Sandhir Drabble(OS)|| Trapped

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope everyone knows what a drabble is. It is a short piece of work consisting of around 100 words, much much smaller than a one-shot.
Since I was too lazy to pen down an OS, I tried my hand at this. This is much more than a 100 words 😆

Not very good. But still give it a read if you want 😆

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He was annoyed to see her walk past him, towards the man he loathed for no reason. His fists clenched as he stood along the hallway, witnessing her embracing the man he had already killed a thousand times in his mind. This was getting too far, he said to himself, shutting his eyes to switch off the world around him. But to his dismay, he could still see her with closed eyes, her beautiful orbs, her infectious smile, her silky hair, her luscious lips... That was enough! Stop it, his mind screamed.

Involuntarily, his legs moved to where his mortal enemy and the girl playing havoc with his senses, stood, engrossed in each other. His heart burned with jealousy as she didn't even notice him standing beside her.

Since when did she start affecting him so much? Since when did seeing her with another man became so arduous?

"Sanyukta", he heard his voice.

He was enraged as well as disappointed as she failed to notice yet again.

What was wrong with him? Why was he even here? He was supposed to be in the lab completing his pending project, not standing here with nothing to say, just staring at this crazy girl in front of him who didn't even pay any heed to him anymore since the day her new friends came to this college.

"SANYUKTA", he tried again, his voice louder this time.

She turned to look at him.

"What?"

"Umm...umm.. Aa.. Actually. I .. umm", he stuttered.

"WHAT?"

How could he tell her he forgot what he wanted to say? Or rather had nothing to say? How could he tell her he just wanted her attention, wanted to listen to his name from his lips, wanted to ...

"Hello? Randhir?", she asked, bringing him back to the reality.

"Huh?"

"Are you okay?", she asked, her voice concerned.

"No", he quickly replied, turning around, walking towards the exit leaving her flabbergasted behind him.

He was definitely not okay. He was allergic to this whole spectrum of human emotions. These feelings were alien to him. Why was he vying for her attention? Why did it pain so much to see her with another man? There were a million questions running through his mind but none got answered. As he neared the door, he shot a quick glance at her. To his surprise, she was smiling at him, her smile disclosing the fact that his inner turmoil was evident on his face. Damn. That was the last thing he wanted. He left the place immediately, his cheeks flushing.

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Too silly? 😆

Would love to read your views.

If anyone is interested to read my other works on Sandhir, here is my Index

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3881901#p99413871



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yatup thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st time reading a drabble as never heard of it. Drabble's name is like Metabble. Good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yar is ur next part of the

Where My Heart Lives chapter 7?


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant!
I toh waise bhi love drabbles. Finding another person sharing this love leaves me overjoyed :')

Sanyu is too smart for our MCP. He can't hide such emotions, not from her. She is perfectly in tune with him. That's what makes them so awesome, no?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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look who is here!! and dat two ryt on tym!!! 🤣 🤣
ofc ur biggest fan 🤣 🤣
jokes apart...ur OS...
the intensity in Randhir was so clearly seen.. even if its a drabble... god i donno hw to tell u bt u have nailed yaar...the emotions of Randhir...his turmoil on seeing his girl in someone elses hands who wouldnt be sad and angered at the fact..!!
and they way u portrayed his POV!! gosh i am more in love with ur writing..!! 🤣 🤣
i love hw u always make it seem so realistic and not sum fairtale lovestory..thiss is something that i cn see happen in the show..!! Randhir stil confused with his emotions but doesnt like the inner jealousy of all this..!!
lovely yaar
regards
safrena
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww this one is so cute dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's so cute.The way you brought the situation and pent up emotions Randhir is unable to control or deal with is amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He was definitely not okay. He was
allergic to this whole spectrum of human
emotions. These feelings were alien to
him.


That was great 😆 .. defined Randhir perfectly

Liked This drabble... Loving the jealousy Randhir
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute n adorable drabble...especially d fact that sanyu knew that it ws randhirs jealousy n insecurity playing up ws all the more hilarious n sweet😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow! the intensity and confusion of randhir's emotions was clearly evident..wonderfully written..

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