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Posted: 15 years ago
wow IT Was awesome 👍🏼👏
Very cute and Sweet scene
i just simply loved it, it remind my something personal 😭
thats how a loving couple should live and care for each others😃
Do write more Dear It was very good, and sweet
👏for this sentence....
One day Amrit comes from work and as usual he is calling Bebo as soon as he entered the main door.... (uff ye amrit bhi na ise bebo ke bagair chain hi nahi.....jab bhi ata hai uska naam lekar chillane lagta hai😳😆)....
yaar tumne to mery Dil ke baat keh de woh ghar mein entry marni ke sath he Bebo Bebo chilani lagta hai🤣 areeeeeee Amrit miya kabhi apni mamji per bhi dehan de diya kare Bebo, ki sath romance karni kiliye to pori zindagi pare hai 🤣
Barvo Afreen👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

afreen... what can i say? loved the scene. are yaar you both are as romantic as each other.... dunia, afreen both of you keep writing more!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

afreen... what can i say? loved the scene. are yaar you both are as romantic as each other.... dunia, afreen both of you keep writing more!

thnx u as well😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dunia

After todays sad Episode i decided to post u guys the 3rd part of

D: Ghost and Bebo convo😃


Early in the morning........


<font color="#0000ff">D: Ghost , is sleeping and Amrit as well, and Bebo is in the shower..........</font>


D: Ghost: wakes up ( areeeeee yaar kaha kaha sona par raha hai en dino, khod Bed per soti hai aur mein couch pe,, 👎🏼😡


Amrit: ( half sleepy, searching for bebo,) Bebo, Bebo kaha gaye bahy etni subah subah...and wakes up.......


D: Ghost: ( talking with her selv) Areeeeee kaha gaye subah hoi shabzadi wake up, acting to aise kar raha jaise SR manaya hoo,,,,, 😡but mein to pori raat pehra de rahi ti...koi baat nahin yeh kam to mein app dono se karwa kar he rahogi...😈


Armit: ( sees some clothes beside the Bathroom door, on the table) hmmmmm to bebo shower le rahi hai.....( thinks and Smiles).......He tok the clothes and hides behind the door.........😎


Bebo: ( Bathroom door opens... she takes out her hand trying to take her clothes....) areeeeeee yeh kapri kaha gaye yahi to rakhi thi meine,,, Amrit Amrit, 😕


Amrit: ( silent and smiling behind the door) 😊


Bebo: Yeh Amrit kaha chala gaya, lagta hai morning walk kilye baher gaya hai,,, (She looks inside the room to make sure no one is there, and cames out with a towel and loose long wet hair 😳).... kaha gaye omg meri kapri kaise ghyab hogay (she is searching) ........


D: Ghost: 😲what the Hell Bebo control ur towel Plz Plz yaar yeh larki kia kar rahi hai........😕

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Amrit: ( comes suddenly) kahi app esi to nahin dhondh rahi, ( gives Bebo a naughty smile) bolo Bebo....


Bebo: ( shy and shocked )) 😳😲App aur humary kapri app ki paas.....( Bebo, doesn,t know what to do now, Amrit has never seen her like this before ) woooooooo mein miene socha ki app kamri mein nahin hai, to hum aise baher agay..............woh humari kapriiii deji humi....change karni hai😳


Amrit: ok yeh lo, aaye leji apni kapri..

Bebo goes near Amrit to take her clothes but Amrit pulles her towards him and holds his hands around Bebo,s waist,,,,,,,,,and pulls her near him slef...he stares at Bebo and whispers,,,,

Ajj yeh chand din mein kaise nikal aya,,,,,, and smiling at bebo,


Bebo: (shy and tensed) dekiye chorie humi aur humi humaray kapri dejiye,,,,,


Amrit: leaves her ( he wants to have some fun with Bebo)😃


Bebo: dekiye app humari kapri dejiye plz...😳

smiles


Amrit: Nah nah nah jab tak app khod hum se nahin lengi hum app ko nahin dengi ....


<font color="#0000ff">Amrit is teazing Bebo and running around in the room, Bebo couldn,t took the clothes....</font>


Bebo: deki koi ajai ga plz dejiye humi app ki liye nashta bhi to banana hai, plz ....😳


Amrit: koi baat nahin mein office mein kardonga.,,,


Bebo: deki agar app humi kapri nahin dengi to hum se baat nahin karngi........😔

Amrit: ok I am tired now ( he sits in the bed and put Bebo,s clothesnext to him) app apni kapri le sakti hai,,,,


Bebo goes to take her clothes from the Bed, when she tries to take her clothes Amrit grabs her hands and Pulled her in the Bed..........


