaroorat hai. Aaj raat inhe yehi rukhna chahiye.

P: Acha toh fir theeke.

As Parth took his seat on a chair beside Sanyukta's bed, Vardhaan sir entered the room.

V: Hows Sanyukta?

P: Sir. Voh abhi behtar hai..she just needs rest. She has still not regained consciousness though.

V: Good. Tum yeh rakh lo. Ye access code hai Dream Team ke account ka. Sambhaal ke rakhna.

P: Yes sir.

--------5 hours later---------

Parth was seated beside Sanyukta's bed, with a book in his hand, sleep overpowering him by each passing minute.

Sanyukta shifted on her bed and slowly opened her eyes. She immediately came face to face with Parth.

S: Parth!! Tum ab tak yaha ho? Kya hua tha mujhe? Mai yaha kya kar rahi hu?

P: Relax Sanyukta. Thank god tumhe hosh aagaya. Tum behosh ho gayi thi aur tumhe aaraam ki jaroorat hai toh tum rest karo. Chalo so jaao vaapis.

S: Parth, mai theek hu. Nurse hai na. Tum jaao. Kaafi raat hogayi hai.

Just then Sanyukta's phone beeped. She took her phone and read the message.

S: Yeh dekho. Kaustaki bhi yaha aarahi hai isiliye tum jaao ab. Thank you mera khayaal rakhne ke liye.

P: Par Sanyukta...

S: (Cuts him off) Hi Kaustaki. Aagayi tum.

Kaustaki trudged into the medical room and greeted Sanyukta.

P: Dekho naa Kaustaki. Yeh Sanyukta mujhe yaha se bhagaa rahi hai! Ab iski baat taalna mere bas ki baat nahi hai. Isiliye mein jaa raha hu. Par tum iska khayaal rakhna, okay? Chalo then. Bye girls. Sanyukta please rest kar lena.

S: Haan haan. Ab jaao tum.

Just five minutes after Parth left, Vidushi came running into the room, panting.

V: Parth. Parth kaha hai?

K: Voh toh abhi abhi chala gaya. Tum yaha kaise?

Vidushi sighed angrily!

'Damn. Mujhe laga Sanyukta ki thodi dekhbhaal karne ka naatak karungi Parth ke saamne toh voh impress hojaaega. Aakhir Sanyukta uski 'Friend'' jo hai! Hmph! Ab yeh plan bhi fail hogaya. Kya jaroorat thi usse chale jaane ki! Arghh!!'', Vidushi thought irritably.

As she turned to leave, she spotted an envelope lying on the chair beside Sanyukta's bed. She picked it up and curiously enquired to Sanyukta about it.

S: Lagta hai yeh Parth ka hoga. Vahi yah ape baitha thaa. Bhool gaya hoga.

Vidushi literally jumped in joy, before scurrying out of the room like a jet plane.

S: Isse kya hogaya achanak se? Daude padte hai kya isse?

K: Rehne do Sanyu. Voh poori ki poori hi paagal hai!

--------In Randhir's room----------

'Yeh Parth kaha reh gaya?! Raat ke 2 baj gaye hai aur bandha ab tak gaayab hai! Sanyukta ke paas toh nahi ruka hai naa? Bodyguard hai kya uska! *smirks*Oh shutup Randhir. Uske paas hai bhi, toh kya farakh padta hai!'', Randhir mused in frustration, for the millionth time that night.

Clenching his fists trying to get rid of all these unnecessary thoughts about Sanyukta and Randhir, he drifted off into a restless sleep.

-----------Next morning-----------

A sleep deprived Parth walked out of the bathroom, ready to go to the class. Before Randhir could even question him about his whereabouts of last night, he mumbled a 'See you in class'' and walked off.

Few minutes later, Randhir strode into the classroom, to notice a cheerful Sanyukta laughing away with Kaustaki and Jiggy, at a joke told by Parth. Anger immediately rose in him but before he could interrupt the giggling gang of Kiddies, a bulky man stomped into the class, screaming.

Man: KASHYAP!! *Stressing on the word dramatically*

---------Dean's office-----------

D: Vardhaan tumhe pata bhi hai usne kiya kya hai? Usne kal raat ko CITE ke account mein FITE ke saare DreamTeam funds, transfer kar diye, apne laptop se.

V: What?! There has to be a misunderstanding dean. Aur aapne aise kaise usse arrest karva diya. Ek baar internal investigation toh hone dete. Aapne dekha nahi voh inspector kaise behave kar raha thaa Parth ke saath? Jaise koi puraani dushmani ho! Aur aapne unhe usse le jaane diya.

D: But Vardhaan, humaare paas proof hai uske against. Uske laptop se hi transfer hua tha. Aur tum uss pe itna bharosa kyun rakh rahe ho? Proof hai tumhaare paas? Usse beguna saabit karne ke liye?

