ambo future story my version

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Posted: 14 years ago
#1
I was thnkin cuz the cb's r takin tym 2 get the story the way we i hve decided 2 create my version , i hope u all lyk it
It starts of 4rm bebo seing amrit in the mandir


Part 1

Bebo comes closer 2 amrit and the sweet ambo track comes on , bebo goes to amrit and says i missed you loads glad you came back , tears come rolling down her cheeks , bebo hugs amrit but he does not respond
Amrit moves bebo away frm him and tries to go away , bebo grabs amrit hand and goes near to him

Bebo tells everything 2 amrit from her waking up in the khannas family , till the end of her revenge ,
Amrit then telks everything 2 her and bebo is shocked 2 fynd out viju was behind everything
Amrit hugs bebo and says that glad we are back together
They pray 2 god for there safe return , amrit stares at bebo then the ambo song plays

Part 2

Amrit goes near to bebo and gets the sindoor from the mandir and places in her hair , happiness tears fall on bebo's eyes and amrit wipes them with his right hand
They are about to hug again when narang family come
Ashok , daljit and omi see amrit and go runnin 2 hug him , amrit smiles at them and say i amback
Kuku and amro also come and r shocked 2 see amrit

Part 3

Amrit ,grabs bebo hand who starts to blush but doesnt say nothing , saru sees this and starts to giggle
But amrit does not care and takes hr holding her hand for blessin fromthe elders

Scene shifts to all of the family are going to the narangs house in their cars ambo r only together in the car with the driver
Bebo hugs amrit while the car takesthem to narang house , ambo say 2 each other they. Will nva seperate as they love each other loads amrit kisses bebo on forehead

Part 4

All of narang family reach the house and the cars are parked ,
The narang family go in while leaving ambo behind
Ambo about to come in but amro stops them by opening her hands out wide infront of both of them , ambo look at eachother both shocked


Precap

Ambo's marriage plans are being discussed again by the three bros and the 2 sis in laws saru and prabjot , as s special treat for their annniversy with honeymoon tickets


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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
wohoooooooooo a new story
i am soooo excited will read it soon, thanks for starting this sweety, at least it will cheer up our minds.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#3
Lol thts my purpose 2 cheer every 1 up i will update the episode next very soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good work dear. Hope the CV's also read this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
wowwwwww...... superb why can't u direct it.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohhh... tooo cool! cant wait!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Episode 2 coming up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Part 1 - episode 2

Ambo stare at each other , wondering why amro doesnt let them in .
Amro smiles and brings the pooja taali , while prabjot runns in the kitchn 2 bring the pot of rice
When prabjot comes back amro does the taali rasam and while prabjot puts the pot on the floor
Amro tells bebo move it by your feet and come in , ' happiness will fulfil this house now ' says omi , everyone smiles and ambo go in ,
Bebo is abou to sit down on the sofa , when saru pulls her and takes her up

Part 2

Scene shifts in bebo room , ashok , daljeet and omi come in as well as prabjot . They stare at bebo and laugh
' ashok paraji why are you laughing 'says ashok says we are so happy to be with you my child , your marriage will happen again , we all thought about it ,
No no no says bebo blushing amrit wont want to do it again
Daljeet looks at bebo and smirks ' amrit was the one who told us to do it , and yoursaying you won't want to get married again
Bebo puts her head down and gets all shy
Prabjot says look at juilet how shy she us becoming , i bet ya in her heart roses fireworks are exploding ,
Everyone starts laughing , and look at the door

Part 3

So who was remembering me says amrit
All of us says saru , come here says omi where discussing you wedding ,
Ambo look at each and stare at each other's eyes , prabjot clickes her fingers infront of amrit ,
Amrit keep your eyes away from dulhanji
Prabjot drags amrit out and takes her into another room
Wat are your doing amrit says , you cant be in same room as bebo , you got to stay seperate for a bit until your married again, so for now you are a finace
Thats unfair says amrit , Prabjot winks at amrit and leaves the room

Part 4
Scene shifts to bebo room , saru, prabjot , omi , ashok and daljit are looking at redimades
This will look nice says saru , no this well says ashok
They both start quarellin until bebo screams
Wats the big deal says bebo i'll wear anything for weddin i am already married
Who's talking about the wedding , says daljit where deciding your mehndi outfit for tonight
Bebo looks suprised

Precap
Bebo coming down with a green , yellow redimade , while everyone is staring at her from downstairs
Amrit looks at her gobsmacked
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG awesome storyline, totally rocking loved it
enjoyed reading it, please post the next part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice.👍🏼i love it.carry on dear.

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