Bebo: Choriye humi deki koi ajai ga😳


Amrit : (smiles and pulles her more near his chest) My room my wife mein jo bhi karo kisi ko kiya waise bhi humary shadi hochuki hai ab koi aai ya jai koi farq nahin parta.......


Bebo: ( shy and breathing fast) woh wohwo


Amrit hugs bebo very hard and playing with her wet hair,,,and he is moving his fingers on bebos face.....Bebo is shying and smiles back at Amrit....😳


Amrit : ( whispers in bebo'sEar in a very romantic way) I love u Bebo......I love u and kisses her earflap.........😳


Bebo: ( getting goosebumps and closes her eyes)😳


D: Ghost: (biting her nails) omg i have to stop this abhi to morning hai yaar, no i can,t watch,,, do s.thing .........😕


Amrit: ( kisses bebo on her forhead and smelling the fresh smell of her hair,,,,etc😳


Bebo: gives amrit a shying smile and turns around her face.......


Amrit: ( goes near her, collect her hair on her one shoulder and kisses the other bare shoulder..........grabs her arms and whispers in her ear,, Bebo app ki esi adao pe to hum marti hai,,,

And says a poetry for her


<font color="#ff0000">Dard hotaa hai, dikhaayee naheen deytaa kuchh bhee;
Paas aaou, to, tumhain chhoo key eitbaar karoon!
Mujhey waham hai, ki, rag-rag sey huun waaqifper bhi:
Baahuoun mein qiyaas-e-dil ko bhalaa kaisey bharoon?</font>

<font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000">Bebo: ( after hearing the poem) turns back and hugs amrit tightly I love u ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


</font><font color="#000000">Amrit: I love u too.........</font>

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<strong><font color="#000000">D: Ghost : ( watching and confused) kiya karo kaise stop karo en dono ko, omg,, Idea vase tor deti ho, ) Taaaanggggggggg vase is breaked down in to peices........😆😆😆v


Amrit and Bebo 😲😲both looks around


Bebo: Yeh vase kaise ger gaya

Amrit : haa yeh kaise gher gaya, amrit looks at the clock ohhh Bebo office jani ka waqt bhi ho raha hai, mein fresh hoki aata ho, yeh lijey app ki kapri change kardejiye...( smiles)


Bebo: thnx and gives amrit a shy smile.....😳

D: Ghost: Thanks God kam hogaya otherwise ajj to dono ne SR ki bajai SD ka plan banaya tha........😆
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Guys its too late at night here i will post part 4 next day

i hope u guys would like it, i am not good in romantic scenes so, i hope u like it.....

afree next part will be ur idea, just wait......

😃




Wow, Dear...
I m at completele loss of words...
Tht was absolutely romantic....
Cant wait 4 part 4...
keep writin, Sweetheart!!!
i guess u mus b missin jiju a lot a lot...
And here s a tite squeeze on my behalf...
👏 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: juhuti