S: Haan Hai.

Dean turned around, to see Sanyukta and the rest of the students, walk in with their so called proof'.

-------Early Morning-------

Thud! Parth lay on the floor, badly bruised all over, blood oozing out of every part of his body. He tried to get up but failed miserably, stumbling and crashing onto the graveled ground yet again. He uttered a silent prayer to God, to give him the strength he desperately needed, and help him.

As soon as he did so, God's sent angel, walked towards him. It seemed as though God had heard his sincere prayer, as Sanyukta rushed towards him. Her eyes welled up with the tears as she helped him to his room, where Jiggy immediately came to his aid.

Randhir wanted to help Parth too. After all, Parth had been proved innocent and his suspicions of him being with Sanyukta all night had been proved wrong too...Not that it mattered! Jiggy had told him that throughout the night, 'his poor'' Kaustaki was with Sanyukta in the medical room. But he still wondered that if not with Sanyukta, where had Parth been all night?

Randhir huffed and strode out of his hostel room, in anger as he saw Sanyukta tend to Parth's wounds. He couldn't bear the sight of Sanyukta, caressing Parth's face and wiping of his tears, although he had no idea why it bothered him so much.

However, Parth felt differently. As he observed Sanyukta crying with him, for him and hug him gently, he realized how special their bond was.

He found that their bond was not just of friends but something more. No, not of lovers, that's not possible, as he could never possibly love someone else other than HER. But he found that Sanyukta and his bond, was more like that of soulmates. He found a caring friend and a loving sister, in Sanyukta. He guided her to the right path, with his calmness overpowering her sometimes short temper, while she supported him always, her caring nature always there to soothe him when he was upset. And that...is how their bond was, is and he wished for it to stay...Forever and Always.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------Sorry peeps. I haven't described Parth's arresting part in detail as we have seen it air on television. So I just wrote that part shortly...hope you guys can understand J I have another update for you as an apology for the delay and the short description of the arresting part. Scroll down for the next update filled with flashbacks, unraveling few mysteries. XD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Feelings
~Chapter 5~
Vidushi flopped down on the floor beside her bed. She looked lost, yet somehow, lacking emotion, expressionless and motionless. Tears welled up in her eyes but refused to fall.
*Flashback*

Last Night

Vidushi scurried of to her room and donned a piece of rag which she called a 'Skirt''. It looked more like a piece of cloth used for pocha(Wet cloth to sweep floor) to Sanyukta and the others xP She quickly ran towards the boys hostel, bumping with Parth on the way.

V: Arre Parth! Mai tumhe hi dhoond rahi thi! Chalo mere saath.

P: Vidushi. Tum yaha, itni raat ko?

Vidushi silenced Parth by placing her finger on his lips, and fragged him inside the nearest classroom.

'Vidushi aaj hi voh din hai. Maar de mauke pe chauka! Bol de usse apni dil ki baat. Aakhir Parth toh kehne se raha...toh tu hi keh de! Vaise bhi voh bhi tujse pyaar karta hai toh bas ek baar tu keh de, toh tum dono apne sapno ki duniya saja sakte ho...do teen bachche paal sakte ho!'', the devil that had appeared on her left shoulder, spoke, making her blush furiously.

Vidushi pulled Parth into the classroom and locked the door.

P: Arre Vidushi tum yeh kya...

Vidushi again shut him up by placing her hand on his mouth. Parth shifted uncomfortably. He felt something wrong was going to happen.

V: Umm Parth. Voh mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai. Parth maine tumhaari aakho mein voh dukh aur akelapan dekha hai jo mai mehsoos karti hu. Bhale hi tum Sanyukta aur baakiyo ke saath khush hone ka naatak karke gul mil sakte ho, par mere saamne tum yeh akelapan, yeh dard nahi chipa sakte. Parth mai bhi akeli mehsoos karti hu. Aur mai jaanti hu ki tumhe bhi ek insaan, ek ladki ki jaroorat mehsoos hoti hai apni zindagi mein. Parth...I love you. Mai jaanti hu ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho. Toh ab aao hum dono ek dusre se yeh akelapanti ki feeling soor hatta de.

Saying so, Vidushi leaned in to hug Parth but Parth immediately stumbled back.

P: Vidushi nahi. I mean, haan tum ek bahut achi ladki ho aur mai tumhe bahut pasand karta hu par ek dost ke jaise. Tum galat samajh rahi ho...mai tumse pyaar nahi karta...kabhi kar bhi nahi sakta kyunki...

V: (Cutting him off and screaming wildly now with tears falling from her eyes) Kyunki tum uss Sanyukta se pyaar karte ho? Haina!! Mai jaanti thi. Voh Sanyukta meri khushi bardaash hi nahi kar sakti!

P: Nahi Vidushi. Aisa kuch nahi hai. Sanyukta ki iss sab mein koi galti nahi hai aur mai naa tumse naa usse pyaar karta hu! Dekho Vidushi mai tumhe ek dost ke nazariye se dekhta hu aur tumhe sahi mein bahut pasand karta hu, ek dost ki tarah. Vidushi I am really sorry...

V: Parth just GET OUT!! LEAVE ME ALONE!

Vidushi pushed Parth out of the classroom and locked herself inside it.

Parth sensing the sensitivity of the situation, and the need for Vidushi to be alone, walked away silently.

Vidushi cried her heart out for one hour or so. She then finally gathered the courage and stood up, strong-willed, ready to go back to her room and catch some sleep. But as she picked up her purse she saw Parth's bag lying on the floor. She had pushed him out and he had forgotten his bag here. She looked at the laptop inside his bag and then back at the envelope in her bag. The dark, heartbroken and evil side inside her, arose and consumed her. She tore open the envelope, switched on the laptop, transferred all the FITE dream team money into the CITE account and trudged out of the room. This just didn't seem right to her but her broken heart told her, it was right. She threw the envelope and the laptop into the dustbin, erasing every trace of evidence that proved that she was involved in this misdeed. She then left Parth's bag lying in the classroom, right where it had been, and walked off to her room just as the first rays of sunlight shone.

*Flashback End*

Vidushi's tears broke free as she realized what a huge mistake she had made. She visioned Parth's bruised body in her mind and the tears flowed faster, refusing to stop.

----------In Randhir's room-------------

Randhir sat beside his room window, which had become his favorite spot by now. He thought about Sanyukta's apology, then their encounter in her room with her totally inebriated. He had a soft smile playing on his lips as these thoughts played out in his mind. And then out of nowhere, he visioned Parth carrying Sanyukta in his arms, and then Sanyukta tending to his wounds and hugging him. The smile disappeared as a lost, lonely, and sad look plastered itself upon Randhir's handsome face.

*Flashback*

Randhir was only ten years old. He came running into the house, breathing heavily, with tears flowing inexorably from his eyes. He screamed, sobbing, 'Maa! Maa! Suno naa!''.

Renuka Sanyal was seated on her desk in the study. She seemed to be getting ready for a conference that was going to take place at her office in 30 minutes. She sighed and tiredly replied, 'Kya hua beta, jaldi bolo. Mujhe dair ho rahi hai.''

'Maa voh mera best friend hai naa, Karan? Uske papa ka transfer hogaya! Voh yeh shehr chodkar jaa raha hai maa! Boohoo...'' Randhir softly spoke before breaking into tears yet again.

'Beta yeh koi rone vaali baat hai? Naye dost ban jaaege. Koi baat nahi. Tum jaao aur video games khelo, maine tumhaare liye ek Car racing game rakha hai.'' Renuka replied, smiling.

'Par maa...voh mera best friend hai!! Voh kaise jaa sakta hai. Maa atleast ek baar mujhe usse milne le jaao na.'', little Randhir cried.

Renuka was getting impatient now. She, as sweetly as possible, retorted, 'Dekho beta. Mumma ko kaam hai. Chaaho toh Ramu kaka tumhe lekar jaaenge par mai nahi jaa sakti''.

Saying so, Renuka shouted for Ramu kaka to come and take Randhir away.

Ramu kaka immediately rushed in and took little Randhir away. Randhir cried as Ramu kaka bandaged his wound. In his hurry to reach home and talk to his mom, Randhir had tripped over a stone on the graveled road. He had bruised his knee and elbows but Renuka Sanyal had even failed to notice that.

Just then Randhir's father staggered inside, intoxicated already, yet holding a bottle of alcohol in his right hand.

'Arre Randhir..bach..chaa..aagayeee tumm!'', Mr.Shekhawat, slurred before tilting the bottle of alcohol and gulping a few more drops from it.

In this process, Mr.Shekhwat unknowingly hurt Randhir. When he tilted the bottle, a few drops of the liquor, fell on Randhir---to be exact, on his wound. Randhir shrieked in pain as the alcohol landing on his bruised knee, hurt him. Ramu kaka immediately lifted Randhir in his arms and took him to his room as Renuka strode into the drawing room and fought with her husband.

This wasn't something new. This had become a daily routine for Randhir. His mother always busy with work while his father always busy drinking, and visiting bars. They'd hardly have time for the poor kid but they had enough time to fight with each other...shouting, slapping, uttering foul words, without caring about the fact, that not only the neighbors but even a tiny boy in his room, could hear their shouts.

*Flashback Ends*

Before the tears could escape Randhir's eyes, he rushed into the washroom and splashed water onto his face, trying to rid himself of such horrendous thoughts of his past.