<div align="center">New Amrit-Bebo scene

<div align="left"><font color="#3300cc">One day Amrit comes from work and as usual he is calling Bebo as soon as he entered the main door.... (uff ye amrit bhi na ise bebo ke bagair chain hi nahi.....jab bhi ata hai uska naam lekar chillane lagta hai😳😆)....Suman hears amrit and said that bebo is in bedroom doing some work....
in the Bedroom....bebo is fixing her cupboard and taking out clothes to iron...and when amrit reaches his bedroom he saw bebo doing iron.........he opened his mouth to say bebo but he stopped and went slowly-slowly toward bebo and hug her from behind.......as soon as amrit hug her uske hath se iron choot jata hai aur uske dosre hath pe gir jata hai and she burn her hand😭.........amrit doesn't noticed this and because of the pain she screams but amrit put his hand on her mouth...he thought she is screaming cos he hold her like this.......... and bebo doesn't want to disappoint amrit so doesn't say anything, and she said
Bebo: Amrit ye kia hai amrit kkoi ajayega please choriye mujhe
Amrit: hmmm patni ji kuch nahi bas younhi mujhe aapko thora pyar karne ka dil kia isliye ye kia😳😆.. agar aap kehti hai to lijeye hum aapko chor dete hai😳....he leave her and turn his face other way with a naughty smile😳........
Bebo thinks OMG amrit ko lagta hai buda lag gaya...to she goes and hug him from behind and say "I Am Sorry😭...please mujhe maaf kar dijeye....amrit hold her hand and he is shocked to see that she have burn her hand very badly.........Amrit turns toward bebo
Amrit: Bebo ye kia hai, ye aapka hath itna kaise jal gaya
Bebo: kuch nahi amrit bas thori si choot hai abhi theek ho jayegi
Amrit: bebo ye thori si chot hai... kitni budi tarah se aapka hath jal gaya hai ... kaise jala hath..
then he remembers that she might have burned her hand when he came and hug her from behind...
after seeing her wound he gets really worried and take her to bath room and rinse cold water on her hand and then he put some cream on her hand....because of the cream she had feeling that her hand is burning soooo much and because of the pain she had tears in her eyes....amrit looks at bebo
amrit: kia hua bebo aap ro kyun rahi hai...
Bebo: kuch nahi amrit
and then amrit wrap her hand with the cotton and while he was wrapping tears from his eye fell on bebo's hand and bebo feel that something fell on her hand and she understood its amrit's tears
she lift his face and felt really sad to see tears in his eyes...
Bebo: Amrit ye kia aapke ankhoon mein ansoo, kis liye
Amrit: bebo aapko kitni choot lag gaye meri wajah se
Bebo: bebo confused and said AApki wajah se?? main kuch samjhi nahi
Amrit: bebo agar main aapko peeche se hug nahi karta to aapka hath iron se nahi na jalta😭....he put his hand on his ears and say I AM SORRY😭😳 in such a sweet way
Bebo: ye aap kia keh rahe hai amrit........please dont' say sorry...aapki kkoi galti nahi thi, ye hona tha isliye ho gaya, and she also start to cry and realize that how much he really cares for her
then suddenly amrit hug her very tightly and said waise to main kehta hoon ki aapki ankhoon mein kabhi bhi ansoo nahi aane dounga aur aapko kabhi kkoi takleef nahi dounga aur aaj maine hi aapka itna hath jala dia .... please bebo mujhe maaf kar dijeye ayendah se aisa bilkul nahi hoga...........
after hearing this she get really emotional and hug him back tightly...and then amrit said I LOVE U BEBO </font><font color="#3300cc">❤️</font><font color="#3300cc">and main aapko takleef mein nahi dekh sakta.</font><font color="#3300cc">😳</font><font color="#3300cc">..........bebo get really emotional after hearing all these she also start crying and hold him more tightly and they both cry for a while in each-other arms....😳❤️</font>

I hope u guys liked it...
and sorry kuch zeyadah hi lamga ho gaya
if u guys didn't liked it then please telll me i won't write again to bore u guys
plzzzzzzzzz comment

afreen




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Tht was really touchin n sweet, Dear...
Luks like Dunia s And Ganga s ideas r gettin 2 u too...
Keep writin, Sweetheart...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Afreen yaar,
It jus struck me...
i d read somewer that caring 4 a person makes em feel
they r so important...n
they feel wonderful n so much wanted... ...
well, ur scene reminds me of tht....
waitin 4 more scenes wid such beautiful gestures, Dear...
🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thnx alot Winky dear

yes i will post the next part today inshAllah 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dunia

Thnx alot Winky dear

yes i will post the next part today inshAllah 😃

please post it soon. cant wait to read it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dunia

wow IT Was awesome 👍🏼👏

Very cute and Sweet scene
i just simply loved it, it remind my something personal 😭
thats how a loving couple should live and care for each others😃
Do write more Dear It was very good, and sweet
👏for this sentence....
One day Amrit comes from work and as usual he is calling Bebo as soon as he entered the main door.... (uff ye amrit bhi na ise bebo ke bagair chain hi nahi.....jab bhi ata hai uska naam lekar chillane lagta hai😳😆)....
yaar tumne to mery Dil ke baat keh de woh ghar mein entry marni ke sath he Bebo Bebo chilani lagta hai🤣 areeeeeee Amrit miya kabhi apni mamji per bhi dehan de diya kare Bebo, ki sath romance karni kiliye to pori zindagi pare hai 🤣
Barvo Afreen👍🏼


awww sweets i am glad u liked the scene
uff i was really scared ke kaisa hai but ur comments really brought a huge smile on my face
mehnat meri safal ho gaye
haan yaar ye amrit ghar mein aya nahi ke bebo ke naam ki mala japne lagta hai
will try to write more later on

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

afreen... what can i say? loved the scene. are yaar you both are as romantic as each other.... dunia, afreen both of you keep writing more!


awww dear thanks for the sweet comment
i am glad u guys liked the scene
romantic aur main nahi re............kahi par se bhi nahi😆
i can only think of romantic scenes but i can't put them in words😆
and ganga i am waiting from ur side
do write some really romantic scenes😳
will be waiting

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