--------In an empty classroom---------

Parth took of his shirt and looked at his bruises. He had deep cuts on his chest and whip marks on his arms and shoulder. Sanyukta had applied ointment to each of his wounds but nobody could tend or cure the wounds that had managed to gash through his soul, through his past.

*Flashback*

Parth picked up the polish and walked towards the tap near the tunnel. He had lost the shoe duster and had thus had to polish all shoes today, using his bare hands...God only knew how he did it. Infact, due to using his hands, the job was pretty untidily done and thus he'd been spat at by various businessmen. Some had refused to pay him even. He washed his hands and then walked into the public school. The watchman there, was his friend and thus allowed him to enter the compound.

He sneaked up behind the bushes and peeped into one of the classrooms. Math class was going on there and he hid behind the window and listened carefully to everything that was being taught. Soon he felt hungry and walked back home. His frail mother sat in the little straw hut, washing clothes. No they were not their clothes, they didn't own more than a pair of shorts, a vest, a slipper and a saree. She was washing clothes of other people. His mom and he would do odd jobs to make a living. His mother would sometimes be a washerwoman and wash clothes and at other times she would go to the fields and work as a tenant farmer. She would even act as a cook and a nanny at rich people's houses. They lived a really tough life. His mother saw him come in and hugged him. She was a really pretty woman, but overload of work and stress had indeed spoiled her beauty. Now her face had dark scars and sun burns, her once fair face was totally dark now and her glimmering eyes now had a tired look with dark bags under them. He ate the lone piece of bread that she served him and went outside again, to polish shoes and earn some money. He couldn't see his mother like this. Doing work despite her ill health.

Little Parth, rushed to the street and begged to people for money. This was not a life he wanted. But yet this was the life god had gifted him with and he had to live with it. After 2 hours he'd received enough money to buy a new shoe duster. He quickly bought one and went back to polishing shoes. Even after polishing shoes with the duster, many men kicked him off in anger and spat at him. However, as the moon came up, with twinkling stars, he walked home, a small smile playing on his lips, for he had managed to earn enough to feed his mother well tonight and give her medicines.

*End Flashback*

Parth smiled a sad little smile. He didn't have tears in his eyes...just sadness. He took of his shoes and started practicing Tai-Chi, to calm his mind, body and soul

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Guys, I am so sorry! I wanted to describe Parth's flashback more but I think I have written enough. This update was too full of flashbacks and crying :P Rofl..Now you got ur double update, no more demands for updates untile next week! Hope you liked it! Toodles!

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bookmarking ... whole lot to catch up
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RES
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Edited! :D
Second! :(

Tanu! Finally made time to read about your feelings xP
I am reviewing as I read, so bear with me! :D

Randhir only gets madder and madder, na? First the thinking about Sanyu not remembering him and then a date with his punching bag! Bwahahaa! xP

That convo between Sanyu and Kaustuki after Vidushi left! Bwahahaa!!

Giggling gang of kiddies!? You phunny keed!!

Thank you for not dragging the arrest wall part!

Mysteries? *very excited* :D

For Part 5!

Stupid, stupid Vidushi!

Those flashbacks! :'(

Why you make me cry so much, Tanu? :(

Yeah, okay! We won't ask for updates here! What about CAG? xP

Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago
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Res
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I don't know how Aru always manages to comment first!!! Hmmm...special talent xD
Anyways I'm second? Eh!! M third. Nevermind!!!!

Tanya <3
First of all *hugs* for the double update. You are a sweetheart.
*sorry* for unres. Late...I totally forgot about it...u noe m getting bhulakkad day by day. :p

Ohk so , both the updates were fab.

Parth lifted Sanyu? Dat too bridal style?? Where the hell was Randhir???
Jealous Randhir~~i so love him >_<
Parth found a loving sister in sanyu?? Awww...now its ohk...he can lift her to medical Room as many times as he want xP
Vidhushi ke iraade toh mujhe kabhi acche lage hi nhi...
Mauke pe chauka!!! Hahaha.!!! xD
Parth ke flashbacks were so touching yaar ;(
But end mai usko tai chi karte imagine kiya nd I was laughing like idiots...hahahaha!!!!ROFL
Hayeee...kitta accha likhti ae re!!! Mujhe complex ho rha hai ab tujhse :p
You r myy star **

Ohhk...we won't demand ...take your time.
Loads of love
Samaira
Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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I'm so sorry I took so long to edit..

I dont have much to say.. Im too tired to review everything in detail... Safar ki thakaan.xD

Basically, I loved it all, as usual.. Specially the flashbacks part...

Love
Kittu ❤️
Edited by Ms.P.K.Tunn - 11 years ago
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Res!! Hell my net is damn slow!!!!
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...luvd it a lot...
specially dat part where u descrbd their Past...
ssly it ws so emotional...
n ha dat part where Parth undrstnds his bond wid Sanyu ws freaking suprb...😊
thnx for da PM..